Run: 2026-03-03-01KJV0KSF7TDVE3R984B46T5XM

Run Details

Duration:
5m 56s
Cost:
$0.005269
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s boots crunched over moss softer than any duvet she’d ever slept on. She’d stepped between two weathered oak standing stones fifteen seconds prior, and already her first footprint had faded into the velvety green growth, erased without a trace. Her black shoulder-length hair fell over one bright blue eye, and she frowned, twisting the crescent scar on her left wrist with her free hand. She’d wrapped up her shift at Golden Empress an hour prior, shoving crumpled takeout bags into the canvas satchel slung over one shoulder before catching the bus to Richmond Park. Tucked under her cream sweater, the Heartstone Pendant sat warm against her sternum, a quiet weight she’d learned to trust. A shifting shadow bobbed at her elbow, solidifying just enough to reveal the faint violet glow of eye sockets. Nyx. They’d insisted on coming, their shadowy form curling around Aurora’s arm like a loose cloak, citing their ability to spot thin spots in the Veil—something no unaided human could do. You texted Isolde sent a note? Nyx’s voice carried on the wind, soft enough that Aurora had to lean in to catch every word. Left on my door this morning. Aurora said, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear. Said she had a job. Fix something. She kicked a loose pebble off the path they followed, but the pebble vanished mid-air before it hit the moss. She blinked, then glanced around. This wasn’t Richmond Park. The air smelled like rain and wild honey, not diesel fumes and cut grass. Above them, the sky wasn’t the overcast gray of late November, but a soft, diffused lavender, no sun or moon to cast harsh shadows. Wildflowers bloomed everywhere—blue, pink, gold—even though the outside park lay covered in brown, dormant grass. A cluster of pale, glowing white flowers floated a few feet off the ground, their petals drifting in a wind that didn’t stir Aurora’s hair. Moon daisies. Nyx said, their shadowy hand reaching out to brush one. The flower bloomed brighter, casting a faint glow over their form. Only grow in fae-touched pockets. Fae use them for light. Aurora pressed a hand to her chest. The Heartstone Pendant, quiet all morning, suddenly thrummmed, a sharp jolt against her skin. She pulled the pendant out from under her sweater, holding it in her palm. The deep crimson gem glowed faintly, its silver chain glinting in the flower light. Veil rift nearby. Nyx said, the violet glow in their eyes dimming a little. Your stone picks up Hel energy. That’s Dymas’ signature. Aurora’s brow furrowed. She’d pored over Isolde’s old books on Hel realms last year, reading about Dymas, the Gluttony Realm, where excess was celebrated and helbound souls toiled to feed endless feasts. She’d never thought she’d see anything tied to it, not outside of a dusty library stack. She tucked the pendant back under her sweater, the thrumming growing stronger with every step toward the stand of silver-leafed trees ahead. The trees’ leaves flipped in the wind, their undersides bright silver like polished mirrors, casting tiny flashes of light across the moss. They followed a faint path of polished flat stones, winding through the wildflowers. The path curved along a narrow stream, its water so clear Aurora could see pebbles glowing in every color of the rainbow, swirling under the surface. The stream made a soft, chiming sound, like wind chimes made of crystal, as it flowed over the pebbles. Aurora bent down, cupping her hands to take a drink, and the water tasted like honey and mint. She took a sip, and the tiredness from her seven-hour delivery shift melted away, leaving her feeling light and alert. Nyx leaned down too, their shadowy hands dipping into the water. The stream glowed brighter where they touched, the pebbles flashing brighter colors. Stream’s fed by moonwater. Fae travel with skinfulls of it. A single cup fills you for a day. Aurora pulled her phone out of her satchel, squinting at the screen. The digital display glowed 8:17 PM. She’d punched out of Golden Empress at 6:30 PM, caught the 188 bus to Richmond Park five minutes later, and walked the mile to the standing stones ten minutes after that. That’s impossible. She said, holding the phone up. It’s only been 45 minutes total. Nyx’s shadowy