| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1558 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1558 | | totalAiIsms | 39 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "trembled" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "tinged" | | 9 | "resonated" | | 10 | "anticipating" | | 11 | "macabre" | | 12 | "reverberated" | | 13 | "resonance" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "searing" | | 16 | "silence" | | 17 | "rhythmic" | | 18 | "racing" | | 19 | "otherworldly" | | 20 | "intensity" | | 21 | "dancing" | | 22 | "etched" | | 23 | "weight" | | 24 | "chill" | | 25 | "echoing" | | 26 | "the last thing" | | 27 | "could feel" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her jaw" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 17.27% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1542 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 1513 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 0.79 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 12 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pulse | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to come from every direction" | | 1 | "as if anticipating blood" | | 2 | "scream that seemed to be both a shout and a sob" | | 3 | "as if breathing" | | 4 | "heartbeat that seemed to sync with her own" | | 5 | "as if shouting for something beyond the veil" | | 6 | "force that seemed to shake the very ground" | | 7 | "shadows that seemed to whisper in the language of the grove" | | 8 | "abyss that seemed to stretch forever" |
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| 70.30% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.297 | | wordCount | 1542 | | matches | | 0 | "not oak but carved from bone, each one etched with names she recognized" | | 1 | "not by her lips but by the stones themselves" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.59% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 46.73 | | std | 13.65 | | cv | 0.292 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 61 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 58 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 66 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 60 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 59 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 55 | | 31 | 64 | | 32 | 32 |
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| 97.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "was lifted" | | 1 | "been started" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 267 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.151 | | matches | | 0 | "A shudder rippled through the grove; the stones trembled, and a sound like cracked glass echoed from the underbrush." | | 1 | "She spun, hand snapping to the edge of the stone wall, and saw a shape flicker between the ferns—too thin, too tall, its limbs bending in ways that defied human anatomy." | | 2 | "Its eyes—if they could be called that—glimmered pale, reflecting the pendant's inner light." | | 3 | "She looked around—no creature remained, but the stones stood as they always had, their ancient faces smooth and unyielding." | | 4 | "She pressed it against the centre stone, and the stone split open, revealing a warped reflection—a world beyond the veil, a landscape of twisted trees and endless night, a sky choked with unseen suns." | | 5 | "A voice—her own, but older—whispered from within the reflection." | | 6 | "She could see shapes moving within—shadows shifting, forming eyes that stared back at her from the darkness." | | 7 | "She jerked, eyes widening as another tendril—identical to the one that had tried to choke her—snapped up from the fissure, wrapping itself around her calf." | | 8 | "The creature—if it could still be called that—reformed from the ash, now larger, its form a mass of living bark and glowing ember." | | 9 | "Its many eyes opened, each one reflecting the burning pendant, each one focusing on Aurora with an hunger that went beyond appetite; it was a hunger for her essence, for the portal she had opened." | | 10 | "The ground beneath Aurora's feet gave way entirely, and she fell—freefalling into a black abyss that seemed to stretch forever." | | 11 | "It illuminated a set of standing stones at the bottom of the abyss—stones that were not oak but carved from bone, each one etched with names she recognized, names from a lineage she thought dead." | | 12 | "The figure raised a hand, and a whisper floated on the wind—her name, spoken not by her lips but by the stones themselves." | | 13 | "The portal yawned open—she could feel the pull of something vast beyond, something that wanted her, needed her, perhaps to finish what had been started centuries ago." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1529 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.030085022890778287 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003924133420536298 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 16.58 | | std | 7.12 | | cv | 0.43 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 34 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 26.34% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.24731182795698925 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 82.22% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She crouched, eyes tearing through" | | 1 | "She spun, hand snapping to" | | 2 | "Its eyes—if they could be" | | 3 | "It lifted a hand, and" | | 4 | "She leapt back, the pendant's" | | 5 | "it rasped, voice a mixture" | | 6 | "She gripped the pendant tighter," | | 7 | "She felt the words coil" | | 8 | "She flung the pendant forward," | | 9 | "Its limbs elongated, thinning, stretching" | | 10 | "She gagged, the pressure building" | | 11 | "she gasped, clawing at the" | | 12 | "She looked around—no creature remained," | | 13 | "She knelt, pulling the pendant" | | 14 | "It pulsed once more, now" | | 15 | "She pressed it against the" | | 16 | "She stared at the reflection," | | 17 | "She could see shapes moving" | | 18 | "She jerked, eyes widening as" | | 19 | "It pulled her down, dragging" |
| | ratio | 0.344 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The night swallowed the clearing," | | 1 | "A shudder rippled through the" | | 2 | "She crouched, eyes tearing through" | | 3 | "Something clinked behind her." | | 4 | "She spun, hand snapping to" | | 5 | "Aurora's voice cut the stillness," | | 6 | "The echo answered with a" | | 7 | "A figure emerged, draped in" | | 8 | "Its eyes—if they could be" | | 9 | "It lifted a hand, and" | | 10 | "She leapt back, the pendant's" | | 11 | "The scar tinged black for" | | 12 | "The creature hissed, a sound" | | 13 | "it rasped, voice a mixture" | | 14 | "Aurora snapped, stepping closer" | | 15 | "The creature recoiled, but its" | | 16 | "She gripped the pendant tighter," | | 17 | "The creature tilted its head," | | 18 | "A gust of wind surged" | | 19 | "Leaves rustled upward, forming a" |
| | ratio | 0.922 | |
| 55.56% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Just as her fingers brushed" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | technicalSentenceCount | 20 | | matches | | 0 | "She crouched, eyes tearing through the wildflowers that bloomed out of season, their petals catching the faint crimson glow that emanated from the jewel." | | 1 | "She spun, hand snapping to the edge of the stone wall, and saw a shape flicker between the ferns—too thin, too tall, its limbs bending in ways that defied human…" | | 2 | "She leapt back, the pendant's warmth flaring, casting a thin halo around her wrist scar." | | 3 | "The ground split open beside her, yawning darkness that breathed cold." | | 4 | "From the fissure, a low guttural chant rose, a chorus of overlapping syllables in a language that prickled the back of her throat." | | 5 | "Its limbs elongated, thinning, stretching into thin tendrils that lashed at the air." | | 6 | "The pendant pulsed violently, heat exploding up her arm, searing the scar on her wrist." | | 7 | "The wildflowers swayed, their motion too deliberate, as if breathing." | | 8 | "It pulsed once more, now a steady, rhythmic heartbeat that seemed to sync with her own." | | 9 | "The choppy syllables of the earlier chant rose again, louder, more urgent, as if shouting for something beyond the veil." | | 10 | "It pulled her down, dragging her toward the opening with a force that threatened to tear her boots from their soles." | | 11 | "The flame licked the fissure, melting the dark tendril instantly, turning it to ash that drifted away on the night wind." | | 12 | "The flames burned with a blue intensity, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to whisper in the language of the grove." | | 13 | "Its many eyes opened, each one reflecting the burning pendant, each one focusing on Aurora with an hunger that went beyond appetite; it was a hunger for her ess…" | | 14 | "The ground beneath Aurora's feet gave way entirely, and she fell—freefalling into a black abyss that seemed to stretch forever." | | 15 | "She tumbled past spiralling roots, past floating petals that burned as she passed them." | | 16 | "It illuminated a set of standing stones at the bottom of the abyss—stones that were not oak but carved from bone, each one etched with names she recognized, nam…" | | 17 | "The creature's voice roared behind her, a sound that reverberated through bone and blood." | | 18 | "The pendant slipped from her fingers, spinning in the air, and landed on the ground with a final, resonant thud that echoed through the abyss and beyond." | | 19 | "The portal yawned open—she could feel the pull of something vast beyond, something that wanted her, needed her, perhaps to finish what had been started centurie…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora snapped (snap)" | | 1 | "she gasped (gasp)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |