| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.611 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1825 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1825 | | totalAiIsms | 42 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "beacon" | | 4 | "calculated" | | 5 | "glint" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "clandestine" | | 8 | "mechanical" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "practiced ease" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "quickened" | | 14 | "gloom" | | 15 | "flicked" | | 16 | "raced" | | 17 | "could feel" | | 18 | "weight" | | 19 | "pulsed" | | 20 | "shattered" | | 21 | "resolve" | | 22 | "reminder" | | 23 | "resonance" | | 24 | "unspoken" | | 25 | "magnetic" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "a flicker of fear" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 10 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 53 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1814 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1611 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.87 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 2 | | Soho | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 1 | | Tomás | 5 | | Herrera | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Harlow | 14 | | Morris | 2 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Heart | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Tomás" | | 2 | "Herrera" | | 3 | "Saint" | | 4 | "Christopher" | | 5 | "Harlow" | | 6 | "Morris" | | 7 | "Police" | | 8 | "Raven" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Heart" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "command that seemed to keep the city’s own pulse in check" | | 1 | "condensation that seemed to echo the rain above" | | 2 | "passage that seemed to lead even further down—the market’s backrooms, perhaps, where the most dangerous trades were made" | | 3 | "looked like an ordinary storage closet bu" | | 4 | "as if waiting for her decision" | | 5 | "satchel that seemed to pulse with an inner light" | | 6 | "resonance that seemed to reverberate through the stone walls" | | 7 | "as if seeking some unspoken permission, then, with a resigned sigh, he dropped the bundle he had been clutching and raised his hands in a gesture that was half surrender, half challenge" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1814 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 29.99% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 69.77 | | std | 17.79 | | cv | 0.255 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 72 | | 4 | 102 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 89 | | 7 | 76 | | 8 | 62 | | 9 | 65 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 85 | | 12 | 80 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 75 | | 16 | 72 | | 17 | 96 | | 18 | 73 | | 19 | 70 | | 20 | 64 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 87 | | 24 | 52 | | 25 | 81 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "were lined" | | 1 | "were made" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 259 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.167 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect— a wiry figure in a hoodie, face half‑shrouded by the brim of a battered cap— darted around a corner, his breath a ragged puff that vanished into the night." | | 1 | "Harlow’s brown eyes tracked him without faltering; the faint scar on the left side of her jaw tightened as she narrowed her focus." | | 2 | "Harlow’s military precision took over; she calculated the angle of the alley, the tilt of the sign, the way the rain fell on the wet cobblestones." | | 3 | "The air was thick with the smell of stale ale and something metallic—perhaps the iron tang of blood, or the iron scent of old secrets." | | 4 | "The shelf was unremarkable, save for the faint outline of a recessed doorway behind it—a secret room known only to those who wanted to stay hidden." | | 5 | "The smell grew stronger—an intoxicating mix of incense, ozone, and something sweet and alchemical that made her throat constrict." | | 6 | "The man’s hands moved with practiced ease, arranging a set of bone tokens—smooth, pale, and etched with sigils—into a neat line." | | 7 | "The suspect—still breathing heavily— tossed a token onto the ground." | | 8 | "“If you follow him, you’ll see why they call it The Veil. It’s not just a market; it’s a conduit.”" | | 9 | "The case had haunted her for three years— the loss of DS Morris, the inexplicable circumstances surrounding his death, the supernatural ripple that the higher-ups had tried to bury." | | 10 | "He snatched a bundle, thrust it into his coat, and sprinted toward a narrow passage that seemed to lead even further down—the market’s backrooms, perhaps, where the most dangerous trades were made." | | 11 | "But she also sensed the danger that lay ahead—unstable magic, the unknown, the possibility that whatever lay in that hidden realm could be beyond her training, beyond her badge." | | 12 | "A sudden clatter erupted from the far side of the market—a glass jar shattered, spilling a luminous liquid that hissed as it hit the floor." | | 13 | "In that suspended breath, Harlow realized that the chase had become something else entirely—a bargaining of wits, a test of resolve." | | 14 | "The chase had become a journey—a descent into a world where the ordinary and the extraordinary collided in a rain‑slicked paradox." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1624 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay ahead—unstable magic," |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.020320197044334975 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006157635467980296 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 20.16 | | std | 9.19 | | cv | 0.456 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 53 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 47.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.34444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 39.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he vaulted over a" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 72.38% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "she barked, voice low but" | | 1 | "He didn’t stop." | | 2 | "She surged forward, her coat" | | 3 | "He was already there, slipping" | | 4 | "She remembered the whispered rumors" | | 5 | "It landed with a muted" | | 6 | "She recognized the token from" | | 7 | "He turned, his eyes meeting" | | 8 | "It was Tomás Herrera, his" | | 9 | "His olive skin was damp," | | 10 | "he said, his tone a" | | 11 | "she replied, her voice steady" | | 12 | "He glanced toward a shadowed" | | 13 | "She had buried herself in" | | 14 | "She could feel the weight" | | 15 | "He snatched a bundle, thrust" | | 16 | "His eyes flicked to the" | | 17 | "She could feel the adrenaline," | | 18 | "She took a step forward," | | 19 | "She thought of the partner" |
| | ratio | 0.369 | |
| 19.52% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn’s shoes slapped against" | | 1 | "The suspect— a wiry figure" | | 2 | "Harlow’s brown eyes tracked him" | | 3 | "she barked, voice low but" | | 4 | "The words cut through the" | | 5 | "He didn’t stop." | | 6 | "The bar’s sign swung lazily" | | 7 | "Harlow’s military precision took over;" | | 8 | "She surged forward, her coat" | | 9 | "The air was thick with" | | 10 | "Patrons huddled in booths, eyes" | | 11 | "Harlow’s gaze cut through them," | | 12 | "He was already there, slipping" | | 13 | "The shelf was unremarkable, save" | | 14 | "Harlow’s mind snapped into gear." | | 15 | "She remembered the whispered rumors" | | 16 | "The bookshelf shifted with a" | | 17 | "The hidden room opened onto" | | 18 | "The stairs were lined with" | | 19 | "Harlow descended, her boots making" |
| | ratio | 0.881 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 6.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect— a wiry figure in a hoodie, face half‑shrouded by the brim of a battered cap— darted around a corner, his breath a ragged puff that vanished into th…" | | 1 | "She surged forward, her coat clinging to her shoulders, the worn leather watch on her left wrist catching a glint as she pushed through the doorway." | | 2 | "Old maps and black‑and‑white photographs lined the walls, each image a silent witness to a world that refused to be forgotten." | | 3 | "The bookshelf shifted with a soft thud as she pushed it aside, the movement almost mechanical, as if the bar itself had been waiting for her." | | 4 | "The stairs were lined with old pipework, the walls dripping with condensation that seemed to echo the rain above." | | 5 | "Stalls made of reclaimed wood and rusted metal sold everything from cracked crystals that hummed with power to vials of liquid that shimmered with forbidden col…" | | 6 | "He snatched a bundle, thrust it into his coat, and sprinted toward a narrow passage that seemed to lead even further down—the market’s backrooms, perhaps, where…" | | 7 | "Harlow felt the rain’s echo in her bones, the cold that seeped through her coat, the weight of her own history pressing against her ribs." | | 8 | "A sudden clatter erupted from the far side of the market—a glass jar shattered, spilling a luminous liquid that hissed as it hit the floor." | | 9 | "The suspect froze mid‑stride, his hand hovering over a satchel that seemed to pulse with an inner light." | | 10 | "He glanced at Tomás, as if seeking some unspoken permission, then, with a resigned sigh, he dropped the bundle he had been clutching and raised his hands in a g…" | | 11 | "She tightened her grip on the worn leather strap, steadied her breath, and let the chase guide her deeper into the shadows, towards a truth that waited just bey…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she barked, voice low but edged with authority" | | 1 | "he said, his tone a mixture of warning and invitation" | | 2 | "she replied, her voice steady despite the adrenaline surging through her veins" | | 3 | "she whispered, more to herself than to anyone else" | | 4 | "he muttered, a half‑smile tugging at his lips" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she barked (bark)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "he spat (spit)" | | 3 | "he muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.389 | | leniency | 0.778 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |