Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1GTBM09K5ARBSA3P9191GF

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5.4
Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.037439
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose out of the mist like old teeth, dark oak trunks twisted into pillars by an age that had stripped the bark smooth in places and knotted it thick in others. Wildflowers crowded their roots in colours that did not belong together and still worked: cobalt petals beside rust-red bells, pale gold stars pushing through moss black as soot. The air inside the ring looked wrong. It shimmered, not with heat, but with a soft bend, as if the grove sat behind water held upright. Aurora stopped a pace from the nearest stone. “You feel that?” Nyx stood half in the shadow of a yew, their outline wavering where the evening light cut through the branches. Their violet eyes glowed faint through the blur of their face. “The Veil thinned here,” they murmured. “Not torn. Parted.” Aurora touched the Heartstone through her shirt. The pendant had warmed against her skin since they passed the deer trail ten minutes ago. Now it pressed heat into her breastbone like a live coal wrapped in velvet. “It’s getting hotter.” Behind her, Isolde crossed the grass without a sound. No bend of stem marked her path. Her silver hair drifted around her waist though the air lay still beyond the stones. “The grove recognised you before you recognised it,” she said, looking at Aurora’s throat rather than her face. “That little red heart has better manners than most mortals.” Aurora gave the ring of stones another look. “You could’ve mentioned the air would look like it had been stitched badly.” “If I had named the strangeness, you would have searched for my words instead of your own eyes.” “That’s a yes, then.” Isolde’s mouth curved, not quite a smile. Aurora slid her hand down to the hilt at her side. The Fae-forged blade sat hidden beneath her jacket, cold even through the fabric. Cold enough to bite. She took one breath, then stepped between the stones. The world folded. Not spun. Not blurred. Folded, like a page turned without wind. The damp London evening vanished. The new air struck her skin with a softness that felt almost deliberate. Light poured over the clearing from nowhere she could point to. Not sun. Not moon. The sky arched high above in bands of pearl, green, and pale violet, moving slow as breath. Trees ringed the place, but they were no oaks she knew. Their trunks gleamed silver-white, smooth as bone, and their leaves flashed dark on one side and mirrored on the other, so every stir sent shards of light through the branches. Aurora stared. “Well,” she said at last. “That’s subtle.” Nyx came through next, though for one second they appeared in three different shadows at once before settling into one shape beside her. The edges of their form sharpened, then loosened again. “It pulls strangely,” they said, lifting a hand and watching the light fail to cling to it. “Space lies here.” Isolde entered last. The shimmer behind them sealed at once. One blink, and the standing stones looked as though they had always belonged to this side. Aurora turned back. “Can we still leave?” “The door remains while it wishes.” Isolde tilted her head toward a narrow stream winding through the clearing. “Come. The grove dislikes feet that hover.” “That’s reassuring.” Aurora moved forward, boots sinking into grass too soft to be real. It did not spring back at once. It curled around the leather as if testing her. The scent in the air shifted every few steps. Honey one moment. Rain on slate the next. Then sharp mint, then woodsmoke, though no fire burned. The stream ran clear over stones that glowed from within. Not bright, but enough to make the water seem full of trapped stars. Along the bank, flowers opened as they passed. Aurora crouched near one bloom the size of her palm, its petals thin as glass and veined in gold. “Do they all do that?” “They watched you approach,” Isolde said. “Courtesy demanded they look their best.” Aurora glanced up. “You talk about this place like it’s listening.” A low branch dipped over her shoulder and brushed a strand of black hair away from her cheek with the care of fingers. Nyx’s shape shifted beside her, shadows tightening. “It is.” Aurora stood at once. “Right. Good. Fine.” The branch lifted back into place. She looked ahead. The clearing did not end where it should have. Paths slipped away through the trees, narrow and pale, made of packed dust that shimmered with specks like ground shell. Each path bent out of sight too quickly, turning around trunks that seemed near until she walked toward them and found they had moved farther off. Somewhere above, something sang in a voice too liquid for a bird. Another voice answered from the ground, a series of clicks and hollow notes like pebbles tapped together inside a glass bowl. “Tell me at least this much,” Aurora said. “Can the place hurt us?” Isolde glanced over one shoulder as she walked. “Of course.” Aurora laughed once, short and flat. “And the comforting version?” “It has no appetite for your flesh.” “That leaves plenty of room for worse.” “Much.” Nyx let out a whisper that might have been amusement. They followed the stream deeper beneath the silver trees. The light changed with no source Aurora could see. One stretch glowed with late-afternoon amber. Ten paces later the world cooled to blue dusk. Her skin prickled each time it shifted. The Fae blade pulled faintly at her hip, as if the metal wanted to lean toward something hidden. The stream widened into a pool as round as a coin. Its surface lay still despite water feeding in and spilling out. White shapes moved beneath it. Fish, Aurora thought at first. Then one drifted upward and she saw a face in the curve of its body, eyes shut, mouth parted in a sleep so peaceful it unsettled her more than a scream would have. She stepped back. “What the hell is that?” Isolde stopped beside the pool. “Dreams that lost their dreamers.” Aurora looked at her. “That sentence had no business being so calm.” One of the pale creatures rose until it pressed against the underside of the water. Fingers spread there. Human fingers, almost. The hand left no ripple. Nyx crouched at the edge. The reflection beneath them did not match their shape. It showed a man in a black doublet with a thin face and hollowed eyes, his hand held over a book crusted with ash. He looked up from the water as if he had heard his name spoken. Aurora saw it too. Her gaze flicked to Nyx. They straightened at once, and the image broke into white threads. “Do not stare long,” Nyx said. “The pool bargains.” “With what?” “With what you miss.” Aurora thought of Cardiff rain needling the windows at dawn. Her mother singing under her breath while grading papers. Eva’s laugh from the hall outside the flat. A version of herself from before London, before fear had worn grooves into instinct. She shoved her hands into her jacket pockets. “Noted.” They left the pool behind. The song overhead followed them for a while, then faded beneath a new sound: bells, distant and soft, struck with no pattern she could catch. The path narrowed. Ferns rose shoulder-high, their fronds furred with silver hairs that shone in the changing light. Tiny creatures moved among them, no larger than thumbs, with bodies like curled leaves and wings made of transparent skin. They watched from stems and vanished whenever Aurora looked straight at them. “Do they bite?” she asked. “Only the rude ones,” Isolde replied. “Meaning the creatures or us?” “The answer kept changing.” The path opened without warning onto a broad stretch of stone. Aurora halted so sharply Nyx drifted into her shoulder and passed half through before pulling back. Before them stood a ruin. At least, it had the bones of one. Arches climbed from the earth in elegant sweeps, built from a pale material that looked like marble until she saw roots running through it like veins. No roof remained. No walls worth naming. Yet the shape of a hall still held, as though memory had more strength here than mortar. Vines with black leaves wrapped the columns, and each leaf reflected a different bit of sky. In the centre rose a basin carved from one single block, empty except for a layer of shining dust. Aurora walked onto the stone and felt a faint pulse rise through the soles of her boots. Not vibration. More like the place had a heartbeat buried too deep to hear. “This was built,” she said quietly. “Grown,” Isolde corrected. “For what?” The Half-Fae looked up through the open arches. “For speaking with what stood on the far side of silence.” Aurora folded her arms. “That almost meant something.” “It meant enough.” Nyx moved ahead of them. Shadows clung to the bases of the columns despite the shifting light, thicker than they should have been. They rested a hand above one patch and drew it back fast. “Ward-lines,” they whispered. “Old. Broken. Not dead.” Aurora’s hand found the dagger hilt at once. Cold knifed into her palm. “Broken by what?” Nyx looked toward the far end of the ruin. “Passage.” A gust crossed the stone. Every black leaf on the vines flipped at once, and the ruin flashed with a hundred borrowed skies. Aurora caught glimpses inside them: red clouds over jagged hills, a sea the colour of milk, towers hanging upside down in a dusk without stars. Then the leaves turned back and showed only the pearl-green light of the grove. She swallowed. “Did you two know this was here?” “I knew a place of listening slept within the grove,” Isolde said. “Sleep changes the face.” “That’s one way to dodge blame.” Aurora stepped toward the basin in the middle. Fine silver dust coated its interior, smooth except for one mark dragged across it. A recent line. She leaned closer. “Something touched this.” Nyx arrived beside her in a soundless spill of shadow. “Not touched. Taken.” Aurora looked down the drag mark to where it ended at the lip of the basin. A few grains still clung there, glowing faint under the strange light. “Taken where?” Before Nyx could answer, the bells sounded again. Louder now. Not distant. Near enough that the air inside the arches trembled. Aurora straightened and turned. At the far edge of the ruin, between two columns webbed in black vine, figures moved through the silver trees. Three of them. Tall, thin, wrapped in cloaks woven from something that caught the light like insect wings. No faces showed beneath their hoods. Each carried a staff tipped with a cage of thorns, and inside each cage floated a small blue flame. Aurora’s fingers closed around the Fae-forged blade and pulled it free. Moonsilver caught the shifting sky and answered with its own pale gleam. “Friends of yours?” Isolde’s expression did not change, but her gaze sharpened. “No.” Nyx spread wider, their body thinning at the edges until they touched every shadow cast by the columns. The three figures stopped at the threshold of the stone hall. Their bells hung from their sleeves, tiny and dull, swaying with the last of their movement. One of them lifted its head. When it spoke, the voice came from inside Aurora’s skull, dry as old petals. “You entered uncalled.” Aurora held the dagger low, point angled toward the stone. “And yet here we all are.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.032
