Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFC6VVFASDK06K1X8CR13BF

Run Details

Duration:
41.2s
Cost:
$0.000667
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammers Quinn's chest plates. Salt and grit stick to her boots. She pushes through the London fog, lungs burning. Her left hand watches the wrist. The leather band rattles against the dark grey of her uniform plate. It’s a small sound amidst the roar of the city. The streetlights splutter. She fixes her eyes on the runner ahead. Tomás Herrera breaks the rhythm. He drops into a doorway. His olive skin fades into the brickwork. Quinn hits the pavement, slick with mud and oil. She aims the flashlight beam at the lintel. *She can't stop him.* The air smells of stale beer and ozone. Quinn follows the mark into the alley. Rain sheets off her cropped salt-and-pepper hair. Her jaw tightens. A second ago, the man was a ghost. Now he is flesh and bone. He steps into the damp shadows. A bookshelf tilts with a misaligned hinge. The świecie shifts. The air pressure drops. Quinn shoulders through. A box of mahogany. Her boots crush water. She reaches for the hidden door handle. It turns without resistance. The sound cuts through. A low hum. Tomás stands in the center of the space. He leans against a stack of crates. His scarf is muddy. He looks worse than Ten. There’s a knife scar tracing his left arm. *Where are they going?* Her pulse spikes. She taps her watch. Three minutes since the last radio burst. Morris would have called in a booking. She checks the reflection in Timex dial. Rain streamed on the surface. She shoves flash light higher. The door swings shut behind her. No lock. No barrier. Just soundproofing. "Where do you think you're going?" Tomás says. Quinn raises the weapon. It makes no sound in her grip. She hates the click. It was a trophy from the last case on the Korean Line. "I’m not coming back until this is over." He steps backward toward the edge of the room. The floor is cold stone. Mapped out. Tomographic lines. "I have a question." He pulls a small stone from his pocket. Gray. Rough. "A gear." She knows what she sees. "That’s not a transition token." "They are moving fast." He gestures at the walls. Sliding panels reveal the void. "The market moves." Quinn lowers the flash light inches from his face. Her eyes dart to the scar. A jagged line. Old memory. Not his. None of this was clean. "Morris is gone." She watches the light flicker. "You know him." His eyes burn warm brown. "He had a license." "Get out." "That is a condition of survival." He pulls a medallion from his neck. Gold Saint Christopher. "I believe." She leans forward. "I have no patience for statues." He nods. "The entry requires a key." She slides her knife across the crate. The crack echoes. "Give me the token." "It does not exist." She slams her chin onto the sole. She wants to hit something. Hard. Instead, she kicks at the corner. Dust explodes. Quinn cleans her boots. She doesn't look away. "It moves locations." "The Veil Market." She knows the name. Not the story. Just the rumor. The rumor about the tube station. "Camden." The words hang. She reaches into her pocket. Nothing. The token is lost in the street. "You have to follow me." He turns toward the tunnel. Quinn checks the watch again. Left wrist. The leather creaks. Rain gushes. "Your wrist." He looks at it. She steps forward. "I won't kill you." He pauses. "I suppose." They walk. The tunnel narrows. The hum grows louder. When they reach the bookshelf again, the inside of the secret room opens into a massive cavern. Lights flicker overhead. Old maps on the walls. Black and white photographs. Men with smiles. The faces of the things who should not be seen. Quinn stops. The space smells of ozone. Burnt leather. Tomás stops. His shadow stretches long on the wall. "I want to live." Quinn says. He looks around. The air is still. "I see her." Quinn points at a frame. The dead partner. She drops the weapon. It hits the floor with a dull thud. He steps into the dark. Rain falls in the corner. Her hand shakes. She lowers the weapon back. She checks her watch. Time to decide. The space stretches wide. Loaded with gear. Suspended. Quinn walks near. She stands on the wooden floor. Her boots hit without sound. "If I stay." "If you kill me." He pushes her shoulder. She stumbles. The wall hits. Hard. She recovers. Her arm burns. "I will not leave a body." "The body is lost. I must protect the remaining ones." "This is criminal." He nods. "What happens when the trap closes?" "Nothing. Just the end." Quinn reaches out for the nearest wall. Her hands tighten the grip. She needs the wall to hold her up. She pulls herself back. She looks at the knife. "You have time." "I am not safe." "Neither am I." The room shudders. Wind blows. Dust floats. She turns to the tunnel again. "I know what it looks like." "It is the Veil." "Who runs it?" "The clique." Quinn kicks the crate. It spins. "Seven members." She counts the flash points. "Seven keys." She looks at her watch. Another tick. The room is an ambush. She stands in the center. "The token." Tomás smiles. A thin mouth. "It was never there." The lights die. Silence. Quinn feels the absence of breath. She whispers. The room does not answer. She checks her pockets. Empty. She looks at him. She moves toward the entrance. He follows. The door opens. The rain still sings outside. Quinn walks away. The light leaks. Tomás opens his mouth. She looks back. She turns. He watches her. She watches him. Both standing. Both silent. The door slams shut. She steps out. The air is thick. She steps over the threshold. The door slams. Quinn doesn't wait. She keeps walking. She moves through the tunnel. The gravel crunches. She steps into the street. She stops. There is no Quinn. There is only the shadow of the detective. The light fades.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1020
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1020
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"amidst"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count2
4
word"echoes"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"amidst"
1"tracing"
2"pulse"
3"flicker"
4"echoes"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences193
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences193
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences228
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen17
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords8
totalWords1020
ratio0.008
matches
0"She can't stop him."
1"Where are they going?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
44.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount851
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.12
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn18
London1
Herrera1
Ten1
Timex1
Korean1
Line1
Sliding1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás6
Rain4
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Tomás"
5"Rain"
places
0"London"
1"Timex"
globalScore0.442
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1020
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences228
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs6
mean170
std169.97
cv1
sampleLengths
060
1119
2535
3185
436
585
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences193
matches
0"is lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences228
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount853
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.016412661195779603
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011723329425556857
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences228
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences228
mean4.47
std2.36
cv0.529
sampleLengths
06
17
28
36
412
510
63
78
85
95
107
119
128
134
148
157
167
173
188
196
206
217
223
234
243
254
264
277
284
294
303
318
327
334
345
358
364
373
384
397
407
417
425
435
446
452
462
472
488
494
42.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.25877192982456143
totalSentences228
uniqueOpeners59
43.57% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences153
matches
0"Instead, she kicks at the"
1"Just the rumor."
ratio0.013
31.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount72
totalSentences153
matches
0"She pushes through the London"
1"Her left hand watches the"
2"It’s a small sound amidst"
3"She fixes her eyes on"
4"He drops into a doorway."
5"His olive skin fades into"
6"She aims the flashlight beam"
7"*She can't stop him.*"
8"Her jaw tightens."
9"He steps into the damp"
10"Her boots crush water."
11"She reaches for the hidden"
12"It turns without resistance."
13"He leans against a stack"
14"His scarf is muddy."
15"He looks worse than Ten."
16"Her pulse spikes."
17"She taps her watch."
18"She checks the reflection in"
19"She shoves flash light higher."
ratio0.471
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount135
totalSentences153
matches
0"The rain hammers Quinn's chest"
1"Salt and grit stick to"
2"She pushes through the London"
3"Her left hand watches the"
4"The leather band rattles against"
5"It’s a small sound amidst"
6"The streetlights splutter."
7"She fixes her eyes on"
8"Tomás Herrera breaks the rhythm."
9"He drops into a doorway."
10"His olive skin fades into"
11"Quinn hits the pavement, slick"
12"She aims the flashlight beam"
13"*She can't stop him.*"
14"The air smells of stale"
15"Quinn follows the mark into"
16"Her jaw tightens."
17"A second ago, the man"
18"He steps into the damp"
19"A bookshelf tilts with a"
ratio0.882
32.68% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"Now he is flesh and"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences5
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.091
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.9625%