Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
61
glossingSentenceCount
8
matches
0
"raps that seemed to echo off the stacked scrolls and spill over the piles of open folios that claimed every surface of Eva’s flat"
1
"as if remembering the night he had traced it with his thumb while they lay tangled in sheets after a storm that had rattled the windows of Eva’s flat"
2
"sounded like apology"
3
"as if testing the weight of her welcome"
4
"thud that seemed to seal the hallway off from the world beyond"
5
"something like regret"
6
"as if measuring how much of her he had wounded"
7
"nod that seemed to carry the weight of years, he replied"
"The deadbolts—three of them, each a cold, reassuring turn—clicked back under her fingers."
1
"The scar on her left wrist—a tiny crescent she had earned falling from a tree as a child—tingled, as if remembering the night he had traced it with his thumb while they lay tangled in sheets after a storm that had rattled the windows of Eva’s flat."
2
"Then, without warning, he had vanished—no note, no explanation, just the hollow echo of his cane against the stairwell as he descended, leaving her with a mess of half‑finished research and a heart that had learned to beat in staccato."
3
"He did not step inside; he remained just beyond the threshold, as if testing the weight of her welcome."
4
"“I never left, Rory. I merely… stepped back to handle something that required my… particular set of talents.” He lifted the cane just enough to show the faint glint of the blade’s edge catching the light—a silent reminder of the danger he walked in, and the danger he brought with him."
5
"The flat swallowed him whole, the scent of his cologne—something sharp, like bergamot and sandalwood—mixing with the curry and paper."
6
"He took the mug, his fingers brushing hers briefly—a contact that sent a jolt up her arm, hot and sudden, as if the current of their past had not been fully severed."
7
"He did not pull away immediately; his thumb lingered on the back of her hand, feeling the faint ridge of her scar."
8
"Rory felt the pull of old attraction, the way his proximity made her skin prickle, the way his voice—low, urgent, earnest—sent a familiar thrill down her spine."
9
"Moving to the small bookshelf, she pulled out a leather‑bound notebook filled with her own scribbles—translations, marginal notes, diagrams of the sigil’s interlocking parts."
10
"Outside, the city’s relentless hum continued—a river of traffic, distant sirens, the occasional laugh from a passerby—while inside Eva’s flat, two people who had once been drawn together by fascination and now bound by necessity began to rewrite the story they had left unfinished."
11
"In that quiet space, illuminated by the lamplight and the promise of a dangerous task ahead, the past lingered like a shadow, but the present—sharp, real, and undeniably theirs—burned brighter."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
49
technicalSentenceCount
14
matches
0
"The knock came sharp against the wood, three rapid raps that seemed to echo off the stacked scrolls and spill over the piles of open folios that claimed every s…"
1
"His platinum blond hair, slicked back with a precision that spoke of habit rather than vanity, caught the weak hallway lamp and threw back a glint of moonlight."
2
"The scar on her left wrist—a tiny crescent she had earned falling from a tree as a child—tingled, as if remembering the night he had traced it with his thumb wh…"
3
"Then, without warning, he had vanished—no note, no explanation, just the hollow echo of his cane against the stairwell as he descended, leaving her with a mess …"
4
"He did not step inside; he remained just beyond the threshold, as if testing the weight of her welcome."
5
"His amber eye flickered, the black one holding hers with an intensity that made the air feel thin."
6
"She stepped back, allowing him entry, and the door swung shut behind him with a soft thud that seemed to seal the hallway off from the world beyond."
7
"She moved to the small kitchen area, pulling out two chipped mugs and filling them with tea from the pot that had been sitting since morning."
8
"He took the mug, his fingers brushing hers briefly—a contact that sent a jolt up her arm, hot and sudden, as if the current of their past had not been fully sev…"
9
"He leaned forward, elbows resting on his knees, the cane placed vertically beside him as if it were an extension of his spine."
10
"She had thought it merely academic, a curiosity for her own research into occult symbols that had always fascinated her since her mother’s folklore lessons."
11
"Ptolemy, sensing the shift, leapt onto Lucien’s lap, purring softly as if to remind them both that life continued in small, comforting rhythms despite the loomi…"
12
"She could see it in the set of his jaw, the way his fingers tapped a restless rhythm on the cane’s ivory handle, the way his eyes flicked to her scar and then a…"
13
"Outside, the city’s relentless hum continued—a river of traffic, distant sirens, the occasional laugh from a passerby—while inside Eva’s flat, two people who ha…"