| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.211 | | leniency | 0.421 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2517 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 74.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2517 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "chilled" | | 9 | "porcelain" | | 10 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 223 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 223 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 283 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2514 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 82 | | wordCount | 2091 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.96 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 41 | | Isolde | 17 | | Nyx | 17 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Relief | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Relief" | | 4 | "One" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.52 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 96.43% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 140 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like someone dragging a chair acro" | | 1 | "sounded like glass struck with a fingernai" | | 2 | "as if watching its reflection" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.398 | | wordCount | 2514 | | matches | | 0 | "not to be dust at all but tiny insects carrying sparks in their abdomens" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 283 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 156 | | mean | 16.12 | | std | 18.86 | | cv | 1.17 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 77 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 43 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 65 | | 48 | 82 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 223 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 340 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 283 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "Then scent—wet bark, crushed mint, smoke from a fire that used no wood, and something sweet underneath it that she could not name." | | 1 | "From their branches hung fruit in impossible shapes—pearled clusters, glassy pods, spheres that held slow-turning colour inside them like smoke trapped in amber." | | 2 | "The screen had filled with time stamps that changed each second—18:14, 02:03, 18:14 again, then a date from three months ago, then no numbers at all." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2102 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.028068506184586107 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0009514747859181732 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 283 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 283 | | mean | 8.88 | | std | 6.62 | | cv | 0.745 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 47.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.31802120141342755 | | totalSentences | 283 | | uniqueOpeners | 90 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "Dark green, thick as midsummer." | | 1 | "Then the stone in front" | | 2 | "More like the ache in" | | 3 | "Then scent—wet bark, crushed mint," | | 4 | "Then Rory let out the" | | 5 | "Flat black water filled it" | | 6 | "Then it vanished and the" | | 7 | "Only fern and silver bark." | | 8 | "Somewhere among the roots, something" | | 9 | "Then a petal landed on" |
| | ratio | 0.052 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "They crowded around a cluster" | | 1 | "Their outline never sat still." | | 2 | "Their voice brushed Rory’s ear" | | 3 | "Her own breath." | | 4 | "She took a step closer." | | 5 | "They did not stretch away" | | 6 | "They clung to trunks and" | | 7 | "Her stomach turned over." | | 8 | "She stood beneath a vault" | | 9 | "It climbed a slope instead" | | 10 | "Its head resembled a fish." | | 11 | "Its body unravelled into a" | | 12 | "She pulled back." | | 13 | "It vanished before Rory could" | | 14 | "They moved deeper." | | 15 | "Their fronds had silver undersides." | | 16 | "They did not sway with" | | 17 | "They drifted to their own" | | 18 | "It glanced at them with" | | 19 | "They had gone thinner here." |
| | ratio | 0.172 | |
| 79.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 146 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "The road noise from Richmond" | | 1 | "Those trees kept their leaves." | | 2 | "They crowded around a cluster" | | 3 | "Rory stopped at the first" | | 4 | "The Heartstone lay cold against" | | 5 | "That settled one thing." | | 6 | "Isolde stood beyond the stones" | | 7 | "Nyx drifted out from the" | | 8 | "Their outline never sat still." | | 9 | "Edges loosened, tightened, loosened again." | | 10 | "Violet eyes glimmered in the" | | 11 | "Their voice brushed Rory’s ear" | | 12 | "A distant bird." | | 13 | "Her own breath." | | 14 | "She took a step closer." | | 15 | "Lichen spread over the stone" | | 16 | "Threads of silver ran through" | | 17 | "Isolde lifted one hand and" | | 18 | "The silver lichen flared and" | | 19 | "A faint shimmer rippled across" |
| | ratio | 0.76 | |
| 26.04% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 192 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.005 | |
| 81.88% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood beneath a vault of branches that twisted into each other far overhead, their bark silver on one side and black on the other, as if day and night had b…" | | 1 | "It climbed a slope instead of descending it, clear water threading uphill through stones that glowed from within." | | 2 | "Its body unravelled into a ribbon of translucent fronds that trailed in the current like pondweed." | | 3 | "The stream veered around her hand before she touched it, splitting into two narrow currents that rejoined on the other side." | | 4 | "Nothing but bramble and a stand of white-barked trees, each trunk marked with thin lines that resembled handwriting." | | 5 | "From their branches hung fruit in impossible shapes—pearled clusters, glassy pods, spheres that held slow-turning colour inside them like smoke trapped in amber…" | | 6 | "In the centre rose a tree older than the rest, its bark folded into deep ridges that resembled drapery frozen in mid-fall." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.05% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.211 | | leniency | 0.421 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.158 | |