Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1H9V4BKF7TH3R2NZ9GQWC8

Run Details

Duration:
10.3s
Cost:
$0.003876
Provider:
Inception

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn slipped through the cracked entrance of the abandoned Tube station, her boots thudding against the cold concrete as she pushed aside the rusted metal gate. The station had been silent for years, its platforms a skeletal echo of the bustling world above. Yet tonight, the air hummed with an unseen current, and a faint, metallic scent clung to the damp stone. She paused at the platform, her salt‑and‑pepper hair brushing against the low ceiling. The brown irises of her eyes scanned the darkness, catching the pale glow of a single flickering bulb that had survived the collapse. The light painted the walls in long, wavering shadows, as if the station itself were breathing. A single body lay at the edge of the platform, its head tilted back, eyes wide in a frozen expression of terror. The victim’s skin was pallid, veins stark against the flesh. A broken vial lay beside the torso, its contents a black, viscous liquid that seeped into the concrete, leaving a slick, oily sheen. A faint scent of incense drifted from the broken vial, as if something had been burned in the vicinity. Harlow’s leather watch ticked on her left wrist, the worn face catching the light in a steady rhythm. She checked the time—midnight. The case file had been dropped at the scene by a hurried hand, its pages fluttering like moths. The file read: “Victim: Unknown. Witness: None. Possibility of foul play: High.” No mention of the market, no mention of any supernatural element. She turned her head to the right, where a faint, silver sigil was etched into the platform’s stone. It pulsed with a low, humming vibration, as if resonating with some unseen energy. The sigil was surrounded by a thin ring of ash, its edges smudged as if something had brushed against it recently. A colleague entered the scene, her footsteps echoing on the concrete. Detective Patel, a seasoned officer with a reputation for pragmatism, approached Harlow with a skeptical look. “What’s the story, Quinn?” he asked, his voice low and steady. Harlow didn’t answer immediately. She focused on the broken vial, the sigil, and the faint scent of incense. “We’re looking at a homicide, but the evidence doesn’t add up,” she said, her voice clipped. “The victim’s blood doesn’t match the profile of any known offender in the area. And that sigil—what is it?” Patel shrugged. “Could be a prank. Someone’s messing with the scene. The broken vial could be a red herring. We should focus on the physical evidence—fingerprints, DNA, anything that can link us to a suspect.” Harlow nodded, but her mind was already racing. She turned her attention to the sigil, tracing its outline with her fingertips. The sigil was etched into the stone, but the faint hum it emitted seemed to be emanating from the floor beneath it. She knelt down, pressing her palm against the stone. The hum intensified, and a faint, warm heat rose from the floor, as if the stone itself were alive. She rose and glanced at the broken vial. The liquid inside was still black, but it had begun to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. Patel looked at her, his expression one of cautious curiosity. “What are you thinking, Quinn?” Harlow’s eyes narrowed. “I’m thinking that this isn’t a simple homicide. There’s something else here—something supernatural, perhaps.” Patel raised an eyebrow. “Supernatural? You’re not going to let your personal demons get in the way of the case, are you?” Harlow’s jaw clenched. She remembered the night DS Morris had disappeared, the night she had felt a cold breath on the back of her neck as she walked through the foggy streets of London. She remembered the strange visions that had plagued her since then, the whispers that seemed to come from the shadows. She remembered the bone token that had been required to enter the Veil Market, the hidden black market that sold enchanted goods and banned substances. She glanced at the sigil again, her mind racing. The sigil was a protective sigil, etched by a Shade artisan. It was designed to ward off supernatural entities. The sigil’s faint hum suggested that it was being used to channel energy, perhaps to open a portal. She turned her attention to the floor beneath the sigil. The hum intensified, and a faint, shimmering portal appeared in the concrete. The portal was a swirling vortex of dark energy, pulsing with a low, resonant hum. Harlow’s breath caught in her throat. She had never seen anything like this before. Patel’s eyes widened. “What is that?” Harlow didn’t answer. She stepped closer to the portal, her senses heightened. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.” Harlow moved quickly, her military precision guiding her movements. She ordered the officers to secure the perimeter, to seal the entrance, and to begin a thorough search of the area. She then turned her attention to the broken vial, its contents still pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She lifted the vial, feeling its weight in her hand. The liquid inside seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She placed the vial on a nearby table, its contents spilling onto the surface. The liquid began to coagulate, forming a thick, gelatinous mass. She lifted the mass, feeling its weight in her hand. The mass seemed to pulse, as if it were alive. She turned her attention to the portal, its swirling vortex of dark energy pulsing with a low, resonant hum. She could feel the cold, damp air emanating from it, and she could hear the faint hum of the sigil. She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness. She turned to Patel, her voice low and urgent. “We need to secure the area. This is not a homicide. This is a crime involving the Veil Market.” Patel hesitated, then nodded. “Alright. Let’s do it.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.146
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4013
totalAiIsmAdverbs15
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count15
highlights
0"quickly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4013
totalAiIsms93
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"wavering"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"etched"
count3
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"racing"
count2
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"weight"
count31
11
word"pulse"
count31
12
word"eyebrow"
count1
13
word"jaw clenched"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count16
highlights
0"echo"
1"scanned"
2"wavering"
3"stark"
4"etched"
5"pulsed"
6"footsteps"
7"echoing"
8"racing"
9"tracing"
10"weight"
11"pulse"
12"eyebrow"
13"jaw clenched"
14"could feel"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences266
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount48
narrationSentences266
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences304
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4009
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount3525
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Patel"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow24
Quinn1
Tube1
Patel37
Morris1
London1
Veil1
Market1
Shade1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Patel"
3"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.975
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences241
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if resonating with some unseen energy"
1"whispers that seemed to come from the shadows"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount4009
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences304
matches
0"suggested that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs95
mean42.2
std21.23
cv0.503
sampleLengths
064
152
274
363
453
538
653
735
871
946
1015
1117
1222
1379
1446
1551
166
1753
1828
198
2048
2165
2260
2328
248
2548
2665
2760
2828
298
3048
3165
3260
3328
348
3548
3665
3760
3828
398
4048
4165
4260
4328
448
4548
4665
4760
4828
498
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences266
matches
0"been burned"
1"been dropped"
2"was etched"
3"was surrounded"
4"was etched"
5"been required"
6"was designed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs607
matches
0"were breathing"
1"was already racing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences304
ratio0.003
matches
0"She checked the time—midnight."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3526
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount71
adverbRatio0.02013613159387408
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.005104934770277935
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences304
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences304
mean13.19
std6.05
cv0.459
sampleLengths
028
117
219
313
423
516
622
710
823
919
1018
114
1218
1323
1418
1514
1621
1711
1816
1911
204
2114
2216
2319
242
2533
268
2713
2822
299
3019
318
3217
3310
3411
3510
365
373
3814
394
4018
413
4231
4320
4425
459
4611
478
4818
4910
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats85
diversityRatio0.046052631578947366
totalSentences304
uniqueOpeners14
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences265
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount157
totalSentences265
matches
0"She paused at the platform,"
1"She checked the time—midnight."
2"She turned her head to"
3"It pulsed with a low,"
4"he asked, his voice low"
5"She focused on the broken"
6"she said, her voice clipped"
7"She turned her attention to"
8"She knelt down, pressing her"
9"She rose and glanced at"
10"She lifted the vial, feeling"
11"She remembered the night DS"
12"She remembered the strange visions"
13"She remembered the bone token"
14"She glanced at the sigil"
15"It was designed to ward"
16"She turned her attention to"
17"She had never seen anything"
18"She stepped closer to the"
19"She could feel the cold,"
ratio0.592
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount264
totalSentences265
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn slipped through"
1"The station had been silent"
2"She paused at the platform,"
3"The brown irises of her"
4"The light painted the walls"
5"A single body lay at"
6"The victim’s skin was pallid,"
7"A broken vial lay beside"
8"A faint scent of incense"
9"Harlow’s leather watch ticked on"
10"She checked the time—midnight."
11"The case file had been"
12"The file read: No mention"
13"She turned her head to"
14"It pulsed with a low,"
15"The sigil was surrounded by"
16"A colleague entered the scene,"
17"Detective Patel, a seasoned officer"
18"he asked, his voice low"
19"Harlow didn’t answer immediately."
ratio0.996
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences265
matches(empty)
ratio0
64.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences200
technicalSentenceCount22
matches
0"The brown irises of her eyes scanned the darkness, catching the pale glow of a single flickering bulb that had survived the collapse."
1"A broken vial lay beside the torso, its contents a black, viscous liquid that seeped into the concrete, leaving a slick, oily sheen."
2"It pulsed with a low, humming vibration, as if resonating with some unseen energy."
3"The sigil was surrounded by a thin ring of ash, its edges smudged as if something had brushed against it recently."
4"The hum intensified, and a faint, warm heat rose from the floor, as if the stone itself were alive."
5"She remembered the bone token that had been required to enter the Veil Market, the hidden black market that sold enchanted goods and banned substances."
6"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
7"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
8"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
9"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
10"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
11"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
12"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
13"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
14"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
15"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
16"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
17"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
18"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
19"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
20"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
21"She could see the faint outline of a figure moving through the portal, a shadowy silhouette that disappeared into the darkness."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he asked, his voice low and steady"
1"she said, her voice clipped"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.049
leniency0.098
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
68.7764%