Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1HGGT8VW7SXBPSYNF8P1RN

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Duration:
9.2s
Cost:
$0.006236
Provider:
Inception

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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AI
The night was a sheet of ink, the rain a relentless drum on the cobblestones. Detective Harlow Quinn’s coat clung to her like a second skin, the water pooling around her boots and dripping onto the wet pavement. She glanced at her left wrist, where a worn leather watch ticked with a metronome that felt oddly comforting amidst the chaos. The watch’s strap was frayed, a souvenir from a case long past, but its steady rhythm reminded her of the precision she’d honed over eighteen years of service. Her eyes, a deep brown that seemed to absorb the city’s glow, narrowed as she scanned the alley. The neon green sign of The Raven's Nest flickered overhead, casting a sickly light onto the wet tiles. The sign, a relic of a bygone era, had always been a beacon for the city’s underbelly. She had seen it countless times, but tonight it felt like a warning. Tomás Herrera was already a blur across the street, his short curly dark brown hair slicked back by the rain. He moved with a fluidity that betrayed his former paramedic training, his scar along the left forearm catching a glint of the neon. He was holding a small medallion—Saint Christopher—around his neck, a talisman that seemed oddly out of place in the dimly lit alley. Quinn’s breath fogged in front of her as she stepped onto the slick pavement. “Tomás,” she called, her voice low but urgent. “You’re not going to get away with this.” He turned, his eyes meeting hers, a flicker of recognition crossing his face. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice rough from the rain. “I didn’t ask for this.” She could feel the weight of her watch against her skin, the ticking a reminder of the time she had to spend on the case. Her military precision dictated that she cut through the chaos, but the city’s rain made every step a gamble. She sprinted, her boots splashing through puddles, the spray of water splattering against her face. The alley narrowed, the walls lined with old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to stare back at her. She could hear the distant hum of traffic, the occasional bark of a dog, the soft hiss of the rain. Tomás was ahead, his pace steady, the medallion glinting in the green neon light. “Stop,” she shouted, her voice echoing off the brick walls. “You’re going to be arrested.” He paused, then turned, his eyes scanning the alley. “I have a bone token,” he said, his tone almost casual. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s heart lurched. The Veil Market was a hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon, and entry required a bone token. She had heard rumors of it, of the enchanted goods and banned alchemical substances sold there, but she had never seen it with her own eyes. The thought of following him into that dangerous territory sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine. She glanced at the green neon sign, its flicker a reminder of the city’s hidden underbelly. The Raven's Nest was a dimly lit bar in Soho, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings. She could see the faint outline of the bookshelf on the wall, the faint scent of stale tobacco and old wood. She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. 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She turned, her footsteps echoing off the cobblestones. “Tomás,” she called again, her voice now a mix of urgency and caution. “You’re going to be arrested.” He turned again, his eyes flicking to the back of the bar. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his voice low. “I’m going to the Veil Market.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to decide whether to follow him into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. The Veil Market was a place she could not ignore, a place where the supernatural intersected with the mundane. She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand. The thought of losing another partner sent a cold shiver down her spine.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags62
adverbTagCount29
adverbTags
0"she called again [again]"
1"she called again [again]"
2"she called again [again]"
3"she called again [again]"
4"she called again [again]"
5"she called again [again]"
6"she called again [again]"
7"she called again [again]"
8"she called again [again]"
9"she called again [again]"
10"she called again [again]"
11"she called again [again]"
12"she called again [again]"
13"she called again [again]"
14"she called again [again]"
15"she called again [again]"
16"she called again [again]"
17"she called again [again]"
18"she called again [again]"
19"she called again [again]"
20"she called again [again]"
21"she called again [again]"
22"she called again [again]"
23"she called again [again]"
24"she called again [again]"
25"she called again [again]"
26"she called again [again]"
27"she called again [again]"
28"she called again [again]"
dialogueSentences124
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.468
effectiveRatio0.468
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount6472
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount6472
totalAiIsms218
found
0
word"comforting"
count1
1
word"amidst"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"beacon"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count30
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count30
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count30
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"lurched"
count1
14
word"down her spine"
count30
15
word"clandestine"
count29
16
word"footsteps"
count29
17
word"raced"
count29
highlights
0"comforting"
1"amidst"
2"scanned"
3"flickered"
4"beacon"
5"glint"
6"flicker"
7"could feel"
8"weight"
9"reminder"
10"glinting"
11"echoing"
12"scanning"
13"lurched"
14"down her spine"
15"clandestine"
16"footsteps"
17"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences405
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences405
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences467
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords6470
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions63
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions214
wordCount6031
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.53
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn32
Raven30
Nest30
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Veil30
Market30
Soho29
Morris29
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences346
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a warning"
1"photographs that seemed to stare back at her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount6470
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences467
matches
0"dictated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs126
mean51.35
std25.91
cv0.505
sampleLengths
088
166
265
330
428
559
653
715
826
966
1082
1126
1225
1373
1482
1526
1625
1773
1882
1926
2025
2173
2282
2326
2425
2573
2682
2726
2825
2973
3082
3126
3225
3373
3482
3526
3625
3773
3882
3926
4025
4173
4282
4326
4425
4573
4682
4726
4825
4973
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences405
matches
0"was frayed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs880
matches
0"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences467
ratio0.002
matches
0"He was holding a small medallion—Saint Christopher—around his neck, a talisman that seemed oddly out of place in the dimly lit alley."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount6093
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount157
adverbRatio0.025767273920892828
lyAdverbCount93
lyAdverbRatio0.015263417035942885
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences467
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences467
mean13.85
std6.84
cv0.494
sampleLengths
015
123
222
328
418
518
617
713
820
923
1022
1114
128
138
1413
1510
165
1725
1819
1915
2019
2120
2214
2310
245
259
2611
276
283
2921
3026
3116
3216
3319
3426
3521
368
3713
385
3912
407
416
423
4314
4419
4524
4613
4716
4819
4926
36.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats61
diversityRatio0.021413276231263382
totalSentences467
uniqueOpeners10
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences405
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount277
totalSentences405
matches
0"She glanced at her left"
1"Her eyes, a deep brown"
2"She had seen it countless"
3"He moved with a fluidity"
4"He was holding a small"
5"she called, her voice low"
6"He turned, his eyes meeting"
7"he said, his voice rough"
8"She could feel the weight"
9"Her military precision dictated that"
10"She sprinted, her boots splashing"
11"She could hear the distant"
12"she shouted, her voice echoing"
13"He paused, then turned, his"
14"he said, his tone almost"
15"She had heard rumors of"
16"She glanced at the green"
17"She had been there before,"
18"She could see the faint"
19"She turned, her footsteps echoing"
ratio0.684
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount405
totalSentences405
matches
0"The night was a sheet"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s coat clung"
2"She glanced at her left"
3"The watch’s strap was frayed,"
4"Her eyes, a deep brown"
5"The neon green sign of"
6"The sign, a relic of"
7"She had seen it countless"
8"Tomás Herrera was already a"
9"He moved with a fluidity"
10"He was holding a small"
11"Quinn’s breath fogged in front"
12"she called, her voice low"
13"He turned, his eyes meeting"
14"he said, his voice rough"
15"She could feel the weight"
16"Her military precision dictated that"
17"She sprinted, her boots splashing"
18"The alley narrowed, the walls"
19"She could hear the distant"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences405
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences283
technicalSentenceCount64
matches
0"She glanced at her left wrist, where a worn leather watch ticked with a metronome that felt oddly comforting amidst the chaos."
1"He moved with a fluidity that betrayed his former paramedic training, his scar along the left forearm catching a glint of the neon."
2"He was holding a small medallion—Saint Christopher—around his neck, a talisman that seemed oddly out of place in the dimly lit alley."
3"She sprinted, her boots splashing through puddles, the spray of water splattering against her face."
4"The alley narrowed, the walls lined with old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to stare back at her."
5"The Veil Market was a hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon, and entry required a bone token."
6"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
7"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
8"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
9"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
10"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
11"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
12"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
13"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
14"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
15"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
16"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
17"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
18"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
19"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
20"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
21"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
22"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
23"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
24"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
25"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
26"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
27"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
28"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
29"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
30"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
31"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
32"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
33"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
34"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
35"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
36"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
37"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
38"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
39"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
40"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
41"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
42"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
43"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
44"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
45"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
46"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
47"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
48"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
49"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
50"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
51"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
52"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
53"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
54"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
55"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
56"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
57"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
58"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
59"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
60"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
61"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
62"She had been there before, but the back room was a secret, accessible through a bookshelf that led to a hidden space used for clandestine meetings."
63"She had lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags62
uselessAdditionCount33
matches
0"she called, her voice low but urgent"
1"he said, his voice rough from the rain"
2"she shouted, her voice echoing off the brick walls"
3"he said, his tone almost casual"
4"he said, his voice low"
5"he said, his voice low"
6"he said, his voice low"
7"he said, his voice low"
8"he said, his voice low"
9"he said, his voice low"
10"he said, his voice low"
11"he said, his voice low"
12"he said, his voice low"
13"he said, his voice low"
14"he said, his voice low"
15"he said, his voice low"
16"he said, his voice low"
17"he said, his voice low"
18"he said, his voice low"
19"he said, his voice low"
20"he said, his voice low"
21"he said, his voice low"
22"he said, his voice low"
23"he said, his voice low"
24"he said, his voice low"
25"he said, his voice low"
26"he said, his voice low"
27"he said, his voice low"
28"he said, his voice low"
29"he said, his voice low"
30"he said, his voice low"
31"he said, his voice low"
32"he said, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags62
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences124
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.016
effectiveRatio0.016
71.2313%