Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFDH7VMR68R5JKHWW14MC30

Run Details

Duration:
52.6s
Cost:
$0.000624
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the slick pavement, turning the city’s neon veins into trembling rivers of light. Harlow Quinn’s shoes slapped against the blacktop, each step echoing against the hollowed storefronts of Soho. The suspect— a wiry figure in a hoodie, face half‑shrouded by the brim of a battered cap— darted around a corner, his breath a ragged puff that vanished into the night. Harlow’s brown eyes tracked him without faltering; the faint scar on the left side of her jaw tightened as she narrowed her focus. “Hold!” she barked, voice low but edged with authority. The words cut through the drizzle, a command that seemed to keep the city’s own pulse in check. He didn’t stop. Instead, he vaulted over a rusted fire escape and vanished into a narrow side street where the rain pooled into shallow gutters, reflecting the flicker of a green neon sign that read “Raven’s Nest” in jagged letters. The bar’s sign swung lazily above the doorway, the green glow cutting through the downpour like a beacon for those who knew where to look. Harlow’s military precision took over; she calculated the angle of the alley, the tilt of the sign, the way the rain fell on the wet cobblestones. She surged forward, her coat clinging to her shoulders, the worn leather watch on her left wrist catching a glint as she pushed through the doorway. Inside, the bar was a cavern of shadows. Old maps and black‑and‑white photographs lined the walls, each image a silent witness to a world that refused to be forgotten. The air was thick with the smell of stale ale and something metallic—perhaps the iron tang of blood, or the iron scent of old secrets. Patrons huddled in booths, eyes flicking toward the newcomer. Harlow’s gaze cut through them, scanning for the suspect. He was already there, slipping into a shadowed corner where a wooden bookshelf leaned against the far wall. The shelf was unremarkable, save for the faint outline of a recessed doorway behind it—a secret room known only to those who wanted to stay hidden. Harlow’s mind snapped into gear. She remembered the whispered rumors of the clique’s clandestine meetings, the rumors of a hidden safe haven that even the police had never been able to locate. The bookshelf shifted with a soft thud as she pushed it aside, the movement almost mechanical, as if the bar itself had been waiting for her. The hidden room opened onto a staircase that descended into darkness. The stairs were lined with old pipework, the walls dripping with condensation that seemed to echo the rain above. Harlow descended, her boots making muted thuds against the concrete. The smell grew stronger—an intoxicating mix of incense, ozone, and something sweet and alchemical that made her throat constrict. At the bottom, the passage opened onto a vaulted space that could not have been a part of any legal establishment. The Veil Market stretched before her, a sprawling underground bazaar lit by flickering lanterns and the occasional phosphorescent glow of enchanted trinkets. Stalls made of reclaimed wood and rusted metal sold everything from cracked crystals that hummed with power to vials of liquid that shimmered with forbidden colors. The hum of bargaining voices rose like a low tide, punctuated by the occasional hiss of a forbidden bargain closing. In the center of the market, a figure stood over a table piled high with strange artifacts. The man’s hands moved with practiced ease, arranging a set of bone tokens—smooth, pale, and etched with sigils—into a neat line. The suspect—still breathing heavily— tossed a token onto the ground. It landed with a muted clink, resonating against the stone floor. The token glowed faintly, a soft blue that seemed to pulse in time with the market’s heartbeat. Harlow’s pulse quickened. She recognized the token from the briefing: it was a key to the market, a token that granted entry only to those who possessed it. The suspect had clearly been using it, perhaps to barter for information or contraband. He turned, his eyes meeting hers for a heartbeat before he lunged forward, disappearing deeper into the maze of stalls. “Detective Quinn!” a voice called, low and urgent. It was Tomás Herrera, his dark curly hair slicked back by the rain, the Saint Christopher medallion swinging against his chest as he moved. His olive skin was damp, the scar on his forearm catching what little light filtered through the market’s gloom. “You shouldn’t be here,” he said, his tone a mixture of warning and invitation. Harlow’s eyes flicked to his medallion, then back to the suspect, who was now weaving between stalls laden with jars of liquids that fizzed and shifted colors. “I’m not leaving until I find out what he’s doing,” she replied, her voice steady despite the adrenaline surging through her veins. “I have a feeling this isn’t just about street-level drug deals. It’s bigger.” Tomás nodded, his hand resting on the hilt of a concealed blade. “The clique’s involvement goes deeper than the streets. They use this market to move… things. Things