| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 70 | | tagDensity | 0.114 | | leniency | 0.229 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2298 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "sharply" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 73.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2298 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "wavered" | | 2 | "crystal" | | 3 | "unreadable" | | 4 | "jaw clenched" | | 5 | "comforting" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "porcelain" | | 10 | "chill" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "let out a breath" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 206 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 206 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 268 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2297 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 81 | | wordCount | 1925 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.87 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 36 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Varga | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Isolde | 15 | | Nyx | 12 | | Eva | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Ahead | 3 | | One | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Carter" | | 7 | "One" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.565 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 56.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a clearing from outside" | | 1 | "not quite her own" | | 2 | "seemed more substantial here, their shape darkening, shoulders and hands defined in a way they had not been outside" | | 3 | "something like paper, thin and cream-coloure" | | 4 | "as if listening to a conversation none of them could hear" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2297 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 268 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 152 | | mean | 15.11 | | std | 18.36 | | cv | 1.215 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 56 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 71 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 71 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 49 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "been painted" | | 1 | "were lined" | | 2 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 318 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 268 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, through a stand of ash-pale trunks, a new light spread over the moss—steady, amber, almost domestic after everything behind them." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1932 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "moving inside, bright silver threads" |
| | adverbCount | 65 | | adverbRatio | 0.03364389233954451 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0036231884057971015 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 268 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 268 | | mean | 8.57 | | std | 6.2 | | cv | 0.724 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 57.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.376865671641791 | | totalSentences | 268 | | uniqueOpeners | 101 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she saw light without" | | 1 | "Somewhere deeper in, something chimed." | | 2 | "More like rain striking crystal." | | 3 | "Then they were whole again." | | 4 | "Bright blue eyes, black hair" | | 5 | "Once they passed a grove" | | 6 | "Then one turned." | | 7 | "Then another, closer." | | 8 | "Too quick to see." | | 9 | "Once something white dropped through" |
| | ratio | 0.055 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "It did not shimmer." | | 1 | "Their outline wavered at the" | | 2 | "She rubbed her thumb over" | | 3 | "She stepped through." | | 4 | "It passed over her skin" | | 5 | "Her ears popped." | | 6 | "It had looked like a" | | 7 | "Their leaves whispered though the" | | 8 | "Their hand formed from shadow" | | 9 | "It turned toward them." | | 10 | "She doubled back a step." | | 11 | "Her fingers stopped an inch" | | 12 | "She pulled back fast." | | 13 | "It drifted three inches downstream," | | 14 | "She crossed without a splash." | | 15 | "She moved on at once." | | 16 | "It never dimmed." | | 17 | "It changed colour instead, slanting" | | 18 | "Their caps opened as the" | | 19 | "They turned those faint eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.199 | |
| 95.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 132 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Richmond Park lay behind them" | | 2 | "It did not shimmer." | | 3 | "Colours slid over one another" | | 4 | "Aurora stopped a pace short" | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant under her" | | 6 | "Nyx stood to her left," | | 7 | "Their outline wavered at the" | | 8 | "Isolde Varga waited between the" | | 9 | "Wildflowers crowded around her bare" | | 10 | "Aurora looked past her." | | 11 | "The clearing beyond should have" | | 12 | "Leaves gleamed silver on one" | | 13 | "She rubbed her thumb over" | | 14 | "She stepped through." | | 15 | "Pond-water cold, the kind that" | | 16 | "It passed over her skin" | | 17 | "The world tipped." | | 18 | "The smell changed." | | 19 | "Honey, crushed herbs, wet bark," |
| | ratio | 0.729 | |
| 27.62% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "Even Nyx seemed more substantial" |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 75.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from the grass like old teeth, each oak pillar twisted on itself, bark knotted into faces that vanished when Aurora looked straight at …" | | 1 | "Colours slid over one another as if the world on the far side had been painted on silk and someone kept breathing beneath it." | | 2 | "Instead she saw light without a source, pale gold drifting through trunks that looked grown from glass and bone together." | | 3 | "It changed colour instead, slanting from gold to green to soft violet as if they crossed invisible borders between moods." | | 4 | "Their caps opened as the group neared, releasing threads of phosphorescent spores that floated around Nyx and sank into their shadow body without resistance." | | 5 | "Its branches carried lantern-like fruit that swung without breeze and cast pools of pale fire over the lake." | | 6 | "Tall, thin, antlered, draped in garments that moved like smoke underwater." | | 7 | "Isolde had gone still, head tilted as if listening to a conversation none of them could hear." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 70 | | tagDensity | 0.114 | | leniency | 0.229 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.086 | |