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Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1GG01GYHFZ59EW341QM56K
Run Details
Model:
Inception Mercury 2
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
5.2s
Cost:
$0.001991
Provider:
Inception
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
33.33%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
56.64%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
56.06%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
85.56%
Sentence length variance
(details)
48.20%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
66.81%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
71.5535%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The door swung open before
Aurora could finish slipping the parcel onto the kitchen counter.
She stared at the silhouette
in the hallway, a man in a charcoal suit, an ivory‑handled cane
glinting
under the dim bulb.
Ptolemy, the tabby, flicked his
tail, ears flattening. "Lucien,"
Aurora said, voice flat, eyes
narrowing.
He stepped inside, the floorboards
creaking beneath his polished shoes. "Rory," he replied, his tone even, a faint smile tugging at the corner of his mouth. "I didn't expect to find you here." She set the bag down, the scent of ginger and soy mingling with the stale air of the flat. "Neither did I,"
she muttered, eyeing the three
deadbolts on the front door. "What brings you to Eva's place?"
He lowered his cane, the
hidden blade catching the light. "Urgent business,"
he said, voice low
. "There's a contract that needs signing, and the client is already at the door."
Aurora crossed her arms, the
scar on her left wrist catching a
glint
of the hallway lamp. "You're not here for a contract," she snapped. "You know why I left."
Lucien's eyes flickered, amber meeting
black, a storm behind them. "Because you thought I was a monster,"
he whispered, the words barely
audible over the hum of the fridge.
She pushed a stack of
research notes aside, a notebook spilling onto the floor. "Those notes are for the case,"
she said, pointing
. "The one you promised to forget."
He stepped closer, the cane
tapping against the wood. "Forget?"
he repeated, a hint of
irony in his tone. "I never forgot. I kept the promise to protect you." Aurora's jaw tightened. "Protect?" she asked. "You protected yourself while I fought the demons alone."
Lucien lowered his gaze, the
amber iris
glinting
. "I was bound by a pact,"
he said, voice steadier now
. "A pact that required me to stay hidden." She glanced at the cat, who now perched on the windowsill, eyes amber. "Ptolemy doesn't trust you," she muttered. The cat hissed, fur bristling. Lucien crouched, extending a hand. "Let him sniff,"
he said, his accent slipping
into a soft French
lilt
. "Il n'est pas dangereux." Aurora watched the cat's reaction, the
tension
in the room thickening. The cat hesitated, then nudged his palm, a tentative acceptance. "You always had a way of slipping into places you shouldn't be,"
Aurora said, a wry smile tugging at her lips
.
He straightened, the cane clicking
against the floor. "That's my profession,"
he replied, his voice smooth
. "Fixing things that shouldn't be fixed."
She lifted the parcel, the
golden emblem of Yu‑Fei Cheung's restaurant
glinting
. "This is for the Empress,"
she said, handing it to
him. "You need it for the meeting."
He took it, the weight
of the package grounding him. "Thank you,"
he said, his tone softening
. Aurora's eyes
flicked
to the door, the three deadbolts still engaged. "Do you think you can get us out of this?"
she asked, the question hanging between them
. Lucien's lips curled into a faint grin. "Together,"
he said, his hand resting on the cane's hilt
. "We always find a way." A sudden knock
reverberated
through the flat, the sound sharp and unexpected. Aurora's breath caught, her hand instinctively reaching for the kitchen drawer. The cat leapt from the windowsill, landing on the floor with a soft thud. Lucien's
eyes narrowed
, his hand tightening around the cane. "Who's there?"
he demanded, voice low
. The door
trembled
as the knob turned, the lock clicking. A figure emerged, cloaked in a dark coat, a mask obscuring the face. "Lucien Moreau,"
the stranger hissed, voice muffled
. "You owe us." Aurora's
pulse
raced
, her mind flashing to the contract she had signed months ago. She stared at Lucien, searching for an answer. He lifted his cane, the hidden blade flashing. "Stand back,"
he warned, his tone fierce
. The stranger lunged, the coat flapping like a black flag. Aurora seized the moment, grabbing a heavy book from the shelf. She swung it with all her strength, the cover cracking against the intruder's chest. The impact sent the stranger sprawling, the mask cracking to reveal a
familiar
scar. Lucien's blade sang, slicing through the air, a thin line of steel finding its mark. The stranger gasped, blood staining the floor. Aurora's
eyes widened
, the realization hitting her like a wave. "You're not here for a contract,"
she whispered, voice trembling
. Lucien's gaze never
wavered
, his grip on the cane firm. "There's more at stake than you know,"
he replied, his words barely audible over the rising tension
. A sudden, high‑pitched scream
echoed
from the hallway, the sound of a woman in distress. The cat darted toward the source, its fur bristling. Aurora lunged forward, the book still clutched in her hands. She turned the corner, heart
pounding
, the darkness swallowing her steps. The hallway stretched ahead, shadows
dancing
on the walls. A figure lurked, a
glint
of steel in its hand. Aurora's breath caught as the silhouette turned, revealing a face she thought she would never see again. The blade in Lucien's hand
trembled
, his eyes locked on the newcomer. The door behind them slammed shut, the lock clicking into place. A cold wind swept through the corridor, carrying the scent of ozone and burnt incense. Aurora's
pulse
hammered, the unsaid words between her and Lucien hanging like a rope ready to snap. She
clenched her fists
, the book's pages fluttering in the sudden gust. The figure raised its weapon, a dark aura pulsing around it. Lucien stepped forward, his cane poised, the blade
glinting
. "Now," he whispered, "we finish this." The hallway lights
flickered
, casting eerie shadows across the floor. A sudden, deafening crack split the air, the sound of something shattering. The figure recoiled, a scream escaping its throat. Aurora felt the world tilt, the ground beneath her trembling. A flash of light erupted, blinding and fierce. When it faded, the corridor was empty, the only sound the ragged breathing of those left standing. Ptolemy emerged from the darkness, his eyes wide, tail twitching. Lucien lowered his cane, the blade retracting with a soft click. Aurora stared at the space where the figure had vanished, her mind
racing
. She turned to Lucien, the
unspoken
question hanging between them. He met her gaze, a promise in his eyes. "Whatever comes next,"
he said, voice low
, "we face it together." A sudden, metallic clang rang from the hallway, the sound of a lock
being forced
. The door to the flat burst open, a flood of cold air spilling in. A shadowed shape
loomed
, its eyes glowing with an unnatural fire. Aurora's heart hammered, the danger
palpable
. She gripped the book tighter, the pages rustling like a warning. Lucien stepped beside her, his cane poised, the hidden blade ready. The shadow lunged, its form shifting like smoke. Aurora and Lucien braced themselves, the cat hissing at their feet. The hallway erupted in chaos, the fight just beginning.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
25
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
38
tagDensity
0.658
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1157
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1157
totalAiIsms
29
found
0
word
"glinting"
count
4
1
word
"flicked"
count
2
2
word
"glint"
count
2
3
word
"flickered"
count
2
4
word
"lilt"
count
1
5
word
"tension"
count
2
6
word
"weight"
count
1
7
word
"reverberated"
count
1
8
word
"trembled"
count
2
9
word
"pulse"
count
2
10
word
"raced"
count
1
11
word
"familiar"
count
1
12
word
"wavered"
count
1
13
word
"echoed"
count
1
14
word
"pounding"
count
1
15
word
"dancing"
count
1
16
word
"racing"
count
1
17
word
"unspoken"
count
1
18
word
"loomed"
count
1
19
word
"palpable"
count
1
highlights
0
"glinting"
1
"flicked"
2
"glint"
3
"flickered"
4
"lilt"
5
"tension"
6
"weight"
7
"reverberated"
8
"trembled"
9
"pulse"
10
"raced"
11
"familiar"
12
"wavered"
13
"echoed"
14
"pounding"
15
"dancing"
16
"racing"
17
"unspoken"
18
"loomed"
19
"palpable"
33.33%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
2
1
label
"clenched jaw/fists"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"eyes widened"
2
"clenched her fists"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
98
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
98
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
111
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
22
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1157
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
29
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
56.64%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
35
wordCount
964
uniqueNames
4
maxNameDensity
1.87
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora
18
Lucien
15
French
1
Cheung
1
persons
0
"Aurora"
1
"Lucien"
2
"Cheung"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.566
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
81
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1157
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
111
matches
(empty)
56.06%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
98
mean
11.81
std
4.09
cv
0.346
sampleLengths
0
15
1
22
2
8
3
7
4
10
5
23
6
19
7
19
8
10
9
20
10
17
11
13
12
10
13
19
14
14
15
15
16
9
17
20
18
3
19
12
20
8
21
19
22
13
23
6
24
5
25
5
26
17
27
11
28
10
29
21
30
8
31
14
32
12
33
17
34
10
35
7
36
11
37
17
38
7
39
15
40
12
41
11
42
14
43
9
44
6
45
10
46
13
47
10
48
14
49
8
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
98
matches
0
"being forced"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
199
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
111
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
964
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
16
adverbRatio
0.016597510373443983
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.004149377593360996
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
111
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
85.56%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
111
mean
10.42
std
3.79
cv
0.364
sampleLengths
0
15
1
22
2
8
3
7
4
10
5
16
6
7
7
19
8
13
9
6
10
10
11
6
12
14
13
17
14
8
15
5
16
10
17
19
18
14
19
9
20
6
21
9
22
10
23
10
24
3
25
3
26
9
27
8
28
11
29
8
30
13
31
6
32
5
33
5
34
13
35
4
36
11
37
10
38
21
39
8
40
8
41
6
42
12
43
11
44
6
45
10
46
7
47
11
48
17
49
7
48.20%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.2882882882882883
totalSentences
111
uniqueOpeners
32
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
94
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
66.81%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
36
totalSentences
94
matches
0
"She stared at the silhouette"
1
"He stepped inside, the floorboards"
2
"he replied, his tone even,"
3
"She set the bag down,"
4
"she muttered, eyeing the three"
5
"He lowered his cane, the"
6
"he said, voice low"
7
"he whispered, the words barely"
8
"She pushed a stack of"
9
"she said, pointing"
10
"He stepped closer, the cane"
11
"he repeated, a hint of"
12
"he said, voice steadier now"
13
"She glanced at the cat,"
14
"he said, his accent slipping"
15
"He straightened, the cane clicking"
16
"he replied, his voice smooth"
17
"She lifted the parcel, the"
18
"she said, handing it to"
19
"He took it, the weight"
ratio
0.383
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
93
totalSentences
94
matches
0
"The door swung open before"
1
"She stared at the silhouette"
2
"Ptolemy, the tabby, flicked his"
3
"Aurora said, voice flat, eyes"
4
"He stepped inside, the floorboards"
5
"he replied, his tone even,"
6
"She set the bag down,"
7
"she muttered, eyeing the three"
8
"He lowered his cane, the"
9
"he said, voice low"
10
"Aurora crossed her arms, the"
11
"Lucien's eyes flickered, amber meeting"
12
"he whispered, the words barely"
13
"She pushed a stack of"
14
"she said, pointing"
15
"He stepped closer, the cane"
16
"he repeated, a hint of"
17
"Aurora's jaw tightened."
18
"Lucien lowered his gaze, the"
19
"he said, voice steadier now"
ratio
0.989
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
94
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
52
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
25
uselessAdditionCount
17
matches
0
"Aurora said, voice flat, eyes narrowing"
1
"he said, voice low"
2
"he whispered, the words barely audible over the hum of the fridge"
3
"he repeated, a hint of irony in his tone"
4
"he said, voice steadier now"
5
"he said, his accent slipping into a soft French lilt"
6
"Aurora said, a wry smile tugging at her lips"
7
"he replied, his voice smooth"
8
"he said, his tone softening"
9
"she asked, the question hanging between them"
10
"he said, his hand resting on the cane's hilt"
11
"he demanded, voice low"
12
"the stranger hissed, voice muffled"
13
"he warned, his tone fierce"
14
"she whispered, voice trembling"
15
"he replied, his words barely audible over the rising tension"
16
"he said, voice low,"
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
25
fancyCount
10
fancyTags
0
"she muttered (mutter)"
1
"she snapped (snap)"
2
"he whispered (whisper)"
3
"he repeated (repeat)"
4
"she muttered (mutter)"
5
"he demanded (demand)"
6
"the stranger hissed (hiss)"
7
"he warned (warn)"
8
"she whispered (whisper)"
9
"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
38
tagDensity
0.658
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.4
effectiveRatio
0.4
71.5535%