that can’t be tracked by ordinary means.” He glanced toward a shadowed alcove where a figure cloaked in a cloak of midnight feathers whispered to a buyer about a vial of liquid that turned night into day. “If you follow him, you’ll see why they call it The Veil. It’s not just a market; it’s a conduit.” Harlow’s mind raced. The case had haunted her for three years— the loss of DS Morris, the inexplicable circumstances surrounding his death, the supernatural ripple that the higher-ups had tried to bury. She had buried herself in work, in the dogged pursuit of truth, but now, standing in this subterranean labyrinth, the past seemed to rise like mist. She could feel the weight of her watch on her wrist, the weight of duty pressing against the back of her skull. The suspect darted toward a stall where a woman in a tattered coat sold bundles of dried herbs, each sprig pulsing with a faint inner light. He snatched a bundle, thrust it into his coat, and sprinted toward a narrow passage that seemed to lead even further down—the market’s backrooms, perhaps, where the most dangerous trades were made. “Do you think he’s carrying something that could—” Harlow began, but Tomás cut her off with a sharp shake of his head. “Whatever it is, it’s not meant for the police. Not yet.” His eyes flicked to the edge of the market, where a faint green glow pulsed from a doorway that looked like an ordinary storage closet but was, in fact, the entrance to a larger chamber. “That way leads to the Heart of the Veil. If you go there, you might find the answers you’re looking for. Or you might find something that… changes you.” Harlow felt the rain’s echo in her bones, the cold that seeped through her coat, the weight of her own history pressing against her ribs. She could feel the adrenaline, the primal urge to chase, to catch, to bring the suspect to justice. But she also sensed the danger that lay ahead—unstable magic, the unknown, the possibility that whatever lay in that hidden realm could be beyond her training, beyond her badge. She took a step forward, then stopped. The suspect’s silhouette slipped behind a table stacked with glass jars of liquid that writhed like living things. The market’s hum dimmed for a moment, as if waiting for her decision. She thought of the partner she had lost, of the promises he made to never give up on the truth, no matter how dark. She thought of the weight of her own badge, the insignia of the Metropolitan Police, and the oath she had taken to protect the innocent, even when the world tried to hide behind shadows. A sudden clatter erupted from the far side of the market—a glass jar shattered, spilling a luminous liquid that hissed as it hit the floor. The market’s patrons froze, eyes turning toward the source. The suspect froze mid‑stride, his hand hovering over a satchel that seemed to pulse with an inner light. In that suspended breath, Harlow realized that the chase had become something else entirely—a bargaining of wits, a test of resolve. She took another step, then another, closing the distance between her and the suspect. As she moved, the green neon of the Raven’s Nest above seemed to pulse in time with the beating of her heart, a reminder that the world above still existed, still needed her. She could feel the cool breath of the underground market on her cheek, the faint scent of ozone mixing with the rain-soaked air. “Enough,” she whispered, more to herself than to anyone else. “If you want to know what’s really going on, you’ll have to trust me.” Her voice was barely audible over the market’s chatter, but there was steel in it, a resonance that seemed to reverberate through the stone walls. “But I’m not going to let you disappear into whatever darkness you think you control.” The suspect’s eyes widened, a flicker of fear crossing his features before his mask slipped back into practiced indifference. He glanced at Tomás, as if seeking some unspoken permission, then, with a resigned sigh, he dropped the bundle he had been clutching and raised his hands in a gesture that was half surrender, half challenge. “Fine,” he spat, the word tasting like ash. “You want answers? Then walk with me. But know this— once you step into the Heart, there’s no turning back.” Harlow felt a surge of purpose, a clarity that cut through the rain‑soaked fog of her thoughts. She moved forward, stepping into the narrow passage that led toward the Heart of the Veil. The air grew colder, the light dimmer, but her mind sharpened. She could feel the pull of destiny, the magnetic draw of a mystery that had haunted her for years. Every step was a promise to herself and to the memory of DS Morris that she would not let the truth dissolve into oblivion. Behind her, Tomás fell into step, his medallion catching the faint light as he moved. “Stay close,” he muttered, a half‑smile tugging at his lips. “The deeper we go, the more the market will test us. But we’ve got each other, and maybe… just maybe, we’ll find what we’ve been looking for.” The chase had become a journey—a descent into a world where the ordinary and the extraordinary collided in a rain‑slicked paradox. Harlow Quinn felt the weight of her watch tick in rhythm with the pulse of the underground market, each beat a reminder that time was both ally and adversary. She tightened her grip on the worn leather strap, steadied her breath, and let the chase guide her deeper into the shadows, towards a truth that waited just beyond the veil.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.611
