| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.591 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1273 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1273 | | totalAiIsms | 42 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "echoing" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "resonated" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "wavering" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "raced" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "measured" | | 14 | "flicker" | | 15 | "etched" | | 16 | "trembled" | | 17 | "uncanny" | | 18 | "pulsed" | | 19 | "pawn" | | 20 | "wavered" | | 21 | "beacon" | | 22 | "scanning" | | 23 | "rhythmic" | | 24 | "echo" | | 25 | "unspoken" | | 26 | "footfall" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 3 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "eyes widened" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 11.49% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1271 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1182 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Aurora | 18 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.739 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "movement that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once" | | 1 | "felt like a compass pointing toward som" | | 2 | "movement that seemed to tug at the very air" | | 3 | "wail that seemed to come from the very stones" | | 4 | "as if holding its breath" | | 5 | "circle that seemed to pulse with a soft, rhythmic beat" | | 6 | "sound that seemed to echo from another world" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.787 | | wordCount | 1271 | | matches | | 0 | "not a paper,” it whispered, “but a memory etched in stone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 30.26 | | std | 15.24 | | cv | 0.504 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 44 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 46 | | 41 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped forward, the delivery bag swinging, the weight of her past—abusive ex, the flight to London, the night shifts—pressing against her shoulders." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1184 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.028716216216216218 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004222972972972973 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 13.24 | | std | 5.7 | | cv | 0.43 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 39.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.21875 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 39.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a chorus of distant" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, feeling the pendant’s" | | 1 | "Her boots crunched on fallen" | | 2 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 3 | "She felt the time bend," | | 4 | "It was too tall to" | | 5 | "Its eyes glowed faintly, matching" | | 6 | "She brushed a blossom from" | | 7 | "she muttered, the word a" | | 8 | "It wore a coat of" | | 9 | "It lifted one hand, and" | | 10 | "She had never understood why" | | 11 | "she asked, her tone a" | | 12 | "it replied, each syllable a" | | 13 | "She felt the pendant’s heat" | | 14 | "she said, voice steadier now" | | 15 | "It seemed to come from" | | 16 | "She stepped forward, the delivery" | | 17 | "she demanded, the words a" | | 18 | "she shouted, the word a" | | 19 | "She clutched the pendant, its" |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora slipped the silver chain" | | 1 | "The night air in Richmond" | | 2 | "She paused, feeling the pendant’s" | | 3 | "The path narrowed, twin roots" | | 4 | "Her boots crunched on fallen" | | 5 | "The moon hung low, a" | | 6 | "Shadows gathered around the ancient" | | 7 | "A rustle slipped through the" | | 8 | "Aurora’s eyes narrowed, bright blue" | | 9 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 10 | "A low hum rose from" | | 11 | "The crimson gem flickered, a" | | 12 | "Aurora’s breath hitched, the air" | | 13 | "She felt the time bend," | | 14 | "A figure emerged from behind" | | 15 | "It was too tall to" | | 16 | "Its eyes glowed faintly, matching" | | 17 | "Aurora’s heart hammered, yet she" | | 18 | "The figure did not answer." | | 19 | "The sound seemed to come" |
| | ratio | 0.976 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air in Richmond Park smelled of damp earth and distant pine, a faint perfume that clung to the old oak standing stones marking the Grove’s edge." | | 1 | "She paused, feeling the pendant’s faint warmth as if a hidden fire breathed against her skin." | | 2 | "A low hum rose from the stones, a vibration that resonated with the pendant’s pulse." | | 3 | "The sound seemed to come from the very ground, as if the earth itself remembered a forgotten play." | | 4 | "A gust brushed past, scattering a spray of wildflowers that burst into bloom at her feet, their petals opening and closing in a rhythm that defied the night’s s…" | | 5 | "It lifted one hand, and the pendant’s glow intensified, a pulse that matched the figure’s heartbeat." | | 6 | "Aurora’s mind raced, recalling the unknown benefactor who had slipped the pendant into her palm." | | 7 | "A low growl rose from the shadows beyond the stones, a sound that resonated deep within the earth." | | 8 | "Cracks opened in the moss, revealing a shallow pool of water that reflected the stars above with uncanny clarity." | | 9 | "The grove’s wind rose, whipping the wildflowers into a frenzy, their petals tearing away like paper in a storm." | | 10 | "Aurora turned, eyes scanning the darkness, the pendant’s glow guiding her sight." | | 11 | "The figure’s voice lingered, a whisper that brushed Aurora’s ear." | | 12 | "She turned toward the path leading out of the Grove, the ancient stones casting long shadows that stretched like fingers across the grass." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, the word a rasp against the silence" | | 1 | "she asked, her tone a blade" | | 2 | "it replied, each syllable a crackle of bark" | | 3 | "she said, voice steadier now" | | 4 | "she demanded, the words a crack in the night" | | 5 | "she shouted, the word a hammer against the night" | | 6 | "she asked, voice low, the question hanging like a dropped stone" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 4 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 5 | "She whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |