Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFDR4BW4Q9ZTRRFABCMMHZP

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42.6s
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$0.000000
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks of Richmond Park loomed like cathedral pillars in the gathering dusk, their gnarled roots buckling the earth. Aurora Carter shivered, not from the chill, but from the feeling of being watched. It was a constant prickle at the base of her skull ever since they’d left the familiar streets behind. “Are we close?” she asked, her voice low. The Heartstone pendant, nestled against her sternum beneath her jacket, gave a faint, reassuring pulse of warmth. Beside her, a ripple in the twilight coalesced into a taller, humanoid silhouette of living shadow. “The boundary thins here,” Nyx whispered, their voice the sound of dry leaves skittering over stone. “The air tastes of ozone and old blossoms.” Ahead, Isolde Varga glided forward, her silver hair a river of moonlight in the gloom. She left no disturbance on the damp grass. “Close is a relative measure when the path itself wishes to remain unseen,” she said, her melodic voice carrying the cadence of a riddle. “But yes, Rory. The door is near. It simply… prefers polite company.” Aurora followed, her boots crunching softly. She trusted Nyx’s senses and Isolde’s guidance, but the part of her that had grown up on sensible Cardiff streets, the part that had studied Pre-Law for two years, screamed that this was madness. Following a shadow-being and a three-hundred-year-old half-Fae into a hidden grove? Evan would have laughed. Then again, Evan was a chapter she’d slammed shut. Isolde stopped before a particularly massive oak, its bark like the wrinkled face of a giant. She raised a slender hand, not to touch the tree, but to trace a symbol in the air before it. For a heartbeat, nothing happened. Then, the trunk *rippled*. Not like water, but like heat haze, distorting the bark into a shimmering curtain. The scent that wafted through was overpowering—honeysuckle, crushed mint, and something metallic, like rain on hot stone. “After you,” Isolde said, a faint, knowing smile on her lips. Aurora took a breath, clutched the Heartstone through her shirt, and stepped through. The change was instantaneous and absolute. The cool, damp air of the park vanished, replaced by a balmy, sweet-smelling breeze. She blinked against a light that had no source she could see, a soft, pearlescent glow that seemed to emanate from the very air and the flora itself. They stood in a clearing ringed by standing stones of petrified wood, veined with luminous fungi that pulsed with a slow, rhythmic light, like a sleeping heartbeat. “Gods,” Aurora breathed, the word stolen by the wonder. The ground was carpeted in moss that shifted color where she stepped, from emerald to sapphire and back again. Flowers she had no name for bloomed in impossible clusters: bell-shaped blossoms that chimed with a faint, glassy music when the breeze stirred them; vines bearing fruit that looked like captured starlight; lilies whose petals were made of spun sugar, dissolving into sweet-smelling dew where they were bruised. Nyx flowed through the shimmering barrier, their form solidifying into a tall, shadowy humanoid. Their violet eyes, faintly glowing, swept the grove. “The Fae-taint is strong here,” they murmured, their voice now a soft, reverent whisper. “It feels… deliberate. Curated.” “It is a garden,” Isolde said, stepping through and appearing as if she’d always been there. “And a sanctuary. And a cage. All things are as they are perceived.” She began to walk, her bare feet making no impression on the luminous moss. “Come. The heart of the grove shows its true face to those who seek it.” They moved deeper. The standing stones grew larger, their surfaces carved with spiraling patterns that seemed to shift and writhe at the edge of vision. Aurora reached out to touch one, and a jolt of cold energy, familiar from the moonsilver dagger Isolde had given her, shot up her arm. She pulled back, her fingers tingling. “Do not linger on the old writing,” Isolde advised without turning. “The stones remember the names of those who touch them, and some names are best left unspoken in places where echoes have weight.” The air grew thick with the hum of unseen insects—or were they insects? The sound was too melodic, a layered chorus of tiny, metallic voices. Aurora felt a profound sense of peace settling over her, but it was undercut by a low, growing unease. This place was beautiful, but it wasn’t *safe*. It was beautiful like a venus flytrap is beautiful. They entered a grove within the grove, a circle of silver-barked trees whose leaves were translucent, catching the pearlescent light and fracturing it into a thousand dancing rainbows. In the center stood a pool of water so still it looked like a disc of polished obsidian. It reflected nothing of the shimmering trees or the glowing sky above. Nyx approached it cautiously, their shadow-form elongating and stretching across the moss. “It shows no reflection. The water is… deep. Deeper than it should be.” “It shows not what is, but what was,” Isolde said, kneeling at the pool’s edge. Her silver hair brushed the surface, and for a moment, ripples of gold spread from the point of contact. “Or what could be. The pool has its own moods. Tonight, it is contemplative.” Aurora peered over her shoulder. The dark surface was beginning to cloud, like ink dropped in water. Shapes coalesced—not images, but feelings given form. She saw a flash of a crimson gemstone, not unlike her Heartstone, but larger, embedded in a pillar of black rock. She felt a wave of overwhelming, ravenous hunger, a desire so profound it was physical, followed by the cool, sharp bite of the moonsilver blade in her hand. The visions were disjointed, powerful, and left her slightly dizzy. She straightened up, rubbing her temples. “What was that?” “A glimpse,” Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes fixed on Aurora. “The grove listens to the hearts