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1825
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1825
totalAiIsms42
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count6
2
word"flicker"
count2
3
word"beacon"
count1
4
word"calculated"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"clandestine"
count1
8
word"mechanical"
count1
9
word"echo"
count2
10
word"shimmered"
count1
11
word"practiced ease"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"quickened"
count1
14
word"gloom"
count1
15
word"flicked"
count2
16
word"raced"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count4
18
word"weight"
count5
19
word"pulsed"
count1
20
word"shattered"
count1
21
word"resolve"
count1
22
word"reminder"
count2
23
word"resonance"
count1
24
word"unspoken"
count1
25
word"magnetic"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"pulse"
2"flicker"
3"beacon"
4"calculated"
5"glint"
6"scanning"
7"clandestine"
8"mechanical"
9"echo"
10"shimmered"
11"practiced ease"
12"etched"
13"quickened"
14"gloom"
15"flicked"
16"raced"
17"could feel"
18"weight"
19"pulsed"
20"shattered"
21"resolve"
22"reminder"
23"resonance"
24"unspoken"
25"magnetic"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"The air was thick with"
2"a flicker of fear"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"a flicker of fear"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount10
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1814
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1611
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn2
Soho1
Veil2
Market1
Tomás5
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Harlow14
Morris2
Metropolitan1
Police1
Raven1
Nest1
Heart1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Harlow"
6"Morris"
7"Police"
8"Raven"
places
0"Soho"
1"Veil"
2"Market"
3"Heart"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"command that seemed to keep the city’s own pulse in check"
1"condensation that seemed to echo the rain above"
2"passage that seemed to lead even further down—the market’s backrooms, perhaps, where the most dangerous trades were made"
3"looked like an ordinary storage closet bu"
4"as if waiting for her decision"
5"satchel that seemed to pulse with an inner light"
6"resonance that seemed to reverberate through the stone walls"
7"as if seeking some unspoken permission, then, with a resigned sigh, he dropped the bundle he had been clutching and raised his hands in a gesture that was half surrender, half challenge"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1814
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"realized that the"
29.99% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean69.77
std17.79
cv0.255
sampleLengths
085
167
277
372
4102
559
689
776
862
965
1062
1185
1280
1358
1422
1575
1672
1796
1873
1970
2064
2155
2228
2387
2452
2581
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"were lined"
1"were made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs259
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences90
ratio0.167
matches
0"The suspect— a wiry figure in a hoodie, face half‑shrouded by the brim of a battered cap— darted around a corner, his breath a ragged puff that vanished into the night."
1"Harlow’s brown eyes tracked him without faltering; the faint scar on the left side of her jaw tightened as she narrowed her focus."
2"Harlow’s military precision took over; she calculated the angle of the alley, the tilt of the sign, the way the rain fell on the wet cobblestones."
3"The air was thick with the smell of stale ale and something metallic—perhaps the iron tang of blood, or the iron scent of old secrets."
4"The shelf was unremarkable, save for the faint outline of a recessed doorway behind it—a secret room known only to those who wanted to stay hidden."
5"The smell grew stronger—an intoxicating mix of incense, ozone, and something sweet and alchemical that made her throat constrict."
6"The man’s hands moved with practiced ease, arranging a set of bone tokens—smooth, pale, and etched with sigils—into a neat line."
7"The suspect—still breathing heavily— tossed a token onto the ground."
8"“If you follow him, you’ll see why they call it The Veil. It’s not just a market; it’s a conduit.”"
9"The case had haunted her for three years— the loss of DS Morris, the inexplicable circumstances surrounding his death, the supernatural ripple that the higher-ups had tried to bury."
10"He snatched a bundle, thrust it into his coat, and sprinted toward a narrow passage that seemed to lead even further down—the market’s backrooms, perhaps, where the most dangerous trades were made."
11"But she also sensed the danger that lay ahead—unstable magic, the unknown, the possibility that whatever lay in that hidden realm could be beyond her training, beyond her badge."
