Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFD8CEFMZYPXV3EFAMFTETG

Run Details

Duration:
37.2s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The second deadbolt slid home with a metallic rasp, followed by the first. Rory leaned her forehead against the cool wood of the door, her breath fogging a small patch. The curry-house scent of cumin and fried onions seeped up from the restaurant below, a familiar, grounding smell. Her delivery shift had been a blur of rain-slicked streets and impatient customers. She just wanted tea and silence. A shadow fell over the peephole’s faint light. She didn’t move. Listened. No shuffle of feet, no rustle of a jacket. Just a presence, patient and certain, on the other side of the door. “Who is it?” Silence stretched. Then, a voice, smooth as aged whiskey with a gravel edge. “It is late for deliveries, *chérie*.” Her stomach dropped. She turned, not opening the door, her back pressing against the wood. “You’re not supposed to know where I live.” “A great many things are not as they are supposed to be.” A pause. She could hear the faint tap of his cane against the hallway floor. “Will you leave me in this dreary corridor, or shall we observe the niceties?” Her hand hovered over the locks. Six months. Six months of silence after his last message—*It is not safe for you here. Forgive me.*—a message that felt like a door slamming shut. She’d fled one man’s cruelty only to be discarded by another’s caution. The anger was a hot, useful thing. She threw the deadbolts. The door swung inward. Lucien Moreau filled the frame, his tailored charcoal suit a stark contrast to the peeling hallway paint. Rain glistened on his platinum blond hair, slicked back from a face that belonged on a Renaissance sculpture—all sharp cheekbones and a firm jaw. His eyes caught the light from her flat: one a warm, unsettling amber, the other a depthless black. The ivory head of his cane gleamed under his hand. “You look well, Aurora.” His gaze swept over her—her damp hair sticking to her cheeks, the worn Yu-Fei Cheung jacket, the small crescent scar on her left wrist visible where her sleeve rode up. “You look dry.” She didn’t move from the doorway. “What do you want, Lucien?” “Is that any way to greet an old friend?” “An old friend would have called. Or written. Or not disappeared after promising to keep me safe.” The words were out, sharper than she intended. She saw a flicker in his heterochromatic eyes—something that wasn’t quite surprise, but acknowledgment. He inclined his head. “A fair point. May I come in? The hallway is… public.” She stepped aside, a stiff, jerky motion. He entered, his presence seeming to shrink the cramped flat. He moved with a predator’s grace, his gaze cataloging the chaos of Eva’s research—the scrolls stacked on the radiator, the books teetering on every surface, the cat, Ptolemy, watching from atop a pile of journals with wide, green eyes. “Eva is not here,” Rory said, shutting the door. The final deadbolt felt like locking herself in a cage with a very elegant panther. “I am aware.” He ran a gloved finger along a dusty shelf. “She is in Prague. Following a lead on the Ley Line convergence.” He turned, that dual-toned gaze pinning her. “I came to see you.” “Why now?” He didn’t answer immediately. He walked to the small, cluttered table, placing his cane against it with precise care. He began to unbutton his overcoat. “We have a mutual problem. One that requires your particular… talents.” “I’m a delivery driver.” “You are Brendan Carter’s daughter. You have his mind, and your mother’s stubbornness.” He draped the coat over a chair. “A dangerous combination. And a useful one.” Rory crossed her arms, leaning against the kitchen counter. The kettle was cold behind her. “You left because it wasn’t safe. You said so yourself. Now you want to drag me back into whatever mess you’re cleaning up?” “I left because the threat was specific. And immediate.” He took a step closer. The air between them thickened. “The threat has… evolved. It now has a name. And that name is being whispered in places where your deliveries do not go.” Ptolemy chose that moment to leap from his perch, winding between Lucien’s legs with a demanding purr. Lucien didn’t look down, but his hand absently found the cat’s head, scratching behind the ears with an unthinking familiarity that made Rory’s chest ache. He’d always been gentle with small, living things. “You’re an information broker, Luc. You have people for this. Why me?” “Because you think laterally. You see connections others miss. Because you are not… of this world. Not yet.” His hand stilled on Ptolemy. “And because you are in danger whether you aid me or not. At least with me, you will see it coming.” The old anger warred with a newer, colder fear. He was serious. She knew the difference between his charming persona and this—the stillness, the way his black eye seemed to drink the light. “What kind of danger?” “The kind that leaves no bodies. Only questions. Memories that shift like sand.” He was very close now. She could smell the faint, expensive scent of his cologne, something like sandalwood and cold metal. “A man named Silas has been asking about you. The owner of the bar below your flat.” Rory’s breath caught. “Silas? He’s harmless. He waters my plants when I’m on long shifts.” “Silas Ashford is a retired hunter of the Veiled. He has not been harmless for two hundred years.” Lucien’s voice dropped. “He asks about your comings and goings. About the scar on your wrist. About the dreams you have.” A chill traced her spine. She did have dreams. Vague, unsettling things about falling through ink-black water, about a voice speaking a language that wasn’t language. She’d never told anyone. Not Eva. Not him. “How could you know that?” “Because I listen. It is what I do.” He reached out, not to touch her, but to gently take her left hand. His thumb brushed over the crescent scar. It was a touch of shocking intimacy, a reconnection of a circuit she’d thought dead. Her skin prickled. “This was not a childhood accident, *chérie*. Your mother never told you the truth of it. A price was paid, long ago. A balance was struck. And now, someone seeks to collect.” She pulled her hand back, but not sharply. The contact lingered on her skin. “You’re talking in riddles.” “I am speaking the only language that keeps the walls from listening.” He let his hand drop. “Come with me to the Raven’s Wing tomorrow night. There is someone there who can show you what I cannot. After that, the choice is yours. Walk away, or help me ensure there is a world left to walk away in.” He picked up his cane, the movement final. He wasn’t asking. He was laying out the new terms of their existence. “And if I say no?” “Then I will leave. And I will watch from a distance. And when the thing that wears Silas’s face finally knocks on your door, you will be alone.” He paused at the door, his back to her. “I have made that mistake once. Leaving you alone. I do not have a taste for repetition.” He opened the door. The hallway light carved his silhouette. “Lucien.” He stopped, but didn’t turn. “You said you left for my safety. That message. Was that true?” A long, silent beat. Rain pattered against the window. Ptolemy meowed softly. “It was the truest thing I have ever said,” he replied, his voice rough at the edges. “And the most cowardly. Goodnight, Aurora.” The door clicked shut behind him. The three deadbolts seemed like childish toys. Rory stood in the silence of the flat, the ghost of his touch on her wrist, the weight of his warning settling around her like the books and scrolls. The anger was still there, but it had a new companion now: a terrifying, clarifying sense of being seen. And the knowledge that the quiet life she’d built was already gone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.311
leniency0.622
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1354
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"gently"
2"sharply"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1354
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"predator"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"ensure"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"stomach"
3"stark"
4"flicker"
5"predator"
6"chill"
7"traced"
8"ensure"
9"weight"
10"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords11
totalWords1349
ratio0.008
matches
0"chérie"
1"It is not safe for you here. Forgive me."
2"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount828
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Renaissance1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Eva2
Ptolemy4
Rory6
Lucien4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Cheung"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Rory"
6"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a door slamming shut"
1"quite surprise, but acknowledgment"
2"felt like locking herself in a cage wit"
3"something like sandalwood and cold metal"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.741
wordCount1349
matches
0"not to touch her, but to gently take her left hand"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean29.98
std20.89
cv0.697
sampleLengths
067
18
226
33
419
523
641
751
88
969
1034
1114
129
1339
1415
1556
1624
1736
182
1936
204
2127
2238
2342
2450
2512
2644
2737
2851
2915
3039
3139
3279
3318
3458
3521
365
3754
3810
391
405
4112
4212
4323
4473
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"being seen"
95.83% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs128
matches
0"wasn’t asking"
1"was laying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences117
ratio0.06
matches
0"Six months of silence after his last message—*It is not safe for you here."
1"Forgive me.*—a message that felt like a door slamming shut."
2"Rain glistened on his platinum blond hair, slicked back from a face that belonged on a Renaissance sculpture—all sharp cheekbones and a firm jaw."
3"“You look well, Aurora.” His gaze swept over her—her damp hair sticking to her cheeks, the worn Yu-Fei Cheung jacket, the small crescent scar on her left wrist visible where her sleeve rode up."
4"She saw a flicker in his heterochromatic eyes—something that wasn’t quite surprise, but acknowledgment."
5"He moved with a predator’s grace, his gaze cataloging the chaos of Eva’s research—the scrolls stacked on the radiator, the books teetering on every surface, the cat, Ptolemy, watching from atop a pile of journals with wide, green eyes."
6"She knew the difference between his charming persona and this—the stillness, the way his black eye seemed to drink the light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount838
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.025059665871121718
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007159904534606206
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean11.53
std8.37
cv0.726
sampleLengths
013
117
218
313
46
58
63
71
89
913
103
112
1211
136
143
1512
168
1714
1813
1914
206
212
2214
2310
2412
257
264
274
2817
2924
3018
3110
3234
339
345
359
3625
3714
384
3911
407
4110
4239
439
4415
4512
4619
475
482
494
41.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners36
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Just a presence, patient and"
1"Then, a voice, smooth as"
ratio0.024
0.49% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences82
matches
0"Her delivery shift had been"
1"She just wanted tea and"
2"She didn’t move."
3"Her stomach dropped."
4"She turned, not opening the"
5"She could hear the faint"
6"Her hand hovered over the"
7"She’d fled one man’s cruelty"
8"She threw the deadbolts."
9"His eyes caught the light"
10"His gaze swept over her—her"
11"She didn’t move from the"
12"She saw a flicker in"
13"He inclined his head."
14"She stepped aside, a stiff,"
15"He entered, his presence seeming"
16"He moved with a predator’s"
17"He ran a gloved finger"
18"He turned, that dual-toned gaze"
19"He didn’t answer immediately."
ratio0.549
2.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences82
matches
0"The second deadbolt slid home"
1"Rory leaned her forehead against"
2"The curry-house scent of cumin"
3"Her delivery shift had been"
4"She just wanted tea and"
5"A shadow fell over the"
6"She didn’t move."
7"Her stomach dropped."
8"She turned, not opening the"
9"She could hear the faint"
10"Her hand hovered over the"
11"She’d fled one man’s cruelty"
12"The anger was a hot,"
13"She threw the deadbolts."
14"The door swung inward."
15"Lucien Moreau filled the frame,"
16"Rain glistened on his platinum"
17"His eyes caught the light"
18"The ivory head of his"
19"His gaze swept over her—her"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rain glistened on his platinum blond hair, slicked back from a face that belonged on a Renaissance sculpture—all sharp cheekbones and a firm jaw."
1"She saw a flicker in his heterochromatic eyes—something that wasn’t quite surprise, but acknowledgment."
2"He moved with a predator’s grace, his gaze cataloging the chaos of Eva’s research—the scrolls stacked on the radiator, the books teetering on every surface, the…"
3"Lucien didn’t look down, but his hand absently found the cat’s head, scratching behind the ears with an unthinking familiarity that made Rory’s chest ache."
4"Vague, unsettling things about falling through ink-black water, about a voice speaking a language that wasn’t language."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he replied, his voice rough at the edges"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.044
leniency0.089
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.5039%