of those within it. It showed you echoes of your own path. The Hunger, and the Blade to counter it. A warning, perhaps. Or a confirmation.” Nyx had moved to the far side of the pool, inspecting a cluster of the chiming flowers. “These are Faerie Bells,” they said, their whisper carrying clearly. “They were used in the old courts to signal the start of revels… or executions. Their song can lull a mortal to a sleep from which they do not wake.” They gently nudged one with a tendril of shadow, and a single, hauntingly pure note rang out, hanging in the air like a frozen tear. Aurora’s hand instinctively went to the hilt of the Fae-forged dagger at her belt. The cold of the moonsilver was a grounding reality in this overwhelming dreamscape. “So everything here is beautiful and deadly.” “Most things worth having are,” Isolde replied, a cryptic smile touching her lips. “But do not let the potential for danger blind you to the wonder. The grove is also a place of profound healing, of truths revealed. It is a nexus, Rory. A place where the Veil is thin as gossamer.” As if in response to her words, the air near the pool shivered. For a split second, Aurora saw it—a faint, vertical shimmer in the air, like heat rising from asphalt. Through it, she thought she caught a glimpse of something entirely different: not the soft, pearlescent light of the grove, but a warm, amber sky, and the distant, tantalizing scent of roasting spices and sweet, overripe fruit. It was gone as soon as it appeared, but the Heartstone against her chest flared with sudden, urgent heat. She gasped, pressing her hand to it. Isolde’s eyes sharpened. “Ah. Your bauble feels the call. A portal-point. It seems the grove shares a boundary with more than just the Fae realms tonight. A tear near Dymas, perhaps. The land of Gluttony does love to sample from every table.” Nyx drifted back to her side, a protective darkness coalescing. “Is that why we are here? To find this… tear?” “We are here,” Isolde said, rising to her feet in a single, fluid motion, “because the grove called. It is a place of meeting, and of choice. You sought a seer, and so you have one.” She gestured to the silent pool, the chiming flowers, the shifting, impossible trees. “This is my home. My library. My oracle. It shows what it shows. What you do with the knowledge—of the Hunger you felt, of the Blade you carry, of the portals that whisper near the stones—that is your own tale to write.” Aurora looked from the seer to the shadow, to the alien, breathtaking garden around them. The unease hadn’t faded, but it was now woven into a richer tapestry of awe and determination. She had fled one kind of danger in London, only to walk willingly into another, far stranger kind. But here, with the cold weight of the Fae blade at her hip and the warm pulse of the Heartstone on her chest, she felt, for the first time in a long time, that she was exactly where she was supposed to be. The grove hummed around them, a place outside of time, holding its breath, waiting to see what the cool-headed woman from Cardiff, the living shadow, and the ageless seer would do next.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.517
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1553
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"cautiously"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
2"cautiously"
3"slightly"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1553
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count3
9
word"sanctuary"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"echoes"
count2
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"profound"
count3
14
word"sense of"
count1
15
word"dancing"
count1
16
word"desire"
count1
17
word"potential"
count1
18
word"tantalizing"
count1
19
word"tapestry"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"chill"
2"familiar"
3"pulse"
4"warmth"
5"gloom"
6"pulsed"
7"rhythmic"
8"whisper"
9"sanctuary"
10"unspoken"
11"echoes"
12"weight"
13"profound"
14"sense of"
15"dancing"
16"desire"
17"potential"
18"tantalizing"
19"tapestry"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1547
ratio0.001
matches
0"rippled"
1"safe"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1160
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Heartstone5
Ahead1
Isolde12
Varga1
Aurora11
Nyx6
Cardiff2
Pre-Law1
Evan2
Fae-forged1
London1
Fae3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Isolde"
2"Varga"
3"Aurora"
4"Nyx"
5"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore0.983
windowScore1
7.14% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"glow that seemed to emanate from the very air and the flora itself"
1"looked like captured starlight; lilies wh"
2"patterns that seemed to shift and writhe at the edge of vision"
3"looked like a disc of polished obsidian"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches7
per1kWords4.525
wordCount1547
matches
0"not from the chill, but from the feeling of being watched"
1"not to touch the tree, but to trace a symbol in the air before it"
2"Not like water, but like heat haze, distorting the bark into a shimmering curtai"
3"not what is, but what was,” Isolde said, kneeling at the pool’s edge"
4"not images, but feelings given form"
5"not unlike her Heartstone, but larger, embedded in a pillar of black rock"
6"not the soft, pearlescent light of the grove, but a warm, amber sky"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"screamed that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean48.34
std25.31
cv0.523
sampleLengths
053
125
240
359
464
576
611
713
875
99
1067
1140
1258
1356
1434
1561
1658
1725
1848
1983
209
2143
2282
2334
2452
2587
267
2742
2820
2991
3093
3132
82.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences78
matches
0"was carpeted"
1"were made"
2"were disjointed"
3"was gone"
4"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was beginning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences92
ratio0.054
matches
0"The scent that wafted through was overpowering—honeysuckle, crushed mint, and something metallic, like rain on hot stone."
1"Flowers she had no name for bloomed in impossible clusters: bell-shaped blossoms that chimed with a faint, glassy music when the breeze stirred them; vines bearing fruit that looked like captured starlight; lilies whose petals were made of spun sugar, dissolving into sweet-smelling dew where they were bruised."
2"The air grew thick with the hum of unseen insects—or were they insects?"
3"Shapes coalesced—not images, but feelings given form."
4"For a split second, Aurora saw it—a faint, vertical shimmer in the air, like heat rising from asphalt."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1177
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.027187765505522515
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011045029736618521
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean16.82
std10.95
cv0.651
sampleLengths
020
114
219
38
417
516
616
78
815
98
1024
1112
126
1334
1411
154
169
1716
1820
195
204
2114
2217
2311
2413
256
2614
2728
2827
299
3019
3148
3214
338
3414
354
3616
3727
3815
393
4022
4125
426
4311
4423
4513
4612
4719
488
499
63.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.42391304347826086
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners39
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then again, Evan was a"
1"Then, the trunk *rippled*."
ratio0.026
91.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences78
matches
0"It was a constant prickle"
1"she asked, her voice low"
2"She left no disturbance on"
3"she said, her melodic voice"
4"She trusted Nyx’s senses and"
5"She raised a slender hand,"
6"She blinked against a light"
7"They stood in a clearing"
8"Their violet eyes, faintly glowing,"
9"they murmured, their voice now"
10"She began to walk, her"
11"They moved deeper."
12"She pulled back, her fingers"
13"It was beautiful like a"
14"They entered a grove within"
15"It reflected nothing of the"
16"Her silver hair brushed the"
17"She saw a flash of"
18"She felt a wave of"
19"She straightened up, rubbing her"
ratio0.321
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences78
matches
0"The ancient oaks of Richmond"
1"Aurora Carter shivered, not from"
2"It was a constant prickle"
3"she asked, her voice low"
4"The Heartstone pendant, nestled against"
5"Nyx whispered, their voice the"
6"She left no disturbance on"
7"she said, her melodic voice"
8"Aurora followed, her boots crunching"
9"She trusted Nyx’s senses and"
10"Evan would have laughed."
11"Isolde stopped before a particularly"
12"She raised a slender hand,"
13"The scent that wafted through"
14"Isolde said, a faint, knowing"
15"Aurora took a breath, clutched"
16"The change was instantaneous and"
17"The cool, damp air of"
18"She blinked against a light"
19"They stood in a clearing"
ratio0.846
64.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"As if in response to"
ratio0.013
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The scent that wafted through was overpowering—honeysuckle, crushed mint, and something metallic, like rain on hot stone."
1"Flowers she had no name for bloomed in impossible clusters: bell-shaped blossoms that chimed with a faint, glassy music when the breeze stirred them; vines bear…"
2"The standing stones grew larger, their surfaces carved with spiraling patterns that seemed to shift and writhe at the edge of vision."
3"The grove hummed around them, a place outside of time, holding its breath, waiting to see what the cool-headed woman from Cardiff, the living shadow, and the ag…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she asked, her voice low"
1"Nyx whispered, their voice the sound of dry leaves skittering over stone"
2"she said, her melodic voice carrying the cadence of a riddle"
3"Aurora breathed, the word stolen by the wonder"
4"She began, her bare feet making no impression on the luminous moss"
5"Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes fixed on Aurora"
6"they said, their whisper carrying clearly"
7"Isolde replied, a cryptic smile touching her lips"
12.07% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
3"Isolde advised (advise)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.448
leniency0.897
rawRatio0.308
effectiveRatio0.276
73.4668%