Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1HSGV5391NBBSRZ4B4G3MH

Run Details

Duration:
5.5s
Cost:
$0.001085
Provider:
Inception

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tunnel breathed damp, stale air as Harlow Quinn slipped past the rusted turnstiles. The Station's old advertising posters peeled from the brick, their colors faded to ghostly blues and reds. She paused at the entrance to the underground market, the faint hiss of a distant train echoing through the cavernous passage. The Veil Market waited beyond the threshold, a place that had vanished from any city map. She pushed open the door marked “Veil Market” and stepped onto a slick stone floor. The faint glow of phosphorescent fungi painted the walls in greenish hues. A low hum vibrated through the concrete, as if the place itself was alive. She straightened her shoulders, the leather watch on her left wrist ticking softly. Her eyes scanned the scene. A body lay on the floor, face down, its limbs twisted in an unnatural pose. The victim's skin was a pale, almost translucent shade, veins pulsing like thin rivers of light. A small brass compass lay beside the corpse, its face etched with protective sigils. The needle spun lazily, pointing at nothing in particular. Beside the compass, a bone token lay on the ground, its surface worn smooth by time. Harlow knelt, her fingers brushing the compass's patina. The verdigris coating felt cold against her palm. She noted the sigils, the way they seemed to shimmer when the light caught them. She lifted the compass, feeling the weight of the artifact. It was a Veil Compass, known to be crafted by a Shade artisan. Its needle was supposed to point toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. Yet here, it pointed nowhere. She turned to Eva, who stood a few feet away, her curly red hair tucked behind her left ear, glasses perched on the bridge of her nose. Eva's satchel clinked softly as she shifted her weight. She held a notebook in her hands, its pages filled with sketches of ancient runes. "What's the token?" Eva asked, her voice low but steady. "We need to know if it matches any of the known rifts." Harlow shook her head. "It doesn't match any catalogued rift. The sigils are familiar, but the arrangement is off. The compass is broken—its needle is stuck." Eva tilted her head, eyes narrowing. "Maybe the compass was tampered with. Someone could have forced it to point elsewhere." Harlow stood, brushing dust from her coat. She walked around the body, her boots leaving faint prints on the stone. The victim's clothing was tattered, but a single thread caught a glint of metal. She pulled it out, revealing a small, silver pendant shaped like a key. The key's teeth were etched with the same sigils as the compass. "Did the victim have any connection to the market?" Eva asked, her tone curious. Harlow looked at the market's interior. The stalls were empty, their wares scattered across the floor. The air smelled of oil and incense. A faint outline of a rift shimmered in the corner, barely visible. The rift pulsed with a low, rhythmic thrum. She turned back to Eva. "The rift is still open. The compass was pointing to it, but now it's frozen. The key—maybe it was the trigger." Eva's eyes widened. "A key to the rift? That would explain why the compass is stuck. If someone inserted the key, it could lock the needle." Harlow knelt again, her fingers brushing the key. It was cold, metallic. She felt a faint vibration through it, like a pulse. She inserted the key into the compass's center, feeling the gears shift. The needle spun, then froze, pointing directly at the rift. The rift's surface rippled, a dark vortex of swirling mist. Harlow stepped back, her breath shallow. She could see a faint outline of a figure within the vortex—a silhouette of a person, eyes glowing, hands outstretched. Eva whispered, "That's the victim." Harlow's mind raced. The victim's body was a mannequin, a copy of a real person. The key had been used to lock the rift, and the victim had been sacrificed to keep the rift sealed. The Veil Compass had been broken to prevent anyone from locating the rift again. She turned to Eva. "The market is a black market for supernatural goods. They use rifts to trade in the forbidden. The victim was a pawn, a test." Eva nodded. "The key is a key to the rift. Whoever holds it can open or close it. The market's owner must have been the one who locked it." Harlow looked at the body. The victim's face was a perfect copy of a known person—a famous politician who had been missing for weeks. The body was a decoy, a way to lure investigators into the market. She turned to the market's entrance. The door was ajar, a faint glow spilling out. She could see the market's owner—a tall, gaunt figure wearing a black coat, eyes hidden behind a mask. The figure was holding a small, brass object, similar to the Veil Compass. Harlow stepped forward, her boots echoing on the stone. She moved with military precision, her watch ticking. She reached the figure, her hand closing around the brass object. The figure lunged, but Harlow was faster. She wrestled the object away, feeling the weight of the Veil Compass in her palm. The rift's surface flickered, a low hum rising. Harlow held the compass steady, the needle pointing directly at the rift. She felt a surge of energy, a wave of cold that rushed through her body. She turned to Eva. "We need to close the rift." Eva nodded. "We