Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFCXHF16BA4XZS96M34S3Z9

Run Details

Duration:
1m 31s
Cost:
$0.000950
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed overhead, a flat hum vibrating against the silence. Dark-stained wooden tables lined the room, their surfaces scratched by decades of coats and elbows. Ashes drifted from the ashtrays situated near the walls. Aurora stepped out of the alleyway and into the draft. She was twenty-five, but the wind cut through her delivery coat like it belonged to a ghost. She had not entered this establishment in years. She should have known better. The door creaked as she pushed it open. "Welcome." She stopped. Her hand hovered near her coat pocket. She needed to be careful. She needed to stay invisible. She turned slowly toward the dim light. Silas stood behind the bar. He looked different. His jaw was sharper than the boy she knew. The apron hung low over his waist. He wore a ring, silver and cold, tucked inside the lapel of his shirt. The grey-streaked auburn hair was pulled back tight against his skull. He stared at her, and the expression hardened. "Two drinks," he said. The voice was deeper. Broader. He poured a drink. He poured another. He put them on the counter. "They told me," Aurora said. She did not touch the glass. Her eyes looked over the rim of the bar. The scar on her chest was hidden beneath the fabric. "They said you were hiding a body." Silas did not smile. He lifted the glass and took a slow sip. His eyes remained locked on the bottle in his hand. The liquid sloshed over the edge of the glass. "Drink first," Silas said. Aurora capped at the glass. She did not drink yet. She watched him. He was fifty-eight, or older. The line between two distinct sets of years ran through the window. The room smelled of grease and smoke. It smelled of time. "I am here on a job," Aurora said. She did not take a step to the stool. She stood at her ground. "I know," Silas said. He set the bottle down. The silence stretched. It pulled tight. "Did you know her?" Aurora asked. The question left the air. It stuck to the cup. Silas looked down. He moved his head. He looked at the old maps on the wall. The walls were heavy with the pasts of others. "She was not my daughter," he said. "And she was not a client either," Aurora said. "She never was a client." She moved then. She stepped to the counter. She picked up her phone. She looked at the number screen. "I saw your badge," Aurora said. "Did you now." "It was a badge from the office," Aurora said. She did not lift a hand to her throat. She held the phone tight. "It was retired over the Thames," Silas said. "It was left in a box," Aurora said. "It blazed." "I did not save Europe," Silas said. Aurora turned away. She walked to the far side of the room. Her hand touched her left wrist. A small crescent closed there. She pulled the sleeve up. She could see the mark clearly. The welt in the flesh. It looked small. It looked old. "I ran," she said. "I told you." "You told someone," Silas said. He placed the bottle down. He leaned his elbows on the counter. "Did you know the man?" Aurora asked. She held up the phone. She held up the face on the screen. "My brother or my father," Silas said. He did not blink. He looked at the bottle. "He was dead," Aurora said. "And who knows?" Silas said. He lifted his glass. He lifted it high. "The dead are not mine to keep." "I was a student," Aurora said. "I studied cases." "I was an agent," Silas said. He took a long pull. The liquid burned his throat. "You left the record," Aurora said. "I read everything." "I left the record," Silas said. "It is not for you. I am tired, Aurora." She turned toward him now. Her shadow fell on the counter. "Is it tired you or is it tired?" Aurora said. The room turned darker. The lights buzzed. The hum of the fridge started louder. "Aurora," Silas said. "I saw her feed," Aurora said. He looked at her. He did not blink again. He set the glass down. His hand trembled. Just a little. "I am not looking," he said. "I am listening." "Aurora," he said. "You have changed." "I am a production," she said. She handed the bottle back. She put her hand into her pocket. She pulled the phone out again. "You are a delivery girl," Silas said. "I am a student," Aurora said. She moved her hand. She tapped the air. She made a sound in the air. "I have no student on the student table. I have the bottle in the bottle." "I have no need for the student," Silas said. "And I have no need for the agent. It is long since ended." "It is time to finish the deliveries," Silas said. "Time to finish the work." Aurora stepped around the stool. She walked toward the door. She was in the center of the frame. She did not stop. "I do not finish," she said. "I am not the one," Silas said. His voice broke the air. "You are the work." "I am the student," she said. She turned the handle. The metal click echoed off the walls. "I am the student," she said. "I am not drinking," she said. "I am not drinking." "I am the work," she said. She stepped down the stairs. She did not look back. "I am the student," she said. Silas looked at the glass. He set the glass down on the counter. His hand hovered over the bottle. "I am not finished," he said. He did not move. He did not move his hands. He did not drink. He stayed in the light. "I am not finished," he said. He turned to the wall. He looked at the map. He looked at the map of what he lost. "I am not finished," he said. "I am not finished," he said. He did not move. I will not move either. I will not move either. I will not move. The green neon sign buzzed overhead, a flat hum vibrating against the silence. Dark-stained wooden tables lined the room, their surfaces scratched by decades of coats and elbows. Ashes drifted from the ashtrays situated near the walls. Aurora stepped out of the alleyway and into the draft. She was twenty-five, but the wind cut through her delivery coat like it belonged to a ghost. She had not entered this establishment in years. She should have known better. The door creaked as she pushed it open. "Welcome." She stopped. Her hand hovered near her coat pocket. She needed to be careful. She needed to stay invisible. She turned slowly toward the dim light. Silas stood behind the bar. He looked different. His jaw was sharper than the boy she knew. The apron hung low over his waist. He wore a ring, silver and cold, tucked inside the lapel of his shirt. The grey-streaked auburn hair was pulled back