| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1914 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1914 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "wavered" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 226 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 226 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 236 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1912 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1870 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.39 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 4 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | London | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Aurora | 26 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Earth" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.805 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like introducing herself at the do" | | 1 | "looked like soil at all" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.523 | | wordCount | 1912 | | matches | | 0 | "Not on her neck this time but from the stone at her back, a dry brushing sound like lips a" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 236 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 118 | | mean | 16.2 | | std | 17.89 | | cv | 1.104 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 77 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 81 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 54 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 32 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 226 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 276 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 236 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Very few voices could make her own name sound like that—soft and close and almost affectionate while every hair on her arms rose in alarm." | | 1 | "Moonlight touched one hand where it rested against the stone, and the skin looked wrong—too smooth, as if carved from wax and warmed near a fire." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1878 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "White star-shaped blooms" | | 1 | "own straight black hair." |
| | adverbCount | 63 | | adverbRatio | 0.03354632587859425 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.001597444089456869 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 236 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 236 | | mean | 8.1 | | std | 6.82 | | cv | 0.841 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 44.77% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3093220338983051 | | totalSentences | 236 | | uniqueOpeners | 73 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "Pale blue bells nodded in" | | 1 | "Somewhere behind her, something clicked." | | 2 | "Just a patch of bare" | | 3 | "Then she rose without taking" | | 4 | "Then the same pale shape" | | 5 | "Then the light steadied and" | | 6 | "Very few voices could make" | | 7 | "At least, the outline belonged" | | 8 | "Too many teeth." | | 9 | "Just too many to belong" | | 10 | "Even the small crescent scar" | | 11 | "Then her double spoke in" |
| | ratio | 0.067 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "She drew a slow breath" | | 1 | "She looked from one to" | | 2 | "Her voice landed flat." | | 3 | "She had followed it through" | | 4 | "It gave a little, then" | | 5 | "Their surfaces carried grooves that" | | 6 | "She circled the nearest stone" | | 7 | "Her hand came away damp" | | 8 | "She rubbed thumb and forefinger" | | 9 | "Its branches spread wide over" | | 10 | "She had not come for" | | 11 | "She scanned the clearing for" | | 12 | "Her eyes kept dragging back" | | 13 | "She held the Heartstone over" | | 14 | "She looked up so fast" | | 15 | "Her pulse had picked up" | | 16 | "She had not meant to" | | 17 | "It felt like introducing herself" | | 18 | "She knew the scrape and" | | 19 | "She took two steps towards" |
| | ratio | 0.258 | |
| 80.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 135 | | totalSentences | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora slipped through the last" | | 1 | "The Grove waited." | | 2 | "Here, none of that reached" | | 3 | "The silence sat thick across" | | 4 | "She drew a slow breath" | | 5 | "A thread of moonlight fell" | | 6 | "She looked from one to" | | 7 | "Her voice landed flat." | | 8 | "Aurora shoved the phone back" | | 9 | "The deep crimson stone sat" | | 10 | "That had brought her here." | | 11 | "Tonight, when she had cut" | | 12 | "She had followed it through" | | 13 | "Eva would have called her" | | 14 | "Silas would have locked the" | | 15 | "Aurora moved deeper into the" | | 16 | "The ground felt wrong underfoot." | | 17 | "It gave a little, then" | | 18 | "The standing stones ringed the" | | 19 | "Their surfaces carried grooves that" |
| | ratio | 0.758 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "Even at night, Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Now that she stood inside" | | 2 | "Before, the Grove had felt" | | 3 | "Now it felt attentive." |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 78.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence sat thick across the clearing, pressed between the ancient oaks and the standing stones as if the place had thrown a blanket over its own head." | | 1 | "The standing stones ringed the place in a rough oval, oak-dark and ridged with age, taller than a man and thick with moss that shone silver-green under the moon…" | | 2 | "The grass in front of her bent in a line, one tuft after another, as though something walked through it with bare feet." | | 3 | "The shape of speech without the language, a murmuring cadence that slid around the edge of meaning." | | 4 | "The sound filled the clearing, a delicate papery chatter, and beneath it came another noise, low and wet, as if the earth in the centre had opened a mouth and t…" | | 5 | "She stared at it and felt her balance tilt, as if the ground under her boots sloped towards it from every direction." | | 6 | "Moonlight touched one hand where it rested against the stone, and the skin looked wrong—too smooth, as if carved from wax and warmed near a fire." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |