| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 65 | | tagDensity | 0.046 | | leniency | 0.092 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2318 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 67.64% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2318 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "throb" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 189 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 189 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 251 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2312 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 71 | | wordCount | 1988 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.81 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 36 | | Isolde | 15 | | Nyx | 14 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-sweet | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.595 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 135 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like oak trunks blackened by fire" | | 1 | "note that seemed to come from the white petals nodding beside her boots" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.433 | | wordCount | 2312 | | matches | | 0 | "not breaking the masonry but threaded through it, as if stone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 251 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 125 | | mean | 18.5 | | std | 25.43 | | cv | 1.375 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 109 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 60 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 88 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 93 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 42 | | 46 | 31 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 189 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 322 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.18% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 251 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "Inside, wildflowers pressed against the bases of the stones in a thick bright collar—foxglove, bluebells, poppies, blossoms Rory could not name, all open to a pale afternoon that should not have coaxed any of them out." | | 1 | "One stride put frost under her heel and the next plunged her calf-deep into spring scent—crushed mint, wet earth, apple peel, rain on warm dust." | | 2 | "Light leaked through the canopy in layers—gold, green, and once a startling wash of violet that crossed her hands and vanished." | | 3 | "Each carried carvings so worn they seemed to move when Rory stared too long—faces becoming antlers, antlers becoming branches, branches becoming hands." | | 4 | "At first she heard only the clearing—the mutter of bees, the silk-on-stone drag of tall grass, a distant liquid note from somewhere under the platform." | | 5 | "One moment she stood below; the next she stood beside a cracked basin at the centre of the platform." | | 6 | "Ripples spread, each one carrying a different colour—amber, green, violet, then a bruised red that stained the water’s edge before fading." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2003 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "black, bead-bright eyes," | | 1 | "White star-shaped flowers" |
| | adverbCount | 60 | | adverbRatio | 0.029955067398901646 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0044932601098352475 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 251 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 251 | | mean | 9.21 | | std | 7.18 | | cv | 0.78 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 49 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 59.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3784860557768924 | | totalSentences | 251 | | uniqueOpeners | 95 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead it gathered around them," | | 1 | "Then it unfolded into something" | | 2 | "Twice Rory glanced down and" | | 3 | "Then something else emerged." | | 4 | "Just a deep red throb," | | 5 | "Then the reflection slipped." |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "Their violet eyes fixed on" | | 1 | "Her phone joined it after" | | 2 | "Her fingers brushed the crescent" | | 3 | "She squared her shoulders and" | | 4 | "Her ears filled, popped, and" | | 5 | "They looked taller inside the" | | 6 | "Their trunks rose smooth and" | | 7 | "She pulled her sleeve up" | | 8 | "It flowed uphill." | | 9 | "She crouched, balanced on the" | | 10 | "Their reflection did not appear" | | 11 | "She did not break the" | | 12 | "It watched her with black," | | 13 | "They left the stream behind." | | 14 | "They rose too straight for" | | 15 | "She glided ahead, silver hair" | | 16 | "It arched above them in" | | 17 | "She stood at the foot" | | 18 | "Their shape tightened." | | 19 | "It rose through the soles" |
| | ratio | 0.14 | |
| 71.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 133 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Frost silvered the field outside" | | 2 | "Rory stopped a step short" | | 3 | "Nyx stood to her left" | | 4 | "The weak daylight should have" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes fixed on" | | 6 | "Isolde waited between two stones" | | 7 | "Rory glanced down at her" | | 8 | "Rory blew out a breath," | | 9 | "Her phone joined it after" | | 10 | "Isolde tipped her head" | | 11 | "Nyx lifted one long hand." | | 12 | "A coin dropped from somewhere" | | 13 | "Rory cut them a look." | | 14 | "Nyx turned their face towards" | | 15 | "The grass nearest the threshold" | | 16 | "Isolde stepped backwards into bloom" | | 17 | "Rory touched the Heartstone through" | | 18 | "The pendant sat warm from" | | 19 | "Her fingers brushed the crescent" |
| | ratio | 0.778 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 171 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 80.36% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Inside, wildflowers pressed against the bases of the stones in a thick bright collar—foxglove, bluebells, poppies, blossoms Rory could not name, all open to a p…" | | 1 | "The grass nearest the threshold leaned away from them, each blade bending as if a current slid past." | | 2 | "Silence pressed in for one strange beat, broad and listening, then the grove unfolded its own noise around her: a low drift of bees, leaves murmuring in a langu…" | | 3 | "The pool hung there in a perfect round mirror, its surface trembling without spilling." | | 4 | "It watched her with black, bead-bright eyes, then crawled backwards into a knot in the trunk and disappeared as if the wood had swallowed it." | | 5 | "A low vibration that touched the hinges of her jaw and the bones around her eyes." | | 6 | "Something harsher sat under it, a char and spice edge that did not belong in this green place." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 65 | | tagDensity | 0.015 | | leniency | 0.031 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.031 | |