| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1256 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1256 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "mechanical" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "synchronized" | | 10 | "comforting" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "flicked" | | 14 | "traced" | | 15 | "electric" | | 16 | "anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1246 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1194 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 4 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 56.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a slab of raw meat slapped on" | | 1 | "looked like a burrow, the earth around he" | | 2 | "sounded like dry leaves skittering over gr" |
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| 39.49% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.605 | | wordCount | 1246 | | matches | | 0 | "not mechanical, but a deep, pressurized thrumming, like the slow, wet beat of a" | | 1 | "not from the trees, but from inside her own ear canal" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 38.94 | | std | 22.73 | | cv | 0.584 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 78 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 78 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 64 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 72 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 50 |
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| 97.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "being wrestled" | | 1 | "being submerged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "A low, rhythmic hum vibrated through the ground—not mechanical, but a deep, pressurized thrumming, like the slow, wet beat of a giant heart." | | 1 | "It didn't scuttle or run; it flickered, like a film reel skipping frames." | | 2 | "The silence that followed was aggressive—a suffocating vacuum where even the wind refused to stir the leaves." | | 3 | "It didn't just glow; it seared." | | 4 | "They stared down at her with pits where faces should have been—smooth, featureless depressions that absorbed the light of her torch." | | 5 | "She turned to flee, but a pale hand—too many knuckles, skin the color of curdled milk—reached down from the dark, blocking her path." | | 6 | "It didn't reach for her; it hung there, suspended in the air." | | 7 | "A sudden, sharp tug pulled at her hair—once, twice, like a warning playful grab from a child." | | 8 | "The silence of inner London—the distant hum of traffic, the muffled roar of the city—crashed back with a ferocity that made her ears ring." | | 9 | "The pendant gave one final, violent pulse—a flare of red that illuminated the nearby alleyway—before turning stone-cold against her skin." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1207 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "stone-cold against her" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.02899751449875725 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009942004971002486 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 12.46 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.556 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 35.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.27 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped through into the" | | 1 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 2 | "she muttered, the sound swallowed" | | 3 | "she exhaled, her breath swirling" | | 4 | "It wasn't the brittle crack" | | 5 | "She froze, her pulse thumping" | | 6 | "She kept her eyes fixed" | | 7 | "It didn't scuttle or run;" | | 8 | "She stood, feet planted on" | | 9 | "she added, her voice steadier" | | 10 | "It sounded like a slab" | | 11 | "It dripped, the liquid catching" | | 12 | "It didn't just glow; it" | | 13 | "she hissed, backing toward the" | | 14 | "She took a step, but" | | 15 | "It landed in something yielding," | | 16 | "She shoved her light downward." | | 17 | "She stood in the center" | | 18 | "It wasn't a bird." | | 19 | "It was the frantic, clicking" |
| | ratio | 0.587 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate groaned, a" | | 1 | "She stepped through into the" | | 2 | "The temperature plummeted." | | 3 | "Condensation bloomed on her skin." | | 4 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant rested against" | | 6 | "she muttered, the sound swallowed" | | 7 | "The device flickered, its green" | | 8 | "A low, rhythmic hum vibrated" | | 9 | "Rory swiped her thumb over" | | 10 | "she exhaled, her breath swirling" | | 11 | "It wasn't the brittle crack" | | 12 | "She froze, her pulse thumping" | | 13 | "She kept her eyes fixed" | | 14 | "Something tall and impossibly thin" | | 15 | "It didn't scuttle or run;" | | 16 | "She stood, feet planted on" | | 17 | "The silence that followed was" | | 18 | "she added, her voice steadier" | | 19 | "A soft, wet smack landed" |
| | ratio | 0.946 | |
| 54.35% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence that followed was aggressive—a suffocating vacuum where even the wind refused to stir the leaves." | | 1 | "It landed in something yielding, something that sighed under her weight." | | 2 | "They stared down at her with pits where faces should have been—smooth, featureless depressions that absorbed the light of her torch." | | 3 | "It whispered in a language that sounded like dry leaves skittering over gravel, a melodic, serrated cadence that made her nostrils sting." | | 4 | "Her fingers passed through cold mist, but she felt a strange, electric static that made the hair on her arms stand rigid." | | 5 | "She pushed forward, ignoring the sounds of wet sliding and heavy breathing that crowded the space inches behind her heels." | | 6 | "She kept her eyes on the cracked yellow light, clutching her chest, feeling the frantic, dying pulse of the Heartstone against her skin." | | 7 | "She stared into the shadows of the alley, heart hammering against her ribs, listening to the silence of the city that suddenly felt thinner, more fragile, than …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she added, her voice steadier than her nerves" | | 1 | "she whispered, her voice failing" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she added (add)" | | 2 | "she hissed (hiss)" | | 3 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 5 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.857 | |