Run: 2026-03-03-01KJV0N27VKGX3KESRJ1JEX7PB

Run Details

Duration:
8.3s
Cost:
$0.002723
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gate groaned, a rusted protest that set Rory’s teeth on edge. She stepped through into the Fae Grove, the air inside immediately heavier, thick with the scent of damp earth and crushed wildflowers. The temperature plummeted. Condensation bloomed on her skin. She pulled her coat tighter, her fingers brushing the silver chain hidden beneath her sweater. The Heartstone Pendant rested against her collarbone, its deep crimson surface cold as ice despite its reputation. "Right," she muttered, the sound swallowed instantly by the ancient oaks. "Stick to the plan. Get the reading, leave before the moon hits the meridian." Beneath the shadow of the primary standing stone, she knelt to activate her scanner. The device flickered, its green light throwing jagged shadows against the lichen-covered rock. A low, rhythmic hum vibrated through the ground—not mechanical, but a deep, pressurized thrumming, like the slow, wet beat of a giant heart. Rory swiped her thumb over the screen. Nothing. Total static on the sensors. "Don't give me that," she exhaled, her breath swirling in front of her face as a thick, silver mist rolled over the gnarled roots of the trees. To her left, a snap echoed. It wasn't the brittle crack of a dead branch, but the deep, snapping sound of a thick limb being wrestled from a trunk. She froze, her pulse thumping against the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. She kept her eyes fixed on the scanner, but her peripheral vision flared. Something tall and impossibly thin darted behind the second standing stone. It didn't scuttle or run; it flickered, like a film reel skipping frames. "Who’s there?" She stood, feet planted on the soft, mossy floor. The silence that followed was aggressive—a suffocating vacuum where even the wind refused to stir the leaves. "I’ve got nothing for you," she added, her voice steadier than her nerves. "I’m just passing through." A soft, wet smack landed on the bark of an oak directly behind her. It sounded like a slab of raw meat slapped onto a table, followed by a slow, dragging slide. Rory spun around, her flashlight beam cutting through the gloom. The light caught nothing but the rough, grey skin of the tree and a smear of something dark and viscous clinging to the trunk. It dripped, the liquid catching the moonlight with an oily, iridescent sheen. The pendant at her throat sparked. It didn't just glow; it seared. A pulse of warmth whipped around her neck, sharp and intrusive. The Heartstone started to rhythmically flash, its crimson light synchronized perfectly with the deep, wet thrumming now vibrating the soles of her boots. "Great," she hissed, backing toward the boundary stones. "Real comforting." She took a step, but her boot didn't hit the familiar crunch of dry leaves. It landed in something yielding, something that sighed under her weight. She shoved her light downward. She stood in the center of what looked like a burrow, the earth around her feet pulsated, the soil shifting like flesh covering a mass of writhing worms. High above, something chattered. It wasn't a bird. It was the frantic, clicking rhythm of teeth snapping together, hundreds of them, all vibrating at once. She flicked her lamp toward the canopy. The branches drooped under the weight of dark, hunched forms. They resembled bundles of discarded laundry, ragged and damp, clutched to the limbs by impossibly long, pale digits. "I’m leaving," she breathed, forcing her legs to walk. "Consider me gone." The entities didn't scream or leap. They simply adjusted. With a collective, fluid motion, the bundles uncurled. They stared down at her with pits where faces should have been—smooth, featureless depressions that absorbed the light of her torch. They didn't move toward her, yet when she took three steps forward, she checked her shoulder and found them hanging exactly three feet above her head. The air grew stagnant, tasting of copper and rot. She picked up the pace, her lungs burning with every inhale of the unnatural cold. Every tree she passed looked identical to the one before, the same twisted roots, the same patches of nocturnal flora. The Grove was folding in on itself, the path stretching, the exit nowhere in sight. She reached into her pocket, fingers grasping for her keys, but her hand hit something hard and unyielding. The stone in the center of the grove. She hadn't walked away from it. She had circled back. "Stop it," she commanded, addressing the empty air. *Click-clack-click.* A voice answered, not from the trees, but from inside her own ear canal. It whispered in a language that sounded like dry leaves skittering over gravel, a melodic, serrated cadence that made her nostrils sting. She turned to flee, but a pale hand—too many knuckles, skin the color of curdled milk—reached down from the dark, blocking her path. It didn't reach for her; it hung there, suspended in the air. A fingernail, jagged and yellow, traced the air in a slow, deliberate circle around her head. "I said no," she snapped, swiping her hand through the space. Her fingers passed through cold mist, but she felt a strange, electric static that made the hair on her arms stand rigid. She didn't look at the sky again. She kept her head down, fixed on the faint, rhythmic glow bleeding through her sweater. The pendant was hot now, burning through the fabric of her coat. She gripped it, using it as a compass. The warmth intensified as she faced the western standing stone. She pushed forward, ignoring the sounds of wet sliding and heavy breathing that crowded the space inches behind her heels. The weight of their gaze pressed against her spine. It was a physical pressure, like being submerged in deep water. Her skin pricked with the anticipation of a touch that never came. She reached the threshold of the stone, the air shimmering like heat haze over asphalt. "Just past the line," she whispered, her voice failing. "Just cross into the street." She lunged toward the gap between the stones. A sudden, sharp tug pulled at her hair—once, twice, like a warning playful grab from a child. She kept moving, forced her legs to pump, her eyes fixed on the distant, flickering yellow light of a streetlamp just beyond the park’s boundary. She stumbled through, the cold vacuum snapping shut behind her. The silence of inner London—the distant hum of traffic, the muffled roar of the city—crashed back with a ferocity that made her ears ring. Rory hit the pavement, scraping her palms, but she didn't stop. She crawled, scrambled, and then sprinted, the pendant beneath her shirt slowly fading, its internal fire dimming to a dull, exhausted spark. She didn't look back at the park. She didn't look at the darkness between the trees. She kept her eyes on the cracked yellow light, clutching her chest, feeling the frantic, dying pulse of the Heartstone against her skin. She reached the intersection, her breath coming in jagged, painful rasps. The city was still here. The cars were real. The world was solid. She pressed her back against the brick wall of a shop and slid down, her legs trembling. The pendant gave one final, violent pulse—a flare of red that illuminated the nearby alleyway—before turning stone-cold against her skin. She stared into the shadows of the alley, heart hammering against her ribs, listening to the silence of the city that suddenly felt thinner, more fragile, than the Grove itself.
created_at"2026-03-03T23:31:09.704Z" 3/3/2026, 11:31:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"mechanical"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count4
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"synchronized"
count1
10
word"comforting"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"weight"
count3
13
word"flicked"
count1
14
word"traced"
count1
15
word"electric"
count1
16
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"rhythmic"
2"vibrated"
3"mechanical"
4"echoed"
5"pulse"
6"silence"
7"gloom"
8"warmth"
9"synchronized"
10"comforting"
11"familiar"
12"weight"
13"flicked"
14"traced"
15"electric"
16"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1246
ratio0.001
matches
0"Click-clack-click."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1194
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Fae1
Grove3
Heartstone3
Pendant1
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
56.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like a slab of raw meat slapped on"
1"looked like a burrow, the earth around he"
2"sounded like dry leaves skittering over gr"
39.49% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.605
wordCount1246
matches
0"not mechanical, but a deep, pressurized thrumming, like the slow, wet beat of a"
1"not from the trees, but from inside her own ear canal"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean38.94
std22.73
cv0.584
sampleLengths
075
125
250
313
427
578
62
726
817
978
1046
1110
1259
1360
1412
1564
1659
1736
188
191
2036
2151
2211
2344
2450
2547
2614
2750
2834
2972
3041
3150
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"being wrestled"
1"being submerged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs200
matches
0"was folding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences100
ratio0.1
matches
0"A low, rhythmic hum vibrated through the ground—not mechanical, but a deep, pressurized thrumming, like the slow, wet beat of a giant heart."
1"It didn't scuttle or run; it flickered, like a film reel skipping frames."
2"The silence that followed was aggressive—a suffocating vacuum where even the wind refused to stir the leaves."
3"It didn't just glow; it seared."
4"They stared down at her with pits where faces should have been—smooth, featureless depressions that absorbed the light of her torch."
5"She turned to flee, but a pale hand—too many knuckles, skin the color of curdled milk—reached down from the dark, blocking her path."
6"It didn't reach for her; it hung there, suspended in the air."
7"A sudden, sharp tug pulled at her hair—once, twice, like a warning playful grab from a child."
8"The silence of inner London—the distant hum of traffic, the muffled roar of the city—crashed back with a ferocity that made her ears ring."
9"The pendant gave one final, violent pulse—a flare of red that illuminated the nearby alleyway—before turning stone-cold against her skin."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1207
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"stone-cold against her"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.02899751449875725
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009942004971002486
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean12.46
std6.93
cv0.556
sampleLengths
013
122
23
35
415
517
611
714
814
913
1023
117
121
135
1427
156
1623
1712
1813
1911
2013
212
229
2317
2413
254
2614
2718
2810
2924
3012
316
326
3311
3423
358
362
3715
3811
395
4028
414
424
4317
447
4510
4618
479
483
496
35.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.27
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences92
matches
0"She stepped through into the"
1"She pulled her coat tighter,"
2"she muttered, the sound swallowed"
3"she exhaled, her breath swirling"
4"It wasn't the brittle crack"
5"She froze, her pulse thumping"
6"She kept her eyes fixed"
7"It didn't scuttle or run;"
8"She stood, feet planted on"
9"she added, her voice steadier"
10"It sounded like a slab"
11"It dripped, the liquid catching"
12"It didn't just glow; it"
13"she hissed, backing toward the"
14"She took a step, but"
15"It landed in something yielding,"
16"She shoved her light downward."
17"She stood in the center"
18"It wasn't a bird."
19"It was the frantic, clicking"
ratio0.587
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences92
matches
0"The iron gate groaned, a"
1"She stepped through into the"
2"The temperature plummeted."
3"Condensation bloomed on her skin."
4"She pulled her coat tighter,"
5"The Heartstone Pendant rested against"
6"she muttered, the sound swallowed"
7"The device flickered, its green"
8"A low, rhythmic hum vibrated"
9"Rory swiped her thumb over"
10"she exhaled, her breath swirling"
11"It wasn't the brittle crack"
12"She froze, her pulse thumping"
13"She kept her eyes fixed"
14"Something tall and impossibly thin"
15"It didn't scuttle or run;"
16"She stood, feet planted on"
17"The silence that followed was"
18"she added, her voice steadier"
19"A soft, wet smack landed"
ratio0.946
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"To her left, a snap"
ratio0.011
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The silence that followed was aggressive—a suffocating vacuum where even the wind refused to stir the leaves."
1"It landed in something yielding, something that sighed under her weight."
2"They stared down at her with pits where faces should have been—smooth, featureless depressions that absorbed the light of her torch."
3"It whispered in a language that sounded like dry leaves skittering over gravel, a melodic, serrated cadence that made her nostrils sting."
4"Her fingers passed through cold mist, but she felt a strange, electric static that made the hair on her arms stand rigid."
5"She pushed forward, ignoring the sounds of wet sliding and heavy breathing that crowded the space inches behind her heels."
6"She kept her eyes on the cracked yellow light, clutching her chest, feeling the frantic, dying pulse of the Heartstone against her skin."
7"She stared into the shadows of the alley, heart hammering against her ribs, listening to the silence of the city that suddenly felt thinner, more fragile, than …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she added, her voice steadier than her nerves"
1"she whispered, her voice failing"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she added (add)"
2"she hissed (hiss)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
4"she snapped (snap)"
5"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.857
66.8585%