Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFD1AMJ5W269F9ET0BS2D4D

Run Details

Duration:
45.4s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pushed through the thicket at the edge of Richmond Park, the night air sharp against her skin. The gate to the Fae Grove stood ajar, its ancient oak standing stones silhouetted against a moonless sky. She had come because the Heartstone pendant against her chest had grown warm, a pulse that matched the beat of something unseen deeper in the clearing. She stepped over the low stone wall and entered the grove. Wildflowers clung to the ground, their petals open despite the hour, colors muted in the silver light. The stones formed a rough circle, each one etched with faded runes that caught the faint glow of her pendant. A hush settled, not empty but thick with the sound of distant wind that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once. Aurora paused, her hand resting on the nearest stone. The surface was cool, rough under her fingertips. She lifted the pendant, feeling its thrum against her palm. The glow inside the stone deepened, a weak red light that spilled onto the moss. She whispered into the night, "Is anyone there?" The words hung, swallowed by the trees. No answer came, only the faint rustle of leaves that did not stir with any breeze she could feel. She moved forward, each step deliberate. The ground felt oddly yielding, as if the earth beneath her boots inhaled and exhaled with her pace. A soft chime echoed from somewhere beyond the stones, like a bell struck underwater. She turned her head, eyes scanning the periphery. Shadows lingered at the edge of the grove, shifting when she did not look directly at them. A low hum began, vibrating through the soles of her feet. It was not a sound she could pinpoint; it rose from the stones themselves, a resonance that made her teeth ache. She pressed the pendant harder against her chest, feeling its warmth spread like a slow fire. Aurora stopped, breath visible in the cold air. She lifted her gaze to the tallest oak at the north side of the circle. Its bark was split, a dark fissure running vertically, and from within the crack a thin veil of mist seeped out, curling like smoke. The mist did not dissipate; it lingered, thickening, and for a heartbeat she thought she saw a shape within it—tall, slender, limbs too jointed, head tilted as if listening. She stepped closer, heart hammering against her ribs, each beat a sharp thud that seemed to echo in the stone circle. The mist recoiled as she approached, pulling back into the fissure, leaving the bark smooth and unmarked. The hum faded, leaving a ringing silence that pressed on her ears. She shouted, "Show yourself!" Her voice bounced off the stones, returning distorted, as if spoken through a long tube. The echo carried a tone that was not her own, a layered whisper that sounded like many voices speaking at once. A faint laughter rippled from the grove, high and airy, like wind chimes made of bone. Aurora spun, eyes darting. The wildflowers nearest her trembled, their stems bending though no wind touched them. She reached out, fingers brushing a petal. It was icy, sending a shiver up her arm. She turned to leave, but the path she had taken seemed altered. The stones that marked the entrance now stood farther apart, the opening narrowed by a shift she could not see. She walked toward where she remembered the gate, each step feeling heavier, the ground sucking at her boots as if trying to hold her. The pendant flared, its red light pulsing in quick succession. Warmth flooded her chest, spreading outward, making her skin prickle. She pressed a hand to the stone beside her, feeling a vibration travel up her arm, a low thrum that matched the pulse in the pendant. She stopped, eyes closed, listening. Inside her skull a voice formed, not spoken but felta sense of urgency, a warning that the place was not merely a grove but a threshold. The sensation was not fear, not exactly, but a deep knowing that she had crossed a line she could not see. She opened her eyes. The grove had changed. The wildflowers now glowed faintly, their petals emitting a soft luminescence that painted the stones in shifting hues. The standing stones themselves seemed to breathe, their surfaces expanding and contracting with a slow rhythm. Aurora took a step back, then another, each movement deliberate. The air grew thicker, each inhalation tasting of iron and damp earth. She could hear her own breath, ragged and loud, and beneath it a subtle clicking, like claws on stone. She lifted the pendant again, its light now steady, a beacon in the shifting gloom. She spoke, voice low but firm, "I am not here to stay." The words left her mouth, and for a moment the grove seemed to hold its breath. Then the stones groaned, a deep resonant sound that traveled through the soles of her feet into her bones. The fissure in the north oak widened, the mist within thickening into a column that rose, coiling like a serpent. From its core emerged a figure—tall, draped in shadows that clung to its form like smoke. Its face was indistinct, features shifting whenever she tried to focus, eyes twin pits of darkness that absorbed the lantern light of her pendant. Aurora did not scream. She lifted her chin, met the gaze, and whispered, "What do you want?" The figure did not answer. Instead it raised a hand, palm outward, and the pendant’s light flared, casting the grove in stark crimson. The world tilted. Time stretched, each second feeling like an hour, each hour like a breath. The wildflowers swayed in a wind that did not touch her skin, their stems snapping and reforming in endless cycles. The stones whispered names she had never heard, syllables that resonated in her marrow. She felt the pendant’s heat intensify, a searing brand against her sternum. She clenched her jaw, refusing to look away. The figure lowered its hand, the light dimming, and the mist began to recede, pulling back into the fissure as if drawn by an invisible tide. The grove fell silent again, the only sound the frantic beat of Aurora’s own heart and the soft sigh of the stones settling. She stepped back, eyes never leaving the shifting shape at the edge of the light, until her boot struck the familiar stone wall marking the boundary of the grove. She turned and fled, not looking back, the pendant still warm against her chest, its pulse a steady reminder that something had awakened in the dark, and she had brushed against it. The night air rushed past her lungs, thick with the scent of pine and wet earth, and behind her the standing stones stood silent, their faces turned inward, waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"resonance"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"echo"
count2
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count1
12
word"beacon"
count1
13
word"gloom"
count1
14
word"stark"
count1
15
word"resonated"
count1
16
word"searing"
count1
17
word"familiar"
count1
18
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"etched"
2"could feel"
3"echoed"
4"scanning"
5"resonance"
6"warmth"
7"echo"
8"silence"
9"whisper"
10"trembled"
11"sense of"
12"beacon"
13"gloom"
14"stark"
15"resonated"
16"searing"
17"familiar"
18"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences71
matches
0"a sense of urgency"
22.13% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1143
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount1128
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Aurora7
persons
0"Grove"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"wind that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once"
1"as if listening"
2"thud that seemed to echo in the stone circle"
3"sounded like many voices speaking at once"
4"seemed altered"
5"as if trying to hold her"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.5
wordCount1143
matches
0"not empty but thick with the sound of distant wind"
1"not spoken but felt"
2"not merely a grove but a threshold"
3"not exactly, but a deep knowing"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"warning that the"
22.45% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean51.95
std11.88
cv0.229
sampleLengths
062
171
242
334
463
548
676
750
840
949
1056
1146
1252
1342
1441
1543
1679
1740
1850
1946
2052
2161
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs205
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences71
ratio0.056
matches
0"It was not a sound she could pinpoint; it rose from the stones themselves, a resonance that made her teeth ache."
1"The mist did not dissipate; it lingered, thickening, and for a heartbeat she thought she saw a shape within it—tall, slender, limbs too jointed, head tilted as if listening."
2"Inside her skull a voice formed, not spoken but felt—a sense of urgency, a warning that the place was not merely a grove but a threshold."
3"From its core emerged a figure—tall, draped in shadows that clung to its form like smoke."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1131
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cool, rough under her"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.023872679045092837
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007073386383731211
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean16.1
std7.03
cv0.437
sampleLengths
018
118
226
311
417
520
623
79
88
910
1015
1115
1219
136
1418
1514
168
1717
1811
1921
2016
218
2215
2324
2429
2521
2617
2712
2819
2921
3016
314
3213
337
349
3512
3620
3724
3810
3910
4026
415
4226
4321
444
454
4618
4716
4810
4912
34.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2112676056338028
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners15
93.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Then the stones groaned, a"
1"Instead it raised a hand,"
ratio0.028
62.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences71
matches
0"She had come because the"
1"She stepped over the low"
2"She lifted the pendant, feeling"
3"She whispered into the night,"
4"She moved forward, each step"
5"She turned her head, eyes"
6"It was not a sound"
7"She pressed the pendant harder"
8"She lifted her gaze to"
9"Its bark was split, a"
10"She stepped closer, heart hammering"
11"She shouted, Her voice bounced"
12"She reached out, fingers brushing"
13"It was icy, sending a"
14"She turned to leave, but"
15"She walked toward where she"
16"She pressed a hand to"
17"She stopped, eyes closed, listening."
18"She opened her eyes."
19"She could hear her own"
ratio0.394
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences71
matches
0"Aurora pushed through the thicket"
1"The gate to the Fae"
2"She had come because the"
3"She stepped over the low"
4"Wildflowers clung to the ground,"
5"The stones formed a rough"
6"A hush settled, not empty"
7"Aurora paused, her hand resting"
8"The surface was cool, rough"
9"She lifted the pendant, feeling"
10"The glow inside the stone"
11"She whispered into the night,"
12"She moved forward, each step"
13"The ground felt oddly yielding,"
14"A soft chime echoed from"
15"She turned her head, eyes"
16"Shadows lingered at the edge"
17"A low hum began, vibrating"
18"It was not a sound"
19"She pressed the pendant harder"
ratio0.93
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"She had come because the Heartstone pendant against her chest had grown warm, a pulse that matched the beat of something unseen deeper in the clearing."
1"A hush settled, not empty but thick with the sound of distant wind that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once."
2"It was not a sound she could pinpoint; it rose from the stones themselves, a resonance that made her teeth ache."
3"The mist did not dissipate; it lingered, thickening, and for a heartbeat she thought she saw a shape within it—tall, slender, limbs too jointed, head tilted as …"
4"She stepped closer, heart hammering against her ribs, each beat a sharp thud that seemed to echo in the stone circle."
5"She walked toward where she remembered the gate, each step feeling heavier, the ground sucking at her boots as if trying to hold her."
6"Warmth flooded her chest, spreading outward, making her skin prickle."
7"She pressed a hand to the stone beside her, feeling a vibration travel up her arm, a low thrum that matched the pulse in the pendant."
8"The wildflowers now glowed faintly, their petals emitting a soft luminescence that painted the stones in shifting hues."
9"The standing stones themselves seemed to breathe, their surfaces expanding and contracting with a slow rhythm."
10"Its face was indistinct, features shifting whenever she tried to focus, eyes twin pits of darkness that absorbed the lantern light of her pendant."
11"The wildflowers swayed in a wind that did not touch her skin, their stems snapping and reforming in endless cycles."
12"The stones whispered names she had never heard, syllables that resonated in her marrow."
13"The figure lowered its hand, the light dimming, and the mist began to recede, pulling back into the fissure as if drawn by an invisible tide."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She spoke, voice low but firm,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She whispered (whisper)"
1"She shouted (shout)"
2"She spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
60.9748%