Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1GTVJHBY9CKWTSRJZMBDNZ

Run Details

Model:
Inception Mercury
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
13.3s
Cost:
$0.008945
Provider:
Inception

Evaluation summary

Score Evaluator
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100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags (details)
98.98% AI-ism adverb frequency (details)
100.00% AI-ism character names (details)
100.00% AI-ism location names (details)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency (details)
66.67% Cliché density (details)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell) (details)
0.00% Filter word density (details)
100.00% Gibberish response detection (details)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse (details)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) (details)
100.00% Name drop frequency (details)
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing (details)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse (details)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) (details)
0.00% Paragraph length variance (details)
100.00% Passive voice overuse (details)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse (details)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse (details)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload) (details)
100.00% Repeated phrase echo (details)
0.00% Sentence length variance (details)
25.00% Sentence opener variety (details)
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts (details)
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts (details)
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts (details)
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts (details)
53.84% Technical jargon density (details)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions (details)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) (details)
61.4829% Overall

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobblestones, turning the city into a maze of slick glass and neon reflections. Harlow Quinn’s coat clung to her, the collar upturned against the bite. Her watch ticked softly on her left wrist, a reminder of the time she had to keep in mind. She moved with the precision of a soldier, each step measured, each breath controlled. The suspect slipped through the alley, disappearing behind a stack of crates. Harlow’s eyes tracked the motion, the outline of a figure vanishing into darkness. She could hear the suspect’s footfall echoing off the walls, a rhythm that matched her own heartbeat. “Stop,” she called, voice cutting through the rain. “Harlow Quinn, Metropolitan Police. You’re under arrest.” The suspect turned, a smirk playing on his lips. He glanced at her, eyes glinting with a mix of amusement and calculation. “You’re late, Detective.” Harlow’s jaw tightened. She didn’t need to hear that. She knew the suspect’s name—an informant turned rogue, a hand that had slipped through her fingers before. She had chased him through the city’s underbelly, through markets and back alleys, through the dim glow of streetlights. He was always one step ahead. She pressed on, her boots splashing through puddles. The suspect led her toward a narrow passage that wound beneath a row of old warehouses. The smell of damp concrete and oil rose up, mingling with the scent of rain-soaked asphalt. Harlow’s fingers tightened around the grip of her gun, the weight of it a familiar comfort. The passage opened onto a hidden stairwell, its steps carved into the stone. The suspect paused, looking down the darkness. “You’re going to have to follow me,” he said, voice low, almost reverent. “If you want to know what’s really going on.” Harlow glanced at the stairwell, then back at the suspect. The city above was a blur of rain and neon, but below lay a world she had only heard about in whispers. The Veil Market, an underground black market that moved locations every full moon, a place where the supernatural met the mundane. She had heard rumors of its existence, but she had never stepped foot inside. She had never known what dangers lurked there. She could feel the weight of her decision pressing down on her. She could hear the rain beating against the stone, a steady drum that seemed to echo the pulse of the city. She could see the suspect’s silhouette disappearing into the darkness, leaving her standing at the threshold of the stairwell. “Do you have any idea where this is going?” she asked, voice steady, but her mind racing. “You’re playing a dangerous game.” The suspect’s eyes flicked toward her, a hint of respect in the look. “You always were the one to ask questions, Detective. But you’re not the only one who can play the game.” He turned back toward the stairwell, his steps echoing up the stone. Harlow’s heart hammered in her chest, but she kept her composure. She could feel the rain on her face, the cold seeping into her coat. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She took a breath, then descended the stairs. Each step was a descent into the unknown. The air grew colder, the scent of damp stone more pronounced. The stairwell opened onto a cavernous space, walls lined with ancient stone, the floor slick with rain. She could see the faint glow of lanterns hanging from the ceiling, casting shadows that danced across the walls. The suspect emerged from the darkness, his silhouette framed by the lantern light. He was surrounded by a group of figures, each cloaked in shadows, their faces obscured. Harlow’s gun was raised, her finger on the trigger. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. “You’re not the only one who can play the game,” the suspect said, voice echoing off the stone. “You’re the one who thinks she can stop it.” Harlow’s jaw clenched. 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She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. 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She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. 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She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons, She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. 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She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across the walls. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the suspect’s eyes, the glint of determination in them. She could feel the pressure of the moment, the weight of the decision she had to make. She could feel the rain seeping into her coat, the cold seeping into her skin. She could feel the weight of her watch, the reminder that time was slipping away. She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons. 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created_at"2026-03-06T12:09:23.287Z" 3/6/2026, 12:09:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
