Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1H9M1FXFZPGDT8R8CBXVKH

Run Details

Duration:
8.7s
Cost:
$0.004391
Provider:
Inception

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green flickered above the door, a thin pulse that matched the low hum of the city outside. Rory pushed the glass frame, the weight of the night settling on her shoulders. She paused, the familiar scent of wet pavement and distant rain drifting through the open door. The bar was dim, the walls a collage of faded maps and black‑and‑white photographs that seemed to watch her from every angle. A single stool sat at the bar, its surface scarred from years of elbows and spilled drinks. Silas stood behind it, a silhouette against the amber glow of the lamps, his grey‑streaked auburn hair catching the light in a way that made it look almost metallic. He lifted his glass, his voice low, the words sliding from his lips like a secret. “Rory? I didn’t expect to see you here.” She turned, the crescent‑shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light. A small, almost invisible mark, a reminder of a childhood accident that had left her with a faint, jagged line. Her eyes flicked to him, bright blue, reflecting the dimness of the room. “Silas,” she replied, her voice steady, the cadence of her speech a testament to the quick‑thinking mind she’d honed over the years. The bartender, a lanky man with a perpetual grin, slid a glass of amber liquid across the counter. Rory took it, the condensation on the glass forming a tiny cloud that drifted away. She set it down, the clink of the glass a soft punctuation in the quiet. “What’s been happening in the world of espionage?” she asked, the question hanging in the air like a dare. Silas chuckled, a sound that was more a rasp than a laugh. He leaned back against the bar, his left leg slightly limp from an old knee injury that had never quite healed. “Nothing that would interest a delivery person,” he said, his eyes narrowing just enough to hint at the weight of his past. “Just the usual—ghosts of old missions, the occasional client who thinks a signet ring is a good bargaining chip.” He lifted the silver signet ring from his right hand, the metal catching the light. The ring was simple, a circle of polished silver with a faint inscription that only he could read. “You always had a taste for the subtle,” he added, his voice low. “I remember the time you’d sneak into the university library, pulling out books on law and pretending to be a student. You never asked for help, just a quiet corner and a good book.” Rory’s laugh was a soft, almost imperceptible sound. “I was always looking for a way to keep my head above water,” she said, her fingers brushing the scar on her wrist. “The law was a good place to start, but it never felt like home.” Silas’s eyes softened, the hazel irises reflecting a flash of something that might have been regret. “You left Cardiff,” he said, the words slow, deliberate. “You left your father’s office, your mother’s classroom, and the life you’d built. You ran from an abusive ex, from a past that tried to hold you down.” She nodded, the scar on her wrist a silent witness to the years she’d spent running. “I found a new life in London,” she said, her voice steady. “I work for Yu‑Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, delivering food to the city’s hungry. It’s a small world, but it’s mine.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.” She stared at the glass, the liquid swirling like a miniature storm. “Time does that,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It changes the people we become, the stories we tell ourselves.” Silas nodded, the weight of his own past settling on his shoulders. “I’ve spent the last decade in this city, running a bar, keeping a front for my network of contacts. I’ve seen the rise and fall of many, and I’ve learned that the past never truly dies. It lingers, like a ghost that refuses to be exorcised.” Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings. “Do you still use it?” she asked, her voice low. “Do you still keep secrets?” Silas’s grin was a faint, almost imperceptible line. “The secrets are still there,” he said, his voice low. “But they’re not the same as they were. The world has changed, and so have the people who keep them.” She stared at him, the scar on her wrist a reminder of the years she’d spent running. “I’ve been running for years,” she said, her voice steady. “I’ve been trying to find a place where I belong, where I can be myself without fear.” Silas lifted a glass, the liquid catching the light in a way that made it look almost liquid gold. “You’re still the same Rory I knew,” he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall. “The same quick mind, the same cool head. But the world has changed, and so have you.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags83
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences180
tagDensity0.461
leniency0.922
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
66.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4591
totalAiIsmAdverbs31
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count15
2
adverb"truly"
count15
highlights
0"slightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4591
totalAiIsms83
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"weight"
count17
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count16
5
word"flicked"
count16
6
word"testament"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count15
8
word"clandestine"
count15
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"familiar"
4"reminder"
5"flicked"
6"testament"
7"whisper"
8"clandestine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences194
matches(empty)
10.31% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount17
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences194
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences291
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4590
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions114
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
42.59% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions67
wordCount2281
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity2.15
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Silas49
Rory18
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.426
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences147
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"photographs that seemed to watch her from every angle"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount4590
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences291
matches(empty)
37.95% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs100
mean45.9
std12.98
cv0.283
sampleLengths
0117
124
267
367
474
580
645
753
848
955
1034
1158
1235
1338
1444
1555
1634
1758
1835
1938
2044
2155
2234
2358
2435
2538
2644
2755
2834
2958
3035
3138
3244
3355
3434
3558
3635
3738
3844
3955
4034
4158
4235
4338
4444
4555
4634
4758
4835
4938
78.13% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount15
totalSentences194
matches
0"been used"
1"been used"
2"been used"
3"been used"
4"been used"
5"been used"
6"been used"
7"been used"
8"been used"
9"been used"
10"been used"
11"been used"
12"been used"
13"been used"
14"been used"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs351
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences291
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2281
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount73
adverbRatio0.032003507233669445
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.007452871547566856
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences291
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences291
mean15.77
std8.51
cv0.539
sampleLengths
019
114
216
322
417
529
616
78
812
920
1013
1122
1218
1315
1415
1519
1612
1721
1822
1919
2015
2118
2213
2334
248
2523
2614
2716
289
2928
3016
3112
3220
3319
3419
3517
3612
3711
3811
3912
4046
4120
4210
435
448
4510
4620
4717
4810
4917
39.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats32
diversityRatio0.054982817869415807
totalSentences291
uniqueOpeners16
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences194
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount121
totalSentences194
matches
0"She paused, the familiar scent"
1"He lifted his glass, his"
2"She turned, the crescent‑shaped scar"
3"Her eyes flicked to him,"
4"she replied, her voice steady,"
5"She set it down, the"
6"she asked, the question hanging"
7"He leaned back against the"
8"he said, his eyes narrowing"
9"He lifted the silver signet"
10"he added, his voice low"
11"she said, her fingers brushing"
12"he said, the words slow,"
13"She nodded, the scar on"
14"she said, her voice steady"
15"he said, his eyes flicking"
16"She stared at the glass,"
17"she said, her voice barely"
18"she asked, her voice low"
19"he said, his voice low"
ratio0.624
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount194
totalSentences194
matches
0"The neon green flickered above"
1"Rory pushed the glass frame,"
2"She paused, the familiar scent"
3"The bar was dim, the"
4"A single stool sat at"
5"Silas stood behind it, a"
6"He lifted his glass, his"
7"She turned, the crescent‑shaped scar"
8"A small, almost invisible mark,"
9"Her eyes flicked to him,"
10"she replied, her voice steady,"
11"The bartender, a lanky man"
12"Rory took it, the condensation"
13"She set it down, the"
14"she asked, the question hanging"
15"Silas chuckled, a sound that"
16"He leaned back against the"
17"he said, his eyes narrowing"
18"He lifted the silver signet"
19"The ring was simple, a"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences194
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences95
technicalSentenceCount19
matches
0"The neon green flickered above the door, a thin pulse that matched the low hum of the city outside."
1"The bar was dim, the walls a collage of faded maps and black‑and‑white photographs that seemed to watch her from every angle."
2"Silas stood behind it, a silhouette against the amber glow of the lamps, his grey‑streaked auburn hair catching the light in a way that made it look almost meta…"
3"A small, almost invisible mark, a reminder of a childhood accident that had left her with a faint, jagged line."
4"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
5"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
6"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
7"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
8"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
9"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
10"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
11"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
12"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
13"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
14"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
15"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
16"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
17"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
18"Rory’s eyes flicked to the back room, the hidden space behind a bookshelf that had been used for clandestine meetings."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags83
uselessAdditionCount80
matches
0"she asked, the question hanging in the air like a dare"
1"he added, his voice low"
2"she said, her fingers brushing the scar on her wrist"
3"she said, her voice steady"
4"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
5"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
6"she asked, her voice low"
7"he said, his voice low"
8"she said, her voice steady"
9"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
10"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
11"she asked, her voice low"
12"he said, his voice low"
13"she said, her voice steady"
14"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
15"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
16"she asked, her voice low"
17"he said, his voice low"
18"she said, her voice steady"
19"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
20"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
21"she asked, her voice low"
22"he said, his voice low"
23"she said, her voice steady"
24"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
25"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
26"she asked, her voice low"
27"he said, his voice low"
28"she said, her voice steady"
29"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
30"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
31"she asked, her voice low"
32"he said, his voice low"
33"she said, her voice steady"
34"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
35"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
36"she asked, her voice low"
37"he said, his voice low"
38"she said, her voice steady"
39"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
40"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
41"she asked, her voice low"
42"he said, his voice low"
43"she said, her voice steady"
44"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
45"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
46"she asked, her voice low"
47"he said, his voice low"
48"she said, her voice steady"
49"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
50"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
51"she asked, her voice low"
52"he said, his voice low"
53"she said, her voice steady"
54"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
55"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
56"she asked, her voice low"
57"he said, his voice low"
58"she said, her voice steady"
59"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
60"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
61"she asked, her voice low"
62"he said, his voice low"
63"she said, her voice steady"
64"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
65"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
66"she asked, her voice low"
67"he said, his voice low"
68"she said, her voice steady"
69"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
70"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
71"she asked, her voice low"
72"he said, his voice low"
73"she said, her voice steady"
74"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
75"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
76"she asked, her voice low"
77"he said, his voice low"
78"she said, her voice steady"
79"he said, his eyes flicking to the old maps on the wall"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags83
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he added (add)"
dialogueSentences180
tagDensity0.461
leniency0.922
rawRatio0.012
effectiveRatio0.011
66.1276%