Run: 2026-03-03-01KJV0J1ZZKCFK6WME1387VFDV

Run Details

Duration:
9.0s
Cost:
$0.002745
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts on Eva’s front door slid back one by one, the metallic rasp echoing like a gunshot in the narrow hallway. Aurora pulled the door open, ready to snap at the delivery driver who had been pounding on the wood like he was trying to break through a barricade. The words died in her throat. Lucien stood on the landing, framed by the dim amber glow of the hallway bulb. He looked as he always did—impeccable to a fault in a charcoal suit that seemed to absorb the dingy light of Brick Lane. His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and his heterochromatic gaze—one shuttered amber, one abyss-black—swept over her with an intensity that made her breath hitch. "You’re a long way from your usual neighborhood, Lucien," Aurora said. She clutched the edge of the door, her fingers white-knuckled. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom pulse of the stress she’d felt back when they’d last seen one another. "And a long way from being welcome." Lucien didn't smile. He merely leaned forward, propping his weight on his ivory-handled cane. The velvet touch of his voice, laced with its familiar Marseille lilt, scraped against her nerves in the worst way. "Courtesy, Aurora? After all this time? I’m wounded." "You’re a broker. You don't know the meaning of the word." She moved to block his path, though the space behind her was a claustrophobic maze of Eva’s research notes, stacks of yellowing scrolls, and the judgmental glare of Ptolemy the tabby, who sat atop a tower of occult textbooks, tail flicking dismissively. "I’m busy. And I’m certainly not in the market for whatever information you’re peddling tonight." "I’m not selling," he said softly. He took a half-step inside without waiting for an invitation. She was forced to retreat, the hem of her worn jeans brushing against a stack of papers. He smelled of rain, expensive tobacco, and that sharp, ozone-tinged cold that seemed to cling to his skin. "I’m merely checking on an asset that has gone frustratingly silent." "I am not an asset," Rory snapped, her pulse fluttering in her throat. She looked up at him, caught in the gravity of his two-toned eyes. "I’m a person. I deliver food, I live in a drafty flat, and I stay out of your underworld politics. I thought we settled that." "We settled very little," Lucien countered. He walked deeper into the room, his gaze darting over the chaotic research spread across the tables with a fleeting, analytical interest. He stopped near the window, where the city lights of London bled through the grime. "You left London, then you came back. You’ve been hiding in plain sight, working for a restaurant owner who doesn't even know your last name." "I like it that way. It’s quiet." "Quiet is a mask, Aurora. It’s a thin one." He turned to face her, and the playful edge in his demeanor vanished, replaced by a raw, unvarnished look that made her skin prickle. "Do you have any idea how much noise your absence made?" Rory felt a flush creep up her neck. She thought of the months spent trying to forget the way he had looked at her the night they’d parted—a mixture of frustration and a terrifying, bone-deep longing he’d tried to bury behind his fixer’s mask. She had spent her life running, first from her father’s legal expectations in Cardiff, then from Evan’s suffocating grip, and finally from the magnetic pull that Lucien Moreau exerted on her better judgment. "You have no right to show up here," she said, her voice dropping to a whisper. "Not after how things ended. You were supposed to be the one who kept things clean, the one who wasn't involved in the mess. And then you turned out to be just another layer of it." "I am the mess," Lucien said, taking a step toward her. He was close enough now that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye. He reached out, his gloved hand hovering inches from her face, though he didn't quite touch her. "I have spent three months untangling the chaos I caused you, Rory. I’ve handled the people you didn't even know were following you. I’ve been your phantom guard, and I’ve been utterly miserable for the privilege." "I never asked for your protection." "You never ask for anything," he whispered. "That is your greatest flaw. You swallow your pride, you lock your doors, and you wait to be broken. I won't watch it happen again." The air in the room felt suddenly thin. Ptolemy meowed, a sharp, demanding sound that broke the spell for a heartbeat. Rory looked away, staring at the ivory handle of his cane. She knew what was inside that—a blade, a tool, a weapon. But she also knew the man who carried it was capable of acts of softness that he would never admit to in the light of day. Her resolve, once as structured as her parents’ legal briefs, was fraying at the edges. "Why are you here, really?" she asked, meeting his gaze again. "Is there a threat? Is something coming?" Lucien sighed, a sound of profound exhaustion. He let his cane drop to the floor—a careless, uncharacteristic movement—and finally closed the distance. His hand found the side of her neck, his thumb tracing the line of her jaw. His skin was unnaturally cool, a reminder of his half-demon heritage, but it sent a shockwave of heat through her veins. "The only threat currently in this room is the state of my own sanity," he said, his voice dropping into French for a heartbeat, a low, melodic cadence that bypassed her defenses entirely. *Je crève d’envie de te retrouver.* Aurora leaned into his touch despite the voice in her head screaming for distance. She remembered the nights in the back of his car, the hushed arguments in the dark corners of the city, and the way he had always, always listened to her in a way no one else had. "You’re infuriating," she breathed. "And you’re hiding," he murmured, his gaze falling to her lips. "From everyone. From the world. From me." "I was safe here." "You were stagnant," Lucien countered softly. He leaned in, his forehead resting against hers. The scent of him—colder, sharper, more exotic than anything else in her world—swallowed her. "Come back to the surface, Rory. Stop delivering noodles and start living. I can give you the world, or at least a map of it. But I cannot do it if you keep locking the deadbolts against me." She hesitated, her conscience warring with the sudden, violent desire to just let him take the lead. She had spent years trying to craft a version of herself that was untouchable, but with Lucien, she had never been able to be anything other than raw. "If I let you in," she whispered, her hands finding the lapels of his charcoal coat, "you don't get to run the show. I’m not an asset. I’m the partner." Lucien’s crooked smile, the one he reserved only for her, touched his lips. "I wouldn't have it any other way, *ma chérie*." As he tilted his head and silenced her with a kiss, the cramped, suffocating room—with its stacks of books and its judgmental cat—suddenly felt far too small to hold the weight of everything they still had to say. For now, it was enough that the deadbolts remained unlatched.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
1"Lucien countered softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.469
leniency0.938
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.125
72.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
4
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
2"utterly"
3"suddenly"
4"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"lilt"
count1
9
word"tinged"
count1
10
word"chaotic"
count1
11
word"fleeting"
count1
12
word"magnetic"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"resolve"
count1
15
word"profound"
count1
16
word"tracing"
count1
17
word"reminder"
count1
18
word"desire"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"pounding"
2"intensity"
3"throbbed"
4"pulse"
5"weight"
6"velvet"
7"familiar"
8"lilt"
9"tinged"
10"chaotic"
11"fleeting"
12"magnetic"
13"whisper"
14"resolve"
15"profound"
16"tracing"
17"reminder"
18"desire"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences57
matches
0"felt a flush"
67.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords8
totalWords1255
ratio0.006
matches
0"Je crève d’envie de te retrouver."
1"ma chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.04% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount866
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Brick1
Lane1
Marseille1
Ptolemy2
London1
Rory3
Cardiff1
Evan1
Lucien9
Moreau1
French1
Aurora3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Lucien"
5"Moreau"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
5"French"
globalScore0.98
windowScore1
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"suit that seemed to absorb the dingy light of Brick Lane"
1"quite touch her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1255
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean44.82
std23.47
cv0.524
sampleLengths
057
168
252
342
468
562
651
768
87
944
1077
1152
1281
136
1432
1584
1618
1759
1839
1951
204
2118
224
2366
2445
2530
2622
2748
92.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was forced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs145
matches
0"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences74
ratio0.095
matches
0"He looked as he always did—impeccable to a fault in a charcoal suit that seemed to absorb the dingy light of Brick Lane."
1"His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and his heterochromatic gaze—one shuttered amber, one abyss-black—swept over her with an intensity that made her breath hitch."
2"She thought of the months spent trying to forget the way he had looked at her the night they’d parted—a mixture of frustration and a terrifying, bone-deep longing he’d tried to bury behind his fixer’s mask."
3"She knew what was inside that—a blade, a tool, a weapon."
4"He let his cane drop to the floor—a careless, uncharacteristic movement—and finally closed the distance."
5"The scent of him—colder, sharper, more exotic than anything else in her world—swallowed her."
6"As he tilted his head and silenced her with a kiss, the cramped, suffocating room—with its stacks of books and its judgmental cat—suddenly felt far too small to hold the weight of everything they still had to say."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount673
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"terrifying, bone-deep longing"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.029717682020802376
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010401188707280832
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean16.96
std10.58
cv0.624
sampleLengths
023
128
26
315
423
530
611
710
824
97
103
1111
1220
138
1453
1515
166
1710
1817
1918
2011
2113
2213
2325
246
2522
2615
2725
287
2933
3011
318
3236
3333
3416
3536
3611
3717
3817
3936
406
417
4225
438
4413
4511
4611
4726
4815
4911
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.36486486486486486
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences53
matches
0"He looked as he always"
1"His platinum hair was slicked"
2"She clutched the edge of"
3"He merely leaned forward, propping"
4"She moved to block his"
5"he said softly"
6"He took a half-step inside"
7"She was forced to retreat,"
8"He smelled of rain, expensive"
9"She looked up at him,"
10"He walked deeper into the"
11"He stopped near the window,"
12"He turned to face her,"
13"She thought of the months"
14"She had spent her life"
15"she said, her voice dropping"
16"He was close enough now"
17"He reached out, his gloved"
18"She knew what was inside"
19"Her resolve, once as structured"
ratio0.585
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences53
matches
0"The three deadbolts on Eva’s"
1"Aurora pulled the door open,"
2"The words died in her"
3"Lucien stood on the landing,"
4"He looked as he always"
5"His platinum hair was slicked"
6"She clutched the edge of"
7"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
8"Lucien didn't smile."
9"He merely leaned forward, propping"
10"The velvet touch of his"
11"She moved to block his"
12"he said softly"
13"He took a half-step inside"
14"She was forced to retreat,"
15"He smelled of rain, expensive"
16"Rory snapped, her pulse fluttering"
17"She looked up at him,"
18"He walked deeper into the"
19"He stopped near the window,"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Aurora pulled the door open, ready to snap at the delivery driver who had been pounding on the wood like he was trying to break through a barricade."
1"His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and his heterochromatic gaze—one shuttered amber, one abyss-black—swept over her with an intensit…"
2"He walked deeper into the room, his gaze darting over the chaotic research spread across the tables with a fleeting, analytical interest."
3"Ptolemy meowed, a sharp, demanding sound that broke the spell for a heartbeat."
4"But she also knew the man who carried it was capable of acts of softness that he would never admit to in the light of day."
5"She had spent years trying to craft a version of herself that was untouchable, but with Lucien, she had never been able to be anything other than raw."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory snapped, her pulse fluttering in her throat"
1"she said, her voice dropping to a whisper"
2"he murmured, his gaze falling to her lips"
3"she whispered, her hands finding the lapels of his charcoal coat,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory snapped (snap)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.313
64.2598%