Run: 2026-03-06-01KK1JA7S9R46JT3MP2QD2P6EV

Run Details

Duration:
5.8s
Cost:
$0.002432
Provider:
Inception

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobblestones, turning the city into a river of glass. Detective Harlow Quinn slipped her trench coat tighter, the leather watch ticking against her left wrist. She kept her eyes fixed on the figure ahead, a silhouette moving with a purpose that matched her own. “Stop,” she called, her voice cutting through the drizzle. “You’re not going anywhere.” The suspect turned, eyes flashing. “You’re not getting me, Quinn.” He lifted a hand, palm up, and a spray of water burst from the streetlamp, misting his face. “Where to?” Quinn asked, stepping forward. Her boots splashed in puddles, each step a deliberate echo. The suspect glared, then turned down a side street, disappearing into a narrow alley. Quinn followed, her breath forming a thin cloud in the cold air. The alley opened into a dimly lit passage, walls lined with old maps and black-and-white photographs. The scent of oil and old paper clung to the air. The suspect emerged at the end, pausing to look back. “Going to hide?” Quinn asked, her hand already reaching for the grip of her gun. “Not hiding,” the suspect replied, stepping into a shadowed doorway. “Just… moving.” The doorway led to a narrow stairwell, the steps slick with rain. Quinn descended, each footfall a drumbeat in the echoing tunnel. The smell grew stronger—metal, damp stone, and something sweet, like incense. At the bottom, a door marked with a faded green neon sign flickered weakly. The sign read “Raven’s Nest.” Quinn pushed the door open, and the world shifted. The bar was a sanctuary of gloom. Old maps hung from the walls, their edges frayed. Black-and-white photographs stared down from the ceiling, faces frozen in time. A low hum of conversation filled the air, punctuated by clinking glasses. The suspect slipped into a back corner, eyes scanning the room. Quinn walked straight to the bar, her gaze locking on him. “You’re not going to get away with this,” she said, her voice steady. He turned, a smirk crossing his features. “You’re not getting me, Quinn. I’ve got plans.” “Plans?” Quinn asked, leaning closer. “Plans that involve the Veil Market?” The suspect’s eyes flicked toward the back of the bar, where a bookshelf stood like a silent sentinel. “You’re getting there,” he said, and stepped toward the shelf. Quinn’s hand tightened on the handle of her gun. She slipped a book from the shelf, revealing a hidden door. The door swung inward, revealing a narrow staircase that descended into darkness. The staircase led to a platform that opened into a vast underground space. The air was thick with the scent of ozone and something metallic. The floor was slick with condensation. The space was lit by flickering lanterns, casting shadows that danced like ghosts. In the center, a crowd gathered around a table, faces obscured by masks. The suspect stood at the edge, his eyes scanning the crowd. “Follow me,” the suspect whispered, his voice barely audible over the hum of the crowd. Quinn hesitated, the weight of the decision pressing on her. She could see the Veil Market’s entrance, a door marked with a bone token. The market moved every full moon, but tonight it was open. She could hear the suspect’s footsteps echoing through the tunnels. “Tomás,” she whispered, to herself. He had once been a paramedic, now a provider of off-the-books medical care for the clique. He might be here, in the back room, dealing with the supernatural patients. She turned toward the back room, the door hidden behind a stack of crates. The smell of antiseptic mingled with the damp air. She could hear the suspect’s voice, low and urgent. “Detective Quinn,” he called, his voice echoing through the tunnels. “You’re not supposed to be here.” Quinn’s hand moved to her gun, but she hesitated. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat. She could hear the suspect’s voice, the whisper of his words. He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances. He had a supernatural origin she didn’t yet understand. She could see the suspect’s face, his eyes narrowed, his mouth set in a line. He was not a victim. He was a threat.
created_at"2026-03-06T12:35:15.889Z" 3/6/2026, 12:35:15 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.706
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2515
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2515
totalAiIsms46
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"footfall"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count3
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"sanctuary"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count2
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"sentinel"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count32
highlights
0"echo"
1"footfall"
2"echoing"
3"flickered"
4"sanctuary"
5"gloom"
6"scanning"
7"flicked"
8"sentinel"
9"weight"
10"footsteps"
11"whisper"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches34
maxInWindow14
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count33
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences248
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences248
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences253
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2514
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount2456
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Morris"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn11
Veil1
Market1
Morris32
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.849
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences177
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2514
