Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFC927XA7HBTZE1YP3TRTT6

Run Details

Duration:
22.4s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest bled a sickly light onto the wet pavement. Inside, the air hung thick with the ghosts of cigarette smoke and the low murmur of conversations. Rory pushed through the door, the scent of old leather and whisky wrapping around her like a familiar, dusty blanket. It was a place of shadows and whispers, the kind of bar where people didn’t look at you too long. She preferred it that way. She slid onto a stool at the far end of the polished mahogany bar. Silas was there, as he always was, wiping a glass with a cloth that looked older than the establishment itself. His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly combed, the matching beard trimmed to a precise line. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the low light as he moved. “The usual, Rory?” His voice was a low rumble, like stones settling. “Just a water for now, Silas. Long day.” She rested her elbows on the bar, the small crescent scar on her left wrist visible where her sleeve pulled back. The ache in her feet from hours on a bicycle was a dull, constant thrum. He set a glass of water before her, the ice cubes clinking. His hazel eyes assessed her for a moment, a glance that always felt like a full report. Then he moved to the other end of the bar, leaving her to the relative quiet. She watched the condensation trail down her glass. The day had been a series of near-misses: a delivery to a high-rise where the security guard sneered at her faded jacket, a near-collision with a taxi in the rain, the final, grueling climb up three flights of stairs to drop off an order to a law firm that didn’t even look her in the eye. It was a life of constant, low-grade friction, a far cry from the polished halls of Cardiff University where she’d once been told she had a brilliant future in law. She took a slow sip of water. The bell above the door jangled again. She didn’t look up. The door closed, followed by the sound of two people entering, their footsteps hesitant on the worn floorboards. Then a voice, one she hadn’t heard in years, but which had once been the soundtrack to her summers. “God, it’s even darker in here than I remembered.” Rory’s hand stilled around her glass. The voice was different—thicker, with a hard, unfamiliar edge. But the cadence was the same. She turned slowly on her stool. Evan stood just inside the entrance, shaking rain from a black overcoat that looked far too expensive for a place like this. His hair was shorter than she recalled, slicked back. The last time she’d seen him, his jaw had been softer, his eyes brighter. Now, his face was all angles and shadow. The easy, boyish charm she remembered had curdled into something more guarded, more severe. He scanned the room, his gaze sweeping over the patrons like he was taking inventory. Behind him, a young woman with sharp, bleached-blonde hair shifted impatiently. “This is it? Really?” She looked around with undisguised disdain. “It smells like damp history.” Evan’s eyes found hers. The recognition was instant. A flicker of something—surprise, alarm, a deeper calculation—passed through them before his expression settled into a neutral mask. He didn’t smile. He just watched her. Rory’s breath caught in her throat, a sharp, involuntary thing. She hadn’t seen him since the night she’d fled his flat with nothing but a backpack and a new bruise blooming on her ribs. London had felt like a giant, anonymous blanket then, a place to disappear. Now, here he was, the very person she’d been hiding from, standing in the one place she thought was safe. “Rory,” he said. His voice wasn’t a question. It was a statement of fact. “Evan.” Her own voice came out surprisingly steady, a flat, uninflected sound. She saw the young woman—her name was probably something modern and sharp, like Sasha or Kylie—look between them, a flicker of curiosity in her kohl-lined eyes. Evan turned to the woman. “Give me a minute, love. Grab a table. I’ll be right over.” He gestured vaguely toward the dim booths lining the wall. She pouted but did as he said, her platform boots thudding as she walked away. He approached the bar. Not all the way to her stool, but to the one two seats down. He placed his palms on the mahogany, a posture of casual command. “I thought you’d be back in Wales by now. Nursing a pint, talking about the law.” “You thought wrong.” She took another sip of water, the condensation cold against her fingers. “I always did.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “London’s been good to you, though. You look… solid.” The word landed between them. Not beautiful, not happy. *Solid*. It felt like an assessment of her sturdiness, her ability to withstand impact. “I manage,” she said. “And here. In this relic.” He gestured at the shelves of obscure spirits, the maps of forgotten empires on the walls. “This isn’t exactly your scene, is it, Rory? No chandeliers. No canapés.” “It’s quiet. It’s predictable.” She looked down at her glass. “Some of us don’t need spotlights.” “Predictable.” He rolled the word around in his mouth, tasting it. “Is that what you wanted after everything? A predictable life slinging takeout and watering down drinks?” His tone was light, conversational, but the question was a blade wrapped in silk. Rory finally turned to face him fully. The light from behind the bar carved new lines into his face—deep grooves beside his mouth, a tension around his eyes she didn’t remember. “What I wanted,” she said, her voice low and even, “was to not have to look over my shoulder every time I heard footsteps behind me on a dark street. I wanted a door that locked. I wanted a job where the boss didn’t think ‘performance review’ was a euphemism for something else.” She let the last part hang in the air, a direct hit. She saw the muscle in his jaw twitch. “That’s not what I was,” he said, the defense automatic, rehearsed. “I was ambitious. I was passionate. You confused intensity with… something else.” “The police report didn’t,” she said, the words quiet as falling ash. She’d never called the police, of course. But he didn’t need to know that. She watched the color drain from his face, leaving a blotchy, pasty hue. He leaned in, his voice dropping to a confidential murmur that the bar’s ambient noise easily swallowed. “That was a misunderstanding. A bad night. We were both young, both under pressure.” “I was twenty-two. You were twenty-four. Old enough to know that putting a fist through a wall next to someone’s head is a choice, not a pressure valve.” She saw the young woman across the room, tapping her phone with a bored expression. The image was a jarring contrast to the weight of their shared history. “She doesn’t know, does she? The real version.” Evan followed her gaze. A flicker of something—shame? fear?—crossed his features before it was smothered. “You have a vivid imagination, Rory. You always did. It’s what made your stories so compelling.” He was reframing, retreating into the persona of the misunderstood artist. “How’s your mother? Still teaching? Your dad still championing the rights of the underdog in court?” “Leave them out of this.” “I’m just asking after old friends. Family.” “You don’t get to ask after my family. Not after you told me mine wasn’t good enough. Not after you tried to make me believe my friends were turning against me.” The memories were surfacing now, not as a torrent but as cold, clear stones dropping into a still pond. The isolation he’d meticulously constructed. The constant, subtle critique that eroded her confidence until she’d believed his version of reality was the only one. He sighed, a long, performative exhalation of patience. “Look at us. It’s been years. Can’t we just… acknowledge the past and move on? I’m different now. You’re clearly different.” “I’m not different,” she said, and for the first time, a spark of the old fire ignited in her chest. “I’m just not in your orbit anymore. That’s the difference. You see this job?” She gestured vaguely, indicating her whole life. “This isn’t where I landed. This is where I *chose* to stand. It’s small. It’s not glamorous. But every step I take is my own. There’s no one controlling the map.” He stared at her, and for a moment, the mask slipped. She saw a flash of the boy she’d once loved, the one with the easy laugh and the wild dreams, trapped behind the eyes of this hard, polished stranger. It was a painful, ghostly sight. “You always did have a flare for the dramatic,” he said, the remark hollow. He straightened up, adjusting the cuffs of his expensive coat. “Well. It was… something. Seeing you.” “You can leave,” she said. Not a command. Just a statement of the available option. He looked at her for a long beat, then gave a slight, dismissive nod. He turned and walked back to the booth where the blonde woman waited. Rory watched him sit down, watched him lean in and say something that made the woman laugh, a bright, brittle sound that cut through the bar’s low hum. She saw him place a proprietary hand on her knee. The gesture was familiar, a brand. Rory turned back to her water. The condensation had pooled in a small puddle around the base of the glass. She traced the edge of it with her finger. Silas had materialized back at the far end of the bar, wiping another glass, his presence a silent, steadfast fact. He hadn’t said a word during the exchange. He didn’t need to. The bar, like Silas, was a repository of secrets. It absorbed them without comment. Rory finished her water. The ice was all melted. The ache in her feet was still there, but it felt different now—less like exhaustion, more like proof of distance traveled. She stood up, her stool scraping softly against the floor. She didn’t look at the booth where Evan sat, now with his arm slung around his companion’s shoulders. She pulled a ten-pound note from her pocket and placed it on the bar, next to her empty glass. “On the house,” Silas rumbled, appearing beside her. He gestured to the note. “You had a long day.” She looked at his hazel eyes, which held no pity, only a clear, unblinking understanding. She left the money on the bar. “Thanks, Silas.” He nodded once. “The door locks at two. Always has.” She walked out, the green neon sign buzzing above her. The rain had stopped. The pavement glistened, reflecting the city’s lights in broken, scattered patterns. She turned not toward the station, but toward the narrow alley that led to the back of the building, to the stairwell that led up to her flat. She took each step deliberately, the weight in her chest feeling not like regret, but like ballast. Something that kept her steady, moving forward, into the quiet dark that was entirely her own.
created_at"2026-03-11T21:19:08.042Z" 3/11/2026, 9:19:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
69.57% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She looked around [around]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.548
leniency1
rawRatio0.13
effectiveRatio0.13
86.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1899
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"very"
3"softly"
4"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1899
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"charm"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count3
5
word"predictable"
count3
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"constructed"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"repository"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"footsteps"
2"charm"
3"scanned"
4"flicker"
5"predictable"
6"silk"
7"tension"
8"intensity"
9"weight"
10"constructed"
11"traced"
12"repository"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences126
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1892
ratio0.001
matches
0"Solid"
1"chose"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1476
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Cardiff1
University1
Evan5
Sasha1
Kylie1
Rory7
Silas4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Evan"
3"Sasha"
4"Kylie"
5"Rory"
6"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
73.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a full report"
1"felt like a giant, anonymous blanket th"
2"felt like an assessment of her sturdine"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.114
wordCount1892
matches
0"Not all the way to her stool, but to the one two seats down"
1"not as a torrent but as cold, clear stones dropping into a still pond"
2"not toward the station, but toward the narrow alley"
3"not like regret, but like ballast"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean41.13
std26.93
cv0.655
sampleLengths
078
164
212
344
445
5101
67
741
89
927
1082
1126
1233
1367
1414
1538
1642
1746
1815
1926
2027
2133
2216
2341
24104
2523
2639
2731
2864
2958
305
317
3274
3329
3472
3546
3630
3715
3871
3975
4077
4118
4222
432
4410
4586
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences126
matches
0"been told"
1"was smothered"
79.34% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs221
matches
0"was, wiping"
1"was taking"
2"was reframing"
3"were surfacing"
3.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences144
ratio0.049
matches
0"The voice was different—thicker, with a hard, unfamiliar edge."
1"A flicker of something—surprise, alarm, a deeper calculation—passed through them before his expression settled into a neutral mask."
2"She saw the young woman—her name was probably something modern and sharp, like Sasha or Kylie—look between them, a flicker of curiosity in her kohl-lined eyes."
3"The light from behind the bar carved new lines into his face—deep grooves beside his mouth, a tension around his eyes she didn’t remember."
4"A flicker of something—shame?"
5"fear?—crossed his features before it was smothered."
6"The ache in her feet was still there, but it felt different now—less like exhaustion, more like proof of distance traveled."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1491
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.034875922199865864
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.012072434607645875
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean13.14
std9.83
cv0.748
sampleLengths
016
117
220
320
45
514
620
715
815
912
1029
1115
1212
1317
1416
158
1656
1730
187
197
204
2118
2219
239
246
259
266
276
2822
299
3014
318
3214
3315
3411
3510
365
374
384
3918
403
414
4210
4324
4413
4520
463
475
486
4912
40.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2569444444444444
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners37
81.97% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences122
matches
0"Then he moved to the"
1"Then a voice, one she"
2"Just a statement of the"
ratio0.025
0.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount67
totalSentences122
matches
0"It was a place of"
1"She preferred it that way."
2"She slid onto a stool"
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
4"His voice was a low"
5"She rested her elbows on"
6"He set a glass of"
7"His hazel eyes assessed her"
8"She watched the condensation trail"
9"It was a life of"
10"She took a slow sip"
11"She didn’t look up."
12"She turned slowly on her"
13"His hair was shorter than"
14"He scanned the room, his"
15"She looked around with undisguised"
16"He didn’t smile."
17"He just watched her."
18"She hadn’t seen him since"
19"His voice wasn’t a question."
ratio0.549
13.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences122
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory pushed through the door,"
2"It was a place of"
3"She preferred it that way."
4"She slid onto a stool"
5"Silas was there, as he"
6"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
7"The silver signet ring on"
8"His voice was a low"
9"She rested her elbows on"
10"The ache in her feet"
11"He set a glass of"
12"His hazel eyes assessed her"
13"She watched the condensation trail"
14"The day had been a"
15"It was a life of"
16"She took a slow sip"
17"The bell above the door"
18"She didn’t look up."
19"The door closed, followed by"
ratio0.893
81.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences122
matches
0"Now, his face was all"
1"Now, here he was, the"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Evan stood just inside the entrance, shaking rain from a black overcoat that looked far too expensive for a place like this."
1"She looked at his hazel eyes, which held no pity, only a clear, unblinking understanding."
2"Something that kept her steady, moving forward, into the quiet dark that was entirely her own."
81.52% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He gestured, the maps of forgotten empires on the walls"
1"she said, her voice low and even,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.6748%