Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFBR7NMJ45A5D24ANY5KHN4

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt sprang free. The heavy door groaned in protest against the frame. It swung inward to reveal a shadow. The figure inside was Lucien. He leaned against the doorpost. Rain dripped from the end of his charcoal overcoat. It gathered in a small puddle at the threshold. Aurora inhaled. She felt the cold air against her throat. She kept the knife in her pocket. She watched his hands. They were gloved. Black sheep leather finished the cuffs of the tailored suit. He did not move his stance. He was patient. A predator hunting at dead of night. "She is not here." Lucien tapped his chin with a finger of gloved hand. "Silas cleaned her?" "I left my bag." Aurora closed the door against the hallway street sound. "Bad enough you ran." Lucien stepped into the flat above the bar. "Is it out there you are now?" "You found the delivery routes." Aurora pushed a stray curtain back. "You hired Eva." "I find things." Lucien lowered his cane. The ivory handle glinted in the dim light. "Ivan Brique died this morning. Brought up fresh." "What happened to the man?" "Cut." He pointed an open hand toward the kitchen doors. "Your blade." Aurora tensed. She held the hospital pass. "Nobody got the payment." "Payment is never enough." Lucien did not take his feet back. "I want the old account." "I don't want to be a part of your game." Aurora pulled back the string of her wedding ring. She kept it empty. "I want the truth." "The truth costs much." Lucien closed the gap. He stopped two paces away. Aurora looked up. He was inches taller. She flexed her knees. She gripped her tray in her right hand. She kept the knife on the table. "What do you want with the account?" "You need the money." Lucien tapped his cane on the floor. A sharp metallic sound echoed off the walls. Aurora gripped the edge of the wall. "I have the bank." "No." Lucien reached out a hand. He wore a ring. "You have nothing." "I have the scar." Aurora raised her left wrist. The crescent mark glowed red. "Eva saw it." "I see many scars." Lucien stepped closer. He lifted her hand. He felt the skin. His fingers were cold. "Let go." Aurora gripped his wrist. She pulled her skin away. "Look at the stone." She saw the diamond ring on his finger. "This is the bribe." "You love me not." Lucien withdrew his hand. "I don't love you." Aurora slammed the knife onto the table. "I remember." "That was then." Lucien pressed a button on his jacket. "Now is cold." "Bring the room to me." Aurora pulled a bottle of gin from the cupboard. "You have a choice." "Choice is for the living." Lucien walked to the window. He peered at the rain. "Eva does not want you dead." "Because I have money." Aurora held the bottle. "She owes you." "She wants you safe." Lucien looked at her over the shoulder. "She wants me out of the way." Aurora took a sip. She felt the burn in her throat. "Why are you here really?" "Because I need you." Lucien opened his coat. He bared the chest. He stood in the red light. "What do you want with me?" Aurora set the bottle down. She moved toward the table. "To be in the flat together." Lucien tapped the table. The wood creaked. "Like lovers do." Aurora pivoted. She stood between him and the door. "I am not your lover." Lucien made the chair move. "I am the fixer." "Then fix the man who cut us." Aurora raised the knife. The blade glittered. "I cut you." Lucien dropped the glove from his left hand. "To save your life." "You burned me just to keep me." Aurora struck the table. The knife rang deep. "Better good than bad." Lucien tapped the cane. The silver tip gleamed. "Get out." Aurora took the stance. Her foot hit the floor. "I will leave when you agree." Lucien looked at the camera. He held the eye. "You cannot sleep here." Aurora shifted the bag to her right. "You will sleep alone." Lucien moved closer. He stepped into her personal space. She felt the heat from his body. "You touch me." Aurora lifted the knife again. "You do not like the touch." Lucien tapped the cane. "Who touched the other me?" Aurora gripped the bottle neck. She pulled from the chair. "I only touch you when I need it." Lucien raised his cane. The silver tip clicked against the surface. Aurora flinched. "Don't." "Sit." Lucien touched the arm. "You do not want this." "I want to go." Aurora stepped away. She eyed the door. "You will stay." Lucien grabbed her shoulder. He twisted her back. "Who gave you the right?" Aurora shoved him. Lucien stumbled forward but caught himself. "I gave it to myself." Lucien held the cane ready. The blade spun inside the ivory. "Kill me." Aurora turned her back. She saw the trap waiting behind the table. "You will die but you will not kill." Lucien raised the cane. "Then step aside." Aurora drew back the knife. The metal sang in her hand. "I will step when you agree." Lucien lunged. He swung the cane. It whistled through the air. It missed her head. Aurora ducked down. "Get out now." Aurora swung the knife. It caught the air. She missed the hand. Lucien stepped back. He caught the wrist of the knife. He pinned her with the cane. It hit the wall. It rattled. "Stop." Aurora struggled against the grip. "I did not plan." Lucien pulled the wrist tighter. She felt the pressure on the knuckles. "I will not break." Aurora knelt on the floor. She grabbed the leg. She looked up. "You are small." Lucien looked down at her. He loosened the grip. "I am big enough." Aurora stood up. She held the knife high. "I have a key." Lucien showed the pocket square. The cloth was wet with rain. He held it to her face. She smelled the scent of tobacco. "Get out now." Aurora pointed the knife at the chest. "I will leave when the fight stops." Lucien stepped back. He held the cane in place. "Fight." Aurora gritted her teeth. "I will defend myself." "I will kill you." Lucien opened his mouth. "I will not let you." Aurora gripped the knife harder. The steel hummed. "Sit." Lucien tapped her. She stood firm. "I will stay here." "She will kill us all." Aurora raised the weapon. "I will lose time." Lucien lowered the cane. He aimed at the door. "I know the door codes." "Then use the codes." Aurora stepped out. "I am not yours." "You are mine." Lucien pulled the door shut. He stood inside. He blocked the path. "Open." Aurora pushed against the wood. She used the knife tip. The steel sparked. "I can not." Lucien turned his back. He left her there. "Get out." "I will not open." Aurora pressed the blade into the lock. She twisted the handle. "Open." "Go." Lucien tapped the door. She felt the vibration in the frame. "I will stay." Aurora gripped the handle. "I believe it." "I do not." Lucien stepped back. "It was a wrong call." "This is wrong." Aurora turned the door. The wood cracks. "Get out." Lucien pushed the handle. "You must go." "I will not." Aurora slammed her foot. "I am staying." "No." Lucien kicked the door. The wood splintered. "I will leave." Aurora blinked. The door burst inward. She stepped back. "Go." Lucien held the door. It shook. "Stay." Aurora pointed the knife. "I will not move." "Go." Lucien kicked the table. The bottle shattered on the floor. "Now."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags78
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Aurora pulled back [back]"
1"Aurora stepped away [away]"
2"Lucien stepped back [back]"
3"Lucien stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences116
tagDensity0.672
leniency1
rawRatio0.051
effectiveRatio0.051
96.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1291
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1291
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"predator"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"predator"
1"echoed"
2"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences173
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences211
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1291
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions87
wordCount849
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity5.18
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien44
Aurora43
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1291
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences211
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs88
mean14.67
std7.6
cv0.518
sampleLengths
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150
24
313
413
519
614
723
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912
1011
1116
1227
1313
1433
1519
1611
1713
1817
1919
2011
2116
228
2313
2413
2518
2621
2711
2811
2923
3018
3116
3213
3312
3414
3514
3615
3715
3812
3911
4015
4111
4220
438
4410
4515
4619
473
4810
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100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences173
matches
0"were gloved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences211
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount849
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.012956419316843345
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences211
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences211
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std2.89
cv0.472
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27
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104
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1210
136
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164
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275
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292
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315
324
3311
345
3519
364
374
388
395
403
414
424
438
447
457
4611
478
487
494
37.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.22748815165876776
totalSentences211
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences165
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount62
totalSentences165
matches
0"It swung inward to reveal"
1"He leaned against the doorpost."
2"It gathered in a small"
3"She felt the cold air"
4"She kept the knife in"
5"She watched his hands."
6"They were gloved."
7"He did not move his"
8"He was patient."
9"He pointed an open hand"
10"She held the hospital pass."
11"She kept it empty."
12"He stopped two paces away."
13"He was inches taller."
14"She flexed her knees."
15"She gripped her tray in"
16"She kept the knife on"
17"He wore a ring."
18"He lifted her hand."
19"He felt the skin."
ratio0.376
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount164
totalSentences165
matches
0"The deadbolt sprang free."
1"The heavy door groaned in"
2"It swung inward to reveal"
3"The figure inside was Lucien."
4"He leaned against the doorpost."
5"Rain dripped from the end"
6"It gathered in a small"
7"She felt the cold air"
8"She kept the knife in"
9"She watched his hands."
10"They were gloved."
11"He did not move his"
12"He was patient."
13"A predator hunting at dead"
14"Lucien tapped his chin with"
15"Aurora closed the door against"
16"Lucien stepped into the flat"
17"Aurora pushed a stray curtain"
18"Lucien lowered his cane"
19"The ivory handle glinted in"
ratio0.994
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences165
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences2
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags78
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien pressed (press)"
1"Aurora pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences116
tagDensity0.017
leniency0.034
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.034
83.0470%