Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFCK3N1FRS2SAFWMV6QH11K

Run Details

Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.000780
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air bit Rory's skin. Sharp cold. She stopped moving. Breath fogged in the London night. Moss covered everything. The moss grew between the standing stones. Thick. Velvet. She liked how it felt under her fingertips. She waited. Head tilted. The pines dropped shadows. Long. Black fingers. "Hello?" She clamped her hand over the pendant. The gem pulsed. Deep crimson caught in her palm. Warmth trickled down her wrist. It told her somewhere the sound had been. "Five minutes. Please." She held the ticket. Delivery manifest. "Rory. Fifteen. Twelve." Her watch ticked. The grove time was different. She remembered the way it felt. Soft. Past life. Time stretched here like taffy. Birds did not sing. A dead silence pressed against ears. She shook the thought. Focus on the wall. Focus on the light. She spotted the shift first. Pulse of green light behind the bark. Just across the seam. Rory froze. The hair on her neck lifted. She leaned forward. Pink flowers bloomed where weeds stood yesterday. The roots shifted. White mold. The moon cut through the canopy. She felt her wrist. Scar throbbed small crescent. The moonlight moved, but it did not pass. It stopped at the standing stone. The stones moved. Not wind. Not push. A slow inch. Away from her. She took the step back. Feet found no dirt. Mud vanished under boots. She kept walking. She whispered the name. "Evan." Voice shook. "Come here. I need you." She knew it not. No response. Rory bit her lip. Flavor of copper. She checked the signs. "Wrong." She pointed the bare foot. She left a footprint. Then the other found no rest. The teeth showed. Gap between. She saw the bone reach out. Rory spun. Nothing there. The darkness swallowed her. She spun again. Shadows danced in the light. They did not dance. They dragged her hem. Tightened grip on the bag. Gold. She kept the bag. She checked the gold. Chain shone bright. She pulled. The chain held. The stone hummed. It wanted. She held the pendant closer. Glottis locked in throat. She held the cord. "Stay here. Do not move." The voice did not match the mouth. Cold wind hit her face. It did not make sense. Wind came from the ground. It pulled from the saplings. She raised the hand. Fingers clicked together. Click. Click. Click. She listened to the rhythm. Silence echoed. Silence. Silence. She counted breaths. One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Six. The number reached six, but the sound did not match. "Rory. Let me in." Her name came out of the dark. Clear as a bell. She did not speak back. She watched it happen. Her throat closed. Sound did not move. She let it move. The voice did not hurt. The sound did. It scraped raw nerve. She pulled on the hair. Hair fell away. Black. Straight. It fell past shoulders. She did not pull the hair from her back. The hair had weight. It was heavy. She felt it sink. She pulled the hair back. The stone stood tall. Giant. The surface shimmered. She saw the reflection. Face twisted. Eyes wide open. Blue. Bright blue. She refused to blink. "Run." The word felt like acid. She did not have legs. She ran closer to the edge. Her sneakers scuffed. Wood splintered. She jumped. Legs held. Ground caught. She pressed the palm into the earth. Grass sprouted. Fast as growing. Blue leaves. She pulled her hand back. Hand felt plastic. Skin felt cold. The hand was not flesh. Hand was dead. It did not bleed. The wound did not open. She tucked the first bag. The heartstone glowing bright red. She clutched it tight. She did not drop. She gripped. She gripped. She gripped. It felt like a knife. Stabbing deep in the inside. She held it. She stood up. Stepped backward. One foot found the air. She planted the other. Hand on the ground. She needed traction. None would stay. She dug. Dirt did not give. Gravel moved. She looked down. Gravel bounded. Like a wave. No sound came. The movement did not exist. "Help." She said it again. She said the word loud. "Help." No one answered. She wanted someone loud. She needed noise. She wanted the noise loud. She needed to hear it. Night fell hard. Dark swallowed light. She stood still. Nothing in the air. She breathed. Air tasted like ash. She tasted it. It did not go down. It stayed in the mouth. "Look." Silence. She opened eyes wide. Darkness filled the view. The shapes moved. The stones moved. The shadows stretched long. She watched the bushes. Green. Bright green. They did not fade. They grew. They pushed. They wanted her inside. She stepped back. Legs buckled. She held it down. She held her stance. She did not fall. She did not stop. She did not stop. The pendant buzzed. She felt the heat. It burned her wrist. Scar burned first. Pulse in blood. She held the heart pulse. She kept the pulse. "We know you." She turned back. Faces emerged. Faces from wood. Faces from the night. They stood. They smiled. They moved toward her. She turned again. She looked behind. No one stood there. No one stood. Someone stood behind. Someone stood close. Something stood too close. Distance closed. She did not speak. She looked. The eyes shined. Black eyes. Deep. The voice did not stay. The voice left. The voice moved on. She looked at the path. The path was gone. The stone was gone. Only the footprints. Only the footprints. Only the footprints.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount931
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount931
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"silence"
count5
4
word"pulse"
count4
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"dance"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"pulse"
5"throbbed"
6"dance"
7"echoed"
8"weight"
9"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences254
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences254
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences267
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen10
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords931
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount901
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory4
London1
Black3
Click3
Silence4
Hand3
Faces3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silence"
2"Hand"
3"Faces"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences22
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount931
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences267
matches(empty)
39.06% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean32.1
std9.2
cv0.287
sampleLengths
036
111
230
334
438
523
628
729
818
938
1024
1122
1230
1320
1438
1547
1639
1724
1835
1935
2037
2148
2231
2332
2439
2525
2649
2725
2846
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences254
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs221
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences267
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount901
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02885682574916759
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003329633740288568
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences267
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences267
mean3.49
std1.61
cv0.461
sampleLengths
05
12
23
36
43
57
61
71
88
92
102
114
121
132
141
157
163
176
185
198
203
214
222
233
243
255
266
271
282
295
304
316
324
334
344
355
367
374
382
396
403
417
423
432
446
454
464
478
486
493
40.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats49
diversityRatio0.35580524344569286
totalSentences267
uniqueOpeners95
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences187
matches
0"Just across the seam."
1"Away from her."
2"Then the other found no"
3"Only the footprints."
4"Only the footprints."
5"Only the footprints."
ratio0.032
25.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount91
totalSentences187
matches
0"She stopped moving."
1"She liked how it felt"
2"She clamped her hand over"
3"It told her somewhere the"
4"She held the ticket."
5"Her watch ticked."
6"She remembered the way it"
7"She shook the thought."
8"She spotted the shift first."
9"She leaned forward."
10"She felt her wrist."
11"It stopped at the standing"
12"She took the step back."
13"She kept walking."
14"She whispered the name."
15"She knew it not."
16"She checked the signs."
17"She pointed the bare foot."
18"She left a footprint."
19"She saw the bone reach"
ratio0.487
26.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount162
totalSentences187
matches
0"The air bit Rory's skin."
1"She stopped moving."
2"Breath fogged in the London"
3"Moss covered everything."
4"The moss grew between the"
5"She liked how it felt"
6"The pines dropped shadows."
7"She clamped her hand over"
8"The gem pulsed."
9"Warmth trickled down her wrist."
10"It told her somewhere the"
11"She held the ticket."
12"Her watch ticked."
13"The grove time was different."
14"She remembered the way it"
15"Time stretched here like taffy."
16"Birds did not sing."
17"A dead silence pressed against"
18"She shook the thought."
19"She spotted the shift first."
ratio0.866
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences187
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences1
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.6966%