Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFCHJ883QYNSNTJX1YRY3KR

Run Details

Duration:
48.0s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The second deadbolt’s tumblers had barely clicked before the door swung inward, propelled by a force beyond the gust of night air. Rory stood in the doorway, key ring dangling from her thumb, a canvas bag of takeout menus swinging at her hip. She froze. He filled the frame, a slash of charcoal and silver in the dim hallway light of Eva’s building. His platinum hair gleamed, slicked back in its usual severe style. The ivory handle of his cane glowed soft in the gloom. Lucien Moreau. Here. Unannounced. “Luc.” The name left her mouth flat, a statement of fact. “Rory.” His voice was a low rumble, the accent that turned English into something richer, darker, wrapping around the single syllable. His mismatched eyes—amber like aged whisky, the other a void of black—took in the sight of her. They lingered a fraction too long on the small crescent scar on her left wrist, now exposed by the sleeve of her worn band t-shirt. “May I come in?” It wasn’t really a question. He was already moving, a smooth, confident glide that brushed past her, close enough for the scent of old paper, sandalwood, and something faintly metallic, like ozone after a storm, to envelop her. He didn’t wait for permission. He never did, not really. He requested it as a formality. She shut the door, the three deadbolts sliding home with a series of heavy, final sounds. The finality matched the drop in her stomach. She turned. He stood in the center of the cramped living room, his presence somehow making the space feel smaller. Books and scrolls spilled from every surface, a testament to Eva’s obsessive research. Ptolemy, the fat tabby, flowed from atop a precarious stack of medieval bestiaries to wind between Lucien’s polished shoes, purring like a diesel engine. He bent, scratching the cat behind the ears with a gentleness that seemed at odds with the sharp angles of him. “You’re not Eva,” he said, straightening. “No. She’s in Prague. Following a lead on a binding sigil mentioned in a 15th-century manuscript.” Rory dropped her bag on the one clear corner of the kitchen counter. Her movements felt stiff, robotic. “How did you know I was here?” “I know everything, ma chérie. Or, close enough.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips, not reaching his eyes. The black one seemed to swallow the light. “I asked Yu-Fei. She said you were covering Eva’s deliveries while she was away.” “She didn’t tell you which flat.” “Yu-Fei is a formidable woman. She requires persuasion.” He didn’t elaborate. Lucien’s methods of persuasion ranged from charm to veiled threats to the simple, devastating weight of his reputation. “I needed to see you. To ensure you were… well.” “I’m well.” The words tasted like ash. She crossed her arms, a flimsy barricade. “You could have called. Sent a text. Carrier pigeon. Any of the standard methods of the 21st century.” “Standard is rarely effective with you, Rory. You’re an expert at evasion. At leaving messages unread.” He stepped closer, navigating the maze of research with an unnerving familiarity. He knew this flat. He’d been here before, back when things were… different. Before the mess in Berlin. Before the words they’d hurled like weapons. Before she’d walked out of his life and convinced herself it was for good. “I was busy.” A weak defense. Her heart was hammering against her ribs. “Busy.” He repeated the word, tasting it. “Yes. Delivering wonton soup and duck pancakes. A noble profession for a woman who outsmarted the Binder of Prague.” “That was a one-time thing. And it was mostly luck.” “Luck is a coward’s word for opportunity seized by a prepared mind.” He stopped in front of her. He was taller, a solid six feet of tailored suit and quiet danger. He used to lean down, whisper that very phrase in French against her temple. She resisted the urge to step back. She would not cede ground. “What do you want, Lucien?” “Direct. Good.” His gaze swept her face, cataloging every change, every new line of fatigue. “I have a proposition. A job. It requires your particular… talents. Discretion, lateral thinking, and an ability to move through mundane worlds without raising alarms.” “I have a job.” “Paying rent by the mile is not a career, it’s a treadmill.” “It’s honest work.” “Honesty is a luxury in our world. One you can no longer afford.” His tone shifted, losing its veneer of polite inquiry. Hardness crept in, the steel beneath the silk. “Evan is out.” The name hit her like a physical blow. Ice flooded her veins. She uncrossed her arms, her fingers curling into fists at her sides. “What?” “Released from custody two days ago. The restraining order is a piece of paper, Rory. You know what he is. What he’s capable of. He’s already made inquiries. He’s looking for you.” The air left her lungs. The cozy, cluttered flat suddenly felt like a trap. The stacks of books were hiding places. The three deadbolts on the door felt laughably flimsy. “How… how do you know that?” “Because I have made it my business to know.” His voice softened, a dangerous, deceptive caress. “I told you, when we parted, that my protection did not expire with our… arrangement. I have kept watch.” “You spied on me.” “I monitored a threat. There is a difference. One born of care, not control.” He reached out, not to touch her, but to pick up a heavy glass paperweight from a side table, turning it over in his long fingers. “He will come here. He will find this place. Eva’s research provides a good cover, but it is not a fortress.” “And your job offer? What is it, really? A gilded cage on your arm, for my own safety?” The bitterness surprised her. It was an old wound, scraped raw. He set the paperweight down with a precise click. His heterochromatic eyes held hers. “The job is real. A private collection in Kensington, acquired by a man who deals in cursed antiquities. He believes he has acquired the Tears of Astaroth. They are, in fact, a very elaborate fake. But the fake is protecting the real one, hidden in plain sight. I need someone to attend his gala, identify the real artifact, and retrieve it. You move in those circles. You understand the mundane mind, the obsession with status. You can talk your way past the guards and the wards.” “And what’s in it for you?” “The artifact is worth a fortune. And the collector slighted me, once. It is a matter of professional reputation.” The story was plausible. Lucien never did anything for a single reason. Layered, complex, his motives were a labyrinth. She’d loved that about him, once. Now, it just made her tired. “I’m not a thief.” “You’re a survivor. This is about survival, Rory. Not pride. Not the ghosts of old arguments.” He took a step, closing the last of the distance between them. He didn’t touch her, but she felt the heat of him, a crackling energy that had nothing to do with the supernatural and everything to do with the man himself. “He will hurt you. You know he will. He never could stand to lose.” She remembered the feel of Evan’s hands, the glint in his eyes that promised pain wrapped in an apology. She remembered the cold terror, the shrinking of her world to the space of his temper. Lucien was right. A piece of paper wouldn’t stop him. “And your price for this protection?” she whispered. “Your time. Your skills. Your presence at my side, for as long as the job requires. We work together. Professionally.” The word hung in the air, a challenge and a concession. “And after?” “After, the threat is neutralized. Permanently. And you are free. Truly free.” He said it like a vow. “I give you my word, Rory. On my name and my blood.” It was the highest oath he could make. Half-demon he might be, but his word, once given, was unbreakable. She knew that. It was one of the first things she’d learned to trust about him, back when trust was easy. She looked past him, to the window overlooking the grimy Brick Lane street. A neon sign from the curry house below painted one side of his face in lurid pink and green. His black eye was a deep shadow, the amber one a burning coal. The fear for Evan was a cold, slimy thing in her gut. But the thought of working with Lucien, of being near him again, stirred something else. Something she’d buried under months of distance and busywork. It was the memory of his laugh in the dark, the precise way he folded his napkin, the single time she’d seen his carefully composed mask slip, revealing a raw, aching need that mirrored her own. It was the hurt, yes. But underneath it, like a stubborn root beneath scorched earth, was the attraction. It had never died. It had just gone dormant. “Just the job?” she asked, her voice steadier now. “Just the job,” he confirmed. But his gaze dropped to her mouth for a heartbeat, a betraying flicker in the controlled facade. The cat, Ptolemy, meowed loudly, breaking the spell. He trotted to his empty food bowl and looked pointedly at Rory. She blew out a long breath, the tension in her shoulders loosening by a single, critical degree. “I need to feed the cat. And you’re going to tell me everything. Every detail. No secrets, Luc. Not this time.” A real smile touched his lips then, sharp and brilliant. “I would expect nothing less.” She moved toward the kitchen, feeling his eyes on her back. The weight of his gaze was familiar, a blanket she’d once worn willingly. Now, it felt like a warning and an invitation all tangled into one. She opened a can of cat food, the mundane sound clanging in the charged silence. He had not come here just for a job. They both knew that. But for now, it was the story they would tell each other. It was the fragile, necessary lie that would get her through the door and out of the path of one monster, and back into the orbit of another.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The words tasted like [like]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.039
76.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1724
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"really"
count3
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
2"suddenly"
3"truly"
4"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1724
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"testament"
count1
3
word"charm"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"ensure"
count1
6
word"standard"
count2
7
word"navigating"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"complex"
count1
11
word"glint"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"facade"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"familiar"
count1
16
word"charged"
count1
17
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"stomach"
2"testament"
3"charm"
4"weight"
5"ensure"
6"standard"
7"navigating"
8"whisper"
9"silk"
10"complex"
11"glint"
12"flicker"
13"facade"
14"tension"
15"familiar"
16"charged"
17"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen86
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1722
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1143
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Moreau1
English1
Lucien6
Rory3
Berlin1
French1
Hardness1
Evan2
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Hardness"
5"Evan"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Berlin"
1"French"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
86.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a trap"
1"felt like a warning and an invitation a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.581
wordCount1722
matches
0"not to touch her, but to pick up a heavy glass paperweight from a side table, turn"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean34.44
std27.04
cv0.785
sampleLengths
045
144
211
367
454
5102
66
741
842
96
1039
1132
1267
1313
1426
1510
1657
175
1840
194
2012
213
2233
2325
2432
2536
2635
274
2861
2929
30100
316
3219
3331
344
3572
3645
378
3831
392
4030
4140
4245
4399
449
4522
4620
4738
4815
49105
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
83.04% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was already moving"
1"was hammering"
2"were hiding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences138
ratio0.007
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—amber like aged whisky, the other a void of black—took in the sight of her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1146
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.028795811518324606
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008726003490401396
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean12.48
std10.25
cv0.822
sampleLengths
022
121
22
318
411
511
62
71
81
911
1021
1117
1225
134
145
1533
165
175
186
1916
208
212
2218
2313
2424
2521
266
2729
285
297
3020
318
3214
336
3411
3518
3610
377
387
3918
4028
414
428
431
445
457
4614
476
487
497
41.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences101
matches
0"He filled the frame, a"
1"His platinum hair gleamed, slicked"
2"His voice was a low"
3"His mismatched eyes—amber like aged"
4"They lingered a fraction too"
5"It wasn’t really a question."
6"He was already moving, a"
7"He didn’t wait for permission."
8"He never did, not really."
9"He requested it as a"
10"She shut the door, the"
11"He stood in the center"
12"He bent, scratching the cat"
13"he said, straightening"
14"Her movements felt stiff, robotic."
15"He didn’t elaborate"
16"She crossed her arms, a"
17"He stepped closer, navigating the"
18"He knew this flat."
19"He’d been here before, back"
ratio0.574
14.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences101
matches
0"The second deadbolt’s tumblers had"
1"Rory stood in the doorway,"
2"He filled the frame, a"
3"His platinum hair gleamed, slicked"
4"The ivory handle of his"
5"The name left her mouth"
6"His voice was a low"
7"His mismatched eyes—amber like aged"
8"They lingered a fraction too"
9"It wasn’t really a question."
10"He was already moving, a"
11"He didn’t wait for permission."
12"He never did, not really."
13"He requested it as a"
14"She shut the door, the"
15"The finality matched the drop"
16"He stood in the center"
17"Books and scrolls spilled from"
18"Ptolemy, the fat tabby, flowed"
19"He bent, scratching the cat"
ratio0.891
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences101
matches
0"Before the mess in Berlin."
1"Before the words they’d hurled"
2"Before she’d walked out of"
3"Now, it just made her"
4"Now, it felt like a"
ratio0.05
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He was already moving, a smooth, confident glide that brushed past her, close enough for the scent of old paper, sandalwood, and something faintly metallic, lik…"
1"He bent, scratching the cat behind the ears with a gentleness that seemed at odds with the sharp angles of him."
2"He didn’t touch her, but she felt the heat of him, a crackling energy that had nothing to do with the supernatural and everything to do with the man himself."
3"She remembered the feel of Evan’s hands, the glint in his eyes that promised pain wrapped in an apology."
4"It was the memory of his laugh in the dark, the precise way he folded his napkin, the single time she’d seen his carefully composed mask slip, revealing a raw, …"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"The name left, a statement of fact"
1"a smile touched, not reaching his eyes"
2"she asked, her voice steadier now"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He repeated (repeat)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he confirmed (confirm)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.118
81.4369%