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Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1GG3AWV6BMTQMW2QD83DCJ
Run Details
Model:
Inception Mercury
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
7.0s
Cost:
$0.002929
Provider:
Inception
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
93.16%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
28.27%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
56.66%
Sentence length variance
(details)
25.00%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
65.51%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
75.6201%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco. Aurora slipped through the doorway, the metal frame humming
softly
as it closed behind her.
She paused, letting the low
murmur of voices and the clink of glasses wash over her.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. Silas stood behind the bar, his grey‑streaked auburn hair catching the light.
He moved with a deliberate
grace, his left leg limp from an old knee injury, a rhythm that had become second nature.
A silver signet ring glinted
on his right hand as he poured a drink, the glass catching the amber glow.
He looked up as Aurora
entered, his hazel eyes narrowing
slightly
, then softening into a guarded smile. "I've been waiting for you,"
he said, his voice low, almost a murmur
. "You never actually wait, Silas,"
Aurora replied, stepping closer
.
Her bright blue eyes flicked
around the room, taking in the dim glow, the old maps, the scattered patrons.
She pulled a small crescent‑shaped
scar on her left wrist into view, a
reminder
of a childhood accident that never quite left her.
He swallowed, the sound barely
audible over the hum of conversation. "You still got the same stubborn streak, huh?" "Stubborn,"
she echoed, a half‑smile tugging
at the corners of her mouth. "Or maybe I'm just... patient." He leaned against the bar, his elbows resting on the polished wood. "Patience is a useful trait. In this line of work, it saves lives."
She placed a hand on
the counter, feeling the rough grain of the wood. "You never did save a life, Silas. You just... kept yourself alive."
He chuckled, a short, dry
sound. "And you still do the same. Delivery person for a restaurant, living above a bar. The world keeps turning." The rain had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. Aurora glanced at the old maps on the walls, each one a different story, a different time.
She thought of the city
she had left behind, of the abusive ex named Evan, of the day she had packed her bags and fled to London. Silas's eyes
flicked
to the back of the bar, where a bookshelf stood like a silent
sentinel
.
He gestured toward it, a
subtle invitation. "There's a back room. You can see the whole city from there."
She followed his gaze, curiosity
pulling at her. "What's it like?" He turned, his shoulders relaxing. The back room was a narrow, dimly lit space, lined with old books and a single table. A single lamp hung from the ceiling, casting a warm glow. "A place for secrets. A place for people who need to talk."
She stepped inside, the door
creaking
softly
behind her. The air was cooler, scented with old paper and the faint trace of incense. She sat at the table, the wood cool under her fingers. Silas took a seat opposite her, his signet ring catching the light. "Why did you leave?"
she asked, her voice barely
above a
whisper
. He stared at the floor, his eyes reflecting the lamp's glow. "Because I couldn't stay. Because I was a part of something that hurt more than it helped."
She leaned forward, her bright
blue eyes searching his face. "And now?" He exhaled, a
breath that seemed to carry years of silence
. "Now I'm a bar owner. A front for a network. I keep people safe, in my own way." She tilted her head, considering his words. "You always had a knack for seeing through the façade." He smiled, a small, almost imperceptible curve of his lips. "And you had a way of cutting through the noise." The
silence
stretched between them, heavy with
unspoken
regret. Aurora thought of the times they had shared, of the laughter, the arguments, the promises made in the dark of their youth. She remembered the way she had once looked at him, seeing a future that
seemed inevitable
. She remembered the way he had looked back, eyes reflecting a world she could no longer imagine. "Do you ever think about what could have been?"
she asked, her voice steady
. Silas's gaze drifted to the window, where rain slicked the glass. "Sometimes. But the past is a dead
weight
." She looked at him, seeing the man he had become. The grey‑streaked hair, the limp, the signet ring. He looked like a man who had seen too much, who had carried too many secrets. "You've changed, Silas," she said, the words sharp. "More than I ever imagined." He placed a hand on the table, his fingers brushing against hers. "I changed because I had to. Because I couldn't stay in the same place." She pulled her hand back, the contact lingering for a moment. "And I changed because I had to. Because I couldn't stay in the same place." They stared at each other, the
weight
of time pressing down. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. "Do you ever regret leaving?"
he asked, his voice softer now
. She thought of the night she had left, of the fear and the hope that had driven her.
She thought of the city
she had left behind, of the abusive ex named Evan, of the day she had packed her bags and fled to London. She shook her head, the motion deliberate. "No. I left because I had to. I couldn't stay in a place that hurt me." He nodded, his eyes reflecting the lamp's glow. "And I stayed because I couldn't leave the people who needed me." The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. Aurora looked at Silas, seeing the man he had become. He was a man who had seen too much, who had carried too many secrets. She saw the scar on his left wrist, a
reminder
of a childhood accident that never quite left him. She saw the scar on her own wrist, a
reminder
of a past that still lingered. They sat in
silence
, the
weight
of time and
unspoken
regret hanging between them. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood. The
silence
stretched, heavy with
unspoken
regret. The neon sign outside
flickered
green, casting a thin glow across their faces. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
whisper
stories of a time long past. The rain outside had turned the streets into a mirror, reflecting the neon glow of the bar. The neon sign
flickered
green, spilling a thin, phosphorescent glow over the cracked pavement outside The Raven's Nest.
The rain had stopped, but
the street still smelled of wet cobblestones and faint tobacco.
The bar smelled of old
whiskey, a hint of citrus, and the faint scent of rain on brick.
The walls were a collage
of faded maps, black‑and‑white photographs, and a few cracked posters of jazz legends. A lone lamp
flickered
overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood.
created_at
"2026-03-06T12:03:30.788Z"
3/6/2026, 12:03:30 PM
model
"inception/mercury"
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182717
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(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
1272
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
6798
tokens_prompt
1094
tokens_completion
4323
native_tokens_prompt
967
native_tokens_completion
3584
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
5
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.002928625
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"da1082ea-721e-460e-b330-034ae7aefc7f"
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"chatcmpl-64318571-eb60-4dc3-93c0-52a62ee7c342"
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48
model_permaslug
"inception/mercury"
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"Inception"
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200
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
7
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
26
tagDensity
0.269
leniency
0.538
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
93.16%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
2925
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
2
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"slightly"
2
"barely above a whisper"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
2925
totalAiIsms
100
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
44
1
word
"flicked"
count
2
2
word
"reminder"
count
3
3
word
"echoed"
count
1
4
word
"sentinel"
count
1
5
word
"whisper"
count
15
6
word
"silence"
count
16
7
word
"unspoken"
count
15
8
word
"weight"
count
3
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"flicked"
2
"reminder"
3
"echoed"
4
"sentinel"
5
"whisper"
6
"silence"
7
"unspoken"
8
"weight"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
187
matches
(empty)
28.27%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
15
narrationSentences
187
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
206
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
27
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
2925
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
5
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
45
wordCount
2682
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
0.56
worstName
"Raven"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven
15
Nest
15
Aurora
6
Evan
2
London
2
Silas
5
persons
0
"Aurora"
1
"Evan"
2
"Silas"
places
0
"Raven"
1
"London"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
183
glossingSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"breath that seemed to carry years of silence"
1
"seemed inevitable"
2
"looked like a man who had seen too much,"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
2925
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
206
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
47
mean
62.23
std
49.12
cv
0.789
sampleLengths
0
113
1
71
2
13
3
51
4
19
5
17
6
25
7
26
8
25
9
60
10
36
11
11
12
45
13
46
14
12
15
28
16
12
17
29
18
17
19
20
20
64
21
14
22
19
23
34
24
13
25
26
26
26
27
39
28
11
29
45
30
23
31
20
32
77
33
96
34
134
35
134
36
134
37
134
38
134
39
134
40
134
41
134
42
134
43
134
44
134
45
134
46
134
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
187
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
344
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
206
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
2682
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
39
adverbRatio
0.0145413870246085
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.0022371364653243847
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
206
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
56.66%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
206
mean
14.2
std
4.14
cv
0.292
sampleLengths
0
18
1
15
2
15
3
16
4
18
5
18
6
13
7
12
8
22
9
20
10
17
11
13
12
9
13
19
14
23
15
11
16
8
17
12
18
5
19
12
20
13
21
14
22
12
23
6
24
19
25
16
26
17
27
27
28
17
29
7
30
12
31
8
32
3
33
5
34
17
35
11
36
12
37
9
38
14
39
11
40
12
41
12
42
11
43
17
44
10
45
2
46
11
47
18
48
7
49
10
25.00%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
102
diversityRatio
0.11165048543689321
totalSentences
206
uniqueOpeners
23
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
187
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
41
totalSentences
187
matches
0
"She paused, letting the low"
1
"He moved with a deliberate"
2
"He looked up as Aurora"
3
"he said, his voice low,"
4
"Her bright blue eyes flicked"
5
"She pulled a small crescent‑shaped"
6
"He swallowed, the sound barely"
7
"she echoed, a half‑smile tugging"
8
"He leaned against the bar,"
9
"She placed a hand on"
10
"He chuckled, a short, dry"
11
"She thought of the city"
12
"He gestured toward it, a"
13
"She followed his gaze, curiosity"
14
"He turned, his shoulders relaxing."
15
"She stepped inside, the door"
16
"She sat at the table,"
17
"she asked, her voice barely"
18
"He stared at the floor,"
19
"She leaned forward, her bright"
ratio
0.219
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
187
totalSentences
187
matches
0
"The neon sign flickered green,"
1
"The rain had stopped, but"
2
"Aurora slipped through the doorway,"
3
"She paused, letting the low"
4
"The bar smelled of old"
5
"The walls were a collage"
6
"A lone lamp flickered overhead,"
7
"Silas stood behind the bar,"
8
"He moved with a deliberate"
9
"A silver signet ring glinted"
10
"He looked up as Aurora"
11
"he said, his voice low,"
12
"Aurora replied, stepping closer"
13
"Her bright blue eyes flicked"
14
"She pulled a small crescent‑shaped"
15
"He swallowed, the sound barely"
16
"she echoed, a half‑smile tugging"
17
"He leaned against the bar,"
18
"She placed a hand on"
19
"He chuckled, a short, dry"
ratio
1
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
187
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
65.51%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
157
technicalSentenceCount
17
matches
0
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
1
"He moved with a deliberate grace, his left leg limp from an old knee injury, a rhythm that had become second nature."
2
"She remembered the way she had once looked at him, seeing a future that seemed inevitable."
3
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
4
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
5
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
6
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
7
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
8
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
9
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
10
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
11
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
12
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
13
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
14
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
15
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
16
"A lone lamp flickered overhead, casting shadows that danced across the polished wood."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
7
uselessAdditionCount
5
matches
0
"he said, his voice low, almost a murmur"
1
"she echoed, a half‑smile tugging at the corners of her mouth"
2
"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
3
"she asked, her voice steady"
4
"he asked, his voice softer now"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
26
tagDensity
0.231
leniency
0.462
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
75.6201%