Run: 2026-03-09-01KK9QGTMG43HGG2XNAVGHXW5G

Run Details

Duration:
1m 50s
Cost:
$0.059639
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last dog walker vanished behind a rise in Richmond Park, and the evening folded over the grass like a lid. Aurora stopped at the line of oaks and looked for whatever made this stretch of park different from the rest. At first she saw only trunks black with rain, fern heads uncurling in the undergrowth, a drift of mist caught low between the roots. Then the mist shivered. It did not move with the wind. It tightened, silver and thin, across a ring of ancient stones half-buried in moss. The air there bent like heat above tarmac, except the light around it ran cold. Aurora touched the crescent scar on her left wrist with her thumb. “So that’s it.” Nyx stood a pace behind her in a narrow shape stolen from the evening, violet eyes hanging in the dark where a face ought to have been. The grass beneath them held shadow longer than the rest of the field. Their outline blurred at the edges, as if the grove had begun to pull at them before they crossed. “The boundary watches back,” they murmured. Their voice slipped through the oak leaves and came out from the wrong direction. Isolde waited inside the stone ring. Her silver hair spilled to her waist, bright even in the failing light. Wildflowers crowded round her bare feet, white and blue and a red so deep it looked wet. The earth under those feet lay untouched. No print. No bent blade. She might have been painted into the clearing. “You came before the park forgot you,” she said. Aurora took one more look over her shoulder. The path behind them still lay where it should, pale and ordinary, leading back to roads, buses, a city that argued with itself long after midnight. She pulled her jacket tighter and faced the stones. “You could have met us nearer the gate.” “You could have worn shoes fit for wonder.” Aurora glanced at her scuffed boots. “They’ve got me this far.” Isolde’s mouth bent in something that nearly became a smile. “Then let them carry you farther. Step through the old teeth. Speak no true name if the grove asks. Take nothing that bleeds light.” Nyx tilted their head. “It asks questions?” “Only of those who answer.” Aurora let out a short breath. “Useful as ever.” She stepped between the standing stones. The park dropped away in one clean cut. The damp, metallic smell of London after rain vanished. Another scent rushed in: crushed mint, cold water, bark split under frost, and something sweet beneath it all, ripe and thick as overfilled fruit. The air touched her face with more weight than air should have carried. Her ears popped. Behind her, Nyx crossed next. The shadows around their body stretched wide, then snapped back into shape. Isolde turned and moved deeper into the clearing, and still the grass did not bend under her. Aurora looked back. The stone ring remained behind them, but not the park. Beyond the gap stood a long corridor of trees she had not seen from outside, their trunks pale as old bone and so broad three people linking arms would not have circled one. Their branches rose and braided together high overhead, making a vaulted roof of leaves lit from beneath by a green-gold glow that had no clear source. Between the roots spread flowers in every season at once: bluebells, foxgloves, roses with petals dusted in silver, tiny star-shaped blooms opening from mats of snow. Warm air drifted through cold pockets. Somewhere water chimed. Aurora slipped her phone from her pocket and checked the screen. No signal. The time flickered, blanked, returned an hour earlier, then later, then settled on a row of empty white bars. “Brilliant.” Nyx leaned close without sound. The temperature around them dipped. “Your little rectangle has become polite. It refuses to count here.” Ahead, Isolde raised one hand, and a path revealed itself between low thorn bushes hung with glass-clear berries. It had not been there a moment ago. Aurora could have sworn the bushes touched before the seer moved. She followed. The ground felt springy, like moss laid over old wood. Now and then a root pulsed beneath her sole, slow and steady, as if something large and sleeping breathed under the whole grove. Small lights drifted in the air at shoulder height. They looked like seeds until one brushed her sleeve and unfolded six gauze wings before settling on a fern. Moth. Dragonfly. Neither. Its body shone with a faint inner blue. Nyx tracked it with those pale violet eyes. “It has no shadow.” Aurora stopped. The creature lifted from the fern. On the underside of each wing sat a dark mark shaped like an eye. All six marks blinked shut at once. It darted away into the trees. “Right,” Aurora muttered. “That’s worse.” “Only if you insist on being looked at,” Isolde called from ahead. The chiming water grew louder. They came upon a stream no wider than a kitchen table, clear enough to show each grain of white sand on the bottom. It ran uphill. Not quickly. Not with violence. It simply moved against the slope in a smooth, patient climb, carrying silver leaves towards a rise where no source waited. Aurora crouched at the bank. Her reflection stared up from the water, but the face on the surface turned a beat too late. She held still. So did it. A strand of black hair slipped across her cheek. In the water the hair slid the wrong way. She drew back at once. “Please tell me that was normal.” “Normal is a fence built by frightened men,” Isolde said. “That’ll be a no, then.” Nyx knelt beside the stream. Their hand, all dusk and smoke, dipped two fingers into the current. The water darkened around them and rang like a struck glass