Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFC9NMVD5ST2D2F7BHS8QYG

Run Details

Duration:
52.5s
Cost:
$0.000739
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The heavy key finally turned the lock. Wood groaned in protest as the deadbolts yielded. The lock clicked back open with a sound too loud for the cramped hallway. Aurora dropped the package from her delivery bag. Plastic soiled with grime peeked out from the cardboard. She hesitated on the threshold, one foot inside, one on the welcome mat. The smell hit her first. Cumin and burnt oil wafted up through the kitchen gap, mingling with the dust of old parchment on the hallway floor. Lucien stood in the doorway. The doorframe was narrower than she remembered. He shifted his weight, shifting the bulk of his charcoal coat over one shoulder. His amber eye tracked the shift in her posture. The black iris stayed steady, fixed on the scar on her left wrist that peeked out from the hoodie sleeve. He did not move toward her. The door swung shut behind him, catching Aurora's shoulder in the motion. She stood frozen. The lock clicked shut. A second lock tapped into place. The third lock slid home. Ptolemy, the tabby on the rug, stopped chasing a fly and looked up. The cat meowed. "What are you doing here?" Lucien clicked his cane. The ivory handle tapped the wood floor twice. *Click, click.* He stepped back from the door, hands resting flat against his thighs. His suit looked sharp against the clutter of her flat. Scrolls lay stacked on the side table. Notes covered the desk. The cat jumped onto the chair. "Checking if you were safe," Lucien said. "Brick Lane isn't a sanctuary, Lucien." He ignored the deflection. His gaze dropped to the package on the floor. "Delivery driver. I can see that." "Aurora," she grunted. "Lucien." The names hung in the air. The air didn't feel light enough. Not right now. He was wearing an expression from a different life. One where people lied less and left often enough. "You didn't call." "I said I would only if I had news." "News about what? That the shadow has run out or that they're moving closer?" He exhaled. A heavy sound. His hand drifted up, fingers twitching near the breast pocket of his coat. "Vanessa." The word fell out hard. The delivery bag on the floor slid an inch. "Who?" "Lady of Avaros." Aurora took a step back. She looked at the cat. Then at him. The scar on her face tightened. She walked around the room and picked up the stack of books. Their spines cracked. "Why are you here, Lucien? You want to know why the curse is working on me? Why I haven't moved the business?" "I want to know why the curse is working on her." "You know where she's taken her to now?" "No." He knocked the cane against the wall again. The timber shook. "Brendan Carter called you. He asked if you still worked at the bar." "I lived in Cardiff. I didn't choose the time for the work." "I should have brought gloves this time." The noise startled her. "What?" "I was hoping for gloves. To keep me away from anything messy inside this flat." "You came here looking for gloves?" "No. I came here looking for the reason." "Reason for what?" "For the door. For the time you gave yourself." She held the scrap of paper up. The handwriting was his. She read the line she had written. It was signed a month ago. It ended with a question mark. The note hadn't come from him initially. It fell from his coat pocket when he stepped into the light. The words were scrawled in ink that looked like it had dried by the same time as the curse. She never trusted it until now. "Why didn't you come back?" she asked. "I came back before you asked. But I didn't want to let you know I was back." "You wanted me to let you know I was a liability." "I wanted you to know I paid the debt." Aurora set the books down. She walked over toward him. The gap between them closed. Then she stopped. She looked at the shoulder blade. The scent of leather and old paper stuck to his skin. "You don't know I'm working for you." "I know everything you do." "Then you know why I can't help you." "I know why you won't let yourself help anyone." The words gripped her throat. She didn't breathe for a second. The room felt too small. The air smelled of dust and old danger. "You put your life on the line for them," she snapped. "Your life is on the line." "For one another." "Not for me. For the reason." The cane dropped to the floor. It didn't roll. It landed with a solid *clink*. Lucien leaned his cane away, keeping it off the rug. He stepped aside. "Get the door." "Aurora, wait." "I deny the debt. I deny the entry. This note isn't the only reason I stay." "Who did you pay?" "I didn't pay anyone." "You're the delivery driver." "Of food." "Of secrets." He stepped back. The room felt colder without his shadow. He watched her eyes. The blue shifted. The scar on her face tightened. The light hit his face. "There are others," she said. "I know about you," he said. "You know what?" "I know what you do." "You don't know what keeps you here at night." "I don't need to know." "You need to know why you can't leave." He didn't move. He just looked at her. The amber eye narrowed. The black one stayed wide. "I don't leave," he said. "Then you don't need a key," Aurora said. "You need to decide." "I'm not going to decide." She moved around him. She reached for the phone on the table. She picked up the cordless receiver. She pressed the button. Silence. "The system doesn't work." "It works for us." "Who is the system?" "He who runs it." "They took everyone else." "They will take you if you stay here." Aurora dropped the phone. He stepped away. The cat stared at the floor. "I'll be in the kitchen." "You were going to lock the door." "I'll lock from inside." "The door." "Inside." She kicked the door open. She looked at him. He nodded. He moved closer. "Is that where the door is?" "You don't understand." "I understand too much." "I don't know myself." "I understand the door." She grabbed the door handle. "Lucien." "Go." "Go away." "I am not going away." "You didn't bring an invite." "I brought nothing." "In truth." "In truth." He stepped forward. "Lucien." He closed the gap. He took a breath. She didn't move. His shirt was stiff. The smell of him was sharp. "It's not over." "It never ends." "Then you shouldn't be here." "But I am." "Don't touch me." "No." The space shrank. The hair on her arms stood. The hair on his head slicked back. The eyes met the eyes. The breath stopped. She blinked. "You know the cost." "I know." "It's not yours to pay." "It is mine." "Not for me." "For everyone." "Not for everyone." He raised a hand. The fingers stayed there. "Go back to the restaurant." "I don't need to go anywhere." "I need you to." "Then you need to ask." "I asked." "You lied." "I lied." Aurora pushed the door. She didn't let go. "I open." "No." "Open." The door didn't move. "Open." She opened it. She held the door. She walked past him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She moved around [around]"
dialogueSentences105
tagDensity0.086
leniency0.171
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.019
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1249
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1249
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"sanctuary"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences124
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences220
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1249
ratio0.002
matches
0"Click, click."
1"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount730
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora7
Lucien4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like it had dried by the same time"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1249
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences220
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs134
mean9.32
std12.25
cv1.314
sampleLengths
029
156
255
36
446
55
653
77
86
919
103
111
1233
133
149
1514
1619
1714
181
193
2056
2111
228
231
2424
2512
267
275
2815
296
308
313
329
3368
346
357
3617
3711
389
3935
407
415
428
439
4424
4511
466
473
486
4928
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"was signed"
1"were scrawled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"was wearing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences220
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount730
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03287671232876712
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00410958904109589
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences220
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences220
mean5.68
std3.77
cv0.664
sampleLengths
07
18
214
38
49
513
65
721
85
97
1014
119
1220
136
1412
153
164
176
185
1913
203
215
224
238
2414
2510
267
274
286
297
306
314
329
336
343
351
366
376
383
399
409
413
429
4314
442
453
4613
471
485
499
36.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats30
diversityRatio0.21363636363636362
totalSentences220
uniqueOpeners47
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"Then at him."
1"Then she stopped."
ratio0.018
45.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences112
matches
0"She hesitated on the threshold,"
1"He shifted his weight, shifting"
2"His amber eye tracked the"
3"He did not move toward"
4"She stood frozen."
5"His suit looked sharp against"
6"He ignored the deflection."
7"His gaze dropped to the"
8"He was wearing an expression"
9"His hand drifted up, fingers"
10"She looked at the cat."
11"She walked around the room"
12"Their spines cracked."
13"He knocked the cane against"
14"She held the scrap of"
15"She read the line she"
16"It was signed a month"
17"It ended with a question"
18"It fell from his coat"
19"She never trusted it until"
ratio0.438
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences112
matches
0"The heavy key finally turned"
1"Wood groaned in protest as"
2"The lock clicked back open"
3"Aurora dropped the package from"
4"Plastic soiled with grime peeked"
5"She hesitated on the threshold,"
6"The smell hit her first."
7"Cumin and burnt oil wafted"
8"Lucien stood in the doorway."
9"The doorframe was narrower than"
10"He shifted his weight, shifting"
11"His amber eye tracked the"
12"The black iris stayed steady,"
13"He did not move toward"
14"The door swung shut behind"
15"She stood frozen."
16"The lock clicked shut."
17"A second lock tapped into"
18"The third lock slid home."
19"Ptolemy, the tabby on the"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she grunted (grunt)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences105
tagDensity0.076
leniency0.152
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.038
87.6161%