hand tapped the screen, and the phone flickered before returning to its display. Fae pocket realms warp time. An hour inside could be ten minutes outside, or three days. Don’t rely on your watch. Aurora shoved the phone back into her satchel, her brow furrowed, but she tucked the thought away. A cluster of tall, slender mushrooms grew along the stream bank, their caps open like tiny umbrellas, glowing soft green. Aurora knelt down, tapping one with the plastic key fob for her delivery scooter. The mushroom emitted a puff of glowing green spores, which drifted up and settled on the stream, making the water glow even brighter for a few seconds before fading. Glowshrooms. Nyx said, plucking one from the ground. The mushroom glowed brighter in their hand, casting a green light over their face. Fae chefs use them to flavor stews. Won’t spoil for a month. As they walked along the stream, Aurora heard a soft, clicking sound, like blades sharpening on stones, coming from beyond the silver-leaf trees. She paused, tilting her head. Did you hear that? Nyx’s violet eyes flared bright. Helbound souls dressing the feasts. They sharpen their blades every morning, before the guests arrive. This is a working clearing in Dymas, not just a random rift. Aurora’s heart raced. She’d never been this close to a Hel realm rift, never seen actual helbound souls, never felt the weight of the Heartstone pounding against her chest like this. She tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade tucked in her satchel, her fingers cold around the leather sheath. The scent of roasted meat and sweet wine grew stronger with every step, thick and cloying in the air. Aurora’s stomach growled, unbidden, but the sharp metallic edge of the scent made her recoil. It wasn’t the scent of a home-cooked meal. It was the scent of a feast left out for three days, left to rot under a hot sun. She pushed through the first tree branch, and stopped dead. Beyond the trees, a clearing opened up, and the sky had shifted to warm amber, exactly as Isolde had described in her notes. Rows of long wooden tables groaned under the weight of food: grapes the size of plums, roasted birds with iridescent blue feathers, dishes in bowls made of swirling, colored glass. Figures moved between the tables, their hands translucent, carrying platters of food so tall they blocked their faces. The sound of laughter filled the air, loud and metallic, like knives scraping against ceramic plates. Aurora’s Heartstone pulsed so hard now, it hurt. She yanked the pendant out again, and this time, the crimson gem glowed bright red, thrumming like a frantic heartbeat. The figures at the tables paused, their translucent heads turning toward the trees. One raised a hand, and a glint of red light caught Aurora’s eye—their eyes, glowing like embers. Helbound souls. Nyx said, their form solidifying to their full six-foot-two height, the violet glow in their eyes flaring bright. A tendril of shadow shot from their hand, wrapping around one of the approaching translucent figures’ wrists. The figure screamed, a high-pitched shriek that made Aurora’s ears ring, and dissolved into a cloud of black smoke. But more figures were moving toward the trees, their feet making no sound on the grass. Behind the tables, a tall figure emerged, cloaked in shadow, their eyes glowing a deep, menacing red. Aurora recognized the sigil stitched to their cloak—the twisted, open-mouthed shape of a plate overflowing with food, the sigil of Dymas, from Isolde’s books. Aurora’s free hand dove into her delivery satchel, fumbling until her fingers closed around the cold, slender handle of the Fae-Forged Blade Isolde had given her last month. She pulled the dagger out, and the moonsilver blade glowed faintly in the amber light, its leaf-shaped edge shimmering. She’d never used it, but Isolde had warned her it could cut through magical wards, and was devastating against demons and helbound creatures. The tall shadowy figure raised a hand, and a wave of heat washed over Aurora, warm and sticky, like standing too close to a campfire. The Helbound souls rushed faster toward the trees, their translucent forms growing clearer, their red eyes glowing brighter. Aurora glanced around, looking for an escape route, but all she saw was the silver-leaf trees behind her, and the rift to Dymas stretching out ahead of her.
created_at"2026-03-03T23:30:27.955Z" 3/3/2026, 11:30:27 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1455
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1455
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"furrowed"
count2
3
word"crystal"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"pounding"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"glinting"
2"furrowed"
3"crystal"
4"flickered"
5"raced"
6"pounding"
7"stomach"
8"pulsed"
9"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"hear"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1450
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
72.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions78
wordCount1425
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Golden2
Empress2
Richmond3
Park3
Heartstone4
Pendant2
Aurora22
Veil2
Isolde6
November1
Hel3
Dymas4
Gluttony1
Realm1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Helbound3
Nyx9
Fae6
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
3"Isolde"
4"Blade"
5"Nyx"
places
0"Golden"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Veil"
4"Hel"
5"Dymas"
globalScore0.728
windowScore0.833
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like rain and wild honey, not dies"
1"tasted like honey and mint"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1450
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
75.17% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean53.7
std22.18
cv0.413
sampleLengths
040
175
250
324
448
582
633
749
823
992
1096
1141
1263
1336
1480
1534
1632
1732
1850
1961
2010
2187
2258
2356
2457
2570
2671
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs245
matches
0"were moving"
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences104
ratio0.038
matches
0"They’d insisted on coming, their shadowy form curling around Aurora’s arm like a loose cloak, citing their ability to spot thin spots in the Veil—something no unaided human could do."
1"Wildflowers bloomed everywhere—blue, pink, gold—even though the outside park lay covered in brown, dormant grass."
2"One raised a hand, and a glint of red light caught Aurora’s eye—their eyes, glowing like embers."
3"Aurora recognized the sigil stitched to their cloak—the twisted, open-mouthed shape of a plate overflowing with food, the sigil of Dymas, from Isolde’s books."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount428
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.030373831775700934
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.007009345794392523
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean13.94
std8.29
cv0.595
sampleLengths
013
127
225
330
420
519
61
730
86
918
106
1110
125
132
1420
155
164
1714
1824
1915
2025
212
2210
2311
245
255
267
2714
2814
2914
303
3111
326
333
343
3529
3616
3722
3822
3913
4026
4119
4218
4320
4411
4512
464
476
488
4912
49.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.34615384615384615
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners36
34.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"Only grow in fae-touched pockets."
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences96
matches
0"She’d stepped between two weathered"
1"Her black shoulder-length hair fell"
2"She’d wrapped up her shift"
3"They’d insisted on coming, their"
4"You texted Isolde sent a"
5"She kicked a loose pebble"
6"She blinked, then glanced around."
7"She pulled the pendant out"
8"Your stone picks up Hel"
9"She’d pored over Isolde’s old"
10"She’d never thought she’d see"
11"She tucked the pendant back"
12"They followed a faint path"
13"She took a sip, and"
14"She’d punched out of Golden"
15"She said, holding the phone"
16"It’s only been 45 minutes"
17"She paused, tilting her head."
18"They sharpen their blades every"
19"She’d never been this close"
ratio0.281
32.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences96
matches
0"Aurora’s boots crunched over moss"
1"She’d stepped between two weathered"
2"Her black shoulder-length hair fell"
3"She’d wrapped up her shift"
4"A shifting shadow bobbed at"
5"They’d insisted on coming, their"
6"You texted Isolde sent a"
7"Nyx’s voice carried on the"
8"Aurora said, tucking a strand"
9"She kicked a loose pebble"
10"She blinked, then glanced around."
11"This wasn’t Richmond Park."
12"The air smelled like rain"
13"Wildflowers bloomed everywhere—blue, pink, gold—even"
14"A cluster of pale, glowing"
15"Nyx said, their shadowy hand"
16"The flower bloomed brighter, casting"
17"Fae use them for light."
18"Aurora pressed a hand to"
19"The Heartstone Pendant, quiet all"
ratio0.854
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The mushroom emitted a puff of glowing green spores, which drifted up and settled on the stream, making the water glow even brighter for a few seconds before fa…"
1"Nyx said, their form solidifying to their full six-foot-two height, the violet glow in their eyes flaring bright."
2"The figure screamed, a high-pitched shriek that made Aurora’s ears ring, and dissolved into a cloud of black smoke."
3"But more figures were moving toward the trees, their feet making no sound on the grass."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.5525%