| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1058 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1058 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "furrowed" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "glint" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1057 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.58% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1057 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.61 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 17 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Market | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Compass | 2 | | Eva | 14 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.696 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if reacting to a change in the adjacent energy field" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1057 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 2.73% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "used that knowledge" | | 1 | "noting that its" | | 2 | "noting that its" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 1 | | mean | 0 | | std | 0 | | cv | 0 | | sampleLengths | | |
| 93.76% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | | 0 | "was protecting" | | 1 | "were protecting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0.098 | | matches | | 0 | "The ash comes from a source other than a burnt offering; it is mixed with something oily." | | 1 | "I have been tracking the market’s shifts for months; the last entry noted a deviation from the usual lunar cycle." | | 2 | "Quinn stood, her watch catching a glint of light, her gaze sweeping over the stall’s wares—jars of dried herbs, vials of shimmering liquid, a stack of parchment marked with sigils." | | 3 | "The market moves on the full moon; someone used that knowledge to time the killing and mislead us with the compass." | | 4 | "Let us mark the outline; it is possible the hidden opening reveals a passage." | | 5 | "We have found the way the killer used to enter and leave unseen; at this point we can follow it to discover what they were protecting." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1058 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 0 | | adverbRatio | 0 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.000945179584120983 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 81.11% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 17.33 | | std | 6.11 | | cv | 0.353 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 48.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.22950819672131148 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 14 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "She lifted the bone token" | | 1 | "She halted before a stall" | | 2 | "I have been tracking the" | | 3 | "We will see what lies" | | 4 | "We have found the way" |
| | ratio | 0.082 | |
| 9.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped from" | | 1 | "She lifted the bone token" | | 2 | "A low hum rose from" | | 3 | "Quinn moved with precise movement," | | 4 | "She halted before a stall" | | 5 | "Eva Kowalski stood at a" | | 6 | "Eva glanced at the body," | | 7 | "The item was a Veil" | | 8 | "Eva moved to stand near" | | 9 | "This looks like a failed" | | 10 | "Quinn knelt, gloves grazing the" | | 11 | "The lines are incomplete." | | 12 | "Eva tilted her head, her" | | 13 | "The caster lost concentration before" | | 14 | "Quinn ran a gloved finger" | | 15 | "The ash comes from a" | | 16 | "Eva lifted the satchel from" | | 17 | "I have been tracking the" | | 18 | "Quinn stood, her watch catching" | | 19 | "The victim was protecting something" |
| | ratio | 0.902 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 2.55% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond the gate, the Veil Market unfolded in a maze of stalls lit by flickering gas lamps, their light casting long shadows that moved with the breath of unseen…" | | 1 | "The item was a Veil Compass, its brass casing coated in verdigris, the face etched with protective sigils, the needle quivering as if pulled by an invisible for…" | | 2 | "Quinn knelt, gloves grazing the cold stone, her eyes tracing the ash pattern." | | 3 | "Quinn stood, her watch catching a glint of light, her gaze sweeping over the stall’s wares—jars of dried herbs, vials of shimmering liquid, a stack of parchment…" | | 4 | "Eva frowned, her fingers tracing the edge of a notebook page that bore a sketch of the Veil Compass." | | 5 | "Quinn pressed her palm against the seam, feeling a slight give as if a panel rested beneath." | | 6 | "Eva brushed chalk along the seam, revealing a faint rectangle that matched the size of a service hatch." | | 7 | "This hatch aligns with a forgotten maintenance tunnel that runs beneath the old ticket hall." | | 8 | "Quinn stepped toward the closed shutters, feeling a vibration through the wood, as if something heavy shifted behind them." | | 9 | "There is a small indent at this spot that fits the shape of a key, suggesting the stall can be locked from inside." | | 10 | "Quinn stepped into the passage, her hand resting on the wall as she moved on, the compass needle steady at this moment, pointing in front." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |