Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1GXHT2B4Z5G1NK1JBBC5TW

Run Details

Duration:
5.1s
Cost:
$0.002109
Provider:
Inception

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned tube station smelled of damp stone and stale incense. Flickering lanterns cast amber pools on cracked tiles, and shadows pooled where the market’s hidden stalls whispered. Harlow Quinn stepped through the rusted iron gate, the bone token she’d bar from a vendor’s clenched fist clinking against her leather satchel. Her left wrist bore a worn leather watch, its strap frayed, the face darkened by years of rain. She scanned the crowd. Figures in hooded cloaks moved like currents, their eyes glinting behind masks. In the centre of the market, a wooden table lay overturned, a shattered vase spilling black ink across the floor. A body curled on the ground, a throat slit, a brass compass clutched in a trembling hand. Eva Kowalski knelt beside the corpse, her round glasses catching the lantern light. She tucked a curl behind her left ear, her freckled face tense. “The victim’s name is Mara,” she whispered, voice low. “She was a Shade artisan, sold these compasses to the highest bidder.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “Why would a Shade artisan end up here, dead?” Eva lifted the compass, turning it over. The brass casing bore a verdigris patina, the face etched with protective sigils. The needle quivered, pointing not toward the market’s exit but toward a dark alcove where a rusted door hung ajar. “The needle points to a rift,” Eva said, eyes flicking to the alcove. “It’s been dormant for years.” Quinn’s gaze lingered on the broken vase. Ink seeped into the cracks, forming a pattern that resembled a sigil she’d seen on a case file—an inverted triangle intersected by a line. She knelt, feeling the cold stone under her fingertips. “Someone traced this sigil on the floor,” she observed. “It’s not a decorative mark.” A vendor in a tattered coat stepped forward, his voice hoarse. “The market moves each full moon, Detective. We don’t keep records.” He glanced at the bone token in Quinn’s hand. “That token belongs to the Veil Market. It opens the door for those who know.” Quinn’s eyes narrowed. “You gave it to the victim?” The vendor shook his head. “Mara sold it to a buyer. She never returned.” Eva lifted the satchel, pulling out a leather‑bound notebook. She flipped to a page where a sketch of the Veil Compass matched the one in the victim’s grip. “The compass is attuned to supernatural energy,” she said. “If the needle points here, a portal must be nearby.” Quinn stared at the alcove, the door half‑open, darkness spilling like ink. “If a portal opened, it would have drawn a rift. The ink… it matches the sigil on the floor. Someone must have used it to seal something.” A faint wind rustled the market’s banners. A faint humming rose from the alcove, low and metallic. Quinn stepped closer, feeling the hair on her arms rise. She pressed her palm to the door, feeling a faint pulse, like a heartbeat beneath stone. “Someone forced the door open,” she said, voice flat. “The victim tried to close it, but the rift pulled her in.” Eva’s eyes widened. “The compass would have guided her to the rift. She held it, hoping to track the portal.” Quinn glanced at the broken vase again. “The vase shattered when the rift opened. The ink was a sealing agent, but it’s incomplete. The sigil on the floor is half‑drawn.” She turned to the vendor. “Did anyone see who entered the alcove after the vase broke?” The vendor shrugged. “Shadows move fast in the market. We see what we need, not what we fear.” A figure slipped from the shadows, a thin man in a dark coat, his face obscured. He held a brass pipe, his breath fogging in the cold. “You’re looking for the token,” he said, voice low. “It’s not here.” Quinn’s eyes flicked to his hands. The pipe was stained with a dark residue, the same hue as the black ink on the floor. “You handled the ink,” she said. “You tried to hide the sigil.” The man’s shoulders tightened. “I didn’t kill anyone. I was hired to retrieve the compass.” Eva stepped forward, clutching her satchel. “Who hired you?” The man hesitated, then spoke. “A collector. He wants the Veil Compass for his private collection. He believes it can open a portal to a realm of power.” Quinn’s mind raced. The collector’s motive explained the missing bone token. The token was the key, the compass the map, the ink the seal. The victim had tried to protect the portal, but the collector’s men forced it open. She turned to the alcove, the door now trembling as if breathing. “If the portal is still open, it will consume everything.” Eva raised the compass, the needle still pointing toward the darkness. “We need to close it.” Quinn lifted her watch, feeling the worn leather against her skin. The watch had never failed her in the field. She pressed its button, a soft chime echoing through the tunnel. The sound seemed to vibrate the stone, a subtle resonance that made the darkness flicker. A low growl rose from the alcove, a sound that felt like a throat being torn open. The man dropped the pipe, his hands shaking. “I didn’t know—” Quinn stepped forward, the compass in her palm, the needle steady. “We’ll seal it together.” She placed the compass on the floor, aligning its sigils with the half‑drawn sigil. The needle glowed faintly, a thin line of light tracing a path into the darkness. Eva whispered an incantation from a battered tome, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. The darkness recoiled, the rift’s edge shimmering like a mirage. The ink on the floor pulsed, absorbing the light, then evaporated into a fine mist. The door slammed shut, a resonant thud that echoed through the market. The man staggered back, his eyes wide. “What have you done?” Quinn turned, the compass now still, its needle pointing nowhere. “We closed the rift. The portal is sealed.” Eva exhaled, the tension in her shoulders easing. “The collector will have to look elsewhere.” The vendor, who had watched from a distance, nodded. “The market moves, but the veil stays thin.” Quinn slipped the bone token back into her satchel, feeling the weight of the night settle. She glanced at the corpse, the life drained from Mara’s eyes, the compass still clutched in her hand. The evidence no longer contradicted; it aligned. She lifted her watch, the leather strap creaking. “We’ll file a report. The market will be monitored. No more tokens will be traded without oversight.” Eva tucked the notebook into her satchel, the pages rustling. “I’ll document the sigil, the compass, the rift. The archives will need this.” Quinn nodded, her sharp jaw set. “We’ll keep this quiet. The veil must stay hidden.” The market’s lanterns flickered, casting long shadows as the crowd dispersed. The underground tube station breathed a sigh, the stone walls absorbing the lingering scent of ink and iron. Quinn walked toward the exit, her steps echoing on the stone, the compass heavy in her pocket, the watch ticking in rhythm with her heartbeat. She paused at the doorway, looking back at the empty alcove. The darkness was still, the portal sealed. The evidence that had seemed contradictory now formed a clear line: a Shade artisan, a compass, a sigil, a collector’s greed, a rift that threatened to spill into the world. She turned, the bone token clinking softly against her satchel. The market’s secret remained intact, but the detective’s mind raced with the next case. The veil had thinned, but she would guard it with the precision of a soldier and the patience of a detective. The night air brushed her face as she stepped onto the street, the city’s lights flickering in the distance. She pulled her coat tighter, feeling the weight of the compass and the watch, the promise of more mysteries lurking beneath the city’s surface. The Veil Market would move again at the next full moon, but this time, Quinn would be ready.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1348
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1348
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count2
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"quivered"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"raced"
count2
9
word"echoing"
count2
10
word"resonance"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"tracing"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"weight"
count2
17
word"aligned"
count1
18
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"glinting"
2"shattered"
3"etched"
4"quivered"
5"traced"
6"pulse"
7"flicked"
8"raced"
9"echoing"
10"resonance"
11"flicker"
12"tracing"
13"pulsed"
14"echoed"
15"tension"
16"weight"
17"aligned"
18"flickered"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"clenched fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
60.76% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1347
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount987
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn17
Kowalski1
Veil2
Compass1
Eva10
Mara1
Shade1
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Kowalski"
2"Veil"
3"Compass"
4"Eva"
5"Mara"
places(empty)
globalScore0.639
windowScore0.5
44.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if breathing"
1"felt like a throat being torn open"
2"seemed contradictory now formed a clear line: a Shade artisan, a compass, a sigil, a collector’s greed, a rift that threatened to spill into the world"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.742
wordCount1347
matches
0"not toward the market’s exit but toward a dark alcove"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean31.33
std15.96
cv0.509
sampleLengths
072
153
246
312
440
518
654
746
89
914
1047
1139
1243
1321
1420
1530
1616
1718
1839
1936
2015
219
2228
2339
2422
2516
2646
2728
2815
2946
3037
3111
3218
3315
3417
3541
3625
3723
3815
3954
4048
4145
4261
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"being torn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
94.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences117
ratio0.017
matches
0"Ink seeped into the cracks, forming a pattern that resembled a sigil she’d seen on a case file—an inverted triangle intersected by a line."
1"The evidence no longer contradicted; it aligned."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount988
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01720647773279352
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0020242914979757085
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean11.51
std5.86
cv0.509
sampleLengths
014
117
223
318
44
512
620
717
813
912
109
1112
123
139
147
1513
1620
1713
185
197
2024
219
229
235
2411
2520
2615
273
286
295
309
319
3219
339
3410
3512
3627
377
3810
3910
4016
419
4212
433
4417
457
4623
475
4811
493
37.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.21367521367521367
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences84
matches
0"Her left wrist bore a"
1"She scanned the crowd."
2"She tucked a curl behind"
3"she whispered, voice low"
4"She knelt, feeling the cold"
5"He glanced at the bone"
6"She flipped to a page"
7"She pressed her palm to"
8"she said, voice flat"
9"She turned to the vendor."
10"He held a brass pipe,"
11"he said, voice low"
12"She turned to the alcove,"
13"She pressed its button, a"
14"She placed the compass on"
15"She glanced at the corpse,"
16"She lifted her watch, the"
17"She paused at the doorway,"
18"She turned, the bone token"
19"She pulled her coat tighter,"
ratio0.238
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences84
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Harlow Quinn stepped through the"
2"Her left wrist bore a"
3"She scanned the crowd."
4"Figures in hooded cloaks moved"
5"A body curled on the"
6"Eva Kowalski knelt beside the"
7"She tucked a curl behind"
8"she whispered, voice low"
9"Quinn’s jaw tightened."
10"Eva lifted the compass, turning"
11"The brass casing bore a"
12"The needle quivered, pointing not"
13"Eva said, eyes flicking to"
14"Quinn’s gaze lingered on the"
15"Ink seeped into the cracks,"
16"She knelt, feeling the cold"
17"A vendor in a tattered"
18"He glanced at the bone"
19"Quinn’s eyes narrowed."
ratio0.976
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She turned to the alcove, the door now trembling as if breathing."
1"Quinn walked toward the exit, her steps echoing on the stone, the compass heavy in her pocket, the watch ticking in rhythm with her heartbeat."
2"The evidence that had seemed contradictory now formed a clear line: a Shade artisan, a compass, a sigil, a collector’s greed, a rift that threatened to spill in…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she whispered, voice low"
1"Eva said, eyes flicking to the alcove"
2"she said, voice flat"
3"he said, voice low"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.184
leniency0.368
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.105
74.2666%