rim. “It tastes of moonstone and iron.” Aurora looked over. “You drank it with your hand?” “I do many things with my hands.” She barked a laugh before she could stop herself. The sound bounced off the trees and came back threaded with another laugh, thinner, higher, not hers. It came from somewhere beyond the stream. Then it vanished. The back of her neck tightened. “Was that the grove?” Isolde turned her face towards the sound, pale eyes fixed on nothing Aurora could see. “Not everything old here sleeps.” Aurora straightened. “That answer did nothing for me.” “Then it served its purpose.” A narrow bridge arched over the stream, woven from living roots, white on the outside and gold in the cracks. Aurora stepped onto it and felt a faint tremor underfoot, not loose, not weak, more like muscle shifting. She crossed anyway. Halfway over she glanced down and saw shapes moving beneath the sand: fish made of light, long as forearms, gliding with slow bends of their bodies. One rolled to show a human eye, grey and unblinking. She quickened her pace. On the far bank the trees grew stranger. Their bark bore lines like script, not carved but grown into the wood. The branches held fruit in impossible combinations: pears skinned in velvet black, apples clear as blown sugar with seeds suspended at the centre, plums furred in silver. One split on its own as they passed and released a scent of burnt rosemary and summer rain. Aurora’s stomach clenched with sudden hunger so sharp it felt planted in her rather than natural. Nyx caught her wrist before her hand reached for the branch. “Don’t.” She looked down. Her fingers had lifted without permission. The scar on her left wrist showed white against Nyx’s shadow-dark hand. “I wasn’t—” “You were.” Isolde stopped beside a low tree whose leaves flashed from green to copper and back again whenever Aurora blinked. “The grove feeds what enters it. Hunger first. Then grief. Then memory. If you eat, it keeps a place set for you.” Aurora pulled her hand free and shoved both into her pockets. “Fine. No fruit.” “Also no bargains,” Isolde went on. “No dancing if music rises from the roots. No gifts from children with old faces.” Aurora stared at her. “How many rules did you plan to spring on us one at a time?” “All the useful ones.” They walked on. Sound shifted with each step. In one stretch the leaves hissed like distant rain though the canopy stood still. In another, the grove swallowed every noise except their breathing, and even that came back muffled, wrapped in wool. Once Aurora heard church bells. Once she heard cutlery laid out for dinner. Once her mother’s voice called her full name from somewhere between two trunks, patient and sharp in the way it had been when she came home late from school. She stopped dead. Nyx froze with her. “That voice is not yours to follow.” Aurora swallowed. “I know.” But her chest had tightened. The sound had arrived complete, carrying the tiny details memory always missed: the scrape of a chair across lino, the whistle of the old kettle, rain tapping the kitchen window in Cardiff. It took effort to move her boots again. The path opened without warning into a wide hollow. Ancient roots rose from the earth in walls taller than houses, twisted together so tightly they formed arches and alcoves. Between them stood shards of pale stone, smooth and curved, half-swallowed by moss. Not ruined exactly. Grown over. Reclaimed. The place looked less built than persuaded into shape. At the centre lay a pool black as polished obsidian. No leaves floated on it. No ripple broke its skin. Above it hung dozens of thin lights, each one a droplet suspended in the air, glowing gold at the core and blue at the edges. They rose and fell in slow breaths. Aurora turned in a slow circle. “This is your grove?” Isolde moved past her into the hollow. The hanging lights tilted towards the seer like flowers following sun. “This is one room inside it.” Nyx’s outline sharpened as they stared round the roots. For the first time since Aurora had known them, they looked almost startled. “There are no shadows here.” Aurora blinked. They were right. The lights cast brightness across bark, stone, water, her own hands, yet nothing fell behind anything else. Every object stood clean and fully visible from every side. Her stomach dipped. “That’s wrong.” “Wrong is another fence,” Isolde said, though more softly now. The strange levity had drained from her voice. “This place stood before the sun taught the world its habits.” Near the pool, one of the pale stone shards showed deliberate shape: a low table or altar, its edges cut into curling patterns like vines and antlers tangled together. Something rested on the surface beneath a veil of roots as fine as wire. Aurora stepped closer. The roots twitched away from her warmth. Under them lay a blade the length of her forearm, slender and leaf-shaped, forged from moonsilver so cold the air above it trembled. Even in the green-gold light it held its own pallor, clean and sharp and faintly luminous. She drew her own dagger from under her jacket in answer, the Fae-forged blade Isolde had given her. Its edge flashed. The one on the altar answered with a pulse of thin white light. Nyx drifted to her shoulder. “The steel knows its sibling.” Aurora did not take her eyes off the altar. “You keep more of these lying about?” Isolde stood on the pool’s edge, silver hair hanging still in air that moved through the hollow. “Not for long. The grove had not decided whether to show this room to you.” Aurora glanced over. “And now?” The pool stirred for the first time. Its black surface loosened into concentric rings, silent, smooth. Beneath it, deep below the reflection of roots and lights, another sky turned. Not the evening above Richmond Park. This one ran with stars sharp as nails driven into blue-black glass. Something pale drifted under them, vast and distant, all towers and terraces curved like shells. Aurora took one step forward without meaning to. Nyx’s whisper roughened. “Careful.” She crouched at the edge instead, boots gripping the root-laced earth, and looked into the moving dark. The strange city under the water rolled past in silence while the gold-blue lights overhead dipped lower, gathering round the three of them until their glow touched her face and her knuckles and the cold silver of the blade in her hand.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.146