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences253
matches(empty)
28.63% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs88
mean28.57
std7.15
cv0.25
sampleLengths
047
113
228
316
426
537
615
712
833
928
1039
1135
1215
1311
1428
1532
1644
1724
1815
1945
2034
2132
2216
2333
2434
2524
2634
2724
2834
2924
3034
3124
3234
3324
3434
3524
3634
3724
3834
3924
4034
4124
4234
4324
4434
4524
4634
4724
4834
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences248
matches
0"was lit"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs462
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences253
ratio0.004
matches
0"The smell grew stronger—metal, damp stone, and something sweet, like incense."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2463
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.0036540803897685747
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.001218026796589525
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences253
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences253
mean9.94
std4.13
cv0.415
sampleLengths
012
116
219
39
44
55
623
76
810
914
1012
1116
1211
1310
1415
1510
162
1712
1810
1911
2014
2114
227
239
2411
2512
2611
2711
2813
297
308
315
326
3318
3410
359
3611
3712
3813
3912
406
4113
4213
4311
4415
4510
4614
4711
4810
495
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats74
diversityRatio0.08300395256916997
totalSentences253
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences248
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount211
totalSentences248
matches
0"She kept her eyes fixed"
1"she called, her voice cutting"
2"He lifted a hand, palm"
3"Her boots splashed in puddles,"
4"she said, her voice steady"
5"He turned, a smirk crossing"
6"he said, and stepped toward"
7"She slipped a book from"
8"She could see the Veil"
9"She could hear the suspect’s"
10"she whispered, to herself"
11"He had once been a"
12"He might be here, in"
13"She turned toward the back"
14"She could hear the suspect’s"
15"he called, his voice echoing"
16"She could see the suspect’s"
17"He was not a victim."
18"He was a threat."
19"She could hear the suspect’s"
ratio0.851
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount243
totalSentences248
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn slipped her"
1"She kept her eyes fixed"
2"she called, her voice cutting"
3"The suspect turned, eyes flashing."
4"He lifted a hand, palm"
5"Quinn asked, stepping forward"
6"Her boots splashed in puddles,"
7"The suspect glared, then turned"
8"Quinn followed, her breath forming"
9"The alley opened into a"
10"The scent of oil and"
11"The suspect emerged at the"
12"Quinn asked, her hand already"
13"the suspect replied, stepping into"
14"The doorway led to a"
15"Quinn descended, each footfall a"
16"The smell grew stronger—metal, damp"
17"The sign read Quinn pushed"
18"The bar was a sanctuary"
19"A low hum of conversation"
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences248
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences129
technicalSentenceCount35
matches
0"She kept her eyes fixed on the figure ahead, a silhouette moving with a purpose that matched her own."
1"The door swung inward, revealing a narrow staircase that descended into darkness."
2"The staircase led to a platform that opened into a vast underground space."
3"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
4"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
5"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
6"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
7"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
8"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
9"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
10"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
11"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
12"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
13"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
14"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
15"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
16"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
17"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
18"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
19"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
20"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
21"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
22"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
23"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
24"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
25"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
26"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
27"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
28"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
29"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
30"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
31"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
32"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
33"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
34"He was a man who had lost his partner, DS Morris, under unexplained circumstances."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she called, her voice cutting through the drizzle"
1"Quinn asked, her hand already reaching for the grip of her gun"
2"Quinn pushed, and the world shifted"
3"she said, her voice steady"
4"the suspect whispered, his voice barely audible over the hum of the crowd"
5"he called, his voice echoing through the tunnels"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the suspect whispered (whisper)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.588
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
65.9614%