Run: 2026-03-03-01KJV0JG31GB3WF074T5K0SJXP

Run Details

Duration:
7.1s
Cost:
$0.002301
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the asphalt of Camden, turning the street into a dark, oil-slicked mirror. Harlow Quinn pressed herself against the cold brick of a storefront, her breath hitching in the frigid night air. Up ahead, the silhouette of a man pivoted sharply, his boots splashing through the gutters. He clutched something beneath his dark coat—a bundle that twitched with a rhythmic, unnatural energy. "Herrera, stop right there. Metropolitan Police!" Her voice cut through the downpour, sharp as a switchblade. The man didn't slow. He sprinted toward a rusted, padlocked gate tucked into the mouth of an alleyway. This was it. The trail she had followed since the files vanished from the Precinct. Tomás Herrera, the disgraced medic, was leading her somewhere the maps didn't dare mark. He didn't fumble with the lock. He produced a jagged, white object—a splinter of bone—and pressed it into a recessed slot in the ironwork. The heavy gate groaned, swinging inward to reveal a jagged hole in the concrete, descending into the belly of an abandoned Tube station. A faint, violet haze swirled from the darkness below, smelling of ozone and rotting lilies. "You aren't cleared for this, Detective. Turn back before you lose more than just your suspect." Herrera stood at the precipice, his gaze steady despite the chaos of the storm. He tapped the Saint Christopher medallion resting against his chest, his knuckles white against the metal. "There's no warrant for a ghost-trap, Quinn. Go home to your empty apartment and your dead partner's ghost stories." He vanished into the gullet of the earth. Quinn didn't hesitate. She vaulted over the threshold, her feet finding the slick, rusted metal of a maintenance staircase. The transition was instant. The roar of the city rain died, replaced by a low, discordant hum that vibrated in her marrow. She descended into the gloom, her hand dropping to the holster at her hip, though the familiar weight of the service pistol offered little comfort in this oppressive, flickering light. The air grew thick, stagnant, tasting of copper and soot. Below, the sprawling platform of the old station revealed itself. It wasn't abandoned. It pulsed. Stalls made of salvaged train parts and moth-eaten velvet lined the tracks. Creatures with too many limbs and faces obscured by shadows bartered over displays of shimmering, impossible vials. The Veil Market sat beneath Camden like a festering boil on the city’s skin. She tracked the movement of a dark coat darting behind a stack of shattered ceramic basins. "I have eyes on you, Tomás. Where's the supply coming from?" She skirted the edge of a stall selling jars of preserved lightning. A spindly figure with elongated fingers reached for her sleeve, its skin pebbled like wet parchment. She shoved the creature aside, her boots clicking rhythmically against the grime-covered tiles. The station stretched infinitely, the darkness at the far end swallowing the light of the flickering, ethereal lanterns. Herrera stepped out from behind a rusted support pillar, his movement fluid, devoid of his usual medical precision. His scar stood out, a pale, ragged map on his forearm. "You think the Precinct will listen, Harlow? You think a few photos of this pit will clear your conscience about Morris?" He slid through the crowd, never breaking eye contact. He reached the center of the platform where a circular mosaic centered the floor. The tiles beneath his feet seemed to breathe, inhaling the violet haze that permeated the station. He paused, looking back, his expression a mixture of pity and defiance. "Look around. This isn't London. This is a debt collectors' floor. One that's been waiting for you to walk through the door for three years." Quinn stopped. Her hand tightened on her weapon, the leather grip biting into her palm. The station held a weight she recognized—the same weight that had pressed down on the crime scene where Morris had simply ceased to exist, stripped of his corporeal form by something the textbooks never mentioned. The hum grew loud, a high-pitched whine that threatened to shatter the very marrow in her teeth. "The investigation doesn't end with you, Herrera. I don't care how deep this hole goes." "It's not a hole, Detective. It's a throat. And it’s starting to swallow." The market stalls began to tilt as the ground trembled. The merchants turned in unison, their movements jerky and synchronized. They weren't looking at Herrera. They were looking at her badge, at the steel of her watch, at the singular, rigid resolve that defined her service. She stood her ground as the violet light intensified, bathing the station in a sickly, bruised glow. The stairs behind her had vanished, replaced by a solid wall of weeping stone. The silence that followed was worse than the hum; it was the silence of a vacuum, absolute and heavy. "I came for the source, Herrera. Lead the way." She stepped forward, ignoring the way the very air seemed to coil around her ankles like a snare. The shadows deepened, reaching out from the corners to scrape against her coat. She didn't flinch. She kept her eyes on the medic, watching as he turned, his face illuminated by the flickering, spectral light of the Market. He gestured to an archway carved directly into the bedrock, beyond which lay a tunnel spiraling further into the dark earth. It pulsed with a rhythmic, sickly heat. "You want the truth? It’s not in a file cabinet or a police report, Quinn. It’s in here, waiting for someone to finally pay the price." He stepped into the tunnel, his form silhouetted against the encroaching gloom. The archway seemed to exhale. Quinn shifted her weight, the cold metal of her weapon a grounding anchor in the madness. She stood at the threshold of a labyrinth that defied every law of physics she had ever upheld. The choice hung in the air, heavy as lead. Either turn back to the surface and maintain the fiction of her former life, or follow the medic into the dark and face the truth that had consumed her partner. She didn't glance back at the wall where the stairs had been. She strode into the archway, the darkness wrapping around her shoulders like a shroud as the tunnel groaned under the weight of her intrusion.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1053
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"sharply"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1053
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"weight"
count5
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"mosaic"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"synchronized"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"silence"
count2
14
word"spectral"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"vibrated"
2"gloom"
3"familiar"
4"weight"
5"oppressive"
6"pulsed"
7"velvet"
8"shattered"
9"mosaic"
10"trembled"
11"synchronized"
12"resolve"
13"silence"
14"spectral"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
32.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences65
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1049
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount888
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.45
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Quinn4
Precinct1
Herrera4
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
Veil1
Market2
Morris1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Market"
6"Morris"
places
0"Precinct"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1049
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean40.35
std27.53
cv0.682
sampleLengths
064
16
257
362
416
530
619
779
868
916
1011
1159
1229
1321
1451
1525
1667
1715
1813
1946
2050
219
2256
2328
2426
25126
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
63.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs146
matches
0"was leading"
1"weren't looking"
2"were looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences75
ratio0.053
matches
0"He clutched something beneath his dark coat—a bundle that twitched with a rhythmic, unnatural energy."
1"He produced a jagged, white object—a splinter of bone—and pressed it into a recessed slot in the ironwork."
2"The station held a weight she recognized—the same weight that had pressed down on the crime scene where Morris had simply ceased to exist, stripped of his corporeal form by something the textbooks never mentioned."
3"The silence that followed was worse than the hum; it was the silence of a vacuum, absolute and heavy."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount896
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.016741071428571428
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010044642857142858
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean13.99
std6.72
cv0.481
sampleLengths
015
119
215
315
46
510
64
714
83
912
1014
116
1218
1323
1415
1516
1614
1716
1819
198
203
2116
224
2318
2430
2510
2610
273
282
2912
3017
3114
3216
3311
3412
3516
3613
3718
3818
3911
4021
419
4214
4316
4412
4525
462
4713
4835
4917
36.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.30666666666666664
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
29.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences63
matches
0"He clutched something beneath his"
1"Her voice cut through the"
2"He sprinted toward a rusted,"
3"He didn't fumble with the"
4"He produced a jagged, white"
5"He tapped the Saint Christopher"
6"He vanished into the gullet"
7"She vaulted over the threshold,"
8"She descended into the gloom,"
9"It wasn't abandoned."
10"She tracked the movement of"
11"She skirted the edge of"
12"She shoved the creature aside,"
13"His scar stood out, a"
14"He slid through the crowd,"
15"He reached the center of"
16"He paused, looking back, his"
17"Her hand tightened on her"
18"They weren't looking at Herrera."
19"They were looking at her"
ratio0.476
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences63
matches
0"Rain lashed against the asphalt"
1"Harlow Quinn pressed herself against"
2"He clutched something beneath his"
3"Her voice cut through the"
4"The man didn't slow."
5"He sprinted toward a rusted,"
6"This was it."
7"The trail she had followed"
8"Tomás Herrera, the disgraced medic,"
9"He didn't fumble with the"
10"He produced a jagged, white"
11"The heavy gate groaned, swinging"
12"A faint, violet haze swirled"
13"Herrera stood at the precipice,"
14"He tapped the Saint Christopher"
15"He vanished into the gullet"
16"Quinn didn't hesitate."
17"She vaulted over the threshold,"
18"The transition was instant."
19"The roar of the city"
ratio0.952
79.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Either turn back to the"
ratio0.016
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He clutched something beneath his dark coat—a bundle that twitched with a rhythmic, unnatural energy."
1"The station held a weight she recognized—the same weight that had pressed down on the crime scene where Morris had simply ceased to exist, stripped of his corpo…"
2"The hum grew loud, a high-pitched whine that threatened to shatter the very marrow in her teeth."
3"They were looking at her badge, at the steel of her watch, at the singular, rigid resolve that defined her service."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.0928%