Run: 2026-03-09-01KK9QRW04MY6QGT9Y13JHSKXD

Run Details

Duration:
2m 42s
Cost:
$0.091967
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The constable at the service gate looked at the bone token in Quinn’s palm as if it might bite him. “You’re certain this is the right entrance?” Quinn closed her fingers over the token. The little thing felt warm, polished by too many hands. “You called me to Camden. I came to Camden. Open it.” He worked the chain loose and dragged the gate aside. Rust shrieked through the tunnel. Damp air rolled up from the stairs, thick with mould, old brake dust and a sweeter scent underneath, like burnt sugar. “Your sergeant’s down there,” he muttered. “Wouldn’t let anyone touch the body.” “Good.” She started down. The station had died decades ago, but the market had dressed the corpse. Old enamel signs hung above the platform through a web of lantern chains. Tarpaulins stretched between pillars tiled in cracked cream and bottle green. Stalls stood where commuters once queued for tickets: butcher’s hooks, glass jars, birdcages, trays of teeth, racks of black candles, folded coats with stitched symbols across the lining. Someone had draped police tape from a Victorian bench to a baggage trolley. It looked flimsy against the place. The market ignored it. Men and women in dark coats watched from the far end, silent behind the cordon, faces cut by lantern light. Detective Sergeant Owen Mercer waited beside the body with his suit jacket off and his sleeves rolled to the elbow. He wore the expression of a man forced to conduct interviews in a nest of snakes. “You took your time.” Quinn glanced at her watch. The leather strap had darkened with age, the face scratched white at the edges. “Twenty-six minutes from the Yard to a dead station under Camden isn’t time. It’s a miracle.” Mercer gave the market a sour look. “You’ll get no applause from this lot.” “I didn’t come for applause.” He stepped aside. The victim lay on the platform near the edge, one arm bent beneath him, the other flung out towards the tracks. Male. Mid-thirties. Good wool coat, dark blue. Clean nails. Barbershop shave. Not one of the rough sleepers that drifted through the tunnels. Blood had soaked the front of his shirt and spread in a dark fan across the tiles. A brass compass sat in his outstretched hand. The thing did not belong there. Even before Quinn crouched, it caught the eye. Verdigris ate at the hinge. Thin sigils ringed the face. The needle twitched in tight, anxious jerks. Mercer nudged an evidence marker with the toe of his shoe. “Name’s Adrian Vale. No address on him, but three traders knew him. Broker. Runner. Bought and sold whatever this place sells when no one on the books is looking. Witnesses heard shouting. One woman claims he stole that compass from a stall at the far end. Owner’s gone. Vale made it ten yards before someone opened him up.” Quinn looked up at the stall Mercer indicated. It stood beneath a broken station clock, all brass cages and velvet-lined cases. One case lay on the floor with its glass smashed. “Owner’s name?” Mercer spread his hands. “If I could pin a name on any of them, I’d have brought one upstairs.” “Forensics?” Dr Lewis hovered near the pillar with a camera hanging from his neck and powder on his cuffs. “Single stab wound to the chest, as far as I could see without moving him. Blade went in under the sternum and up. Fast death. No wallet, no phone. Left wrist bare, though there’s a pale line where a watch sat.” “Robbery,” Mercer said. “Or a debt. Same family.” Quinn let her gaze travel back to the body. The blood pool had settled under the left shoulder and lower ribs. The chest wound sat almost centre. The fabric around it had stiffened, but the sleeve cuff nearest the blood remained clean. She pointed. “Why is his hand clean?” Mercer frowned. “What?” “The hand with the compass.” He leaned in. “He held it out before he dropped.” “He bled from the chest. He fell forward first.” Quinn touched the coat sleeve near the elbow. Dry. She moved her finger to the brass casing. Also dry, apart from a fine smear near the hinge. “If he grabbed that after he was stabbed, blood would have tracked down the sleeve and into his palm. It didn’t.” Mercer folded his arms. “Could have been in his hand before.” “Then his palm should have left prints in the blood on the casing when the muscles clenched. It didn’t.” Lewis crouched opposite her. “She’s right. I’d noted the lack of transfer.” Mercer pulled a face. “So someone put it there. That doesn’t change much.” “It changes the story.” Quinn rose and took in the platform again. A market full of fragile things surrounded the body. Glass phials stood in neat pyramids. Powders lay in shallow ceramic bowls. A row of candles burned on a crate less than two feet from the victim’s boots, each flame straight as a pin. No smashed wares. No overturned table. No skid marks. No heel streaks in the dust. “You’ve got a man stabbed in a crowded market,” she said. “No struggle. No knocked stock. No witness with blood on them. That isn’t theft with temper.” Mercer jerked his chin at the broken display case. “There’s your disturbance.” Quinn crossed to it. The case had brass corners shaped like claws. Shards glittered across the boards beneath, most of them inside the frame. She glanced back. “Glass fell inward.” Mercer stepped over, jaw hard. “Someone hit it from the front.” “Then the largest pieces would be out here.” She tapped the bare floor beyond the case with her shoe. “They’re not. Somebody broke it from behind.” Lewis lifted his camera and took three quick shots. Mercer scrubbed a hand over his mouth. “All right. Owner stages a theft, kills the broker, runs. Still neat enough for you?” Quinn didn’t answer. Her attention had fixed on the track of droplets between the stall and the body. They marched over the tiles in a line too regular for panic, each drop almost round, each one set a careful distance from the next. She followed them from the case to the body, then beyond the body towards the tunnel wall. Mercer watched her trace the line. “He staggered.” “No.” She crouched again and held a pen above one of the drops without touching it. “These fell straight down. No tails. No swing. He didn’t move while he bled. Someone carried the source or dripped from something held level.” Lewis moved closer. “Bag? Blade?” “Or body,” Quinn said. Mercer let out a breath through his nose. “Someone carried a bleeding man through a market without anyone noticing.” “Someone carried him through a market where no one wants to speak to police.” She looked at the silent line of traders beyond the tape. “That helps.” One of them shifted. An old woman in a coat sewn from strips of dark fur raised her chin and spat at the platform edge. Mercer started towards her. Quinn caught his sleeve. “Leave her. If they close up, we lose the room.” “This room hates us.” “It hates being interrupted. There’s a difference.” She turned back to the corpse. Vale’s polished shoes had picked up a paste of orange clay in the treads. Quinn rubbed a thumb over it and brought away grit the colour of brick dust. “This isn’t from down here.” Mercer glanced at the floor. Grey dust, old oil, soot. No orange anywhere. “Surface works,” Quinn said. “Building site or rail repair. He came through fresh clay before he got here.” “Camden’s half dug up.” “Then he came in from the street.” She tapped the token bagged beside the body. “And he had his own bone token, so he expected entry.” Mercer stared at the bagged token, then at the market around them. “You’re talking like this place runs by rules.” “It does. We just don’t know them yet.” Her gaze snagged on the tunnel wall past the body. The old advertising boards there had peeled to paper curls. Salt lay in a broken crescent across the base of the tiles, packed into the grout, then kicked open in one section. Above it, soot feathered up the wall in a half-moon stain. Fresh scrape marks cut through the soot at shoulder height. One narrow strip of tile shone cleaner than the rest, as if something had passed over it again and again. Mercer followed her line of sight. “That wall’s original. We checked. No door.” “Who checked?” “Transit maintenance. Two blokes with keys and bad tempers.” “Did they check before or after they saw where they were?” He gave her a flat look. Quinn stepped over the body. Lewis sucked air through his teeth but didn’t stop her. At the wall, the air felt wrong. Not colder. Not warmer. Just moving when the whole station should have held still. She put two fingers near the scrape marks. A thread of draught touched her skin, carrying rain, iron, and something sharp enough to remind her of static on the tongue. Mercer came up beside her. “Service vent.” “Vents don’t leave scrape marks at chest height.” He pointed to the salt. “Protection charm. Market nonsense. They marked off a stall, got in a fight, end of puzzle.” Quinn crouched and studied the white line. Blood had fallen across one edge of the salt, but not the other. The kicked-open gap showed grey tile beneath it, clean, untouched by blood. She looked up. “The salt broke before he bled here.” Mercer opened his mouth, shut it again. She stood and took a slow sweep of the wall, then the floor. Dust lay thick except for one patch just wide enough for a person to stand. In that patch, faint marks pressed into the grime. Not shoes with tread. Smooth-soled prints, narrow, almost elegant. They faced the wall. A second set, heavier, came from the platform and stopped behind them. No return prints from either set. Lewis lowered himself to one knee with a grunt. “I missed those.” “You looked at the body,” Quinn said. “That’s where people train you to look.” Mercer squinted at the floor. “Crowd contamination.” “The crowd stayed back there.” She pointed to the cordon. “See the dust by the tape? Unbroken. No one crossed into this patch before uniforms laid out the line.” She held out her hand. Lewis passed her the evidence bag with the compass inside. Mercer stared. “You’re not putting that near anything without gloves.” “I’ve got gloves.” She slipped on a pair, took the compass from the bag and flicked the latch with her thumb. The lid opened on a clean click. The needle spun, paused, spun again. Not north. Not steady. It kept hauling to the wall, as if a string tugged it. Mercer gave a humourless laugh. “Cheap trick. Magnet in the tiles.” Lewis leaned close. “It didn’t do that in the tray.” Quinn lifted the compass higher. The needle shivered and locked so hard it ticked against the glass. She moved it six inches left. It dragged back to the same strip of tile. She pressed her palm to the wall beside the scrape marks. The tile gave the faintest tremor, not movement exactly, more like a bus engine idling under brick. Mercer’s face changed. Scepticism peeled back. He put his ear close, then straightened at once. “There’s something behind it.” “Yes.” “What sort of something?” Quinn looked over her shoulder at the body, the false theft, the careful blood trail, the broken salt, the hand posed around the compass. “Vale didn’t die running from the stall.” She lifted the compass between them. The needle pulled at the wall like a hooked fish. “He came here on purpose.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She crouched again [again]"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.312
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.026
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1969
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1969
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"charm"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"charm"
2"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences157
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences222
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1969
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1337
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.8
worstName"Mercer"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Mercer"
discoveredNames
Quinn19
Victorian1
Sergeant1
Owen1
Mercer24
Lewis8
Dry1
One3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Sergeant"
2"Owen"
3"Mercer"
4"Lewis"
places
0"Victorian"
1"One"
globalScore0.602
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1969
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences222
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs102
mean19.3
std20.09
cv1.041
sampleLengths
020
17
228
336
412
51
63
7108
836
94
1035
1114
125
133
1468
1531
1611
1758
1831
192
2019
211
2259
238
2442
257
263
275
2810
2957
3011
3119
3212
3313
344
3566
3627
3712
3824
396
4011
4126
429
4322
4460
458
4640
475
484
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs212
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences222
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1342
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.028315946348733235
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0007451564828614009
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences222
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences222
mean8.87
std6.98
cv0.787
sampleLengths
020
17
27
310
411
510
65
721
86
96
101
113
1213
1313
1411
1528
1613
176
184
1920
2020
2116
224
235
2414
2516
267
277
285
293
3021
311
321
335
342
352
3611
3717
388
396
408
415
425
437
4411
4558
468
4713
4810
492
59.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.38738738738738737
totalSentences222
uniqueOpeners86
47.96% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences139
matches
0"Also dry, apart from a"
1"Just moving when the whole"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences139
matches
0"He worked the chain loose"
1"She started down."
2"It looked flimsy against the"
3"He wore the expression of"
4"He stepped aside."
5"It stood beneath a broken"
6"He leaned in."
7"She moved her finger to"
8"She glanced back."
9"She tapped the bare floor"
10"Her attention had fixed on"
11"They marched over the tiles"
12"She followed them from the"
13"She crouched again and held"
14"She looked at the silent"
15"She turned back to the"
16"She tapped the token bagged"
17"Her gaze snagged on the"
18"He gave her a flat"
19"She put two fingers near"
ratio0.237
46.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount115
totalSentences139
matches
0"The constable at the service"
1"Quinn closed her fingers over"
2"The little thing felt warm,"
3"He worked the chain loose"
4"Rust shrieked through the tunnel."
5"She started down."
6"The station had died decades"
7"Tarpaulins stretched between pillars tiled"
8"Stalls stood where commuters once"
9"Someone had draped police tape"
10"It looked flimsy against the"
11"The market ignored it."
12"Men and women in dark"
13"Detective Sergeant Owen Mercer waited"
14"He wore the expression of"
15"Quinn glanced at her watch."
16"The leather strap had darkened"
17"Mercer gave the market a"
18"He stepped aside."
19"The victim lay on the"
ratio0.827
35.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences139
matches
0"Even before Quinn crouched, it"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The constable at the service gate looked at the bone token in Quinn’s palm as if it might bite him."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.078
leniency0.156
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.026
91.0752%