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Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1J8JSKHAJ14CVZ914JF058
Run Details
Model:
Inception Mercury
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
6.2s
Cost:
$0.003262
Provider:
Inception
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
98.55%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
0.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
0.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
53.99%
Name drop frequency
(details)
0.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
20.38%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
73.08%
Sentence length variance
(details)
25.00%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
6.32%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
46.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
60.7775%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
Aurora slipped through the thicket
that guarded the edge of the Grove, her boots crunching on the dry leaves.
The sky above was a
bruised violet, the moon a thin crescent that
flickered
through the canopy.
She had followed the map
of standing stones that marked the boundary, the ancient
oaks that seemed to whisper when the wind brushed them
.
The air smelled of damp
earth and wildflowers, a scent that lingered even when the petals
were gone
. She paused at the clearing, the spot where the forest opened to a patch of mossy ground.
The Heartstone Pendant hung around
her neck, its deep crimson gem pulsing faintly.
She felt the warmth seep
into her skin, a
reminder
that she was close to something she could not yet name. The pendant’s glow was subtle, like a heartbeat in the dark.
The night was quiet, but
Aurora heard the rustle of leaves, the distant call of an owl, and the soft hiss of insects.
She brushed her fingers over
the pendant, feeling its
weight
.
She had come to the
Grove to find the Hel portal, the place where the veil between worlds thinned.
She had been told that
the portal lay beyond the standing stones, hidden in a pocket of time where minutes stretched into days.
She stepped forward, her eyes
adjusting to the dim light.
The moss under her boots
gave way to a patch of damp stone, cool to the touch.
The standing stones rose like
sentinels
, their bark weathered and ancient.
Aurora’s mind raced, recalling the
words of the benefactor who had given her the pendant. He had said, “When you find the portal, the Heartstone will guide you.” She had not known whether to trust him.
She walked closer to the
stones, feeling the air grow colder.
The wind shifted, carrying a
scent of something metallic, like iron.
Aurora’s breath fogged in the
cold.
She glanced around, but the
clearing was empty. The only sounds were the wind and the distant rustle of branches.
She turned her head, hearing
a faint
whisper
that
seemed to
come from the stone itself. “You’re not alone,”
it said, barely audible
. Aurora froze, her heart thudding in her ears.
She tried to locate the
source, but the
whisper
dissolved into the wind.
She felt a chill run
down her spine
, a sensation that was not the cold.
She pressed a hand against
the stone, feeling its rough surface. The stone
pulsed
faintly, as if it
were breathing
. Aurora’s mind
raced
, but she could not recall any story about stones that breathed. She thought of the portal, of the Hel that could open. She felt her
pulse
quicken, but she kept her composure.
She moved forward, the stones
looming
behind her. The forest around her
seemed to
close in, the trees forming a tunnel of darkness. The moonlight slipped through gaps in the canopy, casting a pale glow on the moss. Aurora’s
footsteps
echoed
faintly. The forest
seemed to
hold its breath, waiting.
She reached the center of
the clearing, where a single stone lay flat on the ground.
It was larger than the
others, its surface smooth and dark. The Heartstone Pendant
pulsed
more strongly, its glow intensifying. Aurora
could feel
the
warmth
spreading through her neck, into her shoulders. She placed a hand on the stone, feeling its coolness. The stone
shimmered
, a faint ripple of light spreading across its surface. Aurora’s breath caught. She felt as if the stone were alive, pulsing in sync with her heartbeat. The air around her grew heavy, the scent of wet earth turning sour. She could hear her own breathing, loud in the stillness. She lifted her eyes,
scanning
the darkness. The forest
seemed to
hold its breath, waiting.
The wind shifted, carrying a
sound that was not wind. It was a low, guttural hum, like a distant drum. Aurora’s head snapped around, but there was nothing. The sound
seemed to
come from the stone itself, from the
very
earth beneath her feet. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. Aurora felt a cold wind blow across her face, carrying a scent of metal. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She
tried to
move, to step back, but her feet
seemed glued to the moss
. The stone’s surface
pulsed
, a faint vibration that
resonated
through her body. Aurora’s
eyes widened
. She
could feel
the stone’s
pulse
, the Heartstone’s glow intensifying. She heard a faint rustle, a movement at the edge of her vision. She turned her head, but the clearing remained empty. The sound grew louder, a shuffling of leaves, a scraping of branches. The wind carried a metallic tang, and a
chill
that
seemed to
seep into her bones. The Heartstone’s glow
pulsed
in rhythm with her heartbeat, a steady, low thrum that
resonated
through the stone under her feet. Aurora’s eyes darted, but the darkness offered no answers. The forest
seemed to
hold its breath, waiting for something that would not come.
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3/6/2026, 12:34:21 PM
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"da1082ea-721e-460e-b330-034ae7aefc7f"
id
"chatcmpl-6e4673eb-eb8f-488d-81e9-175e23316abe"
is_byok
false
latency
106
model_permaslug
"inception/mercury"
provider_name
"Inception"
status
200
user_agent
"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer
(null)
api_type
"completions"
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"gen-1772800461-dNGjL9CBdl4yaa5pZbcg"
upstream_id
"chatcmpl-6e4673eb-eb8f-488d-81e9-175e23316abe"
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0.00326195
cache_discount
0.0001953
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Inception"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
2
tagDensity
1
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
98.55%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
3450
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
3450
totalAiIsms
191
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
1
1
word
"whisper"
count
3
2
word
"warmth"
count
2
3
word
"reminder"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
1
5
word
"sentinels"
count
1
6
word
"raced"
count
2
7
word
"chill"
count
2
8
word
"down her spine"
count
1
9
word
"pulsed"
count
31
10
word
"pulse"
count
56
11
word
"looming"
count
1
12
word
"footsteps"
count
1
13
word
"echoed"
count
1
14
word
"could feel"
count
56
15
word
"shimmered"
count
1
16
word
"scanning"
count
1
17
word
"resonated"
count
29
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"whisper"
2
"warmth"
3
"reminder"
4
"weight"
5
"sentinels"
6
"raced"
7
"chill"
8
"down her spine"
9
"pulsed"
10
"pulse"
11
"looming"
12
"footsteps"
13
"echoed"
14
"could feel"
15
"shimmered"
16
"scanning"
17
"resonated"
0.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
28
maxInWindow
9
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
28
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
307
matches
0
"felt a chill"
0.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
37
narrationSentences
307
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"tried to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
307
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
24
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
3450
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
3
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
53.99%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
130
wordCount
3437
uniqueNames
5
maxNameDensity
1.92
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Grove
2
Heartstone
58
Pendant
2
Aurora
66
Hel
2
persons
0
"Heartstone"
1
"Pendant"
2
"Aurora"
places
0
"Grove"
globalScore
0.54
windowScore
0.833
0.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
276
glossingSentenceCount
31
matches
0
"oaks that seemed to whisper when the wind brushed them"
1
"whisper that seemed to come from the stone itself"
2
"seemed glued to the moss"
3
"seemed glued to the moss"
4
"seemed glued to the moss"
5
"seemed glued to the moss"
6
"seemed glued to the moss"
7
"seemed glued to the moss"
8
"seemed glued to the moss"
9
"seemed glued to the moss"
10
"seemed glued to the moss"
11
"seemed glued to the moss"
12
"seemed glued to the moss"
13
"seemed glued to the moss"
14
"seemed glued to the moss"
15
"seemed glued to the moss"
16
"seemed glued to the moss"
17
"seemed glued to the moss"
18
"seemed glued to the moss"
19
"seemed glued to the moss"
20
"seemed glued to the moss"
21
"seemed glued to the moss"
22
"seemed glued to the moss"
23
"seemed glued to the moss"
24
"seemed glued to the moss"
25
"seemed glued to the moss"
26
"seemed glued to the moss"
27
"seemed glued to the moss"
28
"seemed glued to the moss"
29
"seemed glued to the moss"
30
"chill that seemed to seep into her bones"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
3450
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
307
matches
0
"told that the"
20.38%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
67
mean
51.49
std
11.4
cv
0.221
sampleLengths
0
78
1
62
2
75
3
74
4
48
5
59
6
55
7
50
8
58
9
52
10
59
11
58
12
40
13
40
14
58
15
40
16
58
17
40
18
58
19
40
20
58
21
40
22
58
23
40
24
58
25
40
26
58
27
40
28
58
29
40
30
58
31
40
32
58
33
40
34
58
35
40
36
58
37
40
38
58
39
40
40
58
41
40
42
58
43
40
44
58
45
40
46
58
47
40
48
58
49
40
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
307
matches
0
"were gone"
1
"been told"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
539
matches
0
"were breathing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
307
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
3437
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
39
adverbRatio
0.011347105033459412
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.0017457084666860634
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
307
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
73.08%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
307
mean
11.24
std
3.74
cv
0.333
sampleLengths
0
19
1
17
2
24
3
18
4
17
5
13
6
21
7
11
8
23
9
10
10
19
11
23
12
10
13
17
14
11
15
15
16
21
17
11
18
11
19
6
20
8
21
12
22
16
23
7
24
8
25
13
26
15
27
11
28
9
29
14
30
11
31
10
32
8
33
15
34
15
35
4
36
8
37
16
38
11
39
9
40
12
41
10
42
12
43
3
44
14
45
13
46
10
47
7
48
8
49
10
25.00%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
97
diversityRatio
0.019543973941368076
totalSentences
307
uniqueOpeners
6
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
307
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
6.32%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
164
totalSentences
307
matches
0
"She had followed the map"
1
"She paused at the clearing,"
2
"She felt the warmth seep"
3
"She brushed her fingers over"
4
"She had come to the"
5
"She had been told that"
6
"She stepped forward, her eyes"
7
"He had said, She had"
8
"She walked closer to the"
9
"She glanced around, but the"
10
"She turned her head, hearing"
11
"it said, barely audible"
12
"She tried to locate the"
13
"She felt a chill run"
14
"She pressed a hand against"
15
"She thought of the portal,"
16
"She felt her pulse quicken,"
17
"She moved forward, the stones"
18
"She reached the center of"
19
"It was larger than the"
ratio
0.534
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
307
totalSentences
307
matches
0
"Aurora slipped through the thicket"
1
"The sky above was a"
2
"She had followed the map"
3
"The air smelled of damp"
4
"She paused at the clearing,"
5
"The Heartstone Pendant hung around"
6
"She felt the warmth seep"
7
"The pendant’s glow was subtle,"
8
"The night was quiet, but"
9
"She brushed her fingers over"
10
"She had come to the"
11
"She had been told that"
12
"She stepped forward, her eyes"
13
"The moss under her boots"
14
"The standing stones rose like"
15
"Aurora’s mind raced, recalling the"
16
"He had said, She had"
17
"She walked closer to the"
18
"The wind shifted, carrying a"
19
"Aurora’s breath fogged in the"
ratio
1
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
307
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
46.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
236
technicalSentenceCount
32
matches
0
"The sky above was a bruised violet, the moon a thin crescent that flickered through the canopy."
1
"She felt a chill run down her spine, a sensation that was not the cold."
2
"She felt as if the stone were alive, pulsing in sync with her heartbeat."
3
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
4
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
5
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
6
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
7
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
8
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
9
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
10
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
11
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
12
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
13
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
14
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
15
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
16
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
17
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
18
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
19
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
20
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
21
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
22
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
23
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
24
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
25
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
26
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
27
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
28
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
29
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
30
"The stone’s surface pulsed, a faint vibration that resonated through her body."
31
"The Heartstone’s glow pulsed in rhythm with her heartbeat, a steady, low thrum that resonated through the stone under her feet."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
2
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"He had (have)"
dialogueSentences
2
tagDensity
1
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.5
effectiveRatio
0.5
60.7775%