| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "resonance" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "beacon" | | 13 | "gloom" | | 14 | "stark" | | 15 | "resonated" | | 16 | "searing" | | 17 | "familiar" | | 18 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 22.13% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1143 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1128 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Aurora | 7 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "wind that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once" | | 1 | "as if listening" | | 2 | "thud that seemed to echo in the stone circle" | | 3 | "sounded like many voices speaking at once" | | 4 | "seemed altered" | | 5 | "as if trying to hold her" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.5 | | wordCount | 1143 | | matches | | 0 | "not empty but thick with the sound of distant wind" | | 1 | "not spoken but felt" | | 2 | "not merely a grove but a threshold" | | 3 | "not exactly, but a deep knowing" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 22.45% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 51.95 | | std | 11.88 | | cv | 0.229 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 76 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 79 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 61 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 205 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "It was not a sound she could pinpoint; it rose from the stones themselves, a resonance that made her teeth ache." | | 1 | "The mist did not dissipate; it lingered, thickening, and for a heartbeat she thought she saw a shape within it—tall, slender, limbs too jointed, head tilted as if listening." | | 2 | "Inside her skull a voice formed, not spoken but felt—a sense of urgency, a warning that the place was not merely a grove but a threshold." | | 3 | "From its core emerged a figure—tall, draped in shadows that clung to its form like smoke." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1131 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.023872679045092837 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007073386383731211 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 16.1 | | std | 7.03 | | cv | 0.437 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 34.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.2112676056338028 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 93.90% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the stones groaned, a" | | 1 | "Instead it raised a hand," |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 62.25% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come because the" | | 1 | "She stepped over the low" | | 2 | "She lifted the pendant, feeling" | | 3 | "She whispered into the night," | | 4 | "She moved forward, each step" | | 5 | "She turned her head, eyes" | | 6 | "It was not a sound" | | 7 | "She pressed the pendant harder" | | 8 | "She lifted her gaze to" | | 9 | "Its bark was split, a" | | 10 | "She stepped closer, heart hammering" | | 11 | "She shouted, Her voice bounced" | | 12 | "She reached out, fingers brushing" | | 13 | "It was icy, sending a" | | 14 | "She turned to leave, but" | | 15 | "She walked toward where she" | | 16 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 17 | "She stopped, eyes closed, listening." | | 18 | "She opened her eyes." | | 19 | "She could hear her own" |
| | ratio | 0.394 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed through the thicket" | | 1 | "The gate to the Fae" | | 2 | "She had come because the" | | 3 | "She stepped over the low" | | 4 | "Wildflowers clung to the ground," | | 5 | "The stones formed a rough" | | 6 | "A hush settled, not empty" | | 7 | "Aurora paused, her hand resting" | | 8 | "The surface was cool, rough" | | 9 | "She lifted the pendant, feeling" | | 10 | "The glow inside the stone" | | 11 | "She whispered into the night," | | 12 | "She moved forward, each step" | | 13 | "The ground felt oddly yielding," | | 14 | "A soft chime echoed from" | | 15 | "She turned her head, eyes" | | 16 | "Shadows lingered at the edge" | | 17 | "A low hum began, vibrating" | | 18 | "It was not a sound" | | 19 | "She pressed the pendant harder" |
| | ratio | 0.93 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come because the Heartstone pendant against her chest had grown warm, a pulse that matched the beat of something unseen deeper in the clearing." | | 1 | "A hush settled, not empty but thick with the sound of distant wind that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once." | | 2 | "It was not a sound she could pinpoint; it rose from the stones themselves, a resonance that made her teeth ache." | | 3 | "The mist did not dissipate; it lingered, thickening, and for a heartbeat she thought she saw a shape within it—tall, slender, limbs too jointed, head tilted as …" | | 4 | "She stepped closer, heart hammering against her ribs, each beat a sharp thud that seemed to echo in the stone circle." | | 5 | "She walked toward where she remembered the gate, each step feeling heavier, the ground sucking at her boots as if trying to hold her." | | 6 | "Warmth flooded her chest, spreading outward, making her skin prickle." | | 7 | "She pressed a hand to the stone beside her, feeling a vibration travel up her arm, a low thrum that matched the pulse in the pendant." | | 8 | "The wildflowers now glowed faintly, their petals emitting a soft luminescence that painted the stones in shifting hues." | | 9 | "The standing stones themselves seemed to breathe, their surfaces expanding and contracting with a slow rhythm." | | 10 | "Its face was indistinct, features shifting whenever she tried to focus, eyes twin pits of darkness that absorbed the lantern light of her pendant." | | 11 | "The wildflowers swayed in a wind that did not touch her skin, their stems snapping and reforming in endless cycles." | | 12 | "The stones whispered names she had never heard, syllables that resonated in her marrow." | | 13 | "The figure lowered its hand, the light dimming, and the mist began to recede, pulling back into the fissure as if drawn by an invisible tide." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She spoke, voice low but firm," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "She shouted (shout)" | | 2 | "She spoke (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |