Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1GHRPXJWAZCQA6HZMEFME9

Run Details

Duration:
6.0s
Cost:
$0.002515
Provider:
Inception

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobblestones of Soho, turning the streets into a river of reflected neon. A green glow pulsed above the entrance of The Raven’s Nest, the sign flickering like a wounded animal. Harlow Quinn stood under the awning, her leather watch ticking against her left wrist, the rain soaking the edges of her coat. She scanned the doorway, eyes sharp as a hawk’s, jaw set in a line of military precision. The bar’s windows smeared with condensation, the interior a dim tableau of old maps and black‑and‑white photographs, each frame a silent witness to forgotten crimes. A figure slipped out of the back door, shoulders hunched, coat flapping against the wind. The suspect—a lanky man with a scar across his cheek—glanced back, eyes flickering with fear. Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles as she surged forward, the rain drumming on her hat. “Don’t think you can vanish into the night,” she barked, voice low, the words cutting through the storm like a blade. The suspect darted into an alley, the narrow passage narrowing into a maze of graffiti‑splashed walls. Quinn followed, her breath a steady rhythm despite the chill. She heard a muffled cough behind a dumpster, a soft thud as the man slipped under a rusted fire escape. She reached the fire escape, the metal ladder slick with rain. She climbed, each rung protesting under her weight, the city’s roar muffled by the concrete walls. At the top, she peered down onto a street that seemed to dissolve into darkness. The suspect had vanished, but a faint glow pulsed from a doorway half‑hidden behind a stack of crates. Quinn’s mind raced. The glow matched the hue of the neon sign above The Raven’s Nest, but the source was different—a low, pulsing blue that seemed to breathe. She slipped through the doorway, the rain washing away her footprints as she entered a narrow corridor lined with old brick. A faint hum filled the air, a vibration that made the hair on her arms stand up. The corridor opened into a cavernous space, the ceiling lost in shadows. The floor was slick with water, and the scent of ozone mingled with the metallic tang of blood. Lanterns hung from the ceiling, casting erratic shadows over rows of stalls draped in tattered cloth. She recognized the place instantly—the Veil Market, a subterranean bazaar that appeared only under the full moon, its entry guarded by a bone token. The market moved like a living organism, its stalls shifting, its patrons cloaked in anonymity. The rain outside seemed a world away, the market’s interior a pulse of whispered deals and forbidden goods. A figure emerged from behind a stall, a woman with a mask of silver filigree covering her eyes. She held a small vial that glowed amber, the liquid inside swirling like a captured sunrise. “You’re far from the police precinct, Detective,” the woman said, voice melodic, the words slipping through the market’s thick air. Quinn’s eyes narrowed. “I’m not here for your trinkets,” she replied, stepping forward, the leather of her coat creaking. The woman chuckled, a sound that echoed off the stone walls. “You chase ghosts, Quinn. The suspect you follow belongs to a world you cannot comprehend.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “I’ve chased ghosts before. My partner died because of them.” The woman’s mask shifted, revealing a thin scar across her cheek, matching the one on the suspect’s face. “Your partner’s death was no accident. The veil thins here. You can either walk away or step deeper.” Quinn’s hand brushed the worn leather watch on her wrist, the ticking a reminder of time slipping away. She glanced at the stalls, eyes catching a glint of a bone token lying on a wooden table, its surface etched with ancient symbols. “Do you have a token?” she asked, voice low, the question a demand. The woman tilted her head. “Tokens are not bought, Detective. They are earned.” A sudden clatter erupted from the far end of the market. A group of cloaked figures surged forward, their faces hidden, their movements swift and coordinated. The suspect appeared among them, his scarred cheek illuminated by a flickering torch. Quinn’s heart hammered. She could retreat, escape to the rain‑slick streets, but the weight of her partner’s unsolved death pressed against her chest. She could also plunge into this unknown, risking everything for a chance at truth. She turned to the woman, eyes fierce. “If I go deeper, you’ll help me.” The woman’s mask glimmered. “Help is a currency here, Detective. Pay the price.” Quinn reached into her coat, pulling out a small, worn photograph of DS Morris, the partner she had lost. She placed it on the table, the image catching the lantern light. The woman’s eyes flickered, a brief flash of recognition. “The price is a promise,” the woman whispered, voice softer now. “You will not leave this place until you have what you seek.” Quinn nodded, the decision sealing itself in her mind. She stepped forward, the rain’s echo fading behind her as she entered the market’s deeper chambers. The market’s corridors twisted, each turn revealing stalls that sold things no mortal should possess: vials of liquid night, talismans that pulsed with unseen energy, books bound in human skin. A vendor with a skeletal hand offered a bottle of blackened smoke. “Careful, Detective,” he warned, his voice a rasp. “Some things cannot be unbought.” Quinn ignored the warning, her gaze fixed on the suspect, who slipped through a narrow passage marked by a sign of a raven perched on a broken chain. She followed, the market’s floor vibrating with each step. A sudden crack split the air as a pipe burst, sending a spray of water across the stone. The market’s lanterns flickered, casting the shadows that danced like specters. The suspect stopped, turning to face Quinn, his eyes reflecting the blue glow of the market’s core. “You shouldn’t be here,” he hissed, hand reaching for a concealed dagger. Quinn’s hand moved to her own weapon, a compact pistol she kept hidden beneath her coat. She drew it, the metal cold against her palm. “Then we’ll see who’s the ghost,” she replied, voice steady. The suspect lunged, dagger flashing. Quinn sidestepped, the pistol’s barrel catching a glint of the neon sign above The Raven’s Nest, a reminder of the world above. She fired a single shot, the bullet striking the dagger’s hilt, sending it clattering to the stone. The suspect staggered, his eyes wide. “You have no idea what you’re dealing with,” he gasped. Quinn’s expression hardened. “I have an idea. I have a partner who died because of this, and I have a promise to keep.” A sudden roar erupted from the market’s depths, a deep, guttural sound that seemed to emanate from the very walls. The market’s patrons froze, their cloaked forms trembling. The woman in silver filigree stepped forward, her mask now revealing a face scarred by time. “The veil is tearing,” she announced, voice resonant. “The market is a conduit. You have opened it.” Quinn’s eyes darted to the floor, where a faint fissure glowed with an otherworldly light. The fissure pulsed, a heartbeat that synced with her own. She felt the pull of something ancient, a current that threatened to drag her into oblivion. She tightened her grip on the pistol, her mind recalling the night she lost DS Morris—how the rain had masked a scream, how the supernatural had slipped through the cracks of her understanding. She would not let another life be consumed by the unseen. The suspect, now disarmed, fell to his knees, clutching his throat. “Please,” he whispered, “the token—” Quinn stepped closer, the rain’s memory on her skin. “What token?” He lifted a small, bone‑white token from his pocket, its surface etched with runes that glowed faintly. “It opens the secret room in The Raven’s Nest. It’s the only way out.” Quinn’s mind raced. The secret room, a hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings. She had heard rumors of it, but never imagined it would be tied to this market. She snatched the token, the bone cool against her palm. The suspect’s eyes widened, hope flickering. “You’ll… you’ll get out?” Quinn stared at the token, feeling the weight of her decision. She could leave the market, return to the rain‑slick streets, but the secret room could hold the key to the conspiracy that had taken her partner. She could also stay, risk the market’s unknown dangers, and possibly uncover the truth. The woman in silver filigree stepped forward, her hand extended. “Give me the token, and I will guide you.” Quinn hesitated, the token trembling between her fingers. She thought of the rain, of the neon sign, of the night she had stood under the awning, waiting for a clue that never came. She thought of the promise she had made to her partner’s memory, a promise that she would not abandon the hunt. She placed the token in the woman’s palm, the bone’s surface reflecting the market’s eerie light. The woman’s eyes softened, a flicker of respect crossing her mask. “Follow me,” she said, voice a low hum. “The secret room lies beyond the bookshelf in The Raven’s Nest. The market will close when the moon wanes.” Quinn turned, the rain’s echo still ringing in her ears, the scent of ozone lingering on her skin. She walked toward the stairwell that led back to the surface, the market’s shadows receding behind her. The alleyway outside was empty, the neon sign above The Raven’s Nest still pulsing green, a beacon in the night. She emerged onto the wet street, the rain now a gentle drizzle. The city’s lights reflected in puddles, each ripple a mirror of the chaos she had just escaped. She paused at the bar’s doorway, the green sign flickering above, the sound of distant sirens muted by the night. Inside, the bar’s interior was dim, the maps and photographs casting long shadows. A bookshelf stood against the far wall, its spines worn, the wood darkened by years of use. Quinn approached, her hand brushing the worn leather watch on her wrist, the ticking a reminder of time’s relentless march. She pulled a volume from the shelf, the hidden