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Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1GZ4HMFHAWWBH943XYVG64
Run Details
Model:
GPT-5.4
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.052022
Provider:
OpenAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
93.07%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
51.50%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
87.93%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
47.09%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
73.06%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
38.23%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
34.01%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
89.7188%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The first deadbolt cracked back
and Aurora froze with her hand still on the chain.
Ptolemy shot past her ankles
in a striped blur, tail puffed, and launched himself at the open door with a sound halfway between a yowl and a war cry.
A polished black shoe blocked
him.
An ivory cane dipped, neat
and swift, barring the cat without touching him. "Still savage, I
see
."
Lucien Moreau stood in the
gap as if he had stepped out of a private joke and into her hallway by mistake.
Charcoal suit, spotless collar, slicked-back
pale hair, one amber eye, one black.
His mouth held that slight
curve she used to hate because it always
looked like he knew the punchline before
anyone else heard the set-up.
Aurora shoved the door against
the chain. "No." "Rory." "Don't."
He looked past her shoulder
into the cramped hall of Eva's flat, at the towers of books, loose papers, three overturned mugs full of pens, the brass bowl on the radiator where Eva dropped her rings.
His gaze returned to her
face and stopped there.
It should not have felt
intimate. It did. "You look well." "You look lost." "Hardly." "Then impress me and leave."
Ptolemy slashed a paw at
Lucien's trouser leg.
Lucien shifted the cane, calm
as a bishop at confession, and the cat missed by an inch. "Your cat and I remain at philosophical odds." "He's got taste."
Aurora started to close the
door.
Lucien's hand came up, not
on the wood, on the chain. Two fingers touched the metal. The links
trembled
. Not bent, not broken, just sang under a pressure no human hand should have managed. "Don't do that," she said. His eyes sharpened. "Then open the door." There it was. No smile now. No game.
The clipped note underneath the
silk
. Aurora's grip tightened.
Her crescent scar pulled white
against her wrist.
She hated that he noticed
things like that.
She hated more that she
knew he had noticed. "Eva isn't here." "I know." "Of course you do." "May I come in before your neighbours call the police, or before I decide this chain is beneath us both?"
Her flat voice cut back
at him. "Police would be a novelty. Last time you preferred knives." His jaw moved once. A small movement, but real. "Last time," he said, "you stole from me." "I borrowed from a criminal." "You took a ledger written in blood." "And if I'd left it with you, three girls in Whitechapel would have ended up carved open for spare parts. Forgive me for upsetting your filing system." For a beat they stared at each other through the narrow slit. The air between them tightened, old and bitter and
charged
. Brick Lane noise drifted up from below, traffic, a laugh, someone swearing in Bengali, but inside the doorway all of it felt sealed off.
Then Lucien said, quiet enough
to force her to lean in if she wanted to hear, "If I had wanted you dead for that, Rory, you would've died in the taxi." That landed where he meant it to. Cold, exact. Also true. Aurora unlatched the chain with a hard jerk and stepped back. "Thirty seconds. Then you vanish."
He entered as if she
had invited him to dinner. Ptolemy hissed and retreated under the coat stand. Lucien closed the door behind him and
scanned
the room in one clean sweep, exits, windows, paper clutter, kitchen knives, the old cracked mirror opposite the bookcase. Habit. Profession. Species. With him it was often hard to tell where one ended and the next began. Eva's flat shrank with him inside it. The low ceiling pressed lower. The shelves looked flimsier. Even the smell changed. Old paper, curry drifting through the floorboards, cat fur, and now his scent slid through it all, expensive soap, smoke, and something darker beneath, hot metal and spice. Aurora folded her arms. "You've got twenty-five seconds." "Charming." "You used to like charming." "I used to like many regrettable things."
His gaze dropped to her
mouth and climbed back up with sinful leisure. Heat flashed under her skin before anger stamped over it. "Get to it." Lucien set the cane against the wall. That alarmed her more than if he had drawn the hidden blade.
He only freed his hands
when he expected trouble close enough to touch. "Avaros is stirring." She barked a laugh. "Of course it is. Hell's never quiet for long." "This is not general unrest." "Everything with you is never general." "Listen." "No. You turned up at my door after six months without a word, after calling me reckless, ungrateful, and, let me think, catastrophically sentimental. If you've come for an apology, queue elsewhere." His expression did not crack, but one shoulder stiffened. "I came because someone used your name." That cut through. Aurora did not move.
Even Ptolemy, from beneath the
stand, went still. "What name?" Lucien watched her too closely. "Which one worries you most?"
She hated him a little
for that. "Don't be clever in my borrowed kitchen." "Malphora." The word thudded into the room. Not loud. Worse than loud. Dense. Ancient. Wrong in a way English could not smooth out. Aurora's fingers dug into her sleeves. "No one knows that name." "Someone did." "Who?" "A broker from Deptford sold a sealed message at a demon auction." "A what." "Auction. Velvet chairs. Bad champagne. Worse morals. Focus."
She wanted to throw him
out for his tone alone.
Instead she held his gaze
and let the
silence
sharpen. He went on. "The message contained one line. Find Malphora before the gate opens." Aurora's laugh came out thin. "That's not my problem. That's some occult prat chasing a myth." "You bled on a threshold in Limehouse last spring. The threshold answered." Cold climbed her back. She remembered the alley. Rusted shutters. A girl with half her face peeled by glamour. The sigil cut into brick.
Her own palm split open
because she had slipped, because she always moved too fast when somebody else screamed. She remembered the wall drinking the blood. She had told no one except Eva. Her
eyes narrowed
. "How do you know that?" Lucien did not answer at once. He crossed to the tiny table by the sofa, moved a stack of books without asking, and laid a cream envelope on the scarred wood. No seal. No address. Old paper. The kind used when someone wanted theatre as much as secrecy. "I know because I bought the message and killed the broker." Aurora stared at him. "You what?" "He ran. It offended me." She shook her head once, sharp. "There he is. I wondered how long it'd take." His mouth curved, but it held no
warmth
. "You say that as if brutality was ever the part of me that kept you in my bed." The room
lurched
. Not from magic. From memory. Her
pulse
hit hard and sudden. His hand at the back of her neck in the dark above Silas' bar. His voice in French against her throat, low enough to feel. The drag of his ring against her inner thigh. The morning after, both of them dressed too fast and speaking too little. The week after that, the ledger, the lies, the knife
glinting
from his cane while he blocked the stairwell and asked,
very
softly
, whether she had mistaken
desire
for leverage. Aurora reached for the envelope to keep from reaching for his face. Inside lay a single card. Thick black stock. Silver ink. One sentence. MALPHORA WAKES WHERE THE WOLF BLED. Her
stomach
dropped. Lucien saw it. "You know it." She set the card down before her hand could shake. "No." "Rory." "I said no." He stepped closer. The flat had no room for him to do that without forcing everything taut. Books, breath, nerves. "The broker had his tongue removed before I found him. Someone wanted this message sold, not explained. I
traced
the silver in the ink. Infernal alloy. Old work. Noble house work." "Meaning?" "Meaning this did not come from gutter cultists with Etsy sigils. It came from someone with lineage." "And that concerns me because..." "Because they used your hidden name, and because the phrase wolf bled has only three plausible meanings in London lore, and one of them sits a ten-minute walk from the restaurant where you deliver noodles." Aurora did not blink. "You're here to recruit me." "I'm here to keep you breathing." "How tender." "I excel at selective
tenderness
." She looked away first, not because she yielded, because the alternative was to let him
see
too much. The galley kitchen to her left looked even smaller than usual, kettle, drying rack, Eva's chipped blue bowl full of garlic. A cracked window above the sink showed a sliver of brick wall and laundry line. The ordinary details steadied her. She leaned a hip against the counter. "Say I believe you. Why not go to one of your polished little monsters? They adore a pedigree crisis." "Because if an infernal house seeks Malphora, the polished little monsters will sell you before dessert." "And you won't?" His answer came flat. "If I meant to sell you, I wouldn't have climbed six flights and let your cat insult me first." "That's not a denial." "That is the only assurance you get from me." He moved again, closer still, close enough that she could
see
the fine pale scar near his right ear, the one she once
traced
with her thumb while he told her, in a voice stripped of all flourish, how his father marked him for speaking out of turn. Lucien never offered softness. It escaped by accident, then punished anyone who noticed. Aurora lifted her chin. "You don't get to stride in here and sound noble. You left." His eyes flashed, amber catching black. "You vanished." "I took a ledger." "You took trust." She laughed once, ugly and brief. "Trust. Coming from you, that's obscene." "It was still mine to lose." The words hit harder than his earlier threat. He must have known. His hand flexed by his side, then stilled. For one stupid second, neither of them moved. The old current surged up between them,
not sweet, never sweet, but magnetic
and sharp. She could still remember how he kissed, as if conquest and confession were twin arts. He looked at her now with that same dangerous focus, as if every insult she had thrown only narrowed the world to this room, this breath, this mouth. Ptolemy
chose that moment
to leap onto the table and plant both paws squarely on the black card. Aurora exhaled through her nose. "Useful
familiar
." "He has timing." "He hates you." "He has instincts." That nearly pulled a smile from her. Nearly. Lucien saw the almost of it. His own face softened by a degree so slight it made her chest ache. He reached out. Slow enough to stop. His fingers brushed the inside of her wrist, just over the crescent scar. "You cut this on the windowsill in Cardiff," he said. Aurora went still. "I never told you that." "No. You told me you got it as a child and then changed the subject." His thumb rested on her
pulse
. Too gentle. Wrong from him. Worse, wanted. "I had someone look into you after you stole from me," he said. "There it is." "I read the report three times." "How romantic." "I burnt it." That did it. She looked up
sharply
. His gaze had gone strange, bare in a way she had never trusted because it made her own guard slip. "Why?" "Because strangers do not get to own pieces of you." The
silence
that followed felt alive. Hot. Unwise. He still held her wrist. She should have pulled free.
Instead she stood there while
the room tightened around that point of contact, while every ugly useful fact between them remained true and the pull remained true as well. Aurora's voice dropped. "You don't get to say things like that and expect the past to fold itself tidy." "I expect nothing tidy from you." His other hand came up, not touching, hovering near her jaw as if he remembered exactly how to cup it. Her breath caught despite herself. A floorboard creaked outside the flat. Lucien's head snapped towards the door. The softness vanished so fast it left a
chill
in its wake. He released her, seized the cane, and moved in one clean motion. Aurora turned as three sharp knocks hit the wood, not neighbourly, not hesitant. Precise. Measured.
Then a woman's voice floated
through the door, smooth as cut glass. "Mr Moreau, open up. If I wanted discretion, I'd have sent flowers. If I wanted blood, I wouldn't bother knocking." Lucien's mouth hardened. Aurora stepped beside him. "Friend of yours?" "Regrettably." The voice on the other side laughed. "And Aurora Carter, I presume. Or shall I say Malphora? Open the door, darling. The hallway's dreadfully narrow for a massacre."
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
99
tagDensity
0.051
leniency
0.101
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
93.07%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
2165
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
1
2
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
1
"softly"
2
"sharply"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
51.50%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
2165
totalAiIsms
21
found
0
word
"trembled"
count
1
1
word
"silk"
count
1
2
word
"charged"
count
1
3
word
"scanned"
count
1
4
word
"velvet"
count
1
5
word
"silence"
count
2
6
word
"warmth"
count
1
7
word
"lurched"
count
1
8
word
"pulse"
count
2
9
word
"glinting"
count
1
10
word
"desire"
count
1
11
word
"stomach"
count
1
12
word
"traced"
count
2
13
word
"tenderness"
count
1
14
word
"magnetic"
count
1
15
word
"familiar"
count
1
16
word
"chill"
count
1
17
word
"measured"
count
1
highlights
0
"trembled"
1
"silk"
2
"charged"
3
"scanned"
4
"velvet"
5
"silence"
6
"warmth"
7
"lurched"
8
"pulse"
9
"glinting"
10
"desire"
11
"stomach"
12
"traced"
13
"tenderness"
14
"magnetic"
15
"familiar"
16
"chill"
17
"measured"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"stomach dropped/sank"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"stomach dropped"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
175
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
175
filterMatches
0
"see"
hedgeMatches
0
"started to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
269
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
48
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
2165
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
18
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
87.93%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
47
wordCount
1450
uniqueNames
9
maxNameDensity
1.24
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
2
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora
18
Moreau
1
Eva
5
Lucien
14
Lane
1
Bengali
1
Ptolemy
5
English
1
French
1
persons
0
"Aurora"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Eva"
3
"Lucien"
4
"Ptolemy"
5
"English"
places
0
"Lane"
1
"Bengali"
2
"French"
globalScore
0.879
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
96
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"looked like he knew the punchline before"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
1
per1kWords
0.462
wordCount
2165
matches
0
"not sweet, never sweet, but magnetic"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
269
matches
0
"hated that he"
1
"chose that moment"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
170
mean
12.74
std
15.4
cv
1.209
sampleLengths
0
15
1
48
2
4
3
59
4
7
5
1
6
1
7
1
8
53
9
3
10
3
11
1
12
5
13
25
14
8
15
3
16
40
17
5
18
3
19
4
20
14
21
28
22
3
23
2
24
4
25
20
26
7
27
10
28
9
29
8
30
5
31
7
32
27
33
46
34
31
35
11
36
11
37
5
38
63
39
48
40
4
41
4
42
1
43
5
44
7
45
23
46
3
47
32
48
3
49
4
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
175
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
246
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
269
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1092
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
29
adverbRatio
0.026556776556776556
lyAdverbCount
5
lyAdverbRatio
0.004578754578754579
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
269
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
269
mean
8.05
std
7.48
cv
0.929
sampleLengths
0
15
1
29
2
6
3
13
4
4
5
22
6
12
7
25
8
7
9
1
10
1
11
1
12
36
13
9
14
6
15
2
16
3
17
3
18
1
19
5
20
8
21
17
22
8
23
3
24
6
25
11
26
5
27
3
28
15
29
5
30
3
31
4
32
3
33
3
34
2
35
6
36
3
37
8
38
8
39
9
40
3
41
2
42
4
43
20
44
7
45
10
46
4
47
5
48
8
49
5
47.09%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
15
diversityRatio
0.3159851301115242
totalSentences
269
uniqueOpeners
85
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
5
totalSentences
147
matches
0
"Then Lucien said, quiet enough"
1
"Even the smell changed."
2
"Instead she held his gaze"
3
"Instead she stood there while"
4
"Then a woman's voice floated"
ratio
0.034
73.06%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
54
totalSentences
147
matches
0
"His mouth held that slight"
1
"He looked past her shoulder"
2
"His gaze returned to her"
3
"It should not have felt"
4
"His eyes sharpened."
5
"Her crescent scar pulled white"
6
"She hated that he noticed"
7
"She hated more that she"
8
"Her flat voice cut back"
9
"His jaw moved once."
10
"He entered as if she"
11
"His gaze dropped to her"
12
"He only freed his hands"
13
"She barked a laugh."
14
"His expression did not crack,"
15
"She hated him a little"
16
"She wanted to throw him"
17
"He went on."
18
"She remembered the alley."
19
"Her own palm split open"
ratio
0.367
38.23%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
124
totalSentences
147
matches
0
"The first deadbolt cracked back"
1
"Ptolemy shot past her ankles"
2
"A polished black shoe blocked"
3
"An ivory cane dipped, neat"
4
"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5
"Charcoal suit, spotless collar, slicked-back"
6
"His mouth held that slight"
7
"Aurora shoved the door against"
8
"He looked past her shoulder"
9
"His gaze returned to her"
10
"It should not have felt"
11
"Ptolemy slashed a paw at"
12
"Lucien shifted the cane, calm"
13
"Aurora started to close the"
14
"Lucien's hand came up, not"
15
"The links trembled."
16
"His eyes sharpened."
17
"The clipped note underneath the"
18
"Aurora's grip tightened."
19
"Her crescent scar pulled white"
ratio
0.844
34.01%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
147
matches
0
"Even Ptolemy, from beneath the"
ratio
0.007
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
50
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"His other hand came up, not touching, hovering near her jaw as if he remembered exactly how to cup it."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
5
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
99
tagDensity
0.051
leniency
0.101
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
89.7188%