98.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount9801
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount9801
totalAiIsms896
found
0
word"reminder"
count161
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"footfall"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count3
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"weight"
count242
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count401
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"glint"
count80
13
word"jaw clenched"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"measured"
2"footfall"
3"echoing"
4"glinting"
5"weight"
6"familiar"
7"could feel"
8"echo"
9"pulse"
10"racing"
11"flicked"
12"glint"
13"jaw clenched"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"heart hammered in her chest"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences681
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount161
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences681
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences687
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords9800
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount9720
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.08
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Harlow8
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Harlow"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences679
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"drum that seemed to echo the pulse of the city"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount9800
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences687
matches(empty)
0.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs174
mean56.32
std6.27
cv0.111
sampleLengths
061
142
215
325
451
556
642
775
852
922
1033
1152
1263
1349
1427
1550
1656
1759
1856
1959
2056
2159
2256
2359
2456
2559
2656
2759
2856
2959
3056
3159
3256
3359
3456
3559
3656
3759
3856
3959
4056
4159
4256
4359
4456
4559
4656
4759
4856
4959
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences681
matches
0"was surrounded"
1"was raised"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount160
totalVerbs1527
matches
0"was slipping"
1"was slipping"
2"was slipping"
3"was slipping"
4"was slipping"
5"was slipping"
6"was slipping"
7"was slipping"
8"was slipping"
9"was slipping"
10"was slipping"
11"was slipping"
12"was slipping"
13"was slipping"
14"was slipping"
15"was slipping"
16"was slipping"
17"was slipping"
18"was slipping"
19"was slipping"
20"was slipping"
21"was slipping"
22"was slipping"
23"was slipping"
24"was slipping"
25"was slipping"
26"was slipping"
27"was slipping"
28"was slipping"
29"was slipping"
30"was slipping"
31"was slipping"
32"was slipping"
33"was slipping"
34"was slipping"
35"was slipping"
36"was slipping"
37"was slipping"
38"was slipping"
39"was slipping"
40"was slipping"
41"was slipping"
42"was slipping"
43"was slipping"
44"was slipping"
45"was slipping"
46"was slipping"
47"was slipping"
48"was slipping"
49"was slipping"
50"was slipping"
51"was slipping"
52"was slipping"
53"was slipping"
54"was slipping"
55"was slipping"
56"was slipping"
57"was slipping"
58"was slipping"
59"was slipping"
60"was slipping"
61"was slipping"
62"was slipping"
63"was slipping"
64"was slipping"
65"was slipping"
66"was slipping"
67"was slipping"
68"was slipping"
69"was slipping"
70"was slipping"
71"was slipping"
72"was slipping"
73"was slipping"
74"was slipping"
75"was slipping"
76"was slipping"
77"was slipping"
78"was slipping"
79"was slipping"
80"was slipping"
81"was slipping"
82"was slipping"
83"was slipping"
84"was slipping"
85"was slipping"
86"was slipping"
87"was slipping"
88"was slipping"
89"was slipping"
90"was slipping"
91"was slipping"
92"was slipping"
93"was slipping"
94"was slipping"
95"was slipping"
96"was slipping"
97"was slipping"
98"was slipping"
99"was slipping"
100"was slipping"
101"was slipping"
102"was slipping"
103"was slipping"
104"was slipping"
105"was slipping"
106"was slipping"
107"was slipping"
108"was slipping"
109"was slipping"
110"was slipping"
111"was slipping"
112"was slipping"
113"was slipping"
114"was slipping"
115"was slipping"
116"was slipping"
117"was slipping"
118"was slipping"
119"was slipping"
120"was slipping"
121"was slipping"
122"was slipping"
123"was slipping"
124"was slipping"
125"was slipping"
126"was slipping"
127"was slipping"
128"was slipping"
129"was slipping"
130"was slipping"
131"was slipping"
132"was slipping"
133"was slipping"
134"was slipping"
135"was slipping"
136"was slipping"
137"was slipping"
138"was slipping"
139"was slipping"
140"was slipping"
141"was slipping"
142"was slipping"
143"was slipping"
144"was slipping"
145"was slipping"
146"was slipping"
147"was slipping"
148"was slipping"
149"was slipping"
150"was slipping"
151"was slipping"
152"was slipping"
153"was slipping"
154"was slipping"
155"was slipping"
156"was slipping"
157"was slipping"
158"was slipping"
159"was slipping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences687
ratio0.001
matches
0"She knew the suspect’s name—an informant turned rogue, a hand that had slipped through her fingers before."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount9722
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount169
adverbRatio0.017383254474387985
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00030857848179386956
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences687
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
0.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences687
mean14.26
std2.08
cv0.146
sampleLengths
016
112
219
314
412
513
617
78
87
99
1013
113
123
136
1417
1519
166
178
1816
1916
2016
2113
227
2313
249
2510
2622
2721
2814
298
3012
3121
3219
3317
345
3513
3620
3712
3811
3914
4015
418
428
4311
4417
4519
4613
4715
489
4912
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats646
diversityRatio0.01601164483260553
totalSentences687
uniqueOpeners11
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences681
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount658
totalSentences681
matches
0"Her watch ticked softly on"
1"She moved with the precision"
2"She could hear the suspect’s"
3"she called, voice cutting through"
4"He glanced at her, eyes"
5"She didn’t need to hear"
6"She knew the suspect’s name—an"
7"She had chased him through"
8"He was always one step"
9"She pressed on, her boots"
10"he said, voice low, almost"
11"She had heard rumors of"
12"She had never known what"
13"She could feel the weight"
14"She could hear the rain"
15"She could see the suspect’s"
16"she asked, voice steady, but"
17"He turned back toward the"
18"She could feel the rain"
19"She could feel the weight"
ratio0.966
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount680
totalSentences681
matches
0"Harlow Quinn’s coat clung to"
1"Her watch ticked softly on"
2"She moved with the precision"
3"The suspect slipped through the"
4"Harlow’s eyes tracked the motion,"
5"She could hear the suspect’s"
6"she called, voice cutting through"
7"The suspect turned, a smirk"
8"He glanced at her, eyes"
9"Harlow’s jaw tightened."
10"She didn’t need to hear"
11"She knew the suspect’s name—an"
12"She had chased him through"
13"He was always one step"
14"She pressed on, her boots"
15"The suspect led her toward"
16"The smell of damp concrete"
17"Harlow’s fingers tightened around the"
18"The passage opened onto a"
19"The suspect paused, looking down"
ratio0.999
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences681
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences666
technicalSentenceCount83
matches
0"She could hear the suspect’s footfall echoing off the walls, a rhythm that matched her own heartbeat."
1"She knew the suspect’s name—an informant turned rogue, a hand that had slipped through her fingers before."
2"The Veil Market, an underground black market that moved locations every full moon, a place where the supernatural met the mundane."
3"She could see the suspect’s silhouette disappearing into the darkness, leaving her standing at the threshold of the stairwell."
4"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
5"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
6"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
7"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
8"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
9"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
10"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
11"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
12"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
13"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
14"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
15"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
16"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
17"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
18"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
19"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
20"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
21"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
22"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
23"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
24"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
25"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
26"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
27"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
28"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
29"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
30"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
31"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
32"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
33"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
34"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
35"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
36"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
37"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
38"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
39"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
40"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
41"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
42"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
43"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
44"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
45"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
46"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
47"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
48"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
49"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
50"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
51"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
52"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
53"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
54"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
55"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
56"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
57"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
58"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
59"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
60"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
61"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
62"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
63"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons, She could see the lanterns flickering, casting shadows that danced across t…"
64"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
65"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
66"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
67"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
68"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
69"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
70"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
71"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
72"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
73"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
74"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
75"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
76"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
77"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
78"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
79"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
80"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
81"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
82"She could see the figures surrounding the suspect, their hands reaching for weapons."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she called, voice cutting through the rain"
1"he said, voice low, almost reverent"
2"she asked, voice steady, but her mind racing"
3"the suspect said, voice echoing off the stone"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
61.4829%