Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFBWE1TRDVCE1E6EQAXN0PG

Run Details

Duration:
58.8s
Cost:
$0.000766
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The standing stones stood in a line, hewn from rock that seemed to drink the afternoon light. Aurora stood at the edge of the boundary, her left wrist twitching slightly beneath her coat, where the small crescent scar from a childhood accident caught the sun. She gripped her handle, the silver chain digging into her palm, tugging the deep crimson Heartstone against her sternum. It didn’t heat; it hummed. “You’re trembling,” Isolde said, though she did not look at Aurora. The Fae woman stood ten paces ahead, her silver hair catching a light that shimmered like oil on water. Her shoes made no sound against the moss. “It’s not the cold,” Aurora replied. Her bright blue eyes scanned the entrance. Behind them lay Richmond Park, a crowded city of concrete and rush. Ahead lay the nothingness. “It’s the stillness. My gut is screaming.” “Gut is for digestion,” Isolde said, her voice distant, like it had traveled across a room of mirrors. She extended a hand, palm open. “Nyx, hold the door for the shadow. I hold the path. Aurora, hold the blade.” Aurora felt the cold press against the flat of her hand where Isolde gestured. It was sharp, pale metal, the Fae-forged blade. She unsheathed it with a sound that didn’t echo in air but in the silence. The blade hummed, cool enough to freeze the skin. Her black hair, straight to her shoulders, felt heavy. Her breath smelled like rain and ozone. Nyx stepped through the space behind Isolde, a shifting silhouette of living shadow against the fading grey of the archway. Their eyes glowed a faint violet, tiny stars in the dark. Nyx’s voice was a whisper carried on the wind—barely audible. *Good air. Smells like old memory.* Aurora swallowed. If she stepped wrong, she might lock the Veil. If she stepped right, she might vanish. She focused on the stone beneath her boot. The ground was carpeted in ferns that waved without wind, releasing a scent of crushed winter thyme. She took the first step. The air changed instantly. The London fog evaporated, burned away by a sudden clarity that bordered on blinding. They stepped into the grove. The silence was heavy, pressurized like the moment before a storm. Aurora’s heart hammered against the pendant in her locket. The Heartstone didn’t glow, but it pulsed with the same rhythm as her pulse. “Aurora,” Isolde called softly. Aurora hadn’t looked back. She focused on the flora. Wildflowers bloomed year-round inside the boundary. A cluster of bluebells leaned low, unnaturally close to Aurora’s knee, their scent overpowering despite the air’s stillness. She reached out to touch a petal. It felt wet, slick with sap that didn’t dry. Time felt wrong here. She checked her watch on her wrist as Isolde walked forward. The minute hand had not clicked forward in a minute. Outside, a news helicopter might have roared; here, the only sound was the snap of a twig or the whisper of Nyx’s presence. Nyx drifted between the trees. Their form shifted, tall and lean or broad and blocky, depending on where the light hit their edges. The shadows here were deeper than they should be. They felt teeming, like they housed an invisible life. Nyx touched Aurora’s shoulder, heavy and cold, and whispered, *Sleep. Wake to light.* *Do not listen,* Aurora thought, forcing her stride. She kept her eyes on the center path, where ancient trees twisted their trunks toward the sky. Fog pooled around their ankles in places where no breeze could blow, and yet the air smelled of pine and iron. Isolde stopped. The Fae woman looked up, her pale lavender eyes catching the strange, filtered sunlight through the canopy. The amber glow of a distant setting sun painted everything in a deep, bruised hue. Aurora looked at the woods beyond the clearing. They receded into a darkness that felt like a lung expanding and contracting. “I do not know what you think, Isolde,” Aurora said. “My friend, the one who gave me this stone, she thought Dymas. She said... Hel.” Isolde turned her head slowly, the motion fluid, unnatural. “Dymas is sun, flesh, and plenty. Dymas is hunger.” She paused, glancing at Nyx who had detached themselves from the shadowy gap and huddled deeper in the woods. *Gluttony is a mirror,* she said. “This is not Dymas. This is the Veil’s edge. You are standing where the river flows into the ocean. You cannot taste the river until the water hits the land.” Aurora felt the pressure in her chest. The scar on her wrist throbbed softly. She remembered Evan, the abusive man she had fled. The flat by Silas’ bar that smelled of stale coffee and cheap floor wax. She remembered she was Rory now, the delivery person, the friend who kept secrets. It felt like a fragile thing, this identity, against the weight of the grove. “Why?” Aurora asked. It came out raspy. “Because some doors open,” Isolde replied, “before they close. Because you have the stone, and because Nyx is not bound by the world they walk in.” Isolde moved again, stepping over a fallen branch without lifting her foot, then kicking it like a stone. Nyx stepped up beside Aurora. The shadow figure didn't reflect the light, but cast a solid shadow of its own. The violet eyes snapped open, hard and regal. *They watch,* they murmured. *The watching kind.* *Who is watching?* Aurora asked, backing up slightly. Nyx lowered their head. *The ones who live in the dark between.* The Heartstone in Aurora’s pocket grew warm. It hummed, a low thrum that vibrated in her teeth. It wasn’t heat from the sun. It was a vibration from the earth. Aurora could feel the pulse of the land through her boots. She looked down at the blades of grass growing up concrete, swallowing an alleyway that wasn't there. She looked at the nothingness that had become something. She sheathed the blade, but her grip tightened. She had come to London to find a man who stole her heart, but now the world itself had stolen her balance. Aurora looked at Isolde, then at the trees, the ground, the air moving around nothing. She realized the boundary wasn't just a line; it was a filter. It strained reality itself. Isolde smiled. It didn't reach her eyes, though she said nothing. “Time flows differently. Don't you dare get impatient. Or turn into dust.” Aurora chuckled, a nervous sound. “If I die, kill me now.” *Foolish little shadow,* Nyx said. The word carried more weight than Nyx, who was mostly just standing there in the dusk. Aurora took a breath, pressed the heels of her feet into the damp earth, and stepped forward. The ground didn't shift; she sank into a new world, and the parrot heart in her chest beat slower, adjusting to the gravity of theVeil. They walked forward, into the deep dark of a place where the rules of logic bowed beneath the weight of magic, and Aurora held the line.