leniency0.292
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2084
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"tightly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2084
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"quickened"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count2
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flickered"
2"pulsed"
3"quickened"
4"velvet"
5"stomach"
6"dancing"
7"warmth"
8"trembled"
9"pulse"
10"whisper"
11"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences173
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences214
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2084
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1792
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Aurora28
London1
Nyx12
Isolde13
Cardiff1
Fae-forged1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.719
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences115
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like seeds until one brushed her s"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.48
wordCount2084
matches
0"not carved but grown into the wood"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences214
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs110
mean18.95
std22.16
cv1.17
sampleLengths
065
14
236
312
43
559
620
756
89
943
108
118
126
135
1410
1524
164
173
185
196
203
216
2257
2334
243
25104
2632
271
2810
2911
3037
312
3272
338
344
352
3633
375
3812
3957
4047
415
426
4310
445
4529
466
473
486
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences173
matches
0"been painted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs292
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences214
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1804
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"silver, tiny star-shaped blooms"
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.031042128603104215
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.005543237250554324
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences214
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences214
mean9.74
std7.44
cv0.764
sampleLengths
021
120
224
34
47
514
615
712
83
927
1013
1119
126
1314
146
1513
1617
177
182
193
208
219
228
2326
249
258
268
276
285
2910
3024
314
323
335
346
353
366
378
389
3924
4013
413
425
4312
4417
453
4610
4733
4826
4926
48.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3177570093457944
totalSentences214
uniqueOpeners68
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences156
matches
0"Then the mist shivered."
1"Somewhere water chimed."
2"Then it vanished."
3"Once Aurora heard church bells."
4"Once she heard cutlery laid"
5"Once her mother’s voice called"
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences156
matches
0"It did not move with"
1"It tightened, silver and thin,"
2"Their outline blurred at the"
3"Their voice slipped through the"
4"Her silver hair spilled to"
5"She might have been painted"
6"She pulled her jacket tighter"
7"She stepped between the standing"
8"Her ears popped."
9"Their branches rose and braided"
10"It had not been there"
11"They looked like seeds until"
12"Its body shone with a"
13"It darted away into the"
14"They came upon a stream"
15"It ran uphill."
16"It simply moved against the"
17"Her reflection stared up from"
18"She held still."
19"She drew back at once."
ratio0.244
85.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences156
matches
0"The last dog walker vanished"
1"Aurora stopped at the line"
2"It did not move with"
3"It tightened, silver and thin,"
4"The air there bent like"
5"Aurora touched the crescent scar"
6"Nyx stood a pace behind"
7"The grass beneath them held"
8"Their outline blurred at the"
9"Their voice slipped through the"
10"Isolde waited inside the stone"
11"Her silver hair spilled to"
12"Wildflowers crowded round her bare"
13"The earth under those feet"
14"She might have been painted"
15"Aurora took one more look"
16"The path behind them still"
17"She pulled her jacket tighter"
18"Aurora glanced at her scuffed"
19"Isolde’s mouth bent in something"
ratio0.75
64.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences156
matches
0"Now and then a root"
1"Even in the green-gold light"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences73
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The path behind them still lay where it should, pale and ordinary, leading back to roads, buses, a city that argued with itself long after midnight."
1"Their branches rose and braided together high overhead, making a vaulted roof of leaves lit from beneath by a green-gold glow that had no clear source."
2"Now and then a root pulsed beneath her sole, slow and steady, as if something large and sleeping breathed under the whole grove."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences48
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