tight against his skull. He stared at her, and the expression hardened. "Two drinks," he said. The voice was deeper. Broader. He poured a drink. He poured another. He put them on the counter. "They told me," Aurora said. She did not touch the glass. Her eyes looked over the rim of the bar. The scar on her chest was hidden beneath the fabric. "They said you were hiding a body." Silas did not smile. He lifted the glass and took a slow sip. His eyes remained locked on the bottle in his hand. The liquid sloshed over the edge of the glass. "Drink first," Silas said. Aurora capped at the glass. She did not drink yet. She watched him. He was fifty-eight, or older. The line between two distinct sets of years ran through the window. The room smelled of grease and smoke. It smelled of time. "I am here on a job," Aurora said. She did not take a step to the stool. She stood at her ground. "I know," Silas said. He placed the bottle down. "Aurora," he said. "You have changed." "I am a production," she said. She handed the bottle back. She put her hand into her pocket. She pulled the phone out again. "You are a delivery girl," Silas said. "I am a student," Aurora said. She moved her hand. She tapped the air. She made a sound in the air. "I have no student on the student table. I have the bottle in the bottle." "I have no need for the student," Silas said. "And I have no need for the agent. It is long since ended." "It is time to finish the deliveries," Silas said. "Time to finish the work." Aurora stepped around the stool. She walked toward the door. She was in the center of the frame. She did not stop. "I do not finish," she said. "I am not the one," Silas said. His voice broke the air. "You are the work." "I am the student," she said. She turned the handle. The metal click echoed off the walls. "I am the student," she said. Silas looked at the glass. He set the glass down on the counter. His hand hovered over the bottle. "I am not drinking," she said. "I am not drinking." "I am the student," she said. He looked at the bottle. He looked at the man on the wall. "I am not finished," he said. He did not move. He did not move his hands. He did not drink. He stayed in the light. "I am not finished," he said. He turned to the wall. He looked at the map. He looked at the map of what he lost. "I am not finished," he said. I will not move either. I will not move either. I will not move.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags63
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences89
tagDensity0.708
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1669
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1669
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count2
highlights
0"silence"
1"trembled"
2"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences248
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences248
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences273
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1669
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions65
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1261
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity2.14
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora24
Silas27
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.429
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1669
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences273
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs107
mean15.6
std12.77
cv0.819
sampleLengths
064
121
21
326
48
549
69
713
837
932
104
1141
1222
139
146
1516
1625
177
1814
1919
206
213
2223
238
2410
257
2645
277
2817
2920
3016
315
3220
339
3416
359
3615
3711
3810
3914
403
416
4220
439
446
4524
467
4736
489
4913
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences248
matches
0"was pulled"
1"was hidden"
2"was pulled"
3"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs276
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences273
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1269
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.01182033096926714
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002364066193853428
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences273
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences273
mean6.11
std2.74
cv0.448
sampleLengths
013
115
29
310
417
58
65
78
81
92
107
115
125
137
145
153
169
177
1814
1911
208
214
224
231
244
253
266
275
286
299
3010
317
324
339
3410
359
364
375
385
393
405
4112
427
434
448
459
465
474
485
493
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats81
diversityRatio0.08791208791208792
totalSentences273
uniqueOpeners24
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences180
matches
0"Dark-stained wooden tables lined the"
1"Just a little."
2"Dark-stained wooden tables lined the"
ratio0.017
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount132
totalSentences180
matches
0"She was twenty-five, but the"
1"She had not entered this"
2"She should have known better."
3"Her hand hovered near her"
4"She needed to be careful."
5"She needed to stay invisible."
6"She turned slowly toward the"
7"He looked different."
8"His jaw was sharper than"
9"He wore a ring, silver"
10"He stared at her, and"
11"He poured a drink."
12"He poured another."
13"He put them on the"
14"She did not touch the"
15"Her eyes looked over the"
16"He lifted the glass and"
17"His eyes remained locked on"
18"She did not drink yet."
19"She watched him."
ratio0.733
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount177
totalSentences180
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Ashes drifted from the ashtrays"
2"Aurora stepped out of the"
3"She was twenty-five, but the"
4"She had not entered this"
5"She should have known better."
6"The door creaked as she"
7"Her hand hovered near her"
8"She needed to be careful."
9"She needed to stay invisible."
10"She turned slowly toward the"
11"Silas stood behind the bar."
12"He looked different."
13"His jaw was sharper than"
14"The apron hung low over"
15"He wore a ring, silver"
16"The grey-streaked auburn hair was"
17"He stared at her, and"
18"The voice was deeper."
19"He poured a drink."
ratio0.983
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences180
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags63
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags63
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences89
tagDensity0.708
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.8731%