Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFDTNPTXH962NYX8ZXNXYNA

Run Details

Duration:
6m 3s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped from the rain‑slicked street onto the cracked concrete of the abandoned Tube entrance. She lifted the bone token from her coat pocket, its surface warm from constant contact. A low hum rose from the darkness as the token touched the rusted gate, and the barrier shivered open. Beyond the gate, the Veil Market unfolded in a maze of stalls lit by flickering gas lamps, their light casting long shadows that moved with the breath of unseen air. Quinn moved with precise movement, her sharp jaw set, the worn leather watch on her left wrist ticking steady. She halted before a stall draped in black cloth, at which a young woman lay sprawled on the cold stone, her arms splayed, her face turned toward the ceiling. Eva Kowalski stood at a short distance, her round glasses catching the lamplight, freckles dusting her nose, her hand tugged a strand of red curl behind her left ear, a habit. Eva glanced at the body, after that at the brass object lying a few inches from the woman’s fingertips. The item was a Veil Compass, its brass casing coated in verdigris, the face etched with protective sigils, the needle quivering as if pulled by an invisible force. Eva moved to stand near the ash, her brow furrowed as she studied it. This looks like a failed summoning. Quinn knelt, gloves grazing the cold stone, her eyes tracing the ash pattern. The lines are incomplete. Eva tilted her head, her glasses slipping toward her nose. The caster lost concentration before finishing. Quinn ran a gloved finger along the edge of the ash, feeling a faint grit that clung to her skin. The ash comes from a source other than a burnt offering; it is mixed with something oily. Eva lifted the satchel from her shoulder, opening it to reveal a stack of notebooks bound in leather. I have been tracking the market’s shifts for months; the last entry noted a deviation from the usual lunar cycle. Quinn stood, her watch catching a glint of light, her gaze sweeping over the stall’s wares—jars of dried herbs, vials of shimmering liquid, a stack of parchment marked with sigils. The victim was protecting something in place of attempting a summoning. Eva frowned, her fingers tracing the edge of a notebook page that bore a sketch of the Veil Compass. What motive exists for leaving the compass in this spot while she guarded? Quinn glanced at the compass needle, which swung with steady motion toward the rear of the market, at which a heavy curtain hung behind a stack of crates. The needle points to a rift in place of to a threat. Eva shifted her weight, her satchel slipping as she moved toward the curtain. What could be behind it that warrants a guard? Quinn pulled the leather watch from her wrist, opening its face to reveal a tiny engraving of a crescent moon tucked beneath the numbers. The market moves on the full moon; someone used that knowledge to time the killing and mislead us with the compass. Quinn returned the watch to her wrist, her eyes locking onto the swaying curtain. We will see what lies past the curtain. Quinn lowered herself to the stone floor, her fingertips brushing the area at the junction of the ash and the edge of the stall’s wooden plank. There is a thin line of oil at this spot that belongs to a different source than the ash mixture. Eva leaned toward the oil, her glasses catching the glint as she traced its path with a fingertip. The oil leads to a seam in the floorboards, invisible to the untrained eye unless one knows the exact spot to examine. Quinn pressed her palm against the seam, feeling a slight give as if a panel rested beneath. Someone could have slipped through at this spot without disturbing the surface dust. Eva lifted her satchel, pulling out a small brush and a vial of powdered chalk. Let us mark the outline; it is possible the hidden opening reveals a passage. Eva brushed chalk along the seam, revealing a faint rectangle that matched the size of a service hatch. The hatch appears absent from any market schematics I have seen. Quinn glanced at the compass, noting that its needle trembled as if reacting to a change in the adjacent energy field. The compass reacts to rifts, in addition to strong concentrations of supernatural residue. Eva opened her notebook to a page at which she had sketched the market’s layout during previous full moons. This hatch aligns with a forgotten maintenance tunnel that runs beneath the old ticket hall. Quinn stood, her jaw tightening as she considered the implications. The killer used the tunnel to enter and exit, leaving no trace in the main market. Eva tucked the notebook into her satchel, her eyes narrowing as she looked at the stall’s wares. The oils used in the ash mixture are typical of those sold by the vendor who deals in rare resins. Quinn turned her head toward that stall, noting that its shutters were closed despite the hour. The vendor was absent this evening, yet his goods remained untouched. Quinn stepped toward the closed shutters, feeling a vibration through the wood, as if something heavy shifted behind them. Someone may have used the stall as a conduit to move the body without being seen. Quinn crouched, examining the wooden shutters for any seam or latch that might indicate a hidden mechanism. There is a small indent at this spot that fits the shape of a key, suggesting the stall can be locked from inside. Eva slipped her hand into the indent, feeling a cool metal surface that turned with a faint click. The lock disengages, allowing the shutters to swing toward the interior without noise. Quinn pushed the shutters open, revealing a narrow passage lined with rough stone and faint glowing moss. This passage leads without deviation to the tunnel Eva described, confirming the killer’s route. Quinn stepped into the passage, her hand resting on the wall as she moved on, the compass needle steady at this moment, pointing in front. We have found the way the killer used to enter and leave unseen; at this point we can follow it to discover what they were protecting.
