| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1376 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1376 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "resonance" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "resonated" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "kaleidoscope" | | 14 | "reminder" | | 15 | "echoing" | | 16 | "glinting" | | 17 | "comforting" | | 18 | "echo" | | 19 | "chill" | | 20 | "shimmered" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1376 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.97% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1320 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.06 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 14 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Vey | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.97 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "resonance that seemed to vibrate in the marrow" | | 1 | "radiance that seemed to push against the darkness" | | 2 | "food that seemed to float, levitating on invisible plates" | | 3 | "felt like a memory" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1376 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 62.55 | | std | 9.17 | | cv | 0.147 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 78 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 69 | | 9 | 68 | | 10 | 68 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 82 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 69 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 54 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 70 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 222 | | matches | | |
| 69.60% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught; the air tasted of honey and iron." | | 1 | "She did not speak; instead, she raised a hand, and the ground beneath her feet blossomed with wildflowers that turned toward the sky." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1320 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.015909090909090907 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0015151515151515152 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 93.31% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 17.64 | | std | 6.76 | | cv | 0.383 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 38.46% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.24358974358974358 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She lifted the Heartstone Pendant," | | 1 | "She felt the pendant’s warmth" | | 2 | "Her breath caught; the air" | | 3 | "She did not speak; instead," | | 4 | "she murmured, and the wind" | | 5 | "She placed the Heartstone upon" | | 6 | "they whispered, voice carried on" | | 7 | "She stepped onto the first" | | 8 | "She felt a gentle pressure," | | 9 | "she intoned, and the words" | | 10 | "they whispered, and the words" | | 11 | "She turned, eyes meeting Nyx’s" | | 12 | "She exchanged a glance with" | | 13 | "Their footsteps echoed on the" |
| | ratio | 0.184 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The group stepped through the" | | 1 | "A scent of ripe figs" | | 2 | "She lifted the Heartstone Pendant," | | 3 | "The gem glowed, a quiet" | | 4 | "A narrow path wound between" | | 5 | "Vines draped from the canopy," | | 6 | "A faint chorus of bells" | | 7 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their form" | | 8 | "The stones rose like ancient" | | 9 | "Nyx paused, eyes glowing violet," | | 10 | "The flowers unfolded, revealing a" | | 11 | "Aurora knelt beside the pool," | | 12 | "The liquid rippled, revealing images" | | 13 | "She felt the pendant’s warmth" | | 14 | "Her breath caught; the air" | | 15 | "A figure emerged from the" | | 16 | "The Fae‑Forged Blade was cool" | | 17 | "Isolde stood at the edge" | | 18 | "She did not speak; instead," | | 19 | "Rory stepped forward, fingers brushing" |
| | ratio | 0.961 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "A scent of ripe figs and damp earth rose from the ground, mingling with a metallic tang that made Aurora’s throat tighten." | | 1 | "A narrow path wound between silver‑barked trunks, each tree humming with a low resonance that seemed to vibrate in the marrow." | | 2 | "Vines draped from the canopy, their leaves shimmering with a phosphorescent sheen that painted the mossy floor in shifting blues." | | 3 | "The flowers unfolded, revealing a pool of liquid light that reflected constellations not visible in the night sky." | | 4 | "The Fae‑Forged Blade was cool to the touch, its edge humming with a low timbre that resonated against the stone." | | 5 | "She placed the Heartstone upon it, and the pendant pulsed brighter, casting a crimson halo that illuminated the surrounding flora." | | 6 | "Nyx drifted toward the stones, their form solidifying for a heartbeat before dissolving back into the darkness." | | 7 | "Aurora felt the ground under her boots shift, as if the earth itself sought to test her balance." | | 8 | "Aurora’s scar on her wrist tingled, a reminder of a past accident that had once left a mark on her skin, now echoing in this alien landscape." | | 9 | "She felt a gentle pressure, a weight that was both comforting and unsettling." | | 10 | "The creature’s feathers ruffled, releasing a cascade of silver dust that settled on the blade." | | 11 | "The blade’s glow intensified, spreading a cool radiance that seemed to push against the darkness." | | 12 | "The stones shifted, rearranging themselves into a new configuration, forming a circle that centered on the pool." | | 13 | "The blade sang, a note that resonated with the hum of the grove, and the water responded, rising in a column of light that shot upward, tearing through the cano…" | | 14 | "The portal widened, revealing a vista of endless vineyards that stretched beyond sight, rows of grapes glowing with an inner fire, their skins shimmering like r…" | | 15 | "The air was thick with the scent of fermenting fruit and something sweeter, an aroma that hinted at forgotten celebrations." | | 16 | "In the distance, a banquet table stretched across a hill, set with plates of food that seemed to float, levitating on invisible plates." | | 17 | "The scene held, suspended in a breath between worlds, the heartstone beating in Aurora’s palm, the blade’s cold fire pulsing at her side, the shadows alive with…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, and the wind carried the phrase away before it could settle" | | 1 | "they whispered, voice carried on the wind" | | 2 | "Nyx asked, voice barely more than a breath" | | 3 | "she intoned, and the words fell like stones onto the stone path" | | 4 | "they whispered, and the words seemed to echo in the minds of the others" | | 5 | "Nyx said, and the words hung in the air, heavy with expectation" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.7 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.429 | |