mechanism clicking. A narrow passage opened, a narrow stairwell descending into darkness. She glanced back at the bar, the rain still falling, the neon sign a silent witness. She hesitated, the weight of the token in her pocket, the promise she had made echoing in her mind. She stepped into the darkness, the air cool and thick with the scent of old paper and something metallic. The stairwell led her down, each step echoing in the silent space. The walls narrowed, the light from above fading, replaced by a faint, greenish glow that seemed to pulse with an unseen heart. She reached a heavy wooden door, its surface etched with a raven perched on a broken chain. She pushed it open, the hinges groaning. Inside, a room stretched beyond the walls, its ceiling vaulted, the floor covered in a thick, black carpet. In the center, a table held a single object—a small, brass key, its surface etched with the same runes as the token. Quinn’s eyes widened. The key was the answer she had been chasing, the link between the market, the secret room, and the mystery that had haunted her for years. She reached for it, her fingers trembling. A voice whispered from the shadows, low and familiar. “You finally came, Quinn.” She turned, her heart hammering, the rain’s memory still fresh on her skin. The figure stepped into the light—a man with a scar across his cheek, his eyes reflecting the green neon above The Raven’s Nest. “You’re not supposed to be here,” she said, voice steady, the words sharp as a blade. He smiled, a thin, bitter smile. “Neither are you. The veil is thin, and the market… it feeds on our secrets.” Quinn’s mind raced, the brass key glinting in her hand. She could take the key, leave, and never look back, or she could stay, confront the man, and uncover the truth that had killed her partner. She tightened her grip on the key, the metal cold against her palm. The rain outside drummed on the city’s roofs, a rhythm that matched the beat of her heart. She stepped forward, the shadows parting as she moved. The man raised a hand, his fingers brushing the edge of the table. “You have a choice, Detective. Walk away, or step into the darkness.” Quinn’s eyes narrowed, the promise to her partner echoing louder than any fear. She took a breath, the night’s chill filling her lungs, and moved toward the man, the brass key clutched tightly. The door behind her slammed shut, the sound echoing through the underground chamber, sealing her fate in the rain‑soaked city above.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.839
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2159
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2159
totalAiIsms41
found
0
word"pulsed"
count4
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"chill"
count2
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"raced"
count3
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count3
8
word"glint"
count2
9
word"etched"
count4
10
word"flickered"
count2
11
word"echo"
count2
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"otherworldly"
count1
14
word"clandestine"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count1
16
word"beacon"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count4
18
word"familiar"
count1
19
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"scanned"
2"chill"
3"weight"
4"raced"
5"pulse"
6"echoed"
7"reminder"
8"glint"
9"etched"
10"flickered"
11"echo"
12"depths"
13"otherworldly"
14"clandestine"
15"flicker"
16"beacon"
17"echoing"
18"familiar"
19"glinting"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count4
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences135
matches
0"g with fear"
68.78% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences135
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2152
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1894
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven5
Nest5
Quinn25
Veil1
Market1
Morris2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Quinn"
3"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.84
windowScore0.833
67.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences121
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"street that seemed to dissolve into darkness"
1"appeared only under the full moon, its entry guarded by a bone token"
2"sound that seemed to emanate from the very walls"
3"glow that seemed to pulse with an unseen heart"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2152
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
97.48% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean33.11
std16.26
cv0.491
sampleLengths
097
145
221
346
460
549
663
757
834
920
1019
1126
1213
1336
1442
1513
1613
1739
1837
1914
2013
2140
2223
2325
2442
2513
2637
2746
2812
2925
3010
3144
3216
3323
3444
3517
3641
3744
3816
3911
4031
4134
4220
4351
4419
4554
4627
4727
4855
4949
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs325
matches(empty)
30.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences153
ratio0.039
matches
0"The suspect—a lanky man with a scar across his cheek—glanced back, eyes flickering with fear."