12"A sudden clatter erupted from the far side of the market—a glass jar shattered, spilling a luminous liquid that hissed as it hit the floor."
13"In that suspended breath, Harlow realized that the chase had become something else entirely—a bargaining of wits, a test of resolve."
14"The chase had become a journey—a descent into a world where the ordinary and the extraordinary collided in a rain‑slicked paradox."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1624
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay ahead—unstable magic,"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.020320197044334975
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.006157635467980296
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean20.16
std9.19
cv0.456
sampleLengths
015
116
231
323
49
518
63
737
825
926
1026
118
1221
1325
149
159
1618
1726
185
1927
2026
2111
2219
2310
2419
2521
2622
2726
2820
2917
3021
3110
3211
3317
343
3525
3614
3720
388
3924
4019
4114
4227
4322
4413
4512
4653
4720
483
4929
47.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.34444444444444444
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners31
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Instead, he vaulted over a"
ratio0.012
72.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences84
matches
0"she barked, voice low but"
1"He didn’t stop."
2"She surged forward, her coat"
3"He was already there, slipping"
4"She remembered the whispered rumors"
5"It landed with a muted"
6"She recognized the token from"
7"He turned, his eyes meeting"
8"It was Tomás Herrera, his"
9"His olive skin was damp,"
10"he said, his tone a"
11"she replied, her voice steady"
12"He glanced toward a shadowed"
13"She had buried herself in"
14"She could feel the weight"
15"He snatched a bundle, thrust"
16"His eyes flicked to the"
17"She could feel the adrenaline,"
18"She took a step forward,"
19"She thought of the partner"
ratio0.369
19.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences84
matches
0"Harlow Quinn’s shoes slapped against"
1"The suspect— a wiry figure"
2"Harlow’s brown eyes tracked him"
3"she barked, voice low but"
4"The words cut through the"
5"He didn’t stop."
6"The bar’s sign swung lazily"
7"Harlow’s military precision took over;"
8"She surged forward, her coat"
9"The air was thick with"
10"Patrons huddled in booths, eyes"
11"Harlow’s gaze cut through them,"
12"He was already there, slipping"
13"The shelf was unremarkable, save"
14"Harlow’s mind snapped into gear."
15"She remembered the whispered rumors"
16"The bookshelf shifted with a"
17"The hidden room opened onto"
18"The stairs were lined with"
19"Harlow descended, her boots making"
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The suspect— a wiry figure in a hoodie, face half‑shrouded by the brim of a battered cap— darted around a corner, his breath a ragged puff that vanished into th…"
1"She surged forward, her coat clinging to her shoulders, the worn leather watch on her left wrist catching a glint as she pushed through the doorway."
2"Old maps and black‑and‑white photographs lined the walls, each image a silent witness to a world that refused to be forgotten."
3"The bookshelf shifted with a soft thud as she pushed it aside, the movement almost mechanical, as if the bar itself had been waiting for her."
4"The stairs were lined with old pipework, the walls dripping with condensation that seemed to echo the rain above."
5"Stalls made of reclaimed wood and rusted metal sold everything from cracked crystals that hummed with power to vials of liquid that shimmered with forbidden col…"
6"He snatched a bundle, thrust it into his coat, and sprinted toward a narrow passage that seemed to lead even further down—the market’s backrooms, perhaps, where…"
7"Harlow felt the rain’s echo in her bones, the cold that seeped through her coat, the weight of her own history pressing against her ribs."
8"A sudden clatter erupted from the far side of the market—a glass jar shattered, spilling a luminous liquid that hissed as it hit the floor."
9"The suspect froze mid‑stride, his hand hovering over a satchel that seemed to pulse with an inner light."
10"He glanced at Tomás, as if seeking some unspoken permission, then, with a resigned sigh, he dropped the bundle he had been clutching and raised his hands in a g…"
11"She tightened her grip on the worn leather strap, steadied her breath, and let the chase guide her deeper into the shadows, towards a truth that waited just bey…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she barked, voice low but edged with authority"
1"he said, his tone a mixture of warning and invitation"
2"she replied, her voice steady despite the adrenaline surging through her veins"
3"she whispered, more to herself than to anyone else"
4"he muttered, a half‑smile tugging at his lips"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she barked (bark)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he spat (spit)"
3"he muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.444
62.2627%