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Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1GWV7XNDS2FSPSQHFSKRXS
Run Details
Model:
Inception Mercury 2
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
5.6s
Cost:
$0.003001
Provider:
Inception
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
88.97%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
68.77%
Name drop frequency
(details)
86.71%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
57.62%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
47.89%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
63.68%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
77.92%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
81.82%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
75.7795%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The knob turned, the door
swung open.
Aurora’s hand, still clutching the
delivery bag, froze as the thin silhouette stepped into the cramped hallway.
She glanced at the scar
on her left wrist, the crescent that had once marked a childhood accident, now a
reminder
of how
quickly
things could change. “Lucien,”
she said, voice low, the
word hanging between them like a blade.
He crossed the threshold without
removing his charcoal suit, the ivory‑handled cane tapping a steady rhythm on the worn wooden floor. One eye glinted amber, the other black, a heterochromatic
stare that seemed to read every secret in the room
. “I’m sorry I’m late,”
he replied, his French accent
softening each consonant. “The city never sleeps, does it?”
Aurora’s eyes flicked to the
stack of research notes piled on the coffee table, the ink still fresh on the margins. “You know why I’m here,”
she said, the words sharp
as the edge of a knife. “You left a mess in my flat. You left a promise.”
Lucien’s cane slipped from his
grip, the hidden blade catching the dim light.
He let it rest against
the wall, the metal humming faintly. “I didn’t come to stir old ghosts,”
he said, his tone measured
, “but to settle a debt.”
A soft mew rose from
the corner, Ptolemy the tabby weaving between their legs, his fur brushing against Aurora’s ankle.
She knelt, the cat’s whiskers
tickling her skin. “You still bring the cat?”
she asked, a hint of
amusement breaking through the
tension
.
Lucien smiled, a thin, almost
imperceptible curl of his lips. “He follows me wherever I go. He knows the scent of danger.”
He lifted his cane, the
blade now visible, a
glint
of steel that caught Aurora’s eye. “I have a message for you, Rory.”
Aurora straightened, the delivery bag
now forgotten on the floor. “Message? Or threat?”
she asked, the scar on
her wrist throbbing
as if echoing the question
. “Neither,” Lucien replied, his voice low, “but a warning.” He stepped closer, the scent of his cologne mingling with the faint aroma of curry wafting up from the restaurant below. “There are forces moving in the shadows of Brick Lane. You’ve been marked.”
Aurora’s breath caught, the words
striking a chord deeper than any accusation. “Marked by who?”
she asked, the question a
whisper
. Lucien’s eyes
flicked
to the deadbolts on the front door, three iron bars that had kept the flat secure for years. “By a demon from Avaros. I can feel its hunger. It wants what you carry.”
She glanced at the scar
again, the crescent now a symbol of something more than a childhood mishap. “You think it wants my blood?”
she asked, the sarcasm thin
. Lucien’s cane tapped the floor, the blade hidden once more. “Not blood. Knowledge. You have something that can close the rift. And I… I need you to help me.”
He placed a hand on
the back of her chair, the contact
electric
. Aurora’s mind
raced
, the delivery bag’s contents—spice packets, a bottle of soy sauce—
suddenly
irrelevant. “Why now?”
she asked, the words sharp
, “Why after all this time?” Lucien’s gaze softened, the amber eye lingering on her scar. “Because I cannot bear to watch you suffer alone. Because the night we left each other, I felt the world tilt. Because I have been hunting that demon for years, and you are the key.” A sudden crash
echoed
from the hallway, the front door swinging shut with a thud that rattled the deadbolts. The sound of a heavy
footfall
followed, the rhythm of a boot on the concrete outside. Aurora’s heart hammered, the panic rising like a tide. “Someone’s at the door,” Lucien said, his voice
barely above a whisper
, “and they’re not here for tea.” Aurora’s eyes darted to the window, the thin veil of night outside.
She could see the faint
glow of a streetlamp, the silhouette of a figure moving with purpose. “What do we do?”
she asked, the scar on
her wrist now a
pulse
of fear. Lucien lifted his cane, the blade now visible, catching the dim light. “We fight,”
he said, his tone decisive
. “Or we die.” The door burst open, a gust of cold air spilling into the flat, the lock snapping under the force of a massive hand. A
hulking
shape
loomed
in the doorway, its eyes a burning crimson, its breath a hiss of sulphur. The demon’s claws scraped the floor, leaving a trail of ash. Aurora’s breath hitched, the scent of sulphur filling her nostrils.
She grabbed the cane, the
hidden blade now a promise of steel. “You think you can scare me?” she shouted, the words fierce, “I’m not alone.” Lucien’s cane glinted, the blade humming with an unseen power. “Together,” he said, his voice a low growl, “we stand.” The demon lunged, its claws aiming for Aurora’s throat. She ducked, the scar on her wrist flashing as she twisted, the cane’s blade slicing through the air. The demon recoiled, a scream of pain
echoing
through the room. Ptolemy hissed, his fur bristling, as the demon’s shadow fell across his paws. Aurora felt the cat’s
weight
against her leg, a grounding presence
amidst
the chaos. Lucien moved with fluid grace, his suit rippling as he swung the cane, the hidden blade catching the demon’s arm. “You cannot break us,” he said, his voice a chant, “the night is ours to command.” The demon’s eyes flared, a burst of dark energy erupting from its core. The flat
trembled
, books toppled, research notes scattered like confetti. Aurora’s mind
raced
, the delivery bag now a useless
weight
, the spice packets clattering to the floor. She seized the moment, her hand gripping the cane’s handle, the blade slicing through the demon’s throat. The creature’s scream turned to a guttural howl as it dissolved into ash, the scent of burnt incense lingering. Silence fell, heavy and thick. Aurora’s chest heaved, the scar on her wrist throbbing like a
pulse
. Lucien lowered his cane, the hidden blade retracting with a soft click. He stared at her, his amber eye softening, his black eye reflecting the remnants of the battle. “You saved my flat,” she said, her voice hoarse, “and my life.” Lucien’s smile widened, a flash of teeth. “You saved me,” he replied, his tone warm, “and perhaps, a part of me I thought was dead.” She turned to the doorway, the deadbolts still engaged, the lock intact. The night outside
seemed to
hold its breath, the city unaware of the battle that had just unfolded above a curry house. Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing the scar on her wrist, the crescent now a symbol of survival. “What now?”
she asked, the question a
promise. Lucien’s cane rested against the wall, the blade hidden once more. He stepped closer, the scent of his cologne mingling with the lingering ash. “Now we finish what we started.” A sudden, sharp knock
reverberated
through the flat, the sound
echoing
off the walls like a gunshot. The door, still ajar,
trembled
under the force of an unseen hand. Aurora’s
eyes widened
, the scar on her wrist tingling again. Lucien’s hand snapped to his cane, the blade flashing. “Someone else is coming,”
he warned, his voice a low growl
. The knock turned into a
pounding
, the wood splintering under the relentless assault. A shadow
loomed
in the doorway, larger than any demon, its silhouette a grotesque blend of man and beast. The air grew colder, the scent of rot filling the room. Aurora’s heart
raced
, the scar on her wrist now a
beacon
of defiance. “We’re not done yet,”
she whispered, the words a promise to the darkness
. Lucien’s eyes met hers, the amber and black swirling like twin suns. “Then let’s meet them head‑on,”
he said, the cane poised, the hidden blade ready
. The door burst open, the figure stepping into the flat, its eyes alight with a hunger that promised more blood, more chaos. Aurora tightened her grip on the cane, the scar on her wrist pulsing in rhythm with the
pounding
heart of the night. The night was far from over.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
24
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
32
tagDensity
0.75
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
88.97%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1360
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
1
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
2
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"quickly"
1
"suddenly"
2
"barely above a whisper"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1360
totalAiIsms
32
found
0
word
"reminder"
count
1
1
word
"flicked"
count
2
2
word
"measured"
count
1
3
word
"tension"
count
1
4
word
"glint"
count
1
5
word
"echoing"
count
3
6
word
"whisper"
count
2
7
word
"electric"
count
1
8
word
"raced"
count
3
9
word
"echoed"
count
1
10
word
"footfall"
count
1
11
word
"pulse"
count
2
12
word
"hulking"
count
1
13
word
"loomed"
count
2
14
word
"weight"
count
2
15
word
"amidst"
count
1
16
word
"trembled"
count
2
17
word
"silence"
count
1
18
word
"reverberated"
count
1
19
word
"pounding"
count
2
20
word
"beacon"
count
1
highlights
0
"reminder"
1
"flicked"
2
"measured"
3
"tension"
4
"glint"
5
"echoing"
6
"whisper"
7
"electric"
8
"raced"
9
"echoed"
10
"footfall"
11
"pulse"
12
"hulking"
13
"loomed"
14
"weight"
15
"amidst"
16
"trembled"
17
"silence"
18
"reverberated"
19
"pounding"
20
"beacon"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
87
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
87
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
95
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
35
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1358
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
23
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
68.77%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
36
wordCount
1108
uniqueNames
4
maxNameDensity
1.62
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
French
1
Aurora
18
Lucien
15
Ptolemy
2
persons
0
"Aurora"
1
"Lucien"
2
"Ptolemy"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.688
windowScore
0.833
86.71%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
79
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"stare that seemed to read every secret in the room"
1
"as if echoing the question"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1358
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
95
matches
(empty)
57.62%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
40
mean
33.95
std
11.94
cv
0.352
sampleLengths
0
51
1
13
2
58
3
48
4
41
5
43
6
45
7
26
8
43
9
21
10
36
11
29
12
42
13
26
14
45
15
44
16
18
17
45
18
22
19
52
20
36
21
20
22
38
23
27
24
36
25
40
26
36
27
46
28
12
29
25
30
34
31
26
32
30
33
39
34
20
35
43
36
26
37
26
38
44
39
6
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
87
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
172
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
2
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
1
totalSentences
95
ratio
0.011
matches
0
"Aurora’s mind raced, the delivery bag’s contents—spice packets, a bottle of soy sauce—suddenly irrelevant."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1110
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
20
adverbRatio
0.018018018018018018
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.0036036036036036037
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
95
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
95
mean
14.29
std
5.79
cv
0.405
sampleLengths
0
7
1
17
2
27
3
13
4
21
5
19
6
12
7
6
8
21
9
16
10
11
11
13
12
11
13
17
14
20
15
8
16
15
17
10
18
28
19
7
20
10
21
16
22
30
23
13
24
12
25
9
26
21
27
15
28
18
29
11
30
10
31
32
32
14
33
12
34
10
35
35
36
19
37
16
38
9
39
18
40
12
41
17
42
16
43
12
44
7
45
3
46
23
47
18
48
11
49
10
47.89%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.2736842105263158
totalSentences
95
uniqueOpeners
26
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
87
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
63.68%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
34
totalSentences
87
matches
0
"She glanced at the scar"
1
"she said, voice low, the"
2
"He crossed the threshold without"
3
"he replied, his French accent"
4
"she said, the words sharp"
5
"He let it rest against"
6
"he said, his tone measured"
7
"She knelt, the cat’s whiskers"
8
"she asked, a hint of"
9
"He lifted his cane, the"
10
"she asked, the scar on"
11
"she asked, the question a"
12
"She glanced at the scar"
13
"she asked, the sarcasm thin"
14
"He placed a hand on"
15
"she asked, the words sharp"
16
"She could see the faint"
17
"she asked, the scar on"
18
"he said, his tone decisive"
19
"She grabbed the cane, the"
ratio
0.391
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
86
totalSentences
87
matches
0
"The knob turned, the door"
1
"Aurora’s hand, still clutching the"
2
"She glanced at the scar"
3
"she said, voice low, the"
4
"He crossed the threshold without"
5
"he replied, his French accent"
6
"Aurora’s eyes flicked to the"
7
"she said, the words sharp"
8
"Lucien’s cane slipped from his"
9
"He let it rest against"
10
"he said, his tone measured"
11
"A soft mew rose from"
12
"She knelt, the cat’s whiskers"
13
"she asked, a hint of"
14
"Lucien smiled, a thin, almost"
15
"He lifted his cane, the"
16
"Aurora straightened, the delivery bag"
17
"she asked, the scar on"
18
"Lucien replied, his voice low,"
19
"Aurora’s breath caught, the words"
ratio
0.989
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
87
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
77.92%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
55
technicalSentenceCount
5
matches
0
"One eye glinted amber, the other black, a heterochromatic stare that seemed to read every secret in the room."
1
"She ducked, the scar on her wrist flashing as she twisted, the cane’s blade slicing through the air."
2
"Lucien moved with fluid grace, his suit rippling as he swung the cane, the hidden blade catching the demon’s arm."
3
"She seized the moment, her hand gripping the cane’s handle, the blade slicing through the demon’s throat."
4
"The door burst open, the figure stepping into the flat, its eyes alight with a hunger that promised more blood, more chaos."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
24
uselessAdditionCount
15
matches
0
"she said, voice low, the word hanging between them like a blade"
1
"he replied, his French accent softening each consonant"
2
"he said, his tone measured,"
3
"she asked, a hint of amusement breaking through the tension"
4
"Lucien replied, his voice low,"
5
"she asked, the question a whisper"
6
"Lucien said, his voice barely above a whisper,"
7
"he said, his tone decisive"
8
"he said, his voice a low growl,"
9
"he said, his voice a chant,"
10
"he replied, his tone warm,"
11
"she asked, the question a promise"
12
"he warned, his voice a low growl"
13
"she whispered, the words a promise to the darkness"
14
"he said, the cane poised, the hidden blade ready"
81.82%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
22
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"she shouted (shout)"
1
"he warned (warn)"
2
"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
32
tagDensity
0.688
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.136
effectiveRatio
0.136
75.7795%