1"The glow matched the hue of the neon sign above The Raven’s Nest, but the source was different—a low, pulsing blue that seemed to breathe."
2"She recognized the place instantly—the Veil Market, a subterranean bazaar that appeared only under the full moon, its entry guarded by a bone token."
3"She tightened her grip on the pistol, her mind recalling the night she lost DS Morris—how the rain had masked a scream, how the supernatural had slipped through the cracks of her understanding."
4"In the center, a table held a single object—a small, brass key, its surface etched with the same runes as the token."
5"The figure stepped into the light—a man with a scar across his cheek, his eyes reflecting the green neon above The Raven’s Nest."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1901
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.013150973172014729
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.003156233561283535
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean14.07
std6.18
cv0.439
sampleLengths
015
118
222
317
425
515
615
715
821
916
1010
1120
1211
1316
1415
1518
163
1725
1821
1917
2012
2118
2216
2324
2415
2518
2618
2716
2820
293
3016
3111
3215
333
3410
3518
3618
3718
3824
3913
405
418
4211
4315
4413
453
4620
4714
487
497
34.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.1830065359477124
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences133
matches
0"She scanned the doorway, eyes"
1"she barked, voice low, the"
2"She heard a muffled cough"
3"She reached the fire escape,"
4"She climbed, each rung protesting"
5"She slipped through the doorway,"
6"She recognized the place instantly—the"
7"She held a small vial"
8"she replied, stepping forward, the"
9"She glanced at the stalls,"
10"she asked, voice low, the"
11"She could retreat, escape to"
12"She could also plunge into"
13"She turned to the woman,"
14"She placed it on the"
15"She stepped forward, the rain’s"
16"he warned, his voice a"
17"She followed, the market’s floor"
18"he hissed, hand reaching for"
19"She drew it, the metal"
ratio0.391
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount128
totalSentences133
matches
0"A green glow pulsed above"
1"Harlow Quinn stood under the"
2"She scanned the doorway, eyes"
3"The bar’s windows smeared with"
4"A figure slipped out of"
5"The suspect—a lanky man with"
6"Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles"
7"she barked, voice low, the"
8"The suspect darted into an"
9"Quinn followed, her breath a"
10"She heard a muffled cough"
11"She reached the fire escape,"
12"She climbed, each rung protesting"
13"The suspect had vanished, but"
14"Quinn’s mind raced."
15"The glow matched the hue"
16"She slipped through the doorway,"
17"A faint hum filled the"
18"The corridor opened into a"
19"The floor was slick with"
ratio0.962
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences97
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"She recognized the place instantly—the Veil Market, a subterranean bazaar that appeared only under the full moon, its entry guarded by a bone token."
1"The woman’s mask shifted, revealing a thin scar across her cheek, matching the one on the suspect’s face."
2"The market’s corridors twisted, each turn revealing stalls that sold things no mortal should possess: vials of liquid night, talismans that pulsed with unseen e…"
3"The suspect stopped, turning to face Quinn, his eyes reflecting the blue glow of the market’s core."
4"She fired a single shot, the bullet striking the dagger’s hilt, sending it clattering to the stone."
5"A sudden roar erupted from the market’s depths, a deep, guttural sound that seemed to emanate from the very walls."
6"He lifted a small, bone‑white token from his pocket, its surface etched with runes that glowed faintly."
7"Quinn approached, her hand brushing the worn leather watch on her wrist, the ticking a reminder of time’s relentless march."
8"The walls narrowed, the light from above fading, replaced by a faint, greenish glow that seemed to pulse with an unseen heart."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"the woman said, voice melodic, the words slipping through the market’s thick air"
1"she asked, voice low, the question a demand"
2"the woman whispered, voice softer now"
3"he warned, his voice a rasp"
4"she replied, voice steady"
5"she announced, voice resonant"
6"she said, voice steady, the words sharp as a blade"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she barked (bark)"
1"the woman whispered (whisper)"
2"he warned (warn)"
3"he hissed (hiss)"
4"he gasped (gasp)"
5"she announced (announce)"
6"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.839
rawRatio0.538
effectiveRatio0.452
68.5560%