Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFD0R3NZ2PPTP0TCBJW3K17

Run Details

Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.000813
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the iron grate of the unused Camden station tunnel. It drummed a hollow rhythm against the soot-stained corrugated roof, a sound swallowed quickly by the damp concrete. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a puddle that swirled with oily black film instead of clear runoff. Her salt-and-pepper hair tightened against her scalp as she pulled the collar of her trench coat up. She did not walk normally. Her boots slammed against the floor with a sound like dropped stone. The leather of her watch band creaked with every movement of her left wrist against her blue palm. Harlow froze behind a pillar. The light of the badge on her chest reflected off the wall, cutting through the gloom. A body lay sprawled in the center of the track bed. It was wrapped in thick blankets stained with dark red patches. Miller, her partner, knelt beside the form. He wore a cheap trench coat and smoke-darkened hair that curled at the temples. A flash in his hand cut the air past Harlow. "Source is a woman," Miller said. His voice was flat, devoid of the pity Harlow felt rising in her throat. "Blunt trauma to the back. Probably a fall. Or a struggle." Miller's pen scratched on a notepad. He looked up, his eyes tired. He pointed at a layer of gray dust coating the floor around the body. "Smaller footprint interference here. Suggests she dragged herself up." Harlow stepped closer. She moved with military precision, each footfall measured against the uneven track spikes. "The hole," Harlow said. She pointed at the damp earth where the blankets met the tunnel floor. A depression formed by weight, but the shape was wrong. "The drain?" Miller replied. "Shallow." Harlow moved in closer. She leaned over the edge of the platform wall. "Smell it." Miller sniffed the air. His eyes widened slightly. "Ozone. And something sweet." "Sulfur." Harlow nodded. She pulled a small brass object from her pocket. It was a small compass facing the center. A bite of verdigris ate at the casing. The needle faced the depression. Miller snatched the device from her hand. The compass fell unevenly back into her grip. "Give me that." Miller took it. He looked at Harlow, his eyes narrowing. "Quinn, this thing is lost property. You lost track of that." "A souvenir." Harlow held it before her chest. The face of the compass was dull. She had etched protective marks into the metal. The casing shone in the beam light. The needle shook. "It's just a tool from the Zone." Miller Pocketed it. "Let us work with a body we can explain." "You miss something." Harlow did not let go. Miller crossed his arms. "Evidence shows a human fall." "Human falls create impact spatter." Harlow stood straight. Her shoulders widened. The watch on her wrist ticked. "This pattern does not." Miller's voice grew louder. "She fell." "I saw the drift." Harlow moved past him. "She left the station clean." Miller traced the perimeter of the body with his flashlight. The beam cut sharply across the body. "She is here." "She wasn't killed." Harlow's finger hovered over a stain on the blanket. "She was opened." The air pressed against Harlow's chest. It felt heavier, like a weight of water. She watched the needle of the compass without looking. Miller stood. He placed the device back. "Do you think this is a crime?" Harlow did not answer immediately. She looked at the concrete floor. White lint clung to the fibers. "The blood." Her voice was low. "Red," Miller insisted. "Dried on the blanket." "Old." Harlow stepped back. "Dried ten years old." Miller's jaw tightened. "Detective Quinn." Miller moved closer. "Check the ID again." "ID says she died in London 2004." Harlow held the file in her hand. "The DNA was run on a grave site in Roswell. The body was exhumed." Miller stared. The light of the lamp flickered. "You are reading too much into a phantom." Harlow turned. She faced the body. She did not flinch. She opened the file. "Quinn. Quinn." "What?" Miller asked. "This woman does not exist." Harlow turned the file in her hand. "The body is just... what." "Expendable?" "Hollow." Harlow's finger brushed the dust on the concrete. The grit shifted under her touch. Miller sighed. "Look, you got it twisted. This body isn't the person I saw." Harlow did not turn. She examined the eye socket of the corpse. The discoloration underneath was white. Not bruised. Just void. "This woman was a door." Harlow whispered. "The blood is the sealant." Miller's flashlight beam cut the darkness. "Sealant?" "Blood." Harlow tapped the wall. "The person she hides inside." Miller moved back. He stared at the compass. It was still in Harlow's hand. "Quinn, put that away." "No." Miller stepped forward. "It is not real." Harlow leaned in. She checked her watch. The second hand twitched. "It is the only thing moving." Miller's web of tension eased his face. "You got a lead on the case file?" Harlow pointed to the body. "Quinn does not have a past." Miller laughed. "You are hallucinating." "She sits in the grave." Miller stepped up. He grabbed her shoulder. "Put the compass away." "Harlow gave up the service." Miller pulled. "This was not a crime." Harlow stepped back. "It was a transaction." Miller rechecked the bottle. "The blood is not from this station." Harlow knocked her watch. "Then what?" "She is a Weave." Miller laughed again. "Goodnight, Harlow." "The Weave is here." Miller turned off his light. "What did you say?" "Stone has fallen." Miller raised the light. The rope of shadow twisted in the dark. "She is not dead." Harlow's thumb brushed the compass casing. "Copied." Miller said. "I traded my watch for a name." Miller’s leg stiffened. "Quinn." "Please." Miller's bodyguard. "Let me go." Miller stepped back. "You broke the law." "I broke the seal." The floor vibrated beneath their feet. Miller held his breath. Harlow looked at him. "The name." Miller’s eyes widened. "We can’t." "The compass points to the Veil." Miller backed away. "Not out here." "Harlow." "The needle points to the Veil." Miller’s hand hovered. "It does." Miller shook his hand. "This is crazy." "It is." Miller drew his rifle. "It is." "You are a menace." "She is dead." Miller clicked the bolt. "She is gone." Miller held his breath. "Quinn." Miller sighed. She was gone. Miller gripped his weapon. "This changes nothing." "She is in the Veil." Miller stepped back. "You are not in it." "She is." Miller turned. "Quinn." She was not there. Miller spun. "Get your light." "I am blind." Miller dropped the light. "Harlow." Miller coughed. She was standing there. Miller’s breath hitched. I am not here. Miller’s chest expanded. She looked at him. Miller shot. The bullet hit the wall. She did not flinch. Miller stood. I am not here. He stopped breathing. Miller shot again. I am not here. Miller shot again. She did not flinch. I am not here. Miller did not breathe.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Harlow stepped back [back]"
1"Harlow stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences96
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.042
87.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1168
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slightly"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1168
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"footfall"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"grave"
count2
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"footfall"
2"measured"
3"weight"
4"etched"
5"traced"
6"grave"
7"flickered"
8"tension"
9"vibrated"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences148
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences218
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1168
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions89
wordCount796
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity6.91
worstName"Miller"
maxWindowNameDensity17
worstWindowName"Miller"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow31
Quinn1
Pocketed1
Miller55
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1168
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences218
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs124
mean9.42
std11.25
cv1.195
sampleLengths
098
121
222
331
431
535
616
727
84
916
1012
1133
1215
1324
1433
1519
168
179
1821
196
2013
2120
2215
2323
2414
2517
266
277
288
293
309
3128
3216
3316
343
3517
361
3715
3814
3921
4012
417
4210
4318
441
457
4617
4715
4811
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences148
matches
0"was wrapped"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences218
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount800
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02375
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00875
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences218
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences218
mean5.36
std3.48
cv0.65
sampleLengths
011
118
217
317
45
512
618
75
816
911
1011
117
1214
1310
146
1514
1611
176
186
1914
209
213
2213
234
2413
2510
264
275
289
292
304
314
324
333
349
358
368
375
387
398
406
417
4211
438
447
458
467
473
4810
499
47.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.22935779816513763
totalSentences218
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.60% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences125
matches
0"It drummed a hollow rhythm"
1"Her salt-and-pepper hair tightened against"
2"She did not walk normally."
3"Her boots slammed against the"
4"It was wrapped in thick"
5"He wore a cheap trench"
6"His voice was flat, devoid"
7"He looked up, his eyes"
8"He pointed at a layer"
9"She moved with military precision,"
10"She pointed at the damp"
11"She leaned over the edge"
12"His eyes widened slightly."
13"She pulled a small brass"
14"It was a small compass"
15"He looked at Harlow, his"
16"She had etched protective marks"
17"Her shoulders widened."
18"It felt heavier, like a"
19"She watched the needle of"
ratio0.336
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences125
matches
0"It drummed a hollow rhythm"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"Her salt-and-pepper hair tightened against"
3"She did not walk normally."
4"Her boots slammed against the"
5"The leather of her watch"
6"Harlow froze behind a pillar."
7"The light of the badge"
8"A body lay sprawled in"
9"It was wrapped in thick"
10"Miller, her partner, knelt beside"
11"He wore a cheap trench"
12"A flash in his hand"
13"His voice was flat, devoid"
14"Miller's pen scratched on a"
15"He looked up, his eyes"
16"He pointed at a layer"
17"Harlow stepped closer."
18"She moved with military precision,"
19"She pointed at the damp"
ratio0.984
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a puddle that swirled with oily black film instead of clear runoff."
1"He wore a cheap trench coat and smoke-darkened hair that curled at the temples."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Miller insisted (insist)"
1"Harlow whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences96
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.146
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.042
79.8042%