created_at"2026-03-11T21:12:14.153Z" 3/11/2026, 9:12:14 PM
model"qwen/qwen3.5-9b-20260310"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1063
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time58370
tokens_prompt1590
tokens_completion4180
native_tokens_prompt1633
native_tokens_completion4016
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning2404
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.0007657
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"00d506d9-a5e9-4382-a2b9-d54732365594"
id"oagE8DV-3pDw3Z-9dad8e60972cf03c"
is_byokfalse
latency1063
model_permaslug"qwen/qwen3.5-9b-20260310"
provider_name"Together"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1773263534-hNhStXrahTsunvSekcPr"
upstream_id"oagE8DV-3pDw3Z-9dad8e60972cf03c"
total_cost0.0007657
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Together"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde called softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
78.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1173
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1173
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"scanned"
2"echo"
3"silence"
4"whisper"
5"pulsed"
6"pulse"
7"throbbed"
8"weight"
9"vibrated"
10"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords36
totalWords1172
ratio0.031
matches
0"Good air. Smells like old memory."
1"Sleep. Wake to light."
2"Do not listen,"
3"Gluttony is a mirror,"
4"They watch,"
5"The watching kind."
6"Who is watching?"
7"The ones who live in the dark between."
8"Foolish little shadow,"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
42.47% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1023
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.15
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Aurora22
Fae3
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde12
Fae-forged1
Veil1
London2
Nyx10
Evan1
Rory1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Evan"
5"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.425
windowScore0.5
48.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like rain and ozone"
1"felt like a lung expanding and contract"
2"felt like a fragile thing, this identit"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1172
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean37.81
std19.89
cv0.526
sampleLengths
069
138
236
339
462
547
648
723
834
94
1049
1148
1254
1346
1455
1525
1673
1765
187
1926
2018
2135
228
2312
2467
2530
2631
2723
2811
2921
3068
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"was carpeted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
11.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences109
ratio0.046
matches
0"It didn’t heat; it hummed."
1"Nyx’s voice was a whisper carried on the wind—barely audible."
2"Outside, a news helicopter might have roared; here, the only sound was the snap of a twig or the whisper of Nyx’s presence."
3"She realized the boundary wasn't just a line; it was a filter."
4"The ground didn't shift; she sank into a new world, and the parrot heart in her chest beat slower, adjusting to the gravity of theVeil."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount718
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.025069637883008356
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.012534818941504178
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean10.75
std6.4
cv0.595
sampleLengths
017
128
219
35
411
519
68
76
87
912
104
117
1218
136
1415
1514
168
1715
189
199
207
2120
2211
2310
242
254
262
279
287
298
3017
315
324
3314
345
3511
369
3714
384
394
405
416
4218
437
449
454
4611
4710
4823
495
38.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.29357798165137616
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences95
matches
0"She gripped her handle, the"
1"It didn’t heat; it hummed."
2"Her shoes made no sound"
3"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
4"She extended a hand, palm"
5"It was sharp, pale metal,"
6"She unsheathed it with a"
7"Her black hair, straight to"
8"Her breath smelled like rain"
9"Their eyes glowed a faint"
10"She focused on the stone"
11"She took the first step."
12"They stepped into the grove."
13"She focused on the flora."
14"She reached out to touch"
15"It felt wet, slick with"
16"She checked her watch on"
17"Their form shifted, tall and"
18"They felt teeming, like they"
19"She kept her eyes on"
ratio0.4
7.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences95
matches
0"The standing stones stood in"
1"Aurora stood at the edge"
2"She gripped her handle, the"
3"It didn’t heat; it hummed."
4"Isolde said, though she did"
5"The Fae woman stood ten"
6"Her shoes made no sound"
7"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
8"Isolde said, her voice distant,"
9"She extended a hand, palm"
10"Aurora felt the cold press"
11"It was sharp, pale metal,"
12"She unsheathed it with a"
13"The blade hummed, cool enough"
14"Her black hair, straight to"
15"Her breath smelled like rain"
16"Nyx stepped through the space"
17"Their eyes glowed a faint"
18"Nyx’s voice was a whisper"
19"Smells like old memory.*"
ratio0.905
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"If she stepped wrong, she"
1"If she stepped right, she"
ratio0.021
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She gripped her handle, the silver chain digging into her palm, tugging the deep crimson Heartstone against her sternum."
1"The Fae woman stood ten paces ahead, her silver hair catching a light that shimmered like oil on water."
2"They receded into a darkness that felt like a lung expanding and contracting."
3"She remembered she was Rory now, the delivery person, the friend who kept secrets."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.8120%