can use the key to lock it again." Harlow inserted the key into the compass, the gears grinding. The needle spun, then froze, pointing at the rift. The rift's surface trembled, then collapsed, a burst of light erupting. The market's walls crumbled, the stone falling away. The air cleared, the hum faded. Harlow stood, the compass in her hand, the key still attached. The market was gone, leaving only the empty tunnel behind. She turned to Eva, her eyes bright. "The market is closed." Eva smiled. "We did it." Harlow looked at the compass, its face now clear of sigils. She felt the weight of the artifact, the knowledge that it had been used to lock a rift. She knew that the market's owner had been using the rift to trade in the forbidden, and that the victim had been a pawn in their scheme. She turned to the tunnel's entrance, the light of the outside world beckoning. She stepped forward, her boots echoing on the stone. The compass pulsed in her palm, a reminder of the night she had uncovered the truth.
created_at"2026-03-06T12:26:08.109Z" 3/6/2026, 12:26:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1116
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1116
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"echoing"
count3
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"weight"
count4
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count2
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"pawn"
count2
13
word"perfect"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"vibrated"
2"scanned"
3"etched"
4"weight"
5"familiar"
6"glint"
7"shimmered"
8"pulsed"
9"rhythmic"
10"pulse"
11"raced"
12"pawn"
13"perfect"
14"flickered"
15"trembled"
16"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1111
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount929
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Harlow15
Quinn1
Station1
Veil5
Market1
Compass4
Shade1
Eva14
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Station"
3"Eva"
places
0"Veil"
1"Market"
2"Compass"
globalScore0.693
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1111
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"knew that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean35.84
std18.82
cv0.525
sampleLengths
068
159
270
372
451
522
626
720
859
914
1043
1126
1226
1344
1436
155
1649
1728
1829
1937
2046
2150
2235
2310
2411
2530
2635
2711
285
2956
3038
81.06% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences87
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was tattered"
2"were etched"
3"been sacrificed"
4"been broken"
5"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs166
matches
0"was holding"
55.39% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences98
ratio0.031
matches
0"She could see a faint outline of a figure within the vortex—a silhouette of a person, eyes glowing, hands outstretched."
1"The victim's face was a perfect copy of a known person—a famous politician who had been missing for weeks."
2"She could see the market's owner—a tall, gaunt figure wearing a black coat, eyes hidden behind a mask."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount932
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02575107296137339
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009656652360515022
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean11.34
std5.73
cv0.506
sampleLengths
014
117
221
316
415
512
614
713
85
915
1016
1114
129
1316
148
158
1615
1710
1813
1913
205
2127
229
2315
2410
2512
264
2722
286
2914
307
3113
3214
3313
3412
3514
366
3710
387
3912
408
415
4221
433
4423
458
464
4710
4812
4910
33.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.14285714285714285
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners14
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences83
matches
0"She paused at the entrance"
1"She pushed open the door"
2"She straightened her shoulders, the"
3"Her eyes scanned the scene."
4"She noted the sigils, the"
5"She lifted the compass, feeling"
6"It was a Veil Compass,"
7"Its needle was supposed to"
8"She turned to Eva, who"
9"She held a notebook in"
10"She walked around the body,"
11"She pulled it out, revealing"
12"She turned back to Eva."
13"It was cold, metallic."
14"She felt a faint vibration"
15"She inserted the key into"
16"She could see a faint"
17"She turned to Eva."
18"She turned to the market's"
19"She could see the market's"
ratio0.361
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences83
matches
0"The tunnel breathed damp, stale"
1"The Station's old advertising posters"
2"She paused at the entrance"
3"The Veil Market waited beyond"
4"She pushed open the door"
5"The faint glow of phosphorescent"
6"A low hum vibrated through"
7"She straightened her shoulders, the"
8"Her eyes scanned the scene."
9"A body lay on the"
10"The victim's skin was a"
11"A small brass compass lay"
12"The needle spun lazily, pointing"
13"Harlow knelt, her fingers brushing"
14"The verdigris coating felt cold"
15"She noted the sigils, the"
16"She lifted the compass, feeling"
17"It was a Veil Compass,"
18"Its needle was supposed to"
19"She turned to Eva, who"
ratio0.976
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The victim's face was a perfect copy of a known person—a famous politician who had been missing for weeks."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva asked, her voice low but steady"
1"Eva asked, her tone curious"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.133
75.3014%