created_at"2026-03-11T21:46:13.607Z" 3/11/2026, 9:46:13 PM
model"nvidia/nemotron-3-super-120b-a12b-20230311:free"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency352
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time363115
tokens_prompt1166
tokens_completion26608
native_tokens_prompt1073
native_tokens_completion28700
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning25028
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"970aecad-f13b-4ec3-9362-e1758aea3e56"
id"chatcmpl-81ff68a8678561e7"
is_byokfalse
latency220
model_permaslug"nvidia/nemotron-3-super-120b-a12b-20230311"
provider_name"Nvidia"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1773265573-DVkrhgEkYednOD8wEPdV"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-81ff68a8678561e7"
total_cost0
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Nvidia"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1058
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1058
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"furrowed"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count2
3
word"glint"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"furrowed"
2"tracing"
3"glint"
4"weight"
5"traced"
6"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
72.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1057
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1057
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn17
Tube1
Veil3
Market1
Kowalski1
Compass2
Eva14
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.696
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if reacting to a change in the adjacent energy field"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1057
matches(empty)
2.73% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences61
matches
0"used that knowledge"
1"noting that its"
2"noting that its"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs1
mean0
std0
cv0
sampleLengths
01057
93.76% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"is mixed"
1"being seen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was protecting"
1"were protecting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences61
ratio0.098
matches
0"The ash comes from a source other than a burnt offering; it is mixed with something oily."
1"I have been tracking the market’s shifts for months; the last entry noted a deviation from the usual lunar cycle."
2"Quinn stood, her watch catching a glint of light, her gaze sweeping over the stall’s wares—jars of dried herbs, vials of shimmering liquid, a stack of parchment marked with sigils."
3"The market moves on the full moon; someone used that knowledge to time the killing and mislead us with the compass."
4"Let us mark the outline; it is possible the hidden opening reveals a passage."
5"We have found the way the killer used to enter and leave unseen; at this point we can follow it to discover what they were protecting."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1058
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount0
adverbRatio0
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.000945179584120983
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
81.11% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean17.33
std6.11
cv0.353
sampleLengths
017
115
219
330
419
529
631
719
828
914
106
1113
124
1310
146
1520
1617
1718
1820
1930
2011
2119
2213
2328
2412
2513
269
2724
2821
2914
308
3126
3220
3318
3422
3517
3613
3715
3814
3918
4011
4121
4213
4319
4415
4510
4616
4717
4820
4916
48.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.22950819672131148
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners14
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences61
matches
0"She lifted the bone token"
1"She halted before a stall"
2"I have been tracking the"
3"We will see what lies"
4"We have found the way"
ratio0.082
9.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences61
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped from"
1"She lifted the bone token"
2"A low hum rose from"
3"Quinn moved with precise movement,"
4"She halted before a stall"
5"Eva Kowalski stood at a"
6"Eva glanced at the body,"
7"The item was a Veil"
8"Eva moved to stand near"
9"This looks like a failed"
10"Quinn knelt, gloves grazing the"
11"The lines are incomplete."
12"Eva tilted her head, her"
13"The caster lost concentration before"
14"Quinn ran a gloved finger"
15"The ash comes from a"
16"Eva lifted the satchel from"
17"I have been tracking the"
18"Quinn stood, her watch catching"
19"The victim was protecting something"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
2.55% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Beyond the gate, the Veil Market unfolded in a maze of stalls lit by flickering gas lamps, their light casting long shadows that moved with the breath of unseen…"
1"The item was a Veil Compass, its brass casing coated in verdigris, the face etched with protective sigils, the needle quivering as if pulled by an invisible for…"
2"Quinn knelt, gloves grazing the cold stone, her eyes tracing the ash pattern."
3"Quinn stood, her watch catching a glint of light, her gaze sweeping over the stall’s wares—jars of dried herbs, vials of shimmering liquid, a stack of parchment…"
4"Eva frowned, her fingers tracing the edge of a notebook page that bore a sketch of the Veil Compass."
5"Quinn pressed her palm against the seam, feeling a slight give as if a panel rested beneath."
6"Eva brushed chalk along the seam, revealing a faint rectangle that matched the size of a service hatch."
7"This hatch aligns with a forgotten maintenance tunnel that runs beneath the old ticket hall."
8"Quinn stepped toward the closed shutters, feeling a vibration through the wood, as if something heavy shifted behind them."
9"There is a small indent at this spot that fits the shape of a key, suggesting the stall can be locked from inside."
10"Quinn stepped into the passage, her hand resting on the wall as she moved on, the compass needle steady at this moment, pointing in front."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.5782%