| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.481 | | leniency | 0.963 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1593 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1593 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "tapestry" | | 10 | "dance" | | 11 | "velvet" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "tracing" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "potential" | | 16 | "echoes" | | 17 | "crystal" | | 18 | "fleeting" | | 19 | "pang" | | 20 | "fragmented" | | 21 | "mosaic" | | 22 | "symphony" | | 23 | "structure" | | 24 | "enigmatic" | | 25 | "tension" | | 26 | "echo" | | 27 | "racing" | | 28 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 97.83% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "was anxious" | | 1 | "a pang of longing" | | 2 | "d in wonder" |
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| 3.11% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1573 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.70% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1391 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 3 | | Isolde | 13 | | Aurora | 19 | | Nyx | 11 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Earth" | | 5 | "Blade" | | 6 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.817 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "roots that seemed to pulse faintly" | | 1 | "streaks that seemed to move slowly, like oil on water" | | 2 | "as if absorbing the new environment" | | 3 | "felt like velvet underfoot" | | 4 | "others that seemed to emit a soft, internal glow" | | 5 | "looked like polished bone" | | 6 | "tree that seemed to hold a miniature forest within its trunk" | | 7 | "felt like it held secrets" | | 8 | "looked like they were carved from moonlig" | | 9 | "door that seemed to be part of the tree itself" | | 10 | "looked like fairies, but their forms were" | | 11 | "seemed larger inside than it should be, with corners that faded into shadow" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 6 | | per1kWords | 3.814 | | wordCount | 1573 | | matches | | 0 | "not brighter or darker, but deeper, as if colors had gained a dimension" | | 1 | "not buildings, but natural formations" | | 2 | "neither day nor" | | 3 | "not her reflection, but images" | | 4 | "Not of us, but of the grove itself" | | 5 | "not the oak standing stones from the boundary, but smaller, sleek stones" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 44.94 | | std | 24.14 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 84 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 115 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 63 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 88 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 74 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 58 | | 31 | 62 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 59 | | 34 | 62 |
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| 93.82% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "were carved" | | 1 | "were made" | | 2 | "being watched" | | 3 | "was tempered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 259 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.198 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here tasted different—cleaner, with a hint of ozone and something sweeter, like crushed herbs." | | 1 | "It wasn’t a clearing in the usual sense; the grass was impossibly green, as if lit from within, and the trees—ancient oaks, their bark etched with spiraling patterns—stood in a loose circle, their branches intertwining overhead to form a natural canopy." | | 2 | "Aurora felt it too—a vibration in the bones, a sense of pressure against her skin, as if the air itself was charged." | | 3 | "She reached into her pocket, her fingers brushing the cool metal of the Heartstone Pendant; it was inert, no pulse of warmth, but the weight was a comfort." | | 4 | "The air was still, warm, and fragrant with scents she couldn’t name—vanilla and rain-soaked earth, with an undercurrent of something metallic, like sharpened silver." | | 5 | "Wildflowers she’d never seen bloomed in profusions of color—flowers with petals that shimmered like opal, others that seemed to emit a soft, internal glow." | | 6 | "It wasn’t rough; it was warm and smooth, with patterns that swirled like fingerprints." | | 7 | "She caught glimpses of structures—not buildings, but natural formations that looked almost crafted: a stone archway draped in ivy that flowered with tiny silver bells, a hollow in a tree that seemed to hold a miniature forest within its trunk." | | 8 | "The light didn’t change; it remained in that eternal twilight state, neither day nor night." | | 9 | "The water was crystal clear, and as Aurora peered in, she saw not her reflection, but images—fleeting scenes of a forest in autumn, a castle under starlight, a figure with wings soaring through a night sky." | | 10 | "She thought of her own fragmented past—the escape from Evan, the uncertainty of her life in London." | | 11 | "They passed under an arch of flowering vines, the blossoms releasing a scent that made Aurora’s head swim—sweet and dizzying, like a forgotten memory." | | 12 | "Here, the grass was a mosaic of colors, and in the center stood a ring of stones—not the oak standing stones from the boundary, but smaller, sleek stones that looked like they were carved from moonlight." | | 13 | "The air in the clearing felt charged, and the whispers Nyx had mentioned grew louder, now almost discernible—fragments of languages she didn’t know, layered over each other like a symphony." | | 14 | "“Is this where you live?” Aurora asked Isolde, noticing a small dwelling tucked against one of the oaks—a structure of woven branches and living vines, with a door that seemed to be part of the tree itself." | | 15 | "From the shadows of the oaks, small creatures emerged—translucent, winged beings that looked like fairies, but their forms were made of light and mist." | | 16 | "The sprite giggled—a sound like chiming bells—and zipped away." | | 17 | "Isolde poured the tea—its scent was earthy and floral—and began to speak, her words weaving a riddle about paths unseen and choices that echo." | | 18 | "This place was more than a grove; it was a threshold, a breath between worlds." | | 19 | "Aurora touched the Heartstone Pendant again; it remained cool, but she had a feeling it might awaken soon." | | 20 | "The unease lingered at the edges—the time distortion, the whispers, the sense of being watched by the grove itself—but it was tempered by wonder." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1414 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.034653465346534656 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009193776520509194 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 14.84 | | std | 8.11 | | cv | 0.546 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 40 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 56.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3584905660377358 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t a clearing in" | | 1 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 2 | "She reached into her pocket," | | 3 | "Her left wrist itched where" | | 4 | "She didn’t wait for an" | | 5 | "they observed, their violet eyes" | | 6 | "She knelt by one of" | | 7 | "It wasn’t rough; it was" | | 8 | "she said, more to herself" | | 9 | "She caught glimpses of structures—not" | | 10 | "It wasn’t fear, exactly, but" | | 11 | "She caught Nyx glancing over" | | 12 | "She blinked, and it was" | | 13 | "She thought of her own" | | 14 | "They moved on, following a" | | 15 | "They passed under an arch" | | 16 | "They were cold to the" | | 17 | "They hovered at a distance," | | 18 | "It paused near her face," | | 19 | "It was moments like this" |
| | ratio | 0.236 | |
| 27.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pressed through the last" | | 1 | "The air here tasted different—cleaner," | | 2 | "Isolde murmured, her voice carrying" | | 3 | "Aurora nodded, her bright blue" | | 4 | "It wasn’t a clearing in" | | 5 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 6 | "Aurora felt it too—a vibration" | | 7 | "She reached into her pocket," | | 8 | "Her left wrist itched where" | | 9 | "Isolde stepped forward, her feet" | | 10 | "She didn’t wait for an" | | 11 | "The light shifted as she" | | 12 | "Aurora followed, and the moment" | | 13 | "The air was still, warm," | | 14 | "The sky above was no" | | 15 | "Nyx slipped through after her," | | 16 | "they observed, their violet eyes" | | 17 | "Isolde smiled, a cryptic tilt" | | 18 | "Aurora moved cautiously, her sneakers" | | 19 | "The grove unfolded around them" |
| | ratio | 0.865 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t a clearing in the usual sense; the grass was impossibly green, as if lit from within, and the trees—ancient oaks, their bark etched with spiraling pat…" | | 1 | "Beside her, Nyx shifted, their form a silhouette of living shadow that absorbed the meager light." | | 2 | "Aurora felt it too—a vibration in the bones, a sense of pressure against her skin, as if the air itself was charged." | | 3 | "The sky above was no longer the grey blanket of London but a tapestry of colors: amber and lavender streaks that seemed to move slowly, like oil on water." | | 4 | "Nyx slipped through after her, their shadow form rippling as if absorbing the new environment." | | 5 | "Aurora moved cautiously, her sneakers silent on the grass that felt like velvet underfoot." | | 6 | "Wildflowers she’d never seen bloomed in profusions of color—flowers with petals that shimmered like opal, others that seemed to emit a soft, internal glow." | | 7 | "In the distance, a stream babbled, but the water ran uphill in places, spiraling around smooth stones that looked like polished bone." | | 8 | "She caught glimpses of structures—not buildings, but natural formations that looked almost crafted: a stone archway draped in ivy that flowered with tiny silver…" | | 9 | "She caught Nyx glancing over their shoulder more than once, their form tensing slightly." | | 10 | "They passed under an arch of flowering vines, the blossoms releasing a scent that made Aurora’s head swim—sweet and dizzying, like a forgotten memory." | | 11 | "Here, the grass was a mosaic of colors, and in the center stood a ring of stones—not the oak standing stones from the boundary, but smaller, sleek stones that l…" | | 12 | "From the shadows of the oaks, small creatures emerged—translucent, winged beings that looked like fairies, but their forms were made of light and mist." | | 13 | "The interior was cozy, lit by floating orbs of light that cast a soft glow on shelves lined with jars of dried herbs and scrolls." | | 14 | "Isolde poured the tea—its scent was earthy and floral—and began to speak, her words weaving a riddle about paths unseen and choices that echo." |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they observed, their violet eyes glowing faintly as they glanced upward" | | 1 | "she said, more to herself than to the others" | | 2 | "Aurora asked, her voice low" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "they observed (observe)" | | 3 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 5 | "Nyx muttered (mutter)" | | 6 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.583 | | effectiveRatio | 0.519 | |