| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 65 | | tagDensity | 0.323 | | leniency | 0.646 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2155 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "deliberately" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 81.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2155 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "fractured" | | 3 | "methodical" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "standard" | | 6 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 155 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 198 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 22 | | totalWords | 2141 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Mandrake extract, Nightshade tincture, Bindweed ash." | | 1 | "The Lesser Key of Solomon. A Field Guide to Apotropaic Sigils. Methods of Ward and Binding." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 76 | | wordCount | 1351 | | uniqueNames | 25 | | maxNameDensity | 1.41 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 2 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 19 | | Primrose | 1 | | Hill | 1 | | Marcus | 6 | | Webb | 10 | | Market | 1 | | Aaron | 1 | | Pryce | 16 | | Maglite | 1 | | Hackney | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Nightshade | 1 | | Bindweed | 1 | | Lesser | 1 | | Key | 1 | | Solomon | 1 | | Field | 1 | | Guide | 1 | | Apotropaic | 1 | | Sigils | 1 | | Ward | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Three | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Marcus" | | 3 | "Webb" | | 4 | "Market" | | 5 | "Aaron" | | 6 | "Pryce" | | 7 | "Maglite" | | 8 | "Morris" | | 9 | "Solomon" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Primrose" | | 2 | "Hill" | | 3 | "Hackney" | | 4 | "Apotropaic" | | 5 | "Three" |
| | globalScore | 0.797 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 93.82% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like iron and something else—somet" | | 1 | "looked like a mixture of ash and oil" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 198 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 79 | | mean | 27.1 | | std | 20.67 | | cv | 0.763 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 58 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 69 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 58 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 72 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 57 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 53 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 39 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 49 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 82 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 43 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 93.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "been sealed" | | 1 | "been decommissioned" | | 2 | "been compressed" | | 3 | "being asked" | | 4 | "been smudged" | | 5 | "been disturbed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 249 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "was drawing" | | 2 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 198 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere below, a light source flickered—forensics setting up their panels." | | 1 | "The space smelled like iron and something else—something sweet and vegetal, like crushed herbs left to rot." | | 2 | "His clothes—layers of mismatched wool, canvas, and corduroy—were dry." | | 3 | "There was nothing up there—no fixtures, no beams, no exposed pipes that could have fallen." | | 4 | "\"But Webb had been living here.\" Quinn gestured at the far end of the platform where she'd spotted it—a collection of objects arranged with deliberate care." | | 5 | "She tilted her head to read the spines through the evidence bag one of the CSIs had already sealed around them—*The Lesser Key of Solomon." | | 6 | "\"—isn't always the right one.\"" | | 7 | "She examined the lock mechanism—a deadbolt with a thumb-turn on the interior side." | | 8 | "The drawing was incomplete—the bottom arc had been smudged, interrupted, as though whoever was drawing it had been disturbed." | | 9 | "His expression shifted—the professional mask slipping just enough to show the uncertainty beneath it." | | 10 | "She'd smelled it in the warehouse three years ago, right before Marcus Morris—" | | 11 | "Through the plastic sheathing of the evidence bag, she could see the cover of one book more clearly now—an old binding, cracked leather, a symbol embossed on the front that she didn't recognize." | | 12 | "The rain kept hammering the streets above them, and somewhere deep in the tunnel beyond the platform, a sound carried through the dark—low, resonant, like a bell struck once and left to fade." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1037 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.027965284474445518 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007714561234329798 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 198 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 198 | | mean | 10.81 | | std | 8.58 | | cv | 0.793 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 59.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3787878787878788 | | totalSentences | 198 | | uniqueOpeners | 75 | |
| 83.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a long corridor of" | | 1 | "Somewhere below, a light source" | | 2 | "Then she kept walking toward" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 90.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "It hammered the streets of" | | 1 | "She ducked underneath it and" | | 2 | "She checked her watch." | | 3 | "She reached the platform level" | | 4 | "He was younger than her" | | 5 | "He stood and stepped back," | | 6 | "His clothes—layers of mismatched wool," | | 7 | "She circled the body slowly," | | 8 | "His expression was almost peaceful" | | 9 | "He pointed upward." | | 10 | "She'd seen similar injuries before." | | 11 | "She pushed the thought down" | | 12 | "She didn't touch anything, just" | | 13 | "She tilted her head to" | | 14 | "She turned back toward the" | | 15 | "She'd been thinking it was" | | 16 | "She pulled her gloves on" | | 17 | "She'd been doing this long" | | 18 | "She nodded at Webb's right" | | 19 | "She held Pryce's gaze for" |
| | ratio | 0.325 | |
| 51.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hadn't stopped in" | | 1 | "It hammered the streets of" | | 2 | "Detective Harlow Quinn pulled her" | | 3 | "The entrance had been sealed" | | 4 | "She ducked underneath it and" | | 5 | "The station had been decommissioned" | | 6 | "She checked her watch." | | 7 | "The dead man's name was" | | 8 | "Street vendors in Camden Market" | | 9 | "She reached the platform level" | | 10 | "The space smelled like iron" | | 11 | "Pryce looked up." | | 12 | "He was younger than her" | | 13 | "He stood and stepped back," | | 14 | "Marcus Webb lay on his" | | 15 | "His clothes—layers of mismatched wool," | | 16 | "That was the first thing" | | 17 | "The platform was damp." | | 18 | "The air was damp." | | 19 | "Webb's clothes weren't." |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 41.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "Now he was downstairs with" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He was younger than her by a decade, still sharp enough to do the job but carrying the kind of quiet ambition that made every case a stepping stone." | | 1 | "The drawing was incomplete—the bottom arc had been smudged, interrupted, as though whoever was drawing it had been disturbed." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Pryce continued (continue)" | | 1 | "Quinn repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 65 | | tagDensity | 0.169 | | leniency | 0.338 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.062 | |