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Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFCNGBEAXR55YAF3MAVYW6E
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 9B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 43s
Cost:
$0.001477
Provider:
Together
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
88.54%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
82.81%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
74.24%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
90.30%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
37.15%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
79.1015%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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AI
The key snapped in the
lock.
Rory pushed the heavy panel
against the frame and leaned her shoulder to wedge it tight.
Her breath fogged the cold
brass knuckles on the delivery sleeve.
The kitchen window cracked open
three inches against the wind.
Rain hissed like rats along
the dirty glass.
Rory wiped her hand on
her thigh and exhaled.
She stepped back into the
main room.
The smell of damp felt
like a ghost. The door handle turned. Hard metal scratched against the painted wood. Rory froze.
The box balanced on the
hallway table
started to
slide.
She steadied it with a
palm. The wood groaned.
The door swung open, and
the narrow staircase light from below washed over the floor.
Lucien walked through the gap
without removing his shoes.
His dark suit spilled charcoal
dust onto the varnished wood. He ignored the lamp.
He stood as tall as
a tense tree. "Rory," Lucien said.
His voice cut low and
smooth. "I commanded the lock."
She kept the box tight
between her legs. "Locks rust."
He looked around the room
. The walls held yellowed papers and tattered maps peeling from the damp plaster. "Your flat is a nest." "I am studying."
She stepped back towards the
door. Her heart beat fast.
She pulled her sleeve over
her left wrist, hiding the crescent scar from the childhood accident. "You lied," Lucien said. He walked past her
slowly
.
He held his forehead with
one hand. He walked towards her.
He stopped where the kitchen
fume extractor hummed. "About what?" Rory asked. "A promise I made three months ago." He lifted his cane. The ivory handle glowed in the cheap light. A shadow fell on his face. "I told you I wouldn't come back until you were gone." Lucien placed the cane on the table.
He tapped the metal end
with a finger. "Now I am here." "I am not staying." Rory moved to grab the box. She gripped the side handles. The metal was cold. "You are not going."
He stepped closer
. The air smelled of expensive perfume and old books. "Yu-Fei Cheung calls. He needs a courier." "I drive trucks." She kept her voice steady. The scar on her wrist itched under her sleeve. "He needs a fixer." Lucien leaned on the cane. He tilted his head. "Someone with a reputation." Lucien stepped back. He reached for his coat pocket. Shadows moved under the dark fabric. "Give me the list." Rory said. She loosened the box grip. Her fingers
trembled
. "You will not do this for me." "You are not asking." Rory pointed her finger at the couch. "Move out of the hallway." "Or what?" Lucien sneered. He smiled
slowly
. It showed white teeth. "Or I come again." He pulled the coat away. The metal blade shot out. It gleamed like a silver river in the dark air. Rory's breath stopped. She felt the heat on her neck. He put the blade back. He held the cane like a weapon. The blade retracted with a click. "I know about your lawyer." Lucien sat on the high chair in the corner. He straddled the wooden seat. He crossed his legs. "Don't." Rory backed against the fridge. The white plastic warmed her cold skin. "Brendan Carter sent the bill." Lucien looked at her eyes. His cornea shifted. One eye reflected amber light while the other held black glass. "He is waiting." "He is not here." Rory whispered. The kitchen hum grew louder under the noise. "He is." Lucien stood up. He walked
slowly
around the narrow space. He ignored the books on the shelves that
looked like faces trapped in paper
. "He asked me to collect." "Collect what?" Rory blocked the doorway with her body. She felt the hard floor under her shoes. "The blood." Lucien said. He stopped right in front of her. The cane vanished inside the sleeve of his coat. "You know he is dead." Rory narrowed her eyes. She
could feel
the
tension
rippling through the room. "It was the war." "Decades ago." Lucien said. He reached out and touched the wall. His finger was cold like ice. "They remembered the name." Rory pulled her hand up. She touched her own throat. Her
pulse
hammered against her veins. "He was not telling you the truth." Lucien's fingers moved. He tapped her shoulder. He felt the scar there under the skin. "Brian's also dead." "I am here." Rory said. She backed up against the counter. The tiles were hard. "Or I take you." Lucien stepped closer. He inhaled the air. He smelled sour. He smelled of rain and old money. "I take you to the deal." "You cannot take me." Rory gripped the edge of the counter. The wood felt rough. "I have a transaction pending." Lucien said. He moved his body closer until his coat brushed her arm. "I need a courier." "You are the courier." Rory glared at the floor. She did not look up at the black scars above his eyes. "I am the fixer." Lucien's lips curved. He did not show his teeth this time. "And you were the courier we both knew." Rory pulled her hand. She reached for the knife tucked in her sleeve. It felt heavy. "I am not selling my life." Rory said. "Then you are buying time." Lucien said. He took the knife from her sleeve. He gripped it with his thumb. He rewound the steel blade back into the handle. "Give it back." Rory felt a cold
chill
on her wrist. Her skin was blue with fear. "I have a better weapon." Lucien said. He pointed the cane at her chest. He walked back. He walked past the bin. He walked to the door. He stopped at the threshold. He pointed the cane out. The blade flashed sideways. "Walk with me." Lucien said. "If I don't?" Rory held her hand out. The scar peeked from under the sleeve. "Then the door does not open." Lucien opened the door. The light from the hall washed his back. "Either choose the key or me." Rory stood in the middle of the room. The air grew tight. The smell of curry drifted from the window. She looked at the box. She looked at the weapon. The cane leaned against her shoulder. She felt the cold metal touch her skin. Lucien waited. He held the door wide open. The rain hissed against the glass. "I am done." Rory said. "Done with what?" Lucien asked. "The safe." Rory turned the key. The lock clicked. Lucien stepped back. He looked at the door. He gripped the handle with his hand. "We must discuss the fee." "I need it." Rory pushed the door open. She moved into the hallway. "My lawyers." "They are rubbish." Lucien stepped past her. He guided her to the stairs. "Stay close." "I will not let them kill me." Rory held the side of the banister. It was rough wood. "I can protect you." Lucien said. He stepped past the busker playing a violin. The music swelled their voices. "I do not want you here." Rory said. She turned her face into the stairwell shadows. "You think I want to be here?" Lucien asked. He paused. His cane hit the floor. A hiss slipped out of his mouth. "Then why?" Rory stepped down. One foot upon the rug. "Because I am the only one who can stop the contract." Lucien said. He walked fast. He did not turn around. "To the door." Rory said. She walked fast. She felt the walls press against her. "We are done." "I have time to ask." Lucien said. He smiled at the stairs. His eyes held fire in the dark. "Ask." Rory said. "Then I ask for command." Lucien said. He walked down the first step. "I will not give it." Rory said. "Then I take it." Lucien said. He took the hand. His hand was warm. It held her grip tight like a chain. "Rory." Lucien said. "Leave me." Rory pulled her hand. Her grip was strong. Lucien did not move. He stepped down again. The cane hit the floor. It spun. "I will break." Lucien said. He turned her to face him. His eyes stared into hers. "Or I die." "I know you die." Rory pulled the door open. She held the key. Rain hissed. She walked out. Lucien followed. He opened the door. He stepped through. He did not close it. The door stood wide. "Come in." Rory said. Her voice was calm. It was not warm. Lucien stepped into the room. He put his cane in the corner. He found a chair. Rory dropped the key. The metal clinked on the floor. "Stay." Rory said. Lucien sat. He crossed his legs. He stared at her through the dim light. "Then we talk." Rory sat on the floor. Her knees touched the wood. "About what happened." "It is the contract." Lucien said. He leaned against the back of the chair. "I am not a demon." Rory said. She looked at the scar. The skin was pale against her arm. "You are a fixer." Lucien said. He did not blink. "And you are a lawyer." Rory stood up. She walked towards the window. Her shadow fell on the walls. "I have to work." Rory said. "Tonight." Lucien said. He did not move from the chair. "Tomorrow." Rory looked at the first step. The rain washed away the dust. "Tomorrow." "I am here." Lucien said. He stood up. He walked to her side. He placed his hand on her shoulder. His touch was cold. "I will not check your
pulse
." Rory lifted her face. Her eyes held fear and anger. "You know I can kill you." Lucien said. He pulled the hand from her. "I know." Rory said. She backed away. The wall stopped her movement. "You know I know." "I killed your father." Lucien said. Rory froze. Her fingers gripped the fabric hidden in her sleeve. "She was the one." Lucien tapped the chest. The scar on his own
was hidden
under the coat. "Not Brendan." Rory paled. The blood in her veins
felt like stopped water
. "Go." Rory said. "Stay." Lucien reached for the door hinge. It was locked. He pulled it hard. It did not snap. He pushed against the wood. "We are done." Rory said. She touched the handle. "I do not finish until it is done." Lucien said. He smiled
slowly
. The room went dark.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
76
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"He looked around [around]"
1
"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences
104
tagDensity
0.731
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.026
effectiveRatio
0.026
88.54%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1745
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
4
highlights
0
"slowly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
82.81%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1745
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"trembled"
count
1
1
word
"could feel"
count
1
2
word
"tension"
count
1
3
word
"pulse"
count
2
4
word
"chill"
count
1
highlights
0
"trembled"
1
"could feel"
2
"tension"
3
"pulse"
4
"chill"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
261
matches
0
"e with fear"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
261
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"started to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
288
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
18
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1745
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
42
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
93
wordCount
1342
uniqueNames
3
maxNameDensity
3.43
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
6
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien
45
Rory
46
One
2
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Rory"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0
windowScore
0
74.24%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
99
glossingSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"felt like a ghost"
1
"looked like faces trapped in paper"
2
"felt like stopped water"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1745
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
288
matches
(empty)
90.30%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
104
mean
16.78
std
7.82
cv
0.466
sampleLengths
0
51
1
24
2
11
3
36
4
31
5
9
6
12
7
25
8
29
9
28
10
4
11
7
12
18
13
30
14
19
15
23
16
17
17
17
18
15
19
14
20
7
21
16
22
15
23
20
24
28
25
23
26
13
27
27
28
14
29
31
30
17
31
20
32
22
33
21
34
16
35
25
36
15
37
27
38
15
39
22
40
21
41
23
42
16
43
8
44
29
45
17
46
27
47
14
48
5
49
15
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
261
matches
0
"was hidden"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
287
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
288
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1342
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.01639344262295082
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.0029806259314456036
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
288
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
288
mean
6.06
std
2.74
cv
0.452
sampleLengths
0
6
1
16
2
11
3
10
4
8
5
9
6
7
7
8
8
4
9
7
10
2
11
10
12
6
13
3
14
15
15
9
16
10
17
4
18
8
19
3
20
6
21
12
22
7
23
13
24
5
25
9
26
4
27
16
28
4
29
5
30
7
31
4
32
8
33
4
34
7
35
4
36
8
37
6
38
18
39
8
40
4
41
10
42
5
43
4
44
7
45
9
46
7
47
8
48
9
49
9
37.15%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
37
diversityRatio
0.16666666666666666
totalSentences
288
uniqueOpeners
48
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
210
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
123
totalSentences
210
matches
0
"Her breath fogged the cold"
1
"She stepped back into the"
2
"She steadied it with a"
3
"His dark suit spilled charcoal"
4
"He ignored the lamp."
5
"He stood as tall as"
6
"His voice cut low and"
7
"She kept the box tight"
8
"He looked around the room"
9
"She stepped back towards the"
10
"Her heart beat fast."
11
"She pulled her sleeve over"
12
"He walked past her slowly."
13
"He held his forehead with"
14
"He walked towards her."
15
"He stopped where the kitchen"
16
"He lifted his cane."
17
"He tapped the metal end"
18
"She gripped the side handles."
19
"He stepped closer"
ratio
0.586
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
207
totalSentences
210
matches
0
"The key snapped in the"
1
"Rory pushed the heavy panel"
2
"Her breath fogged the cold"
3
"The kitchen window cracked open"
4
"Rain hissed like rats along"
5
"Rory wiped her hand on"
6
"She stepped back into the"
7
"The smell of damp felt"
8
"The door handle turned."
9
"The box balanced on the"
10
"She steadied it with a"
11
"The wood groaned."
12
"The door swung open, and"
13
"Lucien walked through the gap"
14
"His dark suit spilled charcoal"
15
"He ignored the lamp."
16
"He stood as tall as"
17
"His voice cut low and"
18
"She kept the box tight"
19
"He looked around the room"
ratio
0.986
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
210
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
14
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
76
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
42
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"Lucien sneered (sneer)"
1
"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
104
tagDensity
0.404
leniency
0.808
rawRatio
0.048
effectiveRatio
0.038
79.1015%