Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFD7YKPQB6FFZZKMJJNKRZF

Run Details

Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.000933
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door hummed like an insect trapped in glass. It cast a sickly stripe of chlorophyll-colored light across the wet pavement outside. Inside, the air smelled of old beer, stale tobacco, and sandalwood polish. Silas Blackwood did not look up from the ledger. He balanced his pen on two fingers. The ink spilled over the page. The door opened with a groan. Rain drummed against the window panes. Aurora Carter stepped into the dry warmth. She shook the water from her hair. Her shoulder length black strands stuck to her neck with sweat. She wore a delivery apron over a grey coat. Silas set the pen down. He wiped his hands on a rag. His hazel eyes locked onto hers. Rory? She froze. The till turned over its own movement. Don’t move. Silas said nothing. He picked up the rag. He walked toward the private room. His left leg buckled slightly. He steadied himself on the doorframe. I should go. Aurora moved to follow. She adjusted her strap. Her left wrist twitched. The small scar pulled under the material of her sleeve. She left the apron on the counter. She is here. Silas didn’t answer. He poured two more shots. Both of them were trembling. He set the glasses down on the wood. The wood groaned. You look different. Silas leaned against the tankard. His ring finger clicked against the metal. It was silver. It caught the dim light. Did not want to see. Aurora sat in a chair. She pulled out her phone. She didn’t turn it on. I miss it. The city. Silas hid his face in his palm. He didn’t speak. His grey-streaked auburn hair fell forward. Where did you disappear to? Rory looked at the rough wood of the wall. Cardiff. Silas stopped writing. The pen hesitated. He let it drop back onto the desk. Rory? He took a long sip. He set the glass down hard. It vibrated on the counter. I didn’t want to come back. Silas removed his signet ring. He held it out. It was cold. I knew you would. Aurora looked at the bookshelf. It lines ran diagonally. She felt the weight in her throat. Why here. Silas touched the wood. His fingers stained with ink. Because you live. Above. Aurora stood. She walked toward the counter. Her boots were wet. You know that. Silas looked at her shoes. We drifted. Silas turned back to the bar. He lit a cigarette. He inhaled deeply. He exhaled a cloud into the corner. Seven years. Aurora placed a hand on her arm. Her skin was pale. Time changes things. It does. It changes everything. Silas took the cigarette out of his mouth. He didn’t blow out the ember. You think I am like Antes. No. Silas heard the name. He finished the thought. I was always like Els. Aurora went back to her chair. She sat down heavily. The springs creaked. You know who I am. Silas nodded. He put the cigarette in the ashtray. He didn’t tap it. Yes. Aurora stared at the maps. They were old world maps. Moons were missing. What happens now. Silas stood up. He hit the cabinet. The bottles rattled. Nothing. He walked to the doorway. He opened the bookshelf. The hidden room appeared behind the spines. The air smelled of dust. You knew. I did. Silas walked through the shadows. He gestured to the darkness. It’s not a meeting place. It’s my office. Rory walked into the room. She saw the dust floating in the light. The shadows of the ceiling hung low. Why now. He turned to the door. He closed the bookshelf. The click sounded like a lock. Because you are back. Aurora stepped forward. She touched the wall. We are different. Silas nodded. He looked at the floor. You say that. Rory looked at the secret door. It blocked the view of the alley. Who lived. Silas closed the bookshelf. He walked to the bench. He sat down. He put his head in his hands. It is waiting. Aurora stood. She looked at the ring. It was still on the table. I can take it. Silas looked up. His eyes were wet. No. He stood up. He put it back. The light hit the metal. We don’t need it. Rory placed it down. She walked toward the door. I am going. Silas stopped her by the doorframe. He touched her wrist. The scar was there. It was a crescent. You think I need a job. I do. Silas released her. He stepped back. It is better. Rory took a breath. We don’t talk. Silas looked over his shoulder. He touched the map. It doesn’t matter. He walked out. The rain started again. The wind pushed the door shut. The neon buzzed. The air grew cold. Silas went back to the bar. He poured a drink. He did not drink it. He set it on the counter. The door creaked open. Aurora stepped out. She did not walk away. Come inside. Silas looked through the glass. He touched the wood. No. Aurora stood in the rain. She heard the door padlock clink. Silence. The neon hummed. The wind picked up. The door stayed shut. Silas stood. Rory looked at the building. The alley was empty. She turned. The street was empty. Silas stood. The door closed. The wind blew.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount900
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount900
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"vibrated"
2"weight"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences202
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences202
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"think"
hedgeMatches
0"appear to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences202
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen14
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords900
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
5.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount900
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.89
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Blackwood1
Carter1
Antes1
Els1
Silas26
Aurora12
Rory8
You7
persons
0"Blackwood"
1"Carter"
2"Silas"
3"Aurora"
4"Rory"
5"You"
places(empty)
globalScore0.056
windowScore0.333
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared behind the spines"
1"sounded like a lock"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount900
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences202
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs109
mean8.26
std8.84
cv1.071
sampleLengths
061
146
218
31
49
52
625
73
829
93
1024
113
1220
135
1415
155
1616
175
189
191
2014
211
2216
236
2412
254
2616
272
289
294
3011
313
325
332
3420
352
3611
373
385
3914
406
411
428
435
4413
455
4613
471
4813
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences202
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs206
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences202
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount902
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.013303769401330377
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005543237250554324
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences202
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences202
mean4.46
std2.12
cv0.477
sampleLengths
014
113
212
39
47
56
66
76
87
97
1011
119
125
137
146
151
162
177
182
193
205
216
225
236
243
254
264
274
2810
297
303
313
325
335
348
353
363
375
387
393
405
415
425
435
445
453
462
477
483
496
37.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.16336633663366337
totalSentences202
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount97
totalSentences172
matches
0"It cast a sickly stripe"
1"He balanced his pen on"
2"She shook the water from"
3"Her shoulder length black strands"
4"She wore a delivery apron"
5"He wiped his hands on"
6"His hazel eyes locked onto"
7"He picked up the rag."
8"He walked toward the private"
9"His left leg buckled slightly."
10"He steadied himself on the"
11"I should go."
12"She adjusted her strap."
13"Her left wrist twitched."
14"She left the apron on"
15"She is here."
16"He poured two more shots."
17"He set the glasses down"
18"You look different."
19"His ring finger clicked against"
ratio0.564
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount165
totalSentences172
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"It cast a sickly stripe"
2"Silas Blackwood did not look"
3"He balanced his pen on"
4"The ink spilled over the"
5"The door opened with a"
6"Rain drummed against the window"
7"Aurora Carter stepped into the"
8"She shook the water from"
9"Her shoulder length black strands"
10"She wore a delivery apron"
11"Silas set the pen down."
12"He wiped his hands on"
13"His hazel eyes locked onto"
14"The till turned over its"
15"Silas said nothing."
16"He picked up the rag."
17"He walked toward the private"
18"His left leg buckled slightly."
19"He steadied himself on the"
ratio0.959
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences172
matches
0"Because you live."
1"Because you are back."
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences5
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.7847%