Run: 2026-03-09-01KK9QESV52DZHJ8F18K3AZW1G

Run Details

Duration:
2m 4s
Cost:
$0.067960
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
By the time Aurora reached the oak line, Richmond Park had emptied itself of people and noise. The roads beyond the dark grass still carried London in fragments — a siren far off, a bus changing gear, a burst of laughter that snapped shut as if someone had closed a door on it — but the path ahead had no part in any of that. It ran between black trunks and silvered fern, straight towards the standing stones. The Heartstone hung beneath her jumper, warm against the centre of her chest. Not a cosy warmth. A live one. It had started pulsing on her last delivery, right as she turned west with a bag of sweet and sour chicken balanced on the back of her bike. It had kept going through the ride home, through the walk to the station, through the lie she'd left on Eva's voicemail about an early night. When she'd opened the drawer where she'd hidden the pendant's box, the folded slip of paper had still sat inside it. When it wakes, take it to the oak stones in Richmond after dark. Go alone. She stopped short of the first stone and looked up at it. Ancient oak stood behind the ring like a judge behind a dock. The stones themselves rose shoulder-high from the earth, thick with moss, narrow on one side, broad on the other, as if they'd been turned to catch some old wind that no longer blew here. Wildflowers crowded their base. Foxglove. White anemone. Buttercups. In March. "Right," she murmured into the dark. "You've had your dramatic entrance. Do something useful." Her own voice reached the next tree and went no further. She pulled her phone from her pocket. Two bars. The lock screen read 23:58. The battery showed forty-two percent. Good enough. She opened the recorder and held it near her mouth. "Richmond Park. Midnight. Anonymous instructions. Strange gemstone. If I get murdered by druids, this goes in evidence." The red timer began to count. She slipped the phone into her coat pocket without stopping the recording. Her free hand found the small crescent scar on her left wrist, thumb rubbing across the pale ridge once, hard, then dropping away. The old habit steadied her. Five steps took her through the stones. The park vanished. Not literally. The trees remained. The path remained, though it narrowed at once and lost its neat council-maintained edge. Grass thickened into shining blades wet to the ankle. Branches wove overhead and swallowed what little sky the park had left. But the city went out like a switched lamp. No tyres. No planes. No hum under the silence. The air changed as well. It carried the smell of wet earth and crushed green stems, but under that sat something sweet and overripe, almost floral, almost rotten, as if a hothouse had been sealed for a year and cracked open tonight. Aurora looked back. The stones still stood behind her, only ten feet away. Too far. She'd walked five steps. The gap should have been nothing. Instead it stretched long and wrong, the flowers between her and the boundary packed so densely they looked woven. "Fine," she said. The pendant gave a small pulse, warm enough to sting. She took it out from under her jumper. The crimson stone caught the moonlight and gave it back from somewhere deep inside itself, a low inner glow that did not belong to reflection. It beat once in her palm. Once more. Then it turned, not by any movement she made, but by a slow, deliberate drag on the silver chain, until the tip of the stone pointed down the path between the trees. "Of course you did." She crouched and picked a flat stone from the path. With the key from her flat, she scraped a white mark into the nearest standing stone at shoulder height: a crude arrow pointing back out. She straightened and walked on. The grove widened in pieces. One moment she moved between oak trunks close enough to touch with both hands; the next the trees had stepped back and left her in a clearing cluttered with low white flowers that opened under the moon like little mouths. The ground gave underfoot, springy with moss. Her boots made almost no sound. The pendant grew hotter. Then she heard a knife on wood. Tok. Tok. Tok-tok. Tok. She stopped. The chopping carried from somewhere to her left. Quick, even, practical. Not ritual drums. Not branches tapping in wind. A cook's rhythm. A cleaver through spring onion. A blade through ribs of pak choi. She knew that sound. She'd spent enough evenings squeezed beside the service counter at Golden Empress, waiting for Yu-Fei to shove a tied bag into her hands and bark a postcode. Tok. Tok. Tok-tok. Tok. The noise shifted deeper into the trees, still to her left, as if the invisible kitchen had picked itself up and moved. "No," Aurora said to it. "You don't get to borrow that." The chopping stopped. Something in the flowers ahead bent down. Not with a gust; the air sat still. A ripple travelled through the patch, a line pressing low as though a body had moved on all fours beneath the stems. It crossed the path, vanished into bracken, and left every bloom standing again. Aurora kept her torch off. The moon gave enough light to make shapes. Torchlight would only carve holes in it. She walked another twenty paces and took out her phone. The recorder still ran. 12:31:44 She frowned. She'd been in the grove for minutes. She checked the top corner of the screen. 01:17. The second hand on the lock screen clock ticked twice, froze, and then leapt forward seven seconds. "No. Absolutely not." Her voice came back from somewhere ahead, low and blurred by leaves. Absolutely not. She lifted her head. The path lay empty. Oak, fern, white flowers, dark. No person. No animal. Aurora turned slowly in a full circle, keeping her feet planted. Her breath misted once and faded. The grove held itself with a listening stillness. "That's clever," she called. "Not original. Clever." From behind her right shoulder, three feet away, a bicycle bell rang. A small, bright trill. The exact note her delivery bike made when the thumb lever stuck halfway down. Her whole body locked. She didn't turn at once. She let the sound settle in her bones, named it, placed it, refused the rush that wanted to seize her neck and swing her round blind. Then she pivoted. Nothing stood there. Only a mossed boulder sunk in flowers, and behind it a yew so old its trunk had split into three twisting columns. No bike. No rider. No silver flash of wheel. She backed to the nearest oak and pressed her palm against the bark. Solid. Ridged. Damp. Real enough to scratch skin. "Think," she whispered. She took a receipt from her pocket, one she'd crumpled there after a late order in Barnes, and wedged it into a split in the bark at eye level. Bright white paper against dark trunk. Then she walked on. The path dipped. Cold gathered in the hollow. Not winter cold. Cellar cold. Stone corridor cold. The Heartstone burned against her palm now, each pulse running heat through her fingers. Trees crowded close again. Their roots broke the earth like knuckled hands. Somewhere overhead, leaves stirred, though no wind touched her face. She came upon a pool no wider than a table, black as a pupil. Moonlight sat on the surface in a thin silver line. No frogs. No insects. No ring from a dropping leaf. Her reflection leaned over it and wavered. Then the reflection looked up before she did. Aurora jerked back so hard her heel slipped in the mud. The water shivered and lost the image. She stood very still, breath shallow now, and watched the pool settle. When the reflection returned, it matched her. "That was cheap," she muttered. The pendant tugged again. Straight past the pool. Towards a break in the trees where pale stems rose in a knot. She skirted the water and entered a stand of birch. Their bark shone bone-white in the dark. Strips peeled from the trunks and hung like curling fingernails. Here the wrongness changed shape. It had sat at the edges before; now it moved into the centre. The place knew she had noticed. Leaves cracked somewhere behind her. One step. Then another. Not an echo. Her boots sank into moss with a damp hush. These steps landed on dry matter. Crisp. Careful. Someone pacing her, just far enough back to stay out of sight each time she looked. Aurora stopped. The steps stopped. She started again. They followed. She veered off the path without warning, cut left through a swathe of foxglove, ducked under a low branch and flattened herself behind the split trunk of an oak. Silence. Her breath warmed her knuckles. She counted without moving her lips. One. Two. Three. A shadow slid across the flowers ten yards ahead. Thin. Upright. It passed between two birches, where the moon should have revealed whatever cast it. Nothing crossed the open ground. The shadow continued anyway, smooth as ink in water, and climbed the white bark of the nearest tree before folding itself into the branch line above. Aurora's throat tightened. "All right," she said, too softly. Then louder: "If you're here for the pendant, queue up." The flowers in front of her bowed, one after another, in a neat line leading deeper into the grove. No breeze touched her hair. The recorder in her pocket crackled. She snatched the phone out. Static hissed from the speaker. She hadn't turned playback on. The recording screen still showed live, timer rolling, but under the static another sound began to form: fabric rustling, leaves brushing, her own breathing — and beneath that, a second breath, slower than hers, close enough to blur the microphone. Aurora held the phone away from her ear. On the screen, a waveform rose and fell in two distinct patterns. "No." The static cut clean. A voice spoke from the phone speaker. "Richmond Park. Midnight. Anonymous instructions." Her voice. Flat, exact, lifted from the start of the recording. "If I get murdered by druids, this goes in evidence." The line ended in a small sound she had not made earlier: a wet inhale through teeth. Aurora thumbed the recording off. The screen went dark. In it, for an instant, another face hovered over her shoulder — pale oval, no features, only the shape where features should have been. She spun. Empty birches. White bark. Dark seams between them. Then, from behind the tree where she'd hidden moments before, her own voice drifted out into the grove. "That's clever. Not original. Clever." The words came back ruined. Not louder. Not monstrous. Just spoken by a mouth that had watched human mouths and missed the work of them. Aurora moved before the echo died. She jammed the phone in her pocket, wrapped the chain of the pendant round her fist until the silver bit her skin, and strode towards the original path, angling for the standing stones, for the park, for streetlamps and buses and drunks spilling out of pubs. The birches thinned. The path did not appear. Instead she stepped into the same clearing she'd crossed ten minutes ago — or an hour, or a day — with the low white flowers opening under the moon. The mossed boulder sat to her right. The three-trunked yew loomed behind it. Her own scratched arrow marked the standing stone beyond. Only now the arrow pointed into the grove.
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native_tokens_reasoning1913
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1943
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1943
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"absolutely"
count2
4
word"wavered"
count1
5
word"echo"
count2
6
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"silence"
2"pulse"
3"absolutely"
4"wavered"
5"echo"
6"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences228
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences228
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences238
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1949
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1868
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Tok"
discoveredNames
Aurora11
Richmond2
Park1
London1
Heartstone2
Eva1
March1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Barnes1
One3
Tok8
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
3"Empress"
4"Barnes"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"March"
4"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences106
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.513
wordCount1949
matches
0"not by any movement she made, but by a slow, deliberate drag on the silver chain, until the ti"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences238
matches
0"knew that sound"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs107
mean18.21
std19.81
cv1.088
sampleLengths
078
174
221
315
412
556
614
711
831
917
106
1140
127
133
14100
153
1610
172
1829
193
2010
2141
2232
234
2435
255
2662
277
284
292
3065
314
3222
3311
343
3550
3620
3710
384
391
4017
411
4217
433
4412
452
464
4713
4825
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences228
matches
0"been turned"
1"been sealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs295
matches(empty)
58.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences238
ratio0.029
matches
0"The roads beyond the dark grass still carried London in fragments — a siren far off, a bus changing gear, a burst of laughter that snapped shut as if someone had closed a door on it — but the path ahead had no part in any of that."
1"One moment she moved between oak trunks close enough to touch with both hands; the next the trees had stepped back and left her in a clearing cluttered with low white flowers that opened under the moon like little mouths."
2"Not with a gust; the air sat still."
3"It had sat at the edges before; now it moved into the centre."
4"The recording screen still showed live, timer rolling, but under the static another sound began to form: fabric rustling, leaves brushing, her own breathing — and beneath that, a second breath, slower than hers, close enough to blur the microphone."
5"In it, for an instant, another face hovered over her shoulder — pale oval, no features, only the shape where features should have been."
6"Instead she stepped into the same clearing she'd crossed ten minutes ago — or an hour, or a day — with the low white flowers opening under the moon."
92.50% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1870
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"neat council-maintained edge."
adverbCount78
adverbRatio0.04171122994652406
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.0058823529411764705
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences238
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences238
mean8.19
std8.42
cv1.028
sampleLengths
017
148
213
313
44
53
628
726
821
913
102
1112
1212
1334
144
151
162
171
182
196
208
2111
227
232
245
255
262
2710
2817
296
3012
3123
325
337
343
352
363
3714
389
3912
409
412
422
435
445
4537
463
4710
482
494
44.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.3347457627118644
totalSentences236
uniqueOpeners79
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount14
totalSentences170
matches
0"Instead it stretched long and"
1"Then it turned, not by"
2"Then she heard a knife"
3"Then she pivoted."
4"Only a mossed boulder sunk"
5"Bright white paper against dark"
6"Then she walked on."
7"Somewhere overhead, leaves stirred, though"
8"Then the reflection looked up"
9"Flat, exact, lifted from the"
10"Then, from behind the tree"
11"Just spoken by a mouth"
12"Instead she stepped into the"
13"Only now the arrow pointed"
ratio0.082
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences170
matches
0"It ran between black trunks"
1"It had started pulsing on"
2"It had kept going through"
3"She stopped short of the"
4"she murmured into the dark"
5"Her own voice reached the"
6"She pulled her phone from"
7"She opened the recorder and"
8"She slipped the phone into"
9"Her free hand found the"
10"It carried the smell of"
11"She'd walked five steps."
12"She took it out from"
13"It beat once in her"
14"She crouched and picked a"
15"She straightened and walked on."
16"Her boots made almost no"
17"She knew that sound."
18"She'd spent enough evenings squeezed"
19"It crossed the path, vanished"
ratio0.288
86.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount127
totalSentences170
matches
0"The roads beyond the dark"
1"It ran between black trunks"
2"The Heartstone hung beneath her"
3"A live one."
4"It had started pulsing on"
5"It had kept going through"
6"She stopped short of the"
7"The stones themselves rose shoulder-high"
8"Wildflowers crowded their base."
9"she murmured into the dark"
10"Her own voice reached the"
11"She pulled her phone from"
12"The lock screen read 23:58."
13"The battery showed forty-two percent."
14"She opened the recorder and"
15"The red timer began to"
16"She slipped the phone into"
17"Her free hand found the"
18"The old habit steadied her."
19"The park vanished."
ratio0.747
29.41% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences170
matches
0"By the time Aurora reached"
ratio0.006
52.15% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The roads beyond the dark grass still carried London in fragments — a siren far off, a bus changing gear, a burst of laughter that snapped shut as if someone ha…"
1"The stones themselves rose shoulder-high from the earth, thick with moss, narrow on one side, broad on the other, as if they'd been turned to catch some old win…"
2"It carried the smell of wet earth and crushed green stems, but under that sat something sweet and overripe, almost floral, almost rotten, as if a hothouse had b…"
3"The crimson stone caught the moonlight and gave it back from somewhere deep inside itself, a low inner glow that did not belong to reflection."
4"One moment she moved between oak trunks close enough to touch with both hands; the next the trees had stepped back and left her in a clearing cluttered with low…"
5"The noise shifted deeper into the trees, still to her left, as if the invisible kitchen had picked itself up and moved."
6"A ripple travelled through the patch, a line pressing low as though a body had moved on all fours beneath the stems."
7"She let the sound settle in her bones, named it, placed it, refused the rush that wanted to seize her neck and swing her round blind."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.333
85.3673%