Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFDPJ6ZXZTFN9Z6HBSAPJH8

Run Details

Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.000708
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the cracked tiles of the abandoned Tube station, water pooling in gutters that ran like veins beneath the rusted tracks. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the underground carriage, boots splashing in shallow puddles that reflected the flicker of emergency lights overhead. The station smelled of mildew and something older, an iron tang that seemed to cling to the walls like dust. A thin wisp of cold air brushed her cheek from a crack in the stone, carrying a faint humming that made the hairs on her arms rise. She stopped, eyes scanning the dim expanse. The dimness was broken by a lone lamp hanging from a rusted beam, casting a cone of amber that fell across a figure hunched over a metal table. Eva Kowalski stood there, her red curls tangled and sticky with the damp, clutching a worn leather satchel that strained against her body. She wore round glasses that caught the light, turning them into tiny mirrors. In her hand she held a brass object that glinted in the gloom. The Veil Compass. Eva turned, eyes wide behind her lenses, and began to speak. “I think the source of the disturbance isn’t a ripple in the rift but a residue left by the rite. The symbols on the altar match the ones we have catalogued in the archives, but the way they’re drawn—” Quinn cut her off with a sharp gesture, the edge of her coat sweeping the floor. “What makes you so sure?” Eva’s lips twitched. “The ink residue is fresh, still wet, and the sigils are layered in a pattern we’ve only seen in the East End archives. The altar is made of polished obsidian, not the basalt we expect. That points to a deliberate placement.” Quinn moved closer, the leather of her watch creaking against her wrist. She studied the altar, noting the deep gouges along its surface, fresh as if some force had ripped at it. The cuts were not random; they formed angles that mirrored the constellations above the city on nights when the moon was full. She ran a thumb along one edge, feeling the cold stone bite into her skin. She pressed the Veil Compass from Eva’s hand, its brass casing cold, the needle twitching erratically. The needle steadied, pointing down toward a fissure in the stone floor, a narrow opening that seemed to breathe shallowly. The compass face was etched with sigils that pulsed faintly, as if drawing power from something unseen. Quinn crouched, letting her gaze linger on the fissure. Something lay there, half obscured by a veil of dust. She brushed away the grime, revealing a small, obsidian chip, pulsing with a faint inner light. The chip’s surface was etched with a pattern that matched the symbols on the altar, but it also bore a newer carving—a single, sharp line that cut through the older design. Eva leaned over, her freckled face inches from the chip. “It’s a mark of binding,” she whispered. “A binding to a specific entity. If the line is fresh, the binding must have been completed recently.” Quinn lifted her head, eyes narrowing. “Someone wanted to seal something here, then left a trail that leads to a rift. But why put the altar in a market that moves?” She glanced around, noting the way the shadows seemed to shift, rearranging themselves like moving pieces on a board. The market had moved locations every full moon; tonight it lingered here, suspended in an unplanned spot. The timing didn’t fit. She turned to the wall opposite the altar. Embedded in the plaster were faint, ghostly imprints of a handprint, as if someone had pressed their palm against the stone and left a mark. The prints were not human; the finger spacing was uneven, suggesting a clawed hand. Beside them, a smear of dark liquid clung to the brick, still wet to the touch. Quinn crouched again, feeling the texture of the mark. She lifted the chip carefully, examining the curvature of the cut. The angle was precise, angled at exactly ninety degrees, matching the geometry of a locking mechanism used to seal portals. “Someone used a key that fits this,” she said, voice low, the words cutting through the damp air. Eva’s eyes widened. “A key that matches the compass needle’s direction. That means the perpetrator opened that rift intentionally, used the compass to guide them, then sealed it again with this… chip.” Quinn’s mind raced. The altar’s obsidian surface was scratched in a pattern that resembled a map, each scratch aligning with known supernatural hotspots across London. One of those spots was a known necropolis beneath the city, a place where spirits lingered and were sometimes trapped. But this spot was different, unmarked on any charts. She lifted the compass, aligning the needle with the fissure. The needle shifted, pointing now toward the far end of the platform, where a rusted metal door stood half ajar. Behind it, a faint glow pulsed, the same emerald hue that enveloped the upholstery of the market’s forbidden artifacts. Quinn stepped toward the door, her movement deliberate, purposeful. The sound of her boots on the concrete echoed like a rhythm, marking each step. At the threshold, a figure stood silhouetted, face hidden under a hood, hands clasped behind their back. “Detective Quinn,” the figure rasped, voice muffled but unmistakably familiar. “You always liked the chase.” Quinn recognized the voice, though she saw no face. It was her own former partner’s voice, the tone that had haunted her in sleepless nights. “Morris?” she asked, disbelief threading her words. The hood fell back, revealing a gaunt face marked by the same military precision that had defined her own bearing. The figure wore a tattered coat, its sleeves frayed at the cuffs, the buttons glinting with tiny, embroidered sigils. The mouth formed a crooked smile, but the eyes were dead, empty of the spark that had once lit the detective’s world. “Morris?” Quinn’s voice cracked, but the sound was swallowed by the distant drip of water. “You’re dead.” The figure lifted a hand, revealing a scarred palm where a brand—an insignia of a secret society—glowed faintly. “Dead? No, I merely changed form. The rift you speak of opened three years ago, when the entity crossed over. It took me, but it also left a fragment. That fragment is what you hold now.” He gestured toward the chip. “The binding you see is not a seal but a tether. The compass was meant to guide you to the fracture point. I intended to harness that power, to control the flow. You arrived too soon.” Quinn stepped back, the movement sending a spray of water onto the floor. She stared at the chip, at the scar, at the spectral echo of her fallen partner. The pieces clicked together with a harsh clang of certainty. The crime scene, the ritual, the altar—everything fit a larger design that began three years ago, when Morris vanished under supernatural circumstances. She turned to Eva, noting the tremor in her shoulders, the way her fingers curled around the satchel strap. “You said the rite was completed recently,” she said, voice steady. “But the sigils on the chip align with the night of the full moon three years ago. The altar’s angle matches the constellation that was rising on that night. The perpetrator used the rift to bring something back, then sealed it with this binding. That explains why the market moves—someone is using the market’s unpredictable locations to hide a crime.” Eva nodded, eyes fixed on the scarred hand. “Why bring Morris back?” Quinn’s gaze drifted to the darkness beyond the door. The glow intensified, a pulse that seemed to beat in time with the unseen rhythm of the market. The diaphragm of the door groaned as if ready to open, yet the lock held fast. “He wanted to bring something back. Not a spirit, not a ghost. Something that can control the flow of power through the rift. He used the market’s moving location to avoid detection. But he made a mistake—a mistake that left a trail.” She glanced at the compass again, the needle trembling, pointing now toward the door. “The key you see on the chip is not metal but a fragment of a binding sigil. It can only be unlocked by someone who knows the exact sequence of the rite. The perpetrator used it to bind Morris, then tried to contain the fallout. But the binding was incomplete.” Quinn swallowed, feeling the weight of the knowledge settle on her shoulders. She remembered the night she had found Morris’s body—no body found, only a pool of blackened water at the edge of a forgotten underground tunnel, the water still holding the echo of a scream. That memory resurfaced, vivid, the smell of ozone that had lingered in her mind. “Tell me why the altar is here,” she demanded, voice sharp. The hooded figure lifted a hand, pointing to a graffiti scar etched into the wall—a stylized eye surrounded by runes. “It is a marker. The market’s caretakers left it for those who know where to look. The eye watches, the runes whisper. It is a beacon for those who can see beyond the veil.” Quinn’s eyes flicked to the etched eye, then back to the compass. She felt the familiar pull of duty surge within her, the same bearing that had guided her through countless investigations. She understood now that the crime was not just about murder or theft—it was about control of a gateway that could rewrite the balance of the world above and below. The scene stood still, the rain dripping onto the stone, the compass humming faintly. Quinn’s sharp jaw clenched, the metal of her watch catching the light, reflecting a glint of resolve. She stepped forward, hand hovering over the locked door, ready to apply pressure. “If we open it now, we may unleash what was sealed. But if we leave it, the entity inside will continue to feed, growing stronger. We need to decide which risk is greater.” Her voice was low but edged with steel, and the words hung in the damp air like a blade poised for release. Quinn turned, eyes locking on Eva’s green gaze. The detective’s stare was unblinking, the weight of years of investigations reflected in them. “Eva,” she said, tone durable, “find a way to seal this breach permanently. Use the archives, the knowledge you have. Bring whatever tools you can to the altar. I will hold the compass, keep the needle steady. Together we can stop whatever waits beyond the crack.” The hooded figure raised an eyebrow, a smirk playing on scarred lips. “You think you can stop it? You think you can seal a wound that never healed?” Quinn didn’t flinch. “I will try.” The rain intensified, slamming against the stone above, as the door gave slight creak, the lock yielding just enough to let the light spill out, painting the scene with an unsettling glow. The crack in the floor widened imperceptibly, exposing a darkness that seemed to inhale, to breathe, waiting. The scene held there, breath suspended, waiting for the next move.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1872
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1872
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"etched"
count4
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count2
8
word"glinting"
count1
9
word"spectral"
count1
10
word"echo"
count2
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"beacon"
count1
15
word"flicked"
count1
16
word"jaw clenched"
count1
17
word"glint"
count1
18
word"resolve"
count1
19
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"scanning"
2"gloom"
3"etched"
4"pulsed"
5"raced"
6"echoed"
7"familiar"
8"glinting"
9"spectral"
10"echo"
11"pulse"
12"weight"
13"whisper"
14"beacon"
15"flicked"
16"jaw clenched"
17"glint"
18"resolve"
19"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
15.87% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1863
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1313
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn17
Kowalski1
Veil2
Compass2
Eva9
London1
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.853
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"tang that seemed to cling to the walls like dust"
1"opening that seemed to breathe shallowly"
2"as if drawing power from something unseen"
3"pulse that seemed to beat in time with the unseen rhythm of the market"
4"darkness that seemed to inhale, to breathe, waiting"
92.65% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.074
wordCount1863
matches
0"not a seal but a tether"
1"not metal but a fragment of a binding sigil"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
88.89% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean44.36
std20.45
cv0.461
sampleLengths
063
162
249
33
450
521
644
769
853
966
1035
1131
1240
1363
1458
1532
1654
1749
1841
1915
2032
2161
2217
2354
2441
2561
2690
2712
2885
2964
3060
3111
3254
3362
3444
3533
3644
3746
3828
396
4049
4111
85.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences90
matches
0"was broken"
1"was etched"
2"was etched"
3"was scratched"
4"was swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs246
matches
0"was unblinking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences108
ratio0.083
matches
0"The cuts were not random; they formed angles that mirrored the constellations above the city on nights when the moon was full."
1"The chip’s surface was etched with a pattern that matched the symbols on the altar, but it also bore a newer carving—a single, sharp line that cut through the older design."
2"The market had moved locations every full moon; tonight it lingered here, suspended in an unplanned spot."
3"The prints were not human; the finger spacing was uneven, suggesting a clawed hand."
4"The figure lifted a hand, revealing a scarred palm where a brand—an insignia of a secret society—glowed faintly."
5"The crime scene, the ritual, the altar—everything fit a larger design that began three years ago, when Morris vanished under supernatural circumstances."
6"She remembered the night she had found Morris’s body—no body found, only a pool of blackened water at the edge of a forgotten underground tunnel, the water still holding the echo of a scream."
7"The hooded figure lifted a hand, pointing to a graffiti scar etched into the wall—a stylized eye surrounded by runes."
8"She understood now that the crime was not just about murder or theft—it was about control of a gateway that could rewrite the balance of the world above and below."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1320
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.021212121212121213
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.00909090909090909
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean17.25
std10.66
cv0.618
sampleLengths
022
121
220
327
47
528
623
713
813
93
1011
1139
1216
135
143
1541
1612
1720
1822
1915
2016
2120
2217
239
2410
2516
2631
2710
287
2918
306
3125
3219
3317
344
358
3625
3714
3816
399
4011
4120
4218
433
4429
453
4622
4720
489
4910
40.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.25925925925925924
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences89
matches
0"She stopped, eyes scanning the"
1"She wore round glasses that"
2"She studied the altar, noting"
3"She ran a thumb along"
4"She pressed the Veil Compass"
5"She brushed away the grime,"
6"She glanced around, noting the"
7"She turned to the wall"
8"She lifted the chip carefully,"
9"she said, voice low, the"
10"She lifted the compass, aligning"
11"It was her own former"
12"she asked, disbelief threading her"
13"He gestured toward the chip."
14"She stared at the chip,"
15"She turned to Eva, noting"
16"she said, voice steady"
17"She glanced at the compass"
18"She remembered the night she"
19"she demanded, voice sharp"
ratio0.281
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences89
matches
0"Rain slicked the cracked tiles"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
2"The station smelled of mildew"
3"A thin wisp of cold"
4"She stopped, eyes scanning the"
5"The dimness was broken by"
6"Eva Kowalski stood there, her"
7"She wore round glasses that"
8"The Veil Compass."
9"Eva turned, eyes wide behind"
10"Quinn cut her off with"
11"Eva’s lips twitched."
12"Quinn moved closer, the leather"
13"She studied the altar, noting"
14"The cuts were not random;"
15"She ran a thumb along"
16"She pressed the Veil Compass"
17"The needle steadied, pointing down"
18"The compass face was etched"
19"Quinn crouched, letting her gaze"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount16
matches
0"Rain slicked the cracked tiles of the abandoned Tube station, water pooling in gutters that ran like veins beneath the rusted tracks."
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the underground carriage, boots splashing in shallow puddles that reflected the flicker of emergency lights overhead."
2"A thin wisp of cold air brushed her cheek from a crack in the stone, carrying a faint humming that made the hairs on her arms rise."
3"Eva Kowalski stood there, her red curls tangled and sticky with the damp, clutching a worn leather satchel that strained against her body."
4"In her hand she held a brass object that glinted in the gloom."
5"The cuts were not random; they formed angles that mirrored the constellations above the city on nights when the moon was full."
6"She pressed the Veil Compass from Eva’s hand, its brass casing cold, the needle twitching erratically."
7"The chip’s surface was etched with a pattern that matched the symbols on the altar, but it also bore a newer carving—a single, sharp line that cut through the o…"
8"Embedded in the plaster were faint, ghostly imprints of a handprint, as if someone had pressed their palm against the stone and left a mark."
9"The altar’s obsidian surface was scratched in a pattern that resembled a map, each scratch aligning with known supernatural hotspots across London."
10"Behind it, a faint glow pulsed, the same emerald hue that enveloped the upholstery of the market’s forbidden artifacts."
11"It was her own former partner’s voice, the tone that had haunted her in sleepless nights."
12"The hood fell back, revealing a gaunt face marked by the same military precision that had defined her own bearing."
13"The crime scene, the ritual, the altar—everything fit a larger design that began three years ago, when Morris vanished under supernatural circumstances."
14"She felt the familiar pull of duty surge within her, the same bearing that had guided her through countless investigations."
15"Quinn’s sharp jaw clenched, the metal of her watch catching the light, reflecting a glint of resolve."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she said, voice low, the words cutting through the damp air"
1"the figure rasped, voice muffled but unmistakably familiar"
2"she asked, disbelief threading her words"
3"she said, voice steady"
4"she demanded, voice sharp"
5"she said, tone durable,"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.154
66.9159%