| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 69 | | tagDensity | 0.13 | | leniency | 0.261 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2011 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 67.68% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2011 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "reminder" | | 1 | "quivered" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "almost alive" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "flicked" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "let out a breath" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 175 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 175 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 235 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2014 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 64 | | wordCount | 1692 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.54 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | August | 1 | | Rory | 26 | | Veil | 2 | | Nyx | 12 | | Isolde | 14 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Keeper | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Keeper" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "August" |
| | globalScore | 0.732 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if measuring the lie for style rather than truth" | | 1 | "as if making room" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2014 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 235 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 130 | | mean | 15.49 | | std | 17.99 | | cv | 1.161 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 50 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 80 | | 42 | 41 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 175 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 276 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.22% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 235 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "Lichen glazed them in silver-green patches, and old cuts bit through the weathering — spirals, antlers, a line of little crowned faces with their mouths carved open." | | 1 | "For one breath she felt every layer of air at once — winter damp from the park, the sweet rot of leaves, hot metal, crushed mint, woodsmoke, rain on stone." | | 2 | "The shadows here did not belong to them; they ran in odd directions, cast by flowers and stones and nothing at all." | | 3 | "Images flashed in them too fast to catch — a winter hill, a woman running, a red-lit doorway, a table set with silver plates, an empty chair." |
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| 96.31% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1696 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 75 | | adverbRatio | 0.044221698113207544 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0047169811320754715 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 235 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 235 | | mean | 8.57 | | std | 6.98 | | cv | 0.814 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 49.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3276595744680851 | | totalSentences | 235 | | uniqueOpeners | 77 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a small, hard reminder" | | 1 | "Instead it sharpened, a clear" | | 2 | "Then she squared her shoulders" | | 3 | "Then it let go." | | 4 | "Then sharp citrus, then the" | | 5 | "Then it sneezed a spray" | | 6 | "Even the flowers seemed to" | | 7 | "Too tall for a man." | | 8 | "Too narrow for a deer." |
| | ratio | 0.057 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "Their right arm blurred, then" | | 1 | "It should have vanished when" | | 2 | "Her face had that smooth," | | 3 | "Her own boots had already" | | 4 | "It bent around her fingers" | | 5 | "Their outline frayed, broke into" | | 6 | "It felt warm, almost alive," | | 7 | "She looked up and found" | | 8 | "Its wings carried patterns like" | | 9 | "She laughed before she could" | | 10 | "They walked deeper." | | 11 | "Its water showed a night" | | 12 | "Her face looked older in" | | 13 | "She jerked back." | | 14 | "They moved on." | | 15 | "Its fur carried the red" | | 16 | "It opened its mouth." | | 17 | "Their scales flashed green, then" | | 18 | "It carried no echo." | | 19 | "It crossed one shaft of" |
| | ratio | 0.166 | |
| 49.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 129 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones hid in" | | 1 | "Rory stopped at the edge" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted beside her in" | | 3 | "Their right arm blurred, then" | | 4 | "A pair of faint violet" | | 5 | "The stones rose from the" | | 6 | "Oak roots coiled over their" | | 7 | "Lichen glazed them in silver-green" | | 8 | "Wind moved through the grass" | | 9 | "Rory took one step closer." | | 10 | "The Heartstone pendant under her" | | 11 | "Nyx lowered their head." | | 12 | "The air between two stones" | | 13 | "A faint wobble, like heat" | | 14 | "It should have vanished when" | | 15 | "A woman stood beyond it" | | 16 | "Her face had that smooth," | | 17 | "Rory folded her arms." | | 18 | "Isolde stepped forward." | | 19 | "Dew clung to the grass" |
| | ratio | 0.822 | |
| 31.85% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "Now and then one broke" |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 51.02% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted beside her in a shape that almost held like a person, tall and spare, the morning light passing through the edges of them as if it could not decide …" | | 1 | "Instead it sharpened, a clear skin stretched across the gap, trembling with colours that did not belong in morning light." | | 2 | "The standing stones still stood behind her, but they now rose from a meadow that could not fit inside Richmond Park or anywhere near it." | | 3 | "It felt warm, almost alive, as if something large slept inside it and had rolled against the surface." | | 4 | "The surface held black depth far beyond the hollow that contained it." | | 5 | "At the sound, the floating ribbon of water tightened, drawing nearer to the bark as if making room." | | 6 | "Nyx spread at the edges, their shoulders widening, darkness deepening around their hands." | | 7 | "The moss beneath them felt soft as thick carpet, but something firmer pressed under the give, as if stones lay buried just below the surface in careful lines." | | 8 | "It pointed deeper into the trees, where the white trunks gave way to something older and stranger: columns of living wood twisted together, roots arching overhe…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.03% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 3 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 69 | | tagDensity | 0.116 | | leniency | 0.232 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.116 | |