94.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1933
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1933
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"shimmered"
count2
1
word"wavering"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"unsettled"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"marble"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"wavering"
2"velvet"
3"comforting"
4"whisper"
5"unsettled"
6"flicked"
7"marble"
8"pulse"
9"silence"
10"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences165
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences165
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences214
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1933
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1650
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora30
Heartstone1
Isolde11
Fae-forged2
London2
Nyx13
Fae4
Cardiff1
Half-Fae1
One4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Fae"
4"Half-Fae"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"One"
globalScore0.591
windowScore0.667
59.91% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences111
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"not quite a smile"
1"as if testing her"
2"seemed near until she walked toward them and found they had moved farther off"
3"looked like marble until she saw roots ru"
96.53% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.035
wordCount1933
matches
0"not with heat, but with a soft bend, as if the grove sat behind water held upri"
1"Not bright, but enough to make the water seem full of trapped stars"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences214
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs106
mean18.24
std22
cv1.206
sampleLengths
088
18
23
331
49
537
63
731
828
921
1018
114
127
1337
143
1511
1691
172
187
1932
2020
2126
223
234
2425
252
2654
2750
285
2912
3011
3123
327
332
344
353
366
3791
3813
3910
406
414
427
437
441
4510
4658
4765
483
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences165
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs282
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences214
ratio0
matches(empty)
93.64% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1658
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"beside rust-red bells,"
adverbCount67
adverbRatio0.040410132689987936
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0030156815440289505
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences214
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences214
mean9.03
std6.58
cv0.728
sampleLengths
034
128
27
319
48
53
620
711
86
93
107
1116
1214
133
149
157
1615
1718
1810
198
2013
2118
224
237
2411
2513
264
279
283
292
302
317
325
3313
3411
352
362
3717
3811
3930
402
415
422
4323
449
4517
463
473
487
4916
63.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.40654205607476634
totalSentences214
uniqueOpeners87
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences147
matches
0"Then sharp mint, then woodsmoke,"
1"Somewhere above, something sang in"
2"Then one drifted upward and"
3"At least, it had the"
4"More like the place had"
5"Then the leaves turned back"
6"Near enough that the air"
ratio0.048
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences147
matches
0"It shimmered, not with heat,"
1"Their violet eyes glowed faint"
2"Her silver hair drifted around"
3"she said, looking at Aurora’s"
4"She took one breath, then"
5"Their trunks gleamed silver-white, smooth"
6"she said at last"
7"they said, lifting a hand"
8"It did not spring back"
9"It curled around the leather"
10"She looked ahead."
11"They followed the stream deeper"
12"Her skin prickled each time"
13"Its surface lay still despite"
14"She stepped back."
15"It showed a man in"
16"He looked up from the"
17"Her gaze flicked to Nyx."
18"They straightened at once, and"
19"Her mother singing under her"
ratio0.184
85.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences147
matches
0"The standing stones rose out"
1"Wildflowers crowded their roots in"
2"The air inside the ring"
3"It shimmered, not with heat,"
4"Aurora stopped a pace from"
5"Nyx stood half in the"
6"Their violet eyes glowed faint"
7"Aurora touched the Heartstone through"
8"The pendant had warmed against"
9"Her silver hair drifted around"
10"she said, looking at Aurora’s"
11"Aurora gave the ring of"
12"Isolde’s mouth curved, not quite"
13"Aurora slid her hand down"
14"The Fae-forged blade sat hidden"
15"She took one breath, then"
16"The world folded."
17"The damp London evening vanished."
18"The new air struck her"
19"Light poured over the clearing"
ratio0.748
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences147
matches
0"Now it pressed heat into"
1"Before them stood a ruin."
2"Before Nyx could answer, the"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The standing stones rose out of the mist like old teeth, dark oak trunks twisted into pillars by an age that had stripped the bark smooth in places and knotted …"
1"Each path bent out of sight too quickly, turning around trunks that seemed near until she walked toward them and found they had moved farther off."
2"Ferns rose shoulder-high, their fronds furred with silver hairs that shone in the changing light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde corrected (correct)"
2"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.206
leniency0.413
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.095
94.0788%