| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1175 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1175 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "resonated" | | 9 | "predator" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "scanned" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "stark" | | 14 | "vibrated" | | 15 | "reverberated" | | 16 | "searing" | | 17 | "weight" | | 18 | "traced" | | 19 | "intensity" | | 20 | "shattered" | | 21 | "the last thing" | | 22 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of the moment" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 36.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1175 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 7 | | wordCount | 1156 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.26 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "pulse that seemed to answer the night" | | 1 | "as if sensing the threshold even before she saw it" | | 2 | "seemed woven from night itself" | | 3 | "as if remembering old wounds" | | 4 | "sound that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" |
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| 29.79% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.702 | | wordCount | 1175 | | matches | | 0 | "not spoken but felt, a vibration" | | 1 | "not from her mouth but from the void itself, echoing across the park, a scream" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 17.83% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 83.93 | | std | 17.83 | | cv | 0.212 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 81 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 79 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 82 | | 6 | 73 | | 7 | 85 | | 8 | 84 | | 9 | 92 | | 10 | 94 | | 11 | 81 | | 12 | 101 | | 13 | 133 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 201 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "The light did not illuminate; it intensified the shadows, turning them into living masses that crawled along the ground." | | 1 | "She realized the grove was not merely a place; it was a living boundary, a gate that demanded a price." | | 2 | "She knew she could not retreat; the portal demanded a sacrifice, a heart willing to give everything." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1156 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.020761245674740483 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006055363321799308 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 41.20% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 17.28 | | std | 4.37 | | cv | 0.253 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 32.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.1323529411764706 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 9 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 5.07% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed the cold metal" | | 1 | "She recognized the place from" | | 2 | "She had left Cardiff behind," | | 3 | "She stopped, boots sinking into" | | 4 | "She turned, eyes sharp, scanning" | | 5 | "She took a step forward," | | 6 | "She inhaled sharply, the taste" | | 7 | "she called, voice steady, the" | | 8 | "She felt the pendant’s warmth" | | 9 | "She gripped the chain tighter," | | 10 | "she demanded, the question sharp," | | 11 | "She stepped back, the ground" | | 12 | "She realized the time behaved" | | 13 | "She recalled a trick her" | | 14 | "She pivoted on her heel," | | 15 | "She scanned the perimeter, the" | | 16 | "It raised a hand, fingers" | | 17 | "She swallowed, the scar on" | | 18 | "she said, the words escaping" | | 19 | "She felt the ground tremble," |
| | ratio | 0.537 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone throbbed against her" | | 1 | "She pressed the cold metal" | | 2 | "The clearing rose from the" | | 3 | "A crescent scar on her" | | 4 | "The standing stones circled the" | | 5 | "She recognized the place from" | | 6 | "She had left Cardiff behind," | | 7 | "The pendant pulsed faster as" | | 8 | "She stopped, boots sinking into" | | 9 | "A rustle curled from the" | | 10 | "She turned, eyes sharp, scanning" | | 11 | "A shape lingered at the" | | 12 | "She took a step forward," | | 13 | "The air grew heavy, the" | | 14 | "She inhaled sharply, the taste" | | 15 | "she called, voice steady, the" | | 16 | "A whisper rose, a breath" | | 17 | "The whisper deepened, forming syllables" | | 18 | "She felt the pendant’s warmth" | | 19 | "She gripped the chain tighter," |
| | ratio | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant pulsed faster as she approached the centre of the circle, as if sensing the threshold even before she saw it." | | 1 | "She took a step forward, the pendant’s glow flaring in response, casting a thin scarlet halo on the stones." | | 2 | "She felt the pendant’s warmth surge, a pulse that matched the rhythm of her own heart." | | 3 | "She stepped back, the ground beneath her shifting, the grass folding back as if the earth itself retreated." | | 4 | "She scanned the perimeter, the peripheral vision picking up glints of amber that flickered like fireflies." | | 5 | "The light did not illuminate; it intensified the shadows, turning them into living masses that crawled along the ground." | | 6 | "She saw a shape form, a mass of shifting shadows that coalesced into a silhouette of a child, eyes wide and empty." | | 7 | "She felt the pendant’s glow turn fierce, the crimson turning almost white, a heat that threatened to consume her." | | 8 | "She clutched the chain, the silver biting into her skin, the scar aching as if remembering old wounds." | | 9 | "The stones shifted again, rearranging themselves, forming a new pattern that sealed her path." | | 10 | "She felt the scar on her wrist burn, a searing pain that flared like a warning flare." | | 11 | "The darkness recoiled, recoiling like a beast struck, its edges fraying at the edges of perception." | | 12 | "The pendant slipped from her grasp, its light dying, the crimson flickering out like a dying ember." | | 13 | "She fell, the world turning black, the last thing she felt was the cold hand gripping her ankle, pulling her deeper into the darkness." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, voice steady, the words cutting through the silence" | | 1 | "she said, the words escaping before thought